The Reunion (Legendary Fic!)

Shiny_Hunter

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    Well, its my first time ever posting a story here, but since I've been doing pretty good at another site, I've decided to give this a try!

    RATING-I'll just label this a 13 and up fic for some language.

    SUMMARY- After being unable to have any contact with her creations, Arceus decides to set up a nice reunion for everyone to come! However, not everyone is excited or thrilled.

    OTHER INFO- This is a legendary fic (looks up at title). And yes, there is pairings within it. Mew x Celebi for example, but nothing extreme. Mostly just hints and a fe cute moments.

    Please leave a review if you enjoy or want to criticize my story! I love to hear from you readers!

    So, finally done with my rant, here's the first chapter! Hope you like it! ^^




    OOOOOOOOOO
    Chapter 1
    "The Dreaded Letter"​

    A small, green Pokemon floated a few inches off the ground, a paper tightly clutched in her paws. She seemed to be reading each word on that paper, her blue eyes becoming wider each word she read. The light streaming through the dense trees around the Celebi shone through the object in her paws, a neat, black writing seen in the back. Her eyes followed every part of the paragraph, a small gleam of hope still in her eyes. The legendary Pokemon clutched the paper even tighter, the edges now wrinkled and crumbled from her grasp.

    "No…" Celebi whispered in a faint voice, finally finishing the end of the letter, the gleam in her eyes gone. "No…anything, but that…"

    She let go of the paper in her paws, the object floating gracefully down, spiraling to the floor upwards. It said:

    Dear Brother or Sister,

    How are you doing? It has been years since I've seen you or the other legendaries. My work around this world had been piling up and I found no time to check on how you guys were doing. I have finally finished most of my chores around this universe and I have decided to finally talk to you legendaries, face to face. This Saturday I plan to have a nice chat with you guys. I have planned to have this meeting in Fullmoon Island, where Cresselia lives. She seemed sort of reluctant at first, but agreed in the end that she would let us meet at her home.
    You must come, as I would love to hear your stories throughout the time period of time in which I could not see anyone of you legendaries. This is not a choice, so please come with a story ready to be told at any moment. This is going to be a fun day!

    Love, the God Pokemon,
    Arceus

    Celebi still hovered in the same spot, her brain barely believing what she read. Could Arceus really be serious? The last time they met, Darkria almost killed Cresselia when he put her in his dark void. Oh, was she pissed off when she woke up. The dark Pokemon still flinches when you say the word 'hole'.

    'I still can't believe Arceus created us…'
    The green legendary groaned in her head, her dark green antennas drooping to the sides of her head. 'She should know what happens when you bring a lot of opposites together…'

    A small wind brushed against her face, waking her up from her daze. Celebi mentally cursed the God Pokemon in her head, using a few choice words, and slowly flew further into the dense forest. The letter on the ground was slowly pushed to the side, thanks to the wind. For a piece of paper, this thing caused a lot of trouble.

    OOOOOOOOOO

    Three different colored, dog legendaries were huddled together, looking at something that seemed to catch their interest on the rocky ground. The brown one with a thick, cloud-like fur flowing from his back, frowned, his paws fidgeting anxiously as he waited for his companions to finish reading. A small groan escaped from the blue dog, her body covered in what seemed to be an elegant, purple mane, ribbon-like strands flutter in the wind.

    "You've got to be kidding…" Suicune mumbled, her small red eyes scanning the paper again.

    "It sounds like fun to me." The yellow dog besides the other two said, a goofy and naïve smile on his face. A thick purple fur clung on his back, giving the impression of a thundercloud, and black lightning bolt markings covered his yellow fur.

    "Are you serious Raikou?" Entei muttered, his voice not even presenting a surprised tone. The volcano Pokemon was used of the display of idiocy from Raikou daily. It was just part of the day.

    "Well, sort of. I just don't really want to see Cresselia…she scares me…" The yellow legendary shivered, remembering the look on the lunar Pokemon's countenance when she figured out Darkria had put her in his dark void. It was funny in the beginning, but everything went down hill at the end.

    Suicune sighed and walked to the edge of the large, jagged mountain they were standing on, looking below at the forest under them. She had to admit that her companion, Raikou, had to be a little right on his last sentence. The Aurora Pokemon wasn't really pleased to see any of her fellow legendaries, but she had to, thanks to Arceus. She could just imagine what chaos might ensue once Darkria and Cresselia met again. Plus, the little pink ball of terror should be there too. When the humans say Mew was a little troublemaker, they didn't know half of it.

    "You okay Suicune?" A small, timid voice spoke up behind her. Suicune turned her head to see Raikou standing there, his small red eyes looking at the ground, afraid if the Aurora Pokemon might attack him for that question.

    "Yeah, I'm fine. Just a little pissed off because of Arceus." Suicune couldn't help but to smile slightly at her companion's concern for her. He may be quite immature at times, but you had to give him credit. Raikou was sweet at times.

    "Okay!" The legendary dog the grinned, the goofy expression returned to his face. Suicune sighed again and looked out over the many trees in the forest. A small, brown Pidgey flew above her, reminding the Aurora Pokemon about something, or better yet, some of her legendary friends. 'I wonder how the birds are taking this news?'

    OOOOOOOOOO

    "Articuno?" A large, yellow bird with jagged wings flew beside his friend. He waved one wing in front of the ice bird to get the same response. A blank stare. "Articuno?" Zapdos asked again, flying in front of her face. The Freeze Pokemon just hovered in that same spot of air, her small, blue ribbon-like tail fluttering quite pathetically.

    "Um, Moltres, I think something is wrong her." The Electric bird said, turning his gaze on a large yellow bird with flames flaring from her wings.

    "Nice observation…." Moltres mumbled, flying a little closer to examine her companion. "Hey, what's that in her wing?" The bird then said, pointing one of her own fire wings at Articuno's blue one. A small brown parchment was loosely held by the freeze Pokemon, apparently causing this whole situation.

    "Let me see…" Zapdos replied, grabbing the paper. Before he could read it, however, Moltres snatched it from his wing, reading it slowly. The electric legendary just scowled at his friend and flew closer to Articuno, seeing if he could get her out of this coma.

    Zapdos stuck his tongue from his beak, making a quite childish 'raspberry' noise. The ice bird didn't change. A small idea popped into the bird's head, making him grin slyly.

    "Hey, Articuno. Can I tell you something?" Zapdos started, each word he said was long and at a teasing tone. The freeze Pokemon said nothing. "Okay, then. What if I tell you I…" The legendary drew a deep breath, "I saw your diary and I would like to say it was very, very, very, very, very, VERY interesting…."

    The electric bird drifted off as he saw the ice bird's face become red with anger, her eyes narrowing. "You…did…what…?" Articuno strained to say with her teeth clenched firmly inside her beak.

    "Oh, great…your alive…" Zapdos cheered slightly, his voice all the sound of nervousness. "You know I was kidding right…"

    The freeze Pokemon then finally shifted her gaze onto the yellow legendary, her usually friendly brown eyes sparking with madness. The electric Pokemon slowly backed away from the crazy bird, seeking away to escape her wrath. "Did I ever compliment on how beautiful your eyes are?"

    A small, red blush appeared on Articuno's face, but she said, her voice at a harsh tone. "I'll give you five seconds to fly away as fast as you come and then I hunt you down like a hawk…"

    "I—"

    "One."

    "But—"

    "Two."

    "Really—"

    "THREE!!!"

    "I'll be going now." Zapdos panicked, flying off into the sky at a rapid pace.

    "FIVE!!!" Articuno yelled, giving her blue wings a large flap and flying after the electric legendary. Moltres blinked her brown eyes a few times, out of confusion, and glanced at the letter in her sharp-clawed feet. 'If Articuno's mad because of that, I wonder what she'll say once I remind her about this letter.' She thought grimly as she saw two dots disappear into the blue, cloudless sky.

    OOOOOOOOOO

    A pink blur flew across the blue sky, easily seen with the color differences. The pink, flying thing stopped, a letter seen in his paws. His big, bright, blue eyes scanned the parchment with interest, a wide smile on his face. His long, pink tail flickered to and fro as he read, almost like a cat.

    "Cool!" Mew cheered, waving the paper in his paws. "I get to see the others! Tomorrow's going to be fun!"

    The cat-like legendary pondered on how it might be like, but was pushed aside from his thoughts as a deep voice spoke inside his head.

    'Did you get the letter Mew?'


    'Yep! Isn't this going to be fun Mewtwo!?'
    Mew replied telepathically. He grinned even wider at the sound of his clone talking to him…somewhat.

    'I beg to differ…'
    Mewtwo replied. The clone Pokemon could just feel the grin Mew was giving, even though he couldn't actually see him. A shiver ran down his spine.

    'Party pooper…' Mew laughed. He then narrowed his eyes a bit, disconnecting the link between him and Mewtwo. The pink feline would be able to see and talk to his clone during the reunion.

    "I can't wait for tomorrow!" The cat chuckled as he continued his flight through the sky, the wind ruffling up his usually smooth fur.

    OOOOOOOOOO

    Two rather large Pokemon were drifting inside a different dimension, black and blue only seen. One Pokemon was all pink, a pearl lodged into his shoulders. Two wing-like armor was on his shoulders, giving the appearance he could fly, though he really couldn't. It was just for show. He stood on two feet, a long and powerful tail on his rear. The other one stood on four feet and was covered in light blue markings on her blue skin, a diamond on her chest. A gray metal-like armor was placed on her neck, chest, head, and rear and she had a long, blue tail.

    "Can you believe this letter!?" Dialga groaned as she let the parchment slip through her long, gray claws. Palkia then grabbed the letter with his own two claws and began to read at what his partner in time was so worried and frustrated about. He quickly understood why his Dialga was so mad.

    "It can't be that bad…" The Spacial Pokemon reasoned.

    "What are you talking about!? Of course it's bad!" The Temporal Pokemon yelled, rolling her red eyes.

    Palkia did the smart thing and said nothing. He knew his partner wasn't the one to change her mind once she set it on something, but he couldn't help but to disagree at most things she said. It was only her opinion anyway.

    "I feel bad for Cresselia, though. She has to give up her home for this reunion." The pink dragon started. "She must be quite upset."

    "Who cares? What about us!?" Dialga ranted. Palkia just sighed and closed his eyes. This whole rant about this subject should take awhile…

    OOOOOOOOOO


    "This sounds okay…" A red and white dragon said to herself, a paper held firmly in her paws. "Maybe they can help me…"

    Latias sighed as her thoughts turned back to her dead brother, Latios. A tear wriggled its way out of her yellow eyes and she rubbed it away. How she missed her brother…why was life so cruel?

    'Well, this reunion might help…'
    She thought as she floated passed some flowers in the beautiful garden she was at. 'The others should cheer me up…'

    You can only imagine how far from the truth Latias just thought.

    OOOOOOOOOO

    A large, red dragon sighed with exasperation as he trudged through the jagged walls of the volcano he called a home. Groudon's red tail with black spikes protruding from the sides of it moved side to side each step he took. A crumpled letter was on the dirt behind the red dino, the letter that had caused so much trouble today.

    Groudon can only imagine what Kyogre might say when he tells her about this news. But no, that doesn't stop there; he also has to tell this to Rayquaza! The large, green snake dragon would laugh in his face and tell him to say that was a joke. The look the green dragon would give him when he said it was true might be the only enjoyable part in this journey.

    'And the chaos starts tomorrow…'
    The Continent Pokemon shook his large, armored head as he continued to walk inside the volcano.

    OOOOOOOOOO

    "You've got to be kidding…" A small legendary hovered inside a damp cave. "Why do I have to…why not Mew…."

    The white humanoid Pokemon rubbed the yellow headdress that was the shape of a star on his head in frustration. His three teal colored tags hanging from his head fluttered at his movements.

    "There has got to be some misunderstanding…" Jirachi said with a hint of hope. Yet, Arceus herself there, on the paper, wrote it. The small legendary had to go tell the other Sinnoh Pokemon, Deoxys, and those regis about this news because his ability to teleport was the best of best… and because Arceus was too lazy to write more letters for the others.

    "Stupid Arceus…" Jirachi muttered, preparing himself to teleport to the large volcano in which the ugly toad faced Heatran lived. "Calling herself the God of all Pokemon…"

    In a small flash, the white legendary was gone from the cave.

    OOOOOOOOOO

    A large rainbow colored bird flew over the ocean, a look of annoyance plastered on his face. He then stopped abruptly, his long and yellow tail feathers gently waving from the wind.

    "LUGIA!!!" He barked out madly, even making a splash with his talons. "COME OUT HERE NOW!!!"

    A small moment of silence ensued, the ever-impatient Ho-oh frowning even more. The Pheonix growled slightly and gave his wings a large flap, the water beneath him fleeing away from him because of the wind that propelled it. A few more seconds and a few more angry calls from Ho-oh, a large silver dragon emerged from the crystal blue, splashing some water onto the Phoenix. Ho-oh growled even more and shook some water off his orange body.

    "That took forever!" He growled at Lugia, the silver dragon blinked in confusion.

    "It was only ten seconds." She reasoned. The Phoenix just gave her a glare full of hate.

    "They're both the same! Now, enough with that subject, did you get the letter from Arceus about the reunion?"

    "Unfortunately, yes. I'm not very pleased to go, but I must make an appearance. Arceus might turn her wrath towards me if I don't."

    "Yeah, yeah. Still, what do you think she'll do if we don't?"

    "Ho-oh! Please tell me your not considering about not showing up!" Lugia gasped, placing one hand-like wing over her beak-like mouth. "She created us! You can't imagine what she can do to us! It's suicidal!"

    "I know that…" The legendary of the skies mumbled in a most unconvincing tone. "It was just an idea…"

    "A very unintelligent one."

    "Hey!!!"

    Lugia just smiled calmly, her long and powerful tail moving slightly. "I have to go Ho-oh, see you tomorrow." The rainbow bird just grunted in response, a look of concentration still shown on his countenance. The diving Pokemon rolled her black eyes and sighed. The black spike-like protrusions on her back and tail suddenly flattened as she dived head first into the water, splashing even more onto Ho-oh.

    "What was that for!?" The Phoenix cried out as he shook water out of his feathers again, pure annoyance written on his face.

    He could have sworn he heard the response, 'For being the idiot you are!'

    OOOOOOOOOO

    Hope you guys enjoyed it!
     
    This is pretty good! Keep it going! I didn't even think of this idea; it's completely genious! I also found no error's whatsoever. Excellent! 10/10
     
    This sounds like such a cute fic! I'm now settling myself for an impatient wait for the reaction of the other legendaries, and the gathering itself. I like Mew already.
     
    OOOOOO
    Chapter 2
    "The First, Late Arrivals"
    (FULLMOON ISLAND)

    A large and tall Pokemon paced inside a small forest, her white mane and fur fluttering from her sudden movements. A look of concentration was on her gray face, her green eyes narrowing. Arceus finally stopped and stood there for a second, sighing slightly. Where was all the legendaries? They were suppose to be here an hour ago…

    "What happened to them…?" The dog/fox mumbled to herself, fidgeting with her golden hooves. "I'm sure they got the invitation…"

    A rustle from the trees surrounding her broke Arceus' thoughts, the God Pokemon looking at the location of the noise. A levitating Pokemon appeared through the trees, a slight look of annoyance on her crescent shaped face. The 'Original One' sighed with relief.

    "Oh, its just you Cresselia…" Arceus mumbled, once again fidgeting with her hooves, the cross-like wheel in the middle of her body moving slightly.

    The blue, swan-like legendary rolled her purple eyes, unnoticed by the fox/dog, and she then said, "You do know that Jirachi just arrived a few minutes ago? He's at the grassy field."

    "Really!?" Arceus said, looking up hopefully at Cresselia.

    "No…I'm lying…" The Lunar Pokemon said, her voice dripping with sarcasm.

    "Oh…okay…" The God Pokemon sighed, her tone back in the state of depression.

    "I was just being sarcastic Arceus."

    "Really! Yay! Let's go!" The fox/dog/horse Pokemon smiled, running past Cresselia and through the forest. The Lunar Pokemon sighed deeply and started…floating back to the grassy field, the name on which she called that one part of her island.

    Cresselia then fluttered her purple wing on the sides of her body and back in annoyance, tiny, microscopic, shiny particles drifting to the leaf filled ground. She was still pissed off on how Arceus insisted on having this reunion on HER Island. I mean she could off used iron island or Newmoon Island, where Darkria lives. But, no, the 'Original One' had to use her Island. The place where she eats, sleeps, thinks, breaths, and, most importantly, the place where she can escape from the idiotic legendaries that haunt her. Cresselia questioned on the authority of which Arceus had over them…

    'Arceus couldn't make a decision to save her life…' The Lunar Pokemon thought, passing the usual trees. 'How she even managed to think, create, and rule this world is beyond my imagination and others…'

    As the blue and yellow legendary continued to ponder, the trees around became less and less dense, now a grassy ground covered the floor. Once Cresselia passed the last tree, a field of vast, long grass filled the earth. The sky was slightly dark, signaling that noon just passed. A good thing too since today would be the only day that the reunion was set and these trespassers on her Island could leave. Things were starting to look slightly brighter.

    "Hey Cresselia…" A voice said to the legendary, breaking her thoughts. She then looked up to see her fellow friend, Jirachi. Arceus was next to him, a wide grin on her face. I guess she was happy since one legendary finally showed up for the reunion.

    "Jirachi." The Lunar Pokemon responded, bowing her head slightly.

    The Wish Pokemon just smiled forcefully back, feeling a little intimidated being around the Pokemon who squished Darkria into a small hole, to which he was stuck for a few days, unable to get any help, as Cresselia wouldn't allow it. He could still remember the look of terror when the Lunar Pokemon slowly floated towards him, a crazed look in her usually calm eyes. Jirachi shuddered, a small current going down his spine.

    "So, where are the others?" Arceus asked.

    "Um…I know that Giratina, Darkria, the Regis, Heatran(ugly toad…), and Deoxys are coming for sure. Still, they don't have a choice…" The Wish Pokemon drifted off at the last sentence, hoping the God Pokemon didn't hear him.

    "Oh, okay then…" The fox/horse/dog nodded, a look of disappointment on her face. What happened to the others? Did they just decide not to come? Arceus narrowed her green eyes at this. 'No, they're coming all right…unless they want to face me...'

    Cresselia and Jirachi watched as the Pokemon who created them displayed an evil smirk, a glint of madness in her eyes. The two legendaries eyed the God Pokemon suspiciously, feeling that she was going to burst out any second. Before anything happened, luckily, Arceus closed her eyes, focusing onto something. The Lunar and Wish Pokemon followed her example, a bright purple glow coming from all three pairs of eyes.

    Someone or something was on the Island, near the main beach, or how Cresselia called it, the Harmony horizon since the sun always set at that spot. The Pokemon seemed to hesitate to walk further onto the Island, but finally took a step forward, sinking into the sand a little.

    "Lugia's here!" Arceus said happily, easily finding on who the Pokemon was. She opened her eyes and started her way to Harmony Horizon to greet the silver dragon. Cresselia and Jirachi then opened their eyes, the glow immediately disappearing.

    "Well, at least all the sane ones are coming first…." The blue and yellow legendary sighed.

    The Wish Pokemon nodded, quite surprised that Cresselia considered him to be all right in the head. Still, it was probably the best compliment the Lunar Pokemon had ever given anyone.

    "Let's go meet Lugia. Arceus might kill her for being so late since she's usually on time." Jirachi then said. Cresselia just nodded and followed the floating Wish Pokemon, going through the forest again.

    The two finally passed the last tree and sand was now littered across the ground, the sound of crashing waves hitting the beach. The smell and taste of salt filled the air, yet it set them as a peaceful place where they could relax. This really was Harmony Horizon.

    A large gust of wind in Cresselia and Jirachi's face signaled that Lugia really was here. They looked down further towards the shore of the beach to see the silver dragon next to a happy God Pokemon. The Diving Pokemon had a weak smile on her face, obviously uncomfortable with Arceus asking her all these questions on why she was late.

    "Let's go help…" The blue swan sighed, heading towards the legendaries. Jirachi followed behind, a look of regret hidden on his countenance. This day seemed to just crawl by…

    "Cresselia, Jirachi, good to see you." Lugia then said, slightly loudly to get Arceus' mind towards something else. "How have you two been?"

    It seemed to work, as the God Pokemon looked at the two approaching legendaries, abandoning the barrage of questions. The silver dragon seemed to be relieved as her weak smile became less forced and more welcoming at the sight of her old friends. She then placed her hand-like wings on the side of her body, walking away from the shore now. Everyone followed behind the Diving Pokemon, walking towards the grassy fields again.

    "So, what's new?" Lugia asked again.

    "Nothing really." Cresselia sighed, floating next to her. "I don't see the real reason on this whole reunion though."

    Luckily Arceus hadn't heard her considering she was now closing her eyes again, focusing.

    'Great…more legendaries…'
    The Lunar Pokemon thought grimly, not even bothering to find out on whom it was. Jirachi sighed and gently floated to the sandy ground, enjoying the peace for now. The small legendary picked up his paw, sand sliding off, and he smiled at the feeling as it tickled slightly.

    "JIRACHI!!! CRESSELIA!!! ARCEUS!!! LUGIA!!!" A booming, yet happy, voice called. The God Pokemon opened her eyes in slight surprise as the rest of her creation around her jumped.

    "No…not now…" The blue swan mumbled, groaning in the process.

    "Yep, right now." Lugia sighed as a pink cat overhead flew down, a wide grin spread on his face.

    The feline did a small loop as he descended from the air, his fur rippling from the wind. He then stopped a few inches off the ground, spinning on the spot with glee. Mew was actually one of the first legendaries to even consider this reunion to be 'fun'. Still, he was always an idiot.

    "Hey Mew…" Jirachi greeted as he floated back up, trying not to be rude, unlike his fellow legendaries. "So, what have you been up to? Have you been wreaking havoc?"

    "You could say that." The pink cat grinned, his tail swishing back and forth in happiness, mesmerizing his friends. His tail was almost a pink blur.

    'Do I have to come?'
    A voice suddenly said in the feline's head. It sounded grim and, well, unhappy.

    'Of course!' Mew replied telepathically to his clone. 'It's going to be really fun and it wouldn't be the same if you didn't come! I would be really, really, really, really, really, really, really, re—'

    'Okay I get it! I'm coming right now…'


    Mew did another loop and grinned widely at his fellow legendaries, who were not so enthusiastic as the pink cat. In fact, they would rather be facing Arceus' wrath right about now, even with the pain guaranteed to be involved. It almost seemed promising, yet out of a paws reach…

    A small gasp from each of the legendaries, besides Mew as he was used to it, a flash of white causing this reaction. The tall, purple Pokemon with a long, curly tail appeared behind the flash, a look of annoyance already. He had a slight muscular appearance with a small tube connected from the back of his head to his back. His paws only had three fingers, a small ball-like tip on them.

    "Hello Mewtwo!" Mew cheered, circling the clone with happiness, much to his dislike. The feline then stopped after going around the newcomer several times, grinning like there was no tomorrow. It had been years since he had seen his clone. Talking to him telepathically was different then talking muzzle to muzzle with him. It felt as if he finally saw Mewtwo for the first time.

    "Mew." The clone responded stiffly, jerking his head in what seemed to be a nod. Cresselia, Lugia, Arceus, and Jirachi smiled weakly, remembering the little kindness the Genetic Pokemon usually displayed. Mew was lucky to even get that stiff nod from him.

    "SO, what do you guys want to do?" The feline said with glee, his body levitating further off the ground with each word.

    "We have to wait for the others, Mew." Arceus replied, sitting down on the sandy beach. The pink cat just groaned in response as he sat down on the floor, some sand flying in the air, grumbling like the little kit he was.

    OOOOOO
     
    So far, I like Cresselia, Mew and Arceus, for some odd reason. Mew is just so hyperactive and silly! Arceus is quite naive, which is dangerous, considering the power he has on his hands. And Cresselia... no words can describe her. Well, perhaps they can, but I can't find them.

    And then we wait.
     
    OOOOOOOOOOO
    Chapter 3
    "Just Plain Havoc"​

    "Celebi!" A voice giggled as the green legendary turned her head around, trying to locate the noise. She narrowed her crystal blue eyes and lifted her one paw off the tree, a blue aura around it. The Time Travel Pokemon then closed her eyes, focusing. She then felt a familiar presence, someone who she wasn't quite particularly found of. Mew.

    Celebi then lifted her eyelids open, to see the pink feline with a big grin on his face. His tail flickered with delight at seeing a fellow legendary, not noticing that this feeling was not mutual.

    "Yay! You're finally here!" Mew cheered. "I knew I could find you in this forest!"

    The Time Travel Pokemon cursed herself for her stupidity. I mean she LIVED in a forest for Arceus' sake! Not one of her best plans as Mew figured it out. It might have taken him awhile, but he still put each piece together.

    "Just lead me to the others…" The green legendary grumbled, floating after the enthusiastic pink cat. Mew nodded and flew quite fast through the trees, barely missing a branch in which Celebi hoped he might hit. The Time Travel Pokemon followed the feline with ease, dodging every tree, branch, and bush with grace. After living inside this type of environment for millions of years, you get quite used of these kind of things.

    Mew flew out of the forest first, to hear his voice say with glee, "Guess what? Celebi's here! Now all we need is Darkria!"

    'Note to self: Strangle Mew when I get the chance.'
    The green legendary thought as she sighed. When she finally went past the last tree, a couple of meaningless greetings were given to her from her fellow 'friends'. I guess the others weren't as fond as being here just as much as she was.

    "Welcome Celebi!" Arceus, who was the nearest from her, said with a smile. "Good to you to have finally join us." Okay, now the small legendary could of sworn that one of Arceus eyes twitched with annoyance when she said 'finally'.

    "Hello Arceus." The Time Travel Pokemon finally said, a fake smile on her face. "It's good to be here."

    A rather stifled laugh was heard among some of the legendaries, particularly in Ho-oh's direction, in which Lugia was seen smacking him on the back of his head. The Phoenix grumbled as he rubbed that spot with one of his multi-colored wings, complaining that this was a free country and he could do whatever he wanted.

    "Yes, well, we're still missing one legendary though." The God Pokemon continued, ignoring Ho-oh's laughter. "Darkria hasn't arrived yet and it's almost four o'clock."

    Celebi looked up at the sky to see the sun near Harmony Horizon' beach. It was late and, well, everything would be better once this whole retarded reunion was over.

    "Well, for now, why don't you guys spend time with each other for an hour. It should help you guys get acquainted with each other again." Arceus then said, smiling toward to her creations, to which they just glared back. "Do it or be punished."

    With that statement, everyone went into his or her own little 'click': The birds, the dogs (Though, I see them as wolves…), the Regis, and everything else in the middle.

    (REGIS)

    The steel legendary flashed her seven, maroon 'eyes' on her head in annoyance as her ice counterpart blinked his golden eyes with happiness. It had been over thousands of years since they actually saw their fellow legendaries and only the crystal-like body of Regice actually wanted to come, unlike his partners. To tell the truth, the Iceberg Pokemon couldn't really see why his friends didn't want to go… that and the fact that these humans canceled his favorite show, the Wiggles. For Arceus' sake, the ice legendary didn't really understand everything.

    "Can I play with Mew, Raikou, and Zapdos now?!" Regice begged to his counterparts, his seven, golden eyes flashing rapidly. The three legendaries the Iceberg Pokemon said were now involved with a game of this human game called, tag. It was sort of a stupid game that was probably made by some drunken humans. I mean what's the point of running around in circles just to touch the next person? You just look like a complete idiot. But still, it seemed to fit in Regice's description.

    "Will it get rid of you?" Regice's rock counterpart mumbled back, trying to cross his overly huge rock-made arms, but failing. Regirock then gave up, just placing his 'arms' to the side of his brown and tan rocky body.

    "…What do you mean?" Regice asked, his 'eyes' flashing slowly, signaling confusion and interest. The ice legendary's icy counterpart just flashed her top maroon eyes, almost as if rolling them.

    "Just go play and don't come back." Registeel muttered as she watched the Iceberg Pokemon raise his crystal-like arms in happiness, waving them around. After this display, Regice then went to his friends, probably asking if he could join their 'fun'.

    "Don't be so mean Regirock." Registeel then muttered as she crossed her steel made arms with ease, almost as if taunting him the fact that she could even place one arm over the other.

    "Why?" The rock counterpart said, his tan 'eyes' flashing in an annoying pattern. "You never stick up for him anyway."

    "Still…" The steel Regi said before she could stop herself. "It's not nice."

    Regirock just stood there, two of his tan 'eyes' glowing. Since when did Registeel help the Iceberg Pokemon? "… you okay…"

    "…" The steel counterpart then thought for a moment, collecting her thoughts. But that was true, was she actually okay? I mean she would usually make some smart remark at Regice for his stupidity, to which he would never get. Since when did she have a sudden change of heart? If she even had one…

    "Just forget it…" Was the only answer Regirock got out of his counterpart. Registeel's maroon eyes weren't even flashing in annoyance, as they usually did. Suspicions rose as the two Regis just stood there as stiff as a rock (…heh..heh…get it? Regirock's a rock and I said… never mind…).

    (ARCEUS)

    The God Pokemon watched as she saw her creation interact with each other, except for the Regis, birds, ands dogs, who were currently watching the idiots of the group play around. Arceus couldn't even explain why she made them. It was probably during that one time she had that HUGE hangover and wasn't thinking correctly. Yeah, that was probably it…

    "Arcy, Acry… still worring about this whole thing?" A teasing, yet deep, voice said as the 'Original One' heard heavy footsteps behind her. Arceus just took a deep breath, closing her eyes, and tried to put a smile on her face.

    "Hello Giratina." The God Pokemon could just feel the smirk at the back of her head…

    "Aww, come on Arcy." The tall ghost Pokemon teased again. "Aren't you always glad to see me?"

    The fox/horse/dog Pokemon turned around to face what looked like a caterpillar with different colors and with wings. However, even with this menacing appearance, Arceus knew that Giratina couldn't hurt a fly. Well, he probably could, but she created him, so there was practically no difference.

    "No." The God Pokemon replied coldly. "I'd rather Mew visit me three times a day for the rest of my life."

    "Hey, don't be so mean Arcy." The tall, gray dragon pretended to sound hurt. "You know that that comment hurts my feelings…"

    "You don't have feelings Giratina." Arceus said, her eyes narrowing. "I made sure you didn't have them, just instincts."

    That statement finally bothered the ghost legendary as he spread his black and red wings a little with agitation. His six legs moved slightly as he frowned. "Gosh, can't you take a joke?"

    "No." The fox/horse/dog Pokemon said again as she glared at the huge legendary, trying to see if her gaze could burn a hole in him. Why didn't she ever consider making Giratina? I mean sure there had to be someone who could keep an eyes on the gate way to hell, but seriously? What happened to him? She could very well remember he was a boring, unlovable, and always sad Pokemon when she created him. But, after a few years, he started to play jokes and become a nuisance to her, even more then Mew and that one time he dyed her fur pink.

    "Jeesh, I'll go talk to Cresselia then…" The gray dragon mumbled, walking away with thundering footsteps, the weight of him crushing the grass underneath him.

    "Good riddance." Arceus mumbled as she watched Raikou chasing after Regice to 'tag' him.

    (MEW, RAIKOU, ZAPDOS, AND REGICE)

    "The ice block is it! The ice block is it!" Mew sang over and over again as he did flips in the air. Regice laughed as his eyes flashed wildly with all this excitement. Raikou had just 'tagged' him and now the Iceberg Pokemon was after the pink cat.

    Mew just easily dodged by flying over the oncoming ice legendary and stuck his tongue out. "Nice try slowpoke!"

    Zapdos, flying above them, flapped his wings quite hard, pushing air onto the unsuspecting feline. The pink cat was then pushed down further towards the ground, flipping around madly to try and find out what's going on. Before that happened, however, Mew was flattened to the grassy ground as Regice collided with him. The icy legendary tripped and the two Pokemon began to roll on the floor, at a rather fast rate, in the shape of a ball. Incoherent screams of laughter, yelling, and even cheering ensued as they continued to roll near Registeel and Celebi, who were now talking about something that never should interest boys.

    As the two females looked onto the oncoming ball of Regice and Mew, it was waaaaay to late. The two males collided into the two females as their rolling days were over. They flew a few feet in the air, except for Mew as he was having a fit of laughter, yelling. Landing with a thud, Regice chuckled as almost as if he was wasted. Registeel, however, flashed her maroon eyes in fury as she stood back up, wobbling a bit.

    "REGICE!" She yelled as her arms tried to strangle the Iceberg Pokemon. Being dazed, the icy legendary just sat up as a pair of steel gray arms started to try and choke him. During Registeel's anger, she completely forgot the fact that Regice was practically a robot and, well, he couldn't be strangled.

    After a few seconds, Registeel seemed to notice her mistake as she now started to shake her counterpart violently. Regice just seemed to be confused as one of his partners just started to shake him for, what he thought, no reason.

    Mew was still having a laughing fit as he floated a few inches of the ground, his blue eyes wide and out of focus from the rolling part. Celebi, however, blinked in confusion as she sat up on the grass, watching the scene in front of her.

    Everyone then started to gather around them, no one saying a thing. A red ugly toad named Heatran, however, was just looking around, not really noticing anything( I'm sorry Heatran fans, but I don't like that ugly toad at all...).


    "I bet ten bucks on Regice!" A white humanoid Pokemon with a blue headdress-like thing on her head said. She rose higher from the ground to watch better, her two tails rising up. A gleam of light reflected off of her red jewel on the middle of her head as she cocked her head to get a better view. Two other legendaries looking just like her joined Azelf's side. One had yellow headdress on, his eyes closed, and the other had a pink head that had a pair of drooping ears on each side of her head.

    "Don't start that again Azelf." Uxie mumbled as Mesprit just narrowed her eyes in annoyance.

    "Yeah, please don't."

    But, it was too late.

    "Twenty on Registeel!" A legendary shouted back that had a pair of red and blue arms, a green jewel rested on the middle of her body.

    "Fifty on Regice!" Groudon then shouted out. A large, blue whale inside a lake on the other side of him just narrowed her golden eyes and shouted out, "Sixty on Registeel!"

    The red dragon glared in the whale's direction and yelled, "Seventy on Regice!"

    "Eighty on Registeel!"

    "Ninety on Regice!"

    "One hundred on Registeel!"

    Groudon clenched his claws, remembering didn't even have ninety dollars. Still, he wasn't about to lose this pool! "Two Hundred dollars!"

    "Five hundred dollars!" Kyorgre shouted out as she placed her fins over her mouth. Groudon growled as he resisted the urge to evaporate all the water inside that lake.

    A flurry of others started to shout out bets as Arceus tried to calm them down. Registeel began to punch Regice as Regirock was laughing as hard as he could laugh in the sidelines. Azelf was now arguing with Mesprit and Uxie, telling them to fly off and leave her alone. Groudon and Kyogre were now in a staring contest, low growling emitting from them. Giratina began to tease the God Pokemon, telling her she was unable to even control a simple pack of legendaries.

    "SHUT UP!!!!" Arceus finally yelled as everyone became instantly quiet. Oh boy, were they in deep crap now…

    OOOOOOOOOO
     
    It's ok... but not that good.

    filler. :]
     
    It's ok... but not that good.

    Taylor5, if you want to criticize any fanfiction and help to improve the author's writing ability, you have to point out where and what you thought wasn't so "good". Others do not have the ability to read your mind. Just so you know.

    I am particularly sensitive to this because I am one of those authors and would like to improve myself from the comments others make, and I approve of constructive criticism. Note the word constructive. Whatever it was, that comment was in no way helpful. Just because of that, I shall now point out a few weak spots (or what I feel are slightly clumsy wordings) in the post.


    I guess the others weren't as fond as being here just as much as she was

    It is not that wise to suddenly switch from third person to first person, and the back again. I try to keep tabs on this kind of mistake.

    "Good to you to have finally join us."

    Okay, that does sound slightly clumsy, no? I suggest, possibly, "'Good to have you finally join us,'" or "'Good of you to finally join us.'" You can slip a couple of other words in, as well.

    smiling toward to her creations, to which they just glared back

    Too many "to"s in that sentence, I think. Maybe you could have put in something along the lines of "smiling at her creations, causing them to glare back" or some other sentence.

    'click': The birds, the dogs (Though, I see them as wolves…), the Regis, and everything else in the middle

    One; it's not "click" but "clique". Two, there is no need for a capital after a mere colon (":" or "dot-dot" as I used to call it, and sometimes still do...). Also, the personal remark detracts slightly from the overall feel of the story, reminding the audience that this isn't actually happening and its all in their heads.

    I'd tag it on at the beginning or the end of the post. If you really have to, you could remove the comma and, if you want, put a "more" in front of "as" in the brackets.

    Oh, and the "everything else in the middle" is slightly ambiguous... to me, at least. Do you mean that all other Legendaries gather in the middle, or that all forms in between the ones you've mentioned settled into little cliques?

    The steel legendary flashed her seven, maroon 'eyes' on her head in annoyance as her ice counterpart blinked his golden eyes with happiness

    Too many "eyes"; once you've mentioned something, you can use a pronoun for it if you haven't moved on to some other object before.

    Example; "The steel legendary flashed the seven maroon "eyes" fixed on her head in annoyance as her icy counterpart blinked his golden ones with happiness"

    I changed a couple of words because they sounded better, to me, overall, although this sentence still sounds slightly clumsy, it is slightly better. I hope. *sweatdrop*

    thousands of years since they actually saw their fellow legendaries

    Now, I'm just being nit-picky. In my head, I think that "they've actually seen" sounds slightly better. Again, that's all I have to go with, since I can't exactly explain why the sentence sounds wrong...

    *looks around* Any help out there?

    I mean what's the point of running around in circles just to touch the next person? You just look like a complete idiot. But still, it seemed to fit in Regice's description

    This one, since there're full sentences, is quite clearly a thought from Registeel. It would help if you indicated it was a though, like you did with Celebi in the beginning.

    "Don't be so mean Regirock."

    "Welcome Celebi!"

    "Hello Arceus."

    Okay, if there is a phrase before a name, I think there's supposed to be a comma in-between. therefore, it should be "Don't be so mean, Regirock" and so on. Also, I think that you're allowed to put in a comma... I'll just give you another example. You can put

    "'Hello, Arceus,' the Time Travel Pokemon..." And so on, so forth.

    his tan 'eyes' flashing in an annoying pattern

    Again, the wording is slightly off. I imagine you mean annoyed instead of annoying, otherwise people with no common sense may think it means annoying to Registeel, not signalling annoyance from Regirock.

    Now, I just hope that I didn't sound like I was flaming anybody and that my explanations were right and can be understood by the author... *sigh* I never really go this far with the criticism thing, but I know you could become much better.

    One piece of advice is to copy and paste your parts on a document with word-correction thingies. Can't grasp the name at the moment. Well, something like Microsoft Word, at any rate. It's a way to help you to stop overlooking minor spelling mistakes and typos.

    Well, apart from all that, this part had some really hilarious quirks throughout. Keep writing and do not be discouraged by anything or anyone.
     
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