[Pokémon] The Secret of Isshu

Teh Blazer

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    I am writing this fanfic to hone my (very poor) writing skills. So please, any help would be appreciated in making this better. Anything to improve my thingy would be nice. It is slightly long for just one chapter, and I already know of things that need improving, but I'd like to hear the public view first. Without further adoo (or something like that), my fan fic:

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