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The Ultimate Adventure
Ok, if this sucks, I'm sorry. I'm not that good at writing just yet. At least I don't think so. Please let me know what you think!
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Ch. 1: The journey begins
Ash Ketchum walked down the dusty road to Littleroot Town. He was on his way to the famous Prof. Birch's lab to see if he could get a starter Pokemon for his Hoenn journey. He was already a Pokemon Trainer, but he had left all of his Pokemon except his Pikachu behind when he had went home for a visit. When his mom had asked him why he was leaving all of his Pokemon behind, he had responded "Well, it's a new journey through a new region. I want to start all over again and make my way to the Hoenn League the way I'm supposed to." His mom had sighed, but went along with his choice. Besides, he still had his strongest pokemon with him: Pikachu.
Up ahead, Ash could see the houses of Littleroot Town.
"C'mon Pikachu! Let's go!" he cried, racing down the trail to the small town.
"Pika!" the yellow lightning mouse cried, running after him. It caught up to its trainer and jumped on his shoulder. When they reached Littleroot, Ash stopped and read the sign aloud: "Littleroot Town: 'A town that can't be shaded any hue.' " He spotted the lab up ahead. He walked over to it and knocked on the big, wooden door. A big man with brown hair, and warm brown eyes answered it. he was wearing a white lab coat and a blue shirt with brown shorts underneath.
"Hello. You must be Ash." he said.
"Yes. But how did you know my name?" Ash asked.
"Prof. Oak from Kanto called me and let me know you were coming." Prof. Birch responded. He opened the door wider and led Ash through.
There were computers everywhere. Lab assistants in long white lab coats rushed around the room, going from computer to computer. A small wooden table sat in the middle of the room. It had three Poke Balls placed on it. As Prof. Birch led Ash to the table, he noticed a girl about his age and a young boy standing beside the table. The girl smiled at him. She had light brown hair, and sapphire blue eyes. She wore a red bandana on her head, along with a red shirt and blue-black shorts with a skirt looking thing over them. She also wore white gloves with black on the fingers. A yellow pack was strapped around her waist. The boy had sort of a dark blue tint to his hair, and brownish-red eyes. He wore a green shirt with brown short. A yellow backpack was strapped to his back. He also wore black glasses. He hadn't even noticed Ash yet.
"Ok." Prof. Birch said as they reached the table. "These are the three Pokemon from which you will choose. This is Torchic." He said, pointing at the one on the left. "This is Treeko." He pointed to the one in the middle. "And the last one is Mudkip." He pointed to the one on the right. "Ok, May. I promised to let you pick first." he said, turning to the girl standing beside the table. He smiled at her. "Go ahead." The girl walked over to the table and picked up the Poke Ball on the left.
"So, you want Torchic, the Chick Pokemon?" Prof. Birch asked. The girl nodded. "Good choice." Prof. Birch said. He turned to Ash. "Ok, Ash. It's you turn. Take your pick." Ash walked over to the table.
Mudkip or Treeko? he thought to himself. Fianlly, after thinking hard, he picked up the Poke Ball in the middle.
"So you'll take Treeko, the Wood Gecko Pokemon?" Prof. Birch asked. Ash nodded. "Another excellent choice! Now, I'd like to present each of you with these." He handed Ash and the girl a small red device. It had a big blue button on one side.
"That is a Pokedex. It records data on the Pokemon you've seen or captured." Prof. Birch explained.
But, I already have one of these, Ash thought as he looked at the Pokedex in his hand.
"That Pokedex is set to record any Pokemon you see or catch. Whether it's from Kanto, Johto or Hoenn. It's more high tech than the others that are given away in the other regions." Prof. Birch said, as if he'd read Ash's mind. "And Max," he said, turning toward the boy. "I'd like to give you this." He handed the boy a small yellow device.
"What is this?" the boy asked.
"It's called a Pokenav. It has a map of the Hoenn region, a thing called a Match Call to call the people who give you their numbers, and a thing called Trainer's Eyes that tells you what trainers you've battled and the ones you haven't." Prof. Birch explained.
"Wow! Thanks!" Max said.
"I figured you should have something to do since your sister's going to be catching and training Pokemon, and you aren't old enough to be a trainer yet. You could be her guide." Prof. Birch said. He winked at Max. Max smiled.
"Here are 5 Poke Balls." Prof. Birch said, handing Ash and the girl each five red and white capsules. "Now, go and begin your journey!"
"Thanks, Prof. Birch! Bye!" Ash called as he walked out the lab door. The girl said the same and ran after him. She tapped him and the shoulder. Ash stopped and turned around.
"Hi. My name's May." the girl said, holding her hand out.
"I'm Ash." Ash said, shaking her hand. The boy ran up to them.
"Oh, and this is my little brother, Max." she said as the boy ran up by her side.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Ash." Ash said.
"Ooooh! You've got a Pikachu! Can I pet it? Please?" Max asked. Ash laughed.
"Sure." he replied. He held his arm out. Pikachu scampered down it and stood at the edge of his hand. Max scratched it behind its ears. When he was done, Pikachu ran back up Ash's arm and took roost on his shoulder.
"So, is this you first time in Hoenn?" May asked.
"Yeah." Ash replied.
"Then why do you already have a Pikachu?" May asked.
"Because he's already a trainer! Duh!" Max said. "Didn't you watch the Johto regionals last year? He made it all the way to the final eight!"
"Oh yeah!" May said. She turned back to Ash. "Where are all of your other Pokemon?" she asked.
"I left them back in Pallet Town with my mom." Ash replied.
"Pallet Town?!" May and Max asked in surprise.
"Yeah." Ash said, confused.
"Wow. You came all the way from Pallet Town?" Max asked. Ash nodded.
"Uh, guys? Don't we need to try to make it to the next town?" Ash asked.
"Oh right! Max what is the next town?" May asked her brother.
Max took out the yellow device Prof. Birch had given him. He flipped it open.
"Well, accourding to this, the next town is Oldale Town. And it's not too far from here." Max said.
"Ok then. Oldale Town it is!" Ash said.
The walked into the tall grass just outside of Littleroot Town. A gray and black Pokemon jumped out at them. It looked like a small puppy, but had sharper teeth than a regular puppy or dog would have.
"Wonder what that is?" Ash asked. He took out his Pokedex. May did the same.
"Poochyena: The Bite Pokemon. At first sight, Poochyena takes a bite at anything that moves. This Pokemon chases after prey until the victim becomes exhausted. However, it may turn tail if the prey strikes back. " the mechanical voices in both Pokedexes said.
"Nobody move." Ash said quietly. They all stood as still as statues until the Poochyena disappeared into the bushes. When they were sure it was gone, they continued walking through the grass. A little while later, Ash could see the houses of Oldale Town up ahead.
"There it is!" he said. "Let's go!" He started running the rest of the way.
"He sure is energetic." May said as she and Max ran to catch up with him. Right before they reached the town, another Pokemon popped out at them. It was red with a white belly. It had two big, yellow eyes, and a small horn on the top of its head. It also had two spikes on its rear.
Ash and May pulled out their Pokedexes onece more.
"Wurmple: The Worm Pokemon. Using the spikes on its rear end, Wurmple peels bark off trees and feeds on the sap that oozes out. This Pokemon's feet are tipped with suction pads that allow it to cling to glass without slipping. " the mechanical voices said.
"Awww! It's kinda cute." May said.
Ash made a face, then said, "Well, why don't you try and catch it?"
"Ok I will!" May said.
"Weaken it first, and it'll be easier to catch." Ash said. May nodded.
"Torchic come on out! she cried, taking a Poke Ball out of her pack, enlarging it, and throwing it into the air. It came back down. When it made contact with the ground, a small orange and yellow Pokemon appeared. It had bird-like feet.
"Torchic!" it said in a high pitched voice.
"Torchic, use Scratch!" May yelled after flipping through her Pokedex, looking for attacks Torchic could use. Torchic jumped into the air and came down, scratching at the Wurmple. The Wurmple let out an angry cry and shot a silky, white string from its mouth.
"What is that?" May asked, looking at Ash for help.
"That's a String Shot attack. " Ash replied.
"Torchic, dodge it!" May yelled, turning back to her Pokemon. Torchic jumped out of the way. The String Shot harmlessly hit the ground. "Now, finish this up with another Scratch attack!" May yelled. Torchic scratched Wurmple again. Wurmple fell to the ground. May turned back to Ash.
"What do I do now?" she asked.
"Don't attack it again. Throw an empty Poke Ball." Ash said. May pulled out a Poke Ball and threw it at the Wurmple. One wiggle, two wiggle, three wiggle. Ping!
"You did it!" Ash said.
"Yay! I caught a Wurmple!" May said. Ash looked at his Pokedex.
"Accourding to this, it'll evolve into a Cascoon if it's a girl, or a Silcoon if it's a boy." he said. May put the Poke Ball containing her new Wurmple in her pack.
"You did great Torchic." she said. "Return!" She held out Torchic's ball. A red light came out and engulfed Torchic. In a few moments, Torchic was gone. May also put Torchic's Poke Ball in her pack.
"C'mon guys. It's getting late. We need to get ot Oldale Town and get a room from the Pokemon Center." Ash said.
"Right!" the others agreed. They all ran to Oldale Town. Ash read the sign.
"Oldale Town- 'Where things start off scarce' " Then, he and the other went to the Pokemon Center.
"Hi Nurse Joy. Are there any rooms available that we could stay in?" Ash asked.
"Yes there are.' Nurse Joy said. She handed Ash a key. "First room on the right."
"Thanks." Ash said. He and the other went upstairs and went to the room on the right. Ash unlocked the door and opened it. The room was small. It had two bunk beds-one on each side of the room. A small nightstand was inbetween the two bunk beds. A window was above the nightstand. And, finally, there was a bathroom in the third corner.
Ash, May, and Max all put their packs on the nightstand. May and Max took the bunk on the right- Max on the bottom and May on the top. Ash slept on the bottom bunk by himself (with Pikachu of course) in the bunk bed on the left. He stared at the wall for what seemed like hours. Then, he dozed off to sleep.
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Well, that's chapter 1. I hope you all like it! i'll post another one tomorrow. :)
Ok, if this sucks, I'm sorry. I'm not that good at writing just yet. At least I don't think so. Please let me know what you think!
_____________
Ch. 1: The journey begins
Ash Ketchum walked down the dusty road to Littleroot Town. He was on his way to the famous Prof. Birch's lab to see if he could get a starter Pokemon for his Hoenn journey. He was already a Pokemon Trainer, but he had left all of his Pokemon except his Pikachu behind when he had went home for a visit. When his mom had asked him why he was leaving all of his Pokemon behind, he had responded "Well, it's a new journey through a new region. I want to start all over again and make my way to the Hoenn League the way I'm supposed to." His mom had sighed, but went along with his choice. Besides, he still had his strongest pokemon with him: Pikachu.
Up ahead, Ash could see the houses of Littleroot Town.
"C'mon Pikachu! Let's go!" he cried, racing down the trail to the small town.
"Pika!" the yellow lightning mouse cried, running after him. It caught up to its trainer and jumped on his shoulder. When they reached Littleroot, Ash stopped and read the sign aloud: "Littleroot Town: 'A town that can't be shaded any hue.' " He spotted the lab up ahead. He walked over to it and knocked on the big, wooden door. A big man with brown hair, and warm brown eyes answered it. he was wearing a white lab coat and a blue shirt with brown shorts underneath.
"Hello. You must be Ash." he said.
"Yes. But how did you know my name?" Ash asked.
"Prof. Oak from Kanto called me and let me know you were coming." Prof. Birch responded. He opened the door wider and led Ash through.
There were computers everywhere. Lab assistants in long white lab coats rushed around the room, going from computer to computer. A small wooden table sat in the middle of the room. It had three Poke Balls placed on it. As Prof. Birch led Ash to the table, he noticed a girl about his age and a young boy standing beside the table. The girl smiled at him. She had light brown hair, and sapphire blue eyes. She wore a red bandana on her head, along with a red shirt and blue-black shorts with a skirt looking thing over them. She also wore white gloves with black on the fingers. A yellow pack was strapped around her waist. The boy had sort of a dark blue tint to his hair, and brownish-red eyes. He wore a green shirt with brown short. A yellow backpack was strapped to his back. He also wore black glasses. He hadn't even noticed Ash yet.
"Ok." Prof. Birch said as they reached the table. "These are the three Pokemon from which you will choose. This is Torchic." He said, pointing at the one on the left. "This is Treeko." He pointed to the one in the middle. "And the last one is Mudkip." He pointed to the one on the right. "Ok, May. I promised to let you pick first." he said, turning to the girl standing beside the table. He smiled at her. "Go ahead." The girl walked over to the table and picked up the Poke Ball on the left.
"So, you want Torchic, the Chick Pokemon?" Prof. Birch asked. The girl nodded. "Good choice." Prof. Birch said. He turned to Ash. "Ok, Ash. It's you turn. Take your pick." Ash walked over to the table.
Mudkip or Treeko? he thought to himself. Fianlly, after thinking hard, he picked up the Poke Ball in the middle.
"So you'll take Treeko, the Wood Gecko Pokemon?" Prof. Birch asked. Ash nodded. "Another excellent choice! Now, I'd like to present each of you with these." He handed Ash and the girl a small red device. It had a big blue button on one side.
"That is a Pokedex. It records data on the Pokemon you've seen or captured." Prof. Birch explained.
But, I already have one of these, Ash thought as he looked at the Pokedex in his hand.
"That Pokedex is set to record any Pokemon you see or catch. Whether it's from Kanto, Johto or Hoenn. It's more high tech than the others that are given away in the other regions." Prof. Birch said, as if he'd read Ash's mind. "And Max," he said, turning toward the boy. "I'd like to give you this." He handed the boy a small yellow device.
"What is this?" the boy asked.
"It's called a Pokenav. It has a map of the Hoenn region, a thing called a Match Call to call the people who give you their numbers, and a thing called Trainer's Eyes that tells you what trainers you've battled and the ones you haven't." Prof. Birch explained.
"Wow! Thanks!" Max said.
"I figured you should have something to do since your sister's going to be catching and training Pokemon, and you aren't old enough to be a trainer yet. You could be her guide." Prof. Birch said. He winked at Max. Max smiled.
"Here are 5 Poke Balls." Prof. Birch said, handing Ash and the girl each five red and white capsules. "Now, go and begin your journey!"
"Thanks, Prof. Birch! Bye!" Ash called as he walked out the lab door. The girl said the same and ran after him. She tapped him and the shoulder. Ash stopped and turned around.
"Hi. My name's May." the girl said, holding her hand out.
"I'm Ash." Ash said, shaking her hand. The boy ran up to them.
"Oh, and this is my little brother, Max." she said as the boy ran up by her side.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Ash." Ash said.
"Ooooh! You've got a Pikachu! Can I pet it? Please?" Max asked. Ash laughed.
"Sure." he replied. He held his arm out. Pikachu scampered down it and stood at the edge of his hand. Max scratched it behind its ears. When he was done, Pikachu ran back up Ash's arm and took roost on his shoulder.
"So, is this you first time in Hoenn?" May asked.
"Yeah." Ash replied.
"Then why do you already have a Pikachu?" May asked.
"Because he's already a trainer! Duh!" Max said. "Didn't you watch the Johto regionals last year? He made it all the way to the final eight!"
"Oh yeah!" May said. She turned back to Ash. "Where are all of your other Pokemon?" she asked.
"I left them back in Pallet Town with my mom." Ash replied.
"Pallet Town?!" May and Max asked in surprise.
"Yeah." Ash said, confused.
"Wow. You came all the way from Pallet Town?" Max asked. Ash nodded.
"Uh, guys? Don't we need to try to make it to the next town?" Ash asked.
"Oh right! Max what is the next town?" May asked her brother.
Max took out the yellow device Prof. Birch had given him. He flipped it open.
"Well, accourding to this, the next town is Oldale Town. And it's not too far from here." Max said.
"Ok then. Oldale Town it is!" Ash said.
The walked into the tall grass just outside of Littleroot Town. A gray and black Pokemon jumped out at them. It looked like a small puppy, but had sharper teeth than a regular puppy or dog would have.
"Wonder what that is?" Ash asked. He took out his Pokedex. May did the same.
"Poochyena: The Bite Pokemon. At first sight, Poochyena takes a bite at anything that moves. This Pokemon chases after prey until the victim becomes exhausted. However, it may turn tail if the prey strikes back. " the mechanical voices in both Pokedexes said.
"Nobody move." Ash said quietly. They all stood as still as statues until the Poochyena disappeared into the bushes. When they were sure it was gone, they continued walking through the grass. A little while later, Ash could see the houses of Oldale Town up ahead.
"There it is!" he said. "Let's go!" He started running the rest of the way.
"He sure is energetic." May said as she and Max ran to catch up with him. Right before they reached the town, another Pokemon popped out at them. It was red with a white belly. It had two big, yellow eyes, and a small horn on the top of its head. It also had two spikes on its rear.
Ash and May pulled out their Pokedexes onece more.
"Wurmple: The Worm Pokemon. Using the spikes on its rear end, Wurmple peels bark off trees and feeds on the sap that oozes out. This Pokemon's feet are tipped with suction pads that allow it to cling to glass without slipping. " the mechanical voices said.
"Awww! It's kinda cute." May said.
Ash made a face, then said, "Well, why don't you try and catch it?"
"Ok I will!" May said.
"Weaken it first, and it'll be easier to catch." Ash said. May nodded.
"Torchic come on out! she cried, taking a Poke Ball out of her pack, enlarging it, and throwing it into the air. It came back down. When it made contact with the ground, a small orange and yellow Pokemon appeared. It had bird-like feet.
"Torchic!" it said in a high pitched voice.
"Torchic, use Scratch!" May yelled after flipping through her Pokedex, looking for attacks Torchic could use. Torchic jumped into the air and came down, scratching at the Wurmple. The Wurmple let out an angry cry and shot a silky, white string from its mouth.
"What is that?" May asked, looking at Ash for help.
"That's a String Shot attack. " Ash replied.
"Torchic, dodge it!" May yelled, turning back to her Pokemon. Torchic jumped out of the way. The String Shot harmlessly hit the ground. "Now, finish this up with another Scratch attack!" May yelled. Torchic scratched Wurmple again. Wurmple fell to the ground. May turned back to Ash.
"What do I do now?" she asked.
"Don't attack it again. Throw an empty Poke Ball." Ash said. May pulled out a Poke Ball and threw it at the Wurmple. One wiggle, two wiggle, three wiggle. Ping!
"You did it!" Ash said.
"Yay! I caught a Wurmple!" May said. Ash looked at his Pokedex.
"Accourding to this, it'll evolve into a Cascoon if it's a girl, or a Silcoon if it's a boy." he said. May put the Poke Ball containing her new Wurmple in her pack.
"You did great Torchic." she said. "Return!" She held out Torchic's ball. A red light came out and engulfed Torchic. In a few moments, Torchic was gone. May also put Torchic's Poke Ball in her pack.
"C'mon guys. It's getting late. We need to get ot Oldale Town and get a room from the Pokemon Center." Ash said.
"Right!" the others agreed. They all ran to Oldale Town. Ash read the sign.
"Oldale Town- 'Where things start off scarce' " Then, he and the other went to the Pokemon Center.
"Hi Nurse Joy. Are there any rooms available that we could stay in?" Ash asked.
"Yes there are.' Nurse Joy said. She handed Ash a key. "First room on the right."
"Thanks." Ash said. He and the other went upstairs and went to the room on the right. Ash unlocked the door and opened it. The room was small. It had two bunk beds-one on each side of the room. A small nightstand was inbetween the two bunk beds. A window was above the nightstand. And, finally, there was a bathroom in the third corner.
Ash, May, and Max all put their packs on the nightstand. May and Max took the bunk on the right- Max on the bottom and May on the top. Ash slept on the bottom bunk by himself (with Pikachu of course) in the bunk bed on the left. He stared at the wall for what seemed like hours. Then, he dozed off to sleep.
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Well, that's chapter 1. I hope you all like it! i'll post another one tomorrow. :)
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