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Paul sees Isabel get carried away
Fay leads Drake to the PXS HQ
Paul is following Isabel when he sees Drake
Paul follows Drake
Drake gets captured but Paul manges to release him
Drake and Paul release Isabel and escape
It sounds fine I will write up to when Paul release Drake as soon as you are ready (While Drake is on the way to the PXS could you add in some hints that he is being followed I will then use them in my stroy line)
After that I don't mind if you bunnie me as Paul and Drake help Isabel
actually, maybe leave off the last one. We need to discuss what happens a moment :D
I actually think Rena is probably going to end up rescuing Isabel, but first Isabel needs to get a little more information...
Serene: You are accepted. So I take it she wasn't a member of the Uprising before...?
Oh yeah, one thing: Though unsocialable on the outside, Rena is always thinking about what is happening, and often does so rather than talk with others.
That's okay, I just didn't want there to be any confusion or anyone getting mad.
BTW, since there's been a group of new arrivals, I'm going to place all their sign-ups on one of my posts in a spoiler box to try and keep it a little neater.
Name: Brendon Gira
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Has a Grey-ish Red T-Shirt.
Pants are a Steel Red they're sweats.
Hair is Red but, has a dash of Grey in it.
Usually wears a Blue Hat.
Wears Shoes that are White and Black.
Personality:
Has a spunky attitude, but is usually nice to people.
He has part of a family, since everybody in his family passed away except his brother.
He loves to battle and doesn't really have a bad-side while fighting.
He can be a jerk sometimes but, he just fools around.
He cares for all his team since they have kept him from harsh times.
He has a connection with Giratina.
Background:
He was born in Sinnoh but his family moved.
He wanted to join since he hated Pokemon being treated like that.
Additional Info:Nothin'
No RP Sample.
Spoiler:
Pokemon Sign Up:
Yes in Pokemon's point of view.
Nickname: None
Breed: Magmortar
Gender: Male
Moves: Flamethrower, Blast Burn, Fire Blast, Sunny Day
Appearance: He has a Grey streak coming down from his right arm to his cannon.
Personality: He's a joke-ster he fools around while Brendon picks berries.
History: Brendon found a Magmortar wondering in his backyard and once they saw each other they became friends.
AI:None.
Nickname:Elect
Breed: Electivire
Gender: Male
Moves: Thunder, Zap Cannon, Iron Tail, Thunder Bolt
Appearance: Looks like an ordinary Electivire except has a stronger tail.
Personality: Likes smile and talks with the other Pokemon on Brendon's team a lot.
History: Brendon caught him as in Electabuzz when he was nearing to the 5th Gym Badge in Sinnoh.
AI: None
Nickname: NO Nickname
Breed:Gliscor
Gender: Male
Moves: Ice Fang, Fire Fang, Gust, Bite
Appearance: Just a regular Gliscor with some scratches on his tail.
History: While he was a Gligar he followed Brendon a lot kinda like a stalker, when Brendon finally realized he was being followed he caught the Gliscor in Sinnoh after he got his 3rd Badge.
AI: None.
Nickname:No Nickname
Breed: Leafeon
Gender: Female
Moves: Razor Leaf, Solar Beam, Sunny Day, Giga Drain
Apperance: She is a shiny Leafeon.
History: She was abandoned by her trainer so Brendon caught her after his 6th Gym Badge in Sinnoh.
AI:None
Nickname: Glace
Breed: Glaceon
Gender: Female
Moves: Ice Beam, Ice Fang, Blizzard, Powder Snow
Apperance: Has a unique Diamon pattern on her tail.
History: She was found running around near lake Acuity, when Brendon found her she was found of him and joined his team.
Ai: None
How tall is he?
What color are his eyes?
Anything interesting about his appearance?
Does he have a short temper?
Why did his family move?
What did his family do for a living?
How did the law affect him?
How did he react to the new law?
Does he have anything that haunts him from his past?
I'm just going to need a sample of your writing. Even if you just write it now, I just need to know your skill and style.
Would you mind toning down several of your Pokemon's moves? They're a little unbelievable at this point.
Please fix these in your sign-up, but until then, your sign-up isn't accepted.
I sort of had an idea though. My appearence and personality are quite childish so if Drake gets caught I doubt PSX would think I'm a trainer, in my rage I'd probably try to break in any way possible and sneak in to try and hit Drake with my frying pan. I also like giving Munch metronome because of the almost unlimited possibilites.
To be more straight foreward I thought about ideas for the RP. Drake would get caught, I would sneak in, and as a result of some of my meddling unexpected consequences would erupt. Not exactly all bad consequences though. These are just sugestions though.
Like he causes an upset? Maybe this is the distraction Serene's character needs. And then when Isabel and the rest of the Uprising escapes, they find him and take him as well. Then when they get out, your character hits him over with the frying pan :P
I like it. Is it okay if I post a little more. I had an idea of what to write next. I'll have to leave a time lapse for Drake though. I don't feel like bunnying.
Okay I'm gonna edit the last post I made. I wrote so people could get a better idea of what I was doing. I couldn't put as much detail in because I'm sharing the computer with my sister.