The world tournament

[Freak A]

well i was just playing a game on a world tournament of fighting and i thought y not create a Pokemon game on in so i started and i had gorgeous results in writing a story well first of all this is the game where you finally become a Pokemon master and all characters from the anime are there and some new ones but to qualify first you have to beat alll the gyms of jhoto kanto hoen and sinnoh and then you travel to the orange islands where the first round of the world tournament is taking place but i hav'nt actually thought of anything accept some otter people to help me with some sprites and music and tiles and mapping the rtest i will help at every thing accept adding of events cause thats ma weak point well if you wanna be a master and catch em all well than help me out as we begin

 

[LynnCreed]

My first suggestion is to make your first post more readable, and to divide it up by things such as:

storyline

features

team members

 

[Tsukiyo]

Commas and periods are your friends. Utilize them.

 

[PokemonOI]

well i was just playing a game on a world tournament of fighting and i thought y not create a Pokemon game on in so i started and i had gorgeous results in writing a story well first of all this is the game where you finally become a Pokemon master and all characters from the anime are there and some new ones but to qualify first you have to beat alll the gyms of jhoto kanto hoen and sinnoh and then you travel to the orange islands where the first round of the world tournament is taking place but i hav'nt actually thought of anything accept some otter people to help me with some sprites and music and tiles and mapping the rtest i will help at every thing accept adding of events cause thats ma weak point well if you wanna be a master and catch em all well than help me out as we begin

Your gonna need to do alot better no offense.

 

[Freak A]

moderater please close this i dont want my bad memmories to come and haunt