Ties of love and Friendship

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woah! Great chapter!
Beat Sabrina and kissed Michelle! This gets better and better :badsmile:
cant wait for more Oni!
 
Grate chapter! Finaly beat Sabrina. I didnt exspect for him to kiss Michelle ^^;; poor Emily...
 
Oni's Fan-Fics are just so great, they are way better than my fan-fics, no-one ever reads mines :(, That was a lovely chapter, Oni!
 
I could only read a little bit of your story but from I've read it's the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :chinese:
 
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oh...wow....this way unexpented....*giggle* then who does he REAL like.
 
I haven't seen any positive Red appearances in your fanfics.

Don't worry, you will in one of my fanfics! XD

Guess what, everyone? More FLUFF! XD
Chapter 66: Taking the last challenge​

?Oh yeah, I forgot to give you this,? I said all of the sudden, breaking the silence. We were still in the park in the bench. Now, its already sunset. I took out a Pok?ball?the same one given by Marina to me. ?Here,? I said to Emily.

She had a puzzled look on her face as she examined the Pok?ball.

?Take it,? I moved my hand closer to her.

She stretched out her hand and took the Pok?ball from my hand. She peered closer to the clear, red top. ?Thanks,? She whispered.

?Ah, you should thank Marina. She gave that to me!? I smiled as I scratched my head.

Emily kept her Pok?ball in her pocket and remained silent. It was already sunset and Nick wasn?t still here.

?Where is he?? Michelle yelled as she stood up impatiently. ?Where is that boy??

?Michelle, I?m sure he?s on his way?and I don?t think he knows we?re here, anyway,? I suggested to her.

It was dusk. The sun was illuminating the city with its dim, orange rays. The park was now deserted and a few people walked the streets. We decided to leave the park and find Nick instead. He could be everywhere by now since all he knew was that we?re supposed to be outside of Viridian city.

We tried to find him there but he wasn?t there. Finally, we decided to go to the gym. It was already night when we reached the gym door. The gym looked the same ever since the last time I saw it. However, this time, it looked dark and dank and only a single light illuminated one room.

?That idiot must be in here,? Michelle muttered in an irritated tone. ?Making me worry so much,? She then continued to mumble out her mom and dad getting angry since Nick used to cry always since she always beat him up.

?Come on. I bet the gym leader know where he went,? I suggested to her.

She muttered another word and approached the gym doors. She then pounded the doors of the gym, loudly. My eardrums pounded loudly as I heard her loud knocks. I looked down at Emily and she stared back with her gleaming silver eyes.

?Hey! Where?s my bro?? She yelled loudly while she pounded at the doors.

Good thing was that the gym was isolated away from the houses. Michelle could?ve woken up a bunch of people right now.

?Open this door!? She yelled once more, this time a lot louder.

?Michelle, quiet down!? I whispered. ?Sleeping people are going to hear you!?

Then, we heard footsteps resonating inside. The footsteps grew louder and louder as seconds passed. Michelle stopped pounding the door as we heard the door unlatch with a metallic click.

As the doors opened, a familiar face greeted us. Lyn?s sleepy face appeared. She was rubbing her eyes and she wore her nightgown. ?I hate it when I sleep at the gym,? I heard her mutter out loud. She squinted at Michelle. ?Oh, it?s you,? She muttered.

?Yeah it?s me! Remember me?? Michelle yelled loudly.

?Not so loud!? Lyn replied, rubbing her ear. ?What do you want? If you want a challenge, it has to be tomorrow?? She scratched her long, tangled black hair.

?No, I?m not here for a stupid challenge. I want to know where my brother is.?

?Your brother??

?Yeah! He said that he?s supposed to challenge you this afternoon,?

A bewildered expression replaced Lyn?s irritated expression. ?Challenge?? She repeated.

?Yeah! My brother, Nick is supposed to challenge you this afternoon. We?re trying to find him,? Michelle replied, more calmer this time.

Lyn shrugged. ?Sorry, I didn?t have any challenges this afternoon,?

?What?? Michelle exclaimed all of the sudden. ?But?he?he?s supposed to be here right now!?

Lyn shook her head. ?Sorry, but I don?t remember any challenger challenging me this afternoon,?

?But?? Michelle?s voice trailed off.

A moment of silence filled the evening air. A soft rush of the wind through the trees was the only thing that was heard.

?I?m sorry,? Lyn said breaking the silence. ?If there?s anything I can make up for your fruitless search??

Michelle shook her head. She looked down at the ground.

?Maybe you can stay here for a while.? She then looked behind her towards us. ?Gary! It?s you!? She exclaimed after I saw her squint her narrow eyes.

I smiled back at her and waved.

?Hey, you three stay here for the night. It?s cold outside during the night.?

It took a while to convince Michelle into staying in the gym that night. Luckily, the gym was actually Lyn?s home. Besides the stadium and the long hallway of previous gym leaders, there was a kitchen, two bedrooms?one where Lyn sleeps and one for guests, bathrooms, and a lot more.

After taking a bath, I slipped in pajamas that Lyn lent me and headed towards my room that I shared with Emily and Michelle. They already took a bath and both in pajamas. Michelle stared out at the window outside. She had her long, blonde hair loose. Emily on the other hand was looking at her new Pok?mon. She was leaning on one of the bed?s pillow.

I looked around the room. There was only one window and a chair overlooking at the window. Michelle sat on that chair. One huge bed was against the beige colored walls. It looked comfortable with its thick blankets and soft, feather pillows. A tall mirror was on the left side of the room and a dresser was right next to it.

I sighed as I sat down on the bed and stretched my arms. ?I wanna sleep,? I muttered as I let myself fall on the bed, looking at the beige colored ceiling. I was thinking of challenging Lyn tomorrow but we need to find Nick first. Then, we challenge her.

I closed my eyes, resting them from the day?s journey. When I opened them, I was freaked out to see two silver eyes peering down at me.

?Ack!? I yelled as I recoiled back. Emily looked at me curiously with her innocent eyes.

?Oops,? She muttered as she crawled back. ?Did I scare you??

?Yeah,? I replied, feeling my heart, which was beating rapidly, non-stop.

?I?m sorry,? She replied as she looked down at the bed. It?s funny since her pajamas looked pretty loose since they were too big for her small frame. She had a hard time keeping it on, often fidgeting each time she said a word since her red checkered pajama kept on drooping down her shoulder.

?It?s okay,? I sighed as I crawled back where I lay down before. ?Why were you looking at me??

?Oh nothing?? She replied as she looked at Michelle, who was now sleeping at the chair. I didn?t really know if she was asleep or not since she was mumbling something about what a loser his brother is. ?I just?wanted to check if you?re awake??

?That?s okay,? I replied to her, smiling. ?These days, weird stuff happens, huh??

She nodded her head with a weak smile. She fidgeted again as she raised her sleeve, which was again, drooping down, revealing her shoulder.

?I want to sleep now,? She blurted out all of the sudden.

I nodded as I walked towards the lights. She lay down on one side of the bed, facing the window. She let out a frustrated sigh as she pulled up her sleeve again, which was again sagging down her shoulder. I took a blanket first and walked towards Michelle. I placed it over her since it?s going to be cold tonight. Then, I walked towards the switch to the lights. I clicked on the switch and everything is now shrouded in darkness. I found myself wandering towards the bed and as soon as I found it, I climbed up the bed and quietly lay myself down; facing the same direction as Emily was?was?I didn?t know that she was actually facing me.

Since I had a habit of having my arm stretched outwards with my hand pointing to where I?m facing, Emily must?ve figured that out since I felt her hand hold my hand and felt her face rest against my arm, with her arms wrapped around. In a way, she was hugging my arm. And in a way, she still loves me and she?s waiting for me to fall in love with her. I was half asleep when I realized this. I felt stupid and foolish?I?ve mentioned to them that they were just friends over and over again?I couldn?t simply accept that Emily still loved me no matter what I said to her?even though I made her cry? These incidents and conversations with her?every time she talked to me or simply hold my hand or at least kiss me?it didn?t change my heart one bit. The next morning, I?ll wake up never remembering this incident.

~*~*~*~

The next morning, I realized that Emily was still sleeping. Michelle on the other hand, was already awake and dressed. She seems to be quite determined today since I watched her boldly walk out the door. I sat up from the bed and noticed that Emily was still clinging to my arm. Slowly, I managed to separate myself from her.

She slept soundly as I stood up, dressed and walked out of the door. After eating breakfast with Michelle, who never said a word, I walked out of the kitchen and unexpectedly met Lyn.

?Good morning!? She greeted me as she smiled cheerfully.

?Morning,? I replied and then yawned.

?I hope you?ll find your friend eventually today,? Lyn smiled at me.

I nodded as I smiled back. I walked out of the kitchen and walked across the battlefield, overlooking to the door outside, I imagined Nick slamming the doors open yelling about the cold. Then, I imagined Michelle leaping out towards him with arms wide open then converting her arms of sibling love to fists of fury, she?d punch him across the face.

I chuckled as I made my way to the room where we slept. I entered the room and noticed that Emily was awake now. She was sitting up, rubbing her eyes and holding her sagging sleeve.

?Morning!? I greeted her.

She turned her head at me and smiled. ?Good morning,? Her hair which was a bit disheveled was quickly fixed as she ran her hands through her hair and then making a ponytail running down to the back of her head.

The rays of the sun streamed down the open window and I could smell the fresh breeze of morning. I could hear chirping outside and the distant sound of cars running down the road. I looked at Emily and she was having a hard time standing up since her pants didn?t quite fit her well and she was holding her pants and her sleeve at the same time.

?Want me to help?? I asked her as I approached her.

She shook her head quickly as her left sleeve drooped, revealing her bare shoulder. She was holding the right sleeve with her left hand and holding her loose pants with her right hand at the same time.

?Here, I?ll hand you your clothes,? I said as I rummaged through the dresser and pulling out her newly washed clothes, thanks to the Viridian city gym?s laundry room. I placed her clothes on top of the bed, next to her and went outside.

?Wait! Where are you going?? She asked me as she grabbed her dark shirt while holding her pants at the same time.

?You?re going to dress, aren?t you?? I laughed. ?I?m going to wait outside, don?t worry!?

I closed the door and sat down against it. I waited for her to get finished as I looked at the wall across from me. Finally, I heard the doorknob twist open. I quickly stood up to see Emily, who was smiling happily at me.

?Thanks,?

?No problem,? I replied with a wide grin. ?Now let?s go find Nick!?

Before I could walk another step, I heard a voice behind me. ?Gary, how many do you have??

I turned around and Lyn was standing right behind us. She had a grim expression in her face.

?Uh?I have seven?? I replied, rummaging through my pockets. I took out my seven badges quickly and watched Lyn walk towards me. She took all seven and examined them closely and then, she returned them to my hand.

?Astounding!? She exclaimed. ?Gary, if you want, you can battle me now!?

I had a shocked expression. ?Battle? But?I still need to find my friend and??

?Gary, I?m going to be your final challenge, don?t let me down!?

I looked at Emily and she doesn?t seem to know what?s happening since she had a puzzled look in her face. I tried to make a decision?a little battle wouldn?t hurt, would it?

To be continued...
 
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Bet I know what pokemon Emily got ^^ This chapter was good! wonder where Nick is...
 
Great chapter! I like how the gym leader helped^^
Emily got a bit closer to him this time
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?Michelle, quiet down!? I whispered. ?Sleeping people are going to here you!?

its "hear"

?Astounding!? She exclaimed. ?Gary, if you want, you can cattle me now!?

its "battle"

^^
 
Oni....Really good..... a good chapter.
But one question.... Where'd did you get the name Lyn from? I don't think I'm thinking what your thinking......XD
 
Dragon_Master said:
Oni....Really good..... a good chapter.
But one question.... Where'd did you get the name Lyn from? I don't think I'm thinking what your thinking......XD

Lyn is my friend's name...XD
Some names here are names of my friends. Except Toshin/Hiroki, Makoto, Reiji, Sakaki...

The only time I used Lyn's name (from Fire Emblem) is from one of my old fanfics called "The Legends Keeper"... (made last year when FE wasn't released yet and I saw a preview of FE in Nintendo's Japanese website...I also used Eliwood's name there)Sadly, that fanfic is a failure X-X

Anyways, here's a new chapter!

Chapter 66: Twin hearted​

I made up my mind of accepting the challenge. So here I am now, here at Viridian city?s stadium.

I summoned my courage as Lyn said the rules. She instructed that this would be a full battle?six on six. I tried to think of the best to what my strategy would be. I remembered this stadium clearly. This was here where I battled Lyn when I started my training. Now, I?m ready to defeat her. Then, I remembered the incident that happened during the battle. How come her mean look had an effect on me during her battle and not on any other battles? I shook off the thought thinking that it was just something that just happened.

I readied myself as I took out my first Pok?ball containing Sage. I looked behind me and Emily was standing there, watching the battle closely.

?I hope you?ve grown strong enough, Gary,? Lyn yelled out to me as I saw her take out a Pok?ball. Her bright eyes gleamed as she readied herself. ?Ready??

I nodded with anticipation. My heart was pounding so loudly that I could hear the pounding in my ears. I could also feel it raging in my chest. My palms were sweaty as I threw my Pok?ball. ?Let?s do this, Sage!?

I released my Pidgeot at once. Sage replied with a loud shrill cry as it flapped its majestic wings, often loosing huge feathers from them.

Lyn replied with a grin and threw her Pok?ball. Out came a brown owl Pok?mon, which I recognized immediately as a Noctowl. It looked at Sage curiously with its eyes transfixed to Sage. It tilted its head on one side and it had both feet on the ground.

I know what I?m dealing with now. Lyn might be a bird Pok?mon user. But I?m not quite sure since she used a Houndour on me before. ?You go first,? She was still grinning.

I nodded enthusiastically. ?Sage, fly higher!? I yelled.

Sage replied to my command with a loud, shrill cry. It flapped its wings harder as it flew up higher. It waited for my command as it stayed there, flying.

?Confusion!? Lyn?s voice boomed around the stadium. Her Noctowl looked at my Pidgeot and then immediately sent out an invisible wave towards Sage. I was too slow to react to the attack and the attack finally connected.

Sage let out a frustrated cry as the attack hit him and made him lose his balance. ?Sage!? I yelled as he tried to regain balance.

?Wing attack!? Lyn yelled before Sage could recover from the attack. I noticed Noctowl speed towards Sage in a blinding speed and hit Sage with its wings.

?Sage!? I yelled. That was all too fast and I wasn?t able to react to the attack. Sage finally regained balance and landed softly to the ground while spreading his wings. Noctowl, who was now sitting on the ground again, simply stared back at Sage.

?Don?t disappoint me, Gary,? Lyn yelled to me. ?I?m just thinking that you underestimated me!?

I didn?t reply as I tried to think of a plan to beat Noctowl?s speed. ?Fly up again!? I yelled to Sage. He immediately obeyed my command when it flew up in the air again.

?This again,? Lyn muttered loudly. ?Confusion!?

This time I was ready for this attack. ?Dodge it, Sage!? My Pidgeot obeyed immediately when it quickly dashed to the right. But something happened that I didn?t expect. The confusion attack followed Sage when he dodged it. ?Hey!? I yelled as the attack knocked Sage out of the air and made him lose his balance again. Sage was trying to stay on the air, this time.

?Wing attack!? I hear Lyn yell out once more.

Before I could see Noctowl move, I yelled out my command. ?Mirror move!?

Sage immediately recovered and sent out a powerful confusion blast towards the incoming Noctowl. The wave pushed Noctowl back before it could reach Sage. Noctowl was sent back to the ground, defenseless. Now was my chance.

?Wing attack!? I yelled. Blaze sped downwards towards Noctowl with amazing agility. Before Sage could reach Noctowl, it immediately dodged Sage?s attack by a hair even though it was still shocked from the confusion attack.

?Impressive,? Lyn said as her Noctowl recovered from the attack. Blaze was back again to where he was. ?I didn?t expect you to use a mirror move attack,?

?Don?t mention it,? I laughed. I looked back at Emily and she seems to be really interested in the battle since her eyes glittered with excitement. However, she still remained silent.

?Good, now prepare yourself, Gary!? I always had that feeling that gym leaders would have some kind of secret attack with their Pok?mon and Lyn was one of these gym leaders. ?Double team!? She yelled. Noctowl immediately multiplied at once in dozens of forms. They positioned themselves in a horizontal line facing me, unlike some gym leaders, who tried to surround my Pok?mon.

Since I?ve had many encounters with gym leaders who use double team, I know what to do. ?Hit the far right!? I pointed to the Noctowl to the far right. Sage obeyed as he sped towards the Noctowl. Before he could reach it, Lyn already commanded an attack.

?Wrong choice,? I heard Lyn shout. ?Confusion!?

Before she could call the attack, I knew she would call a confusion attack. ?Fly up, Sage!? He aborted his attack and immediately flew up. I could see dozens of confusion attacks, which were visible rather than invisible follow Sage closely. Sage flew from left to right and right to left. He tried to shake off the attacks but failed to do so. I suddenly had an idea.

?Fly towards the Noctowls, starting on the right!? I yelled to Sage

Sage responded as it flew sideways towards the Noctowls. I could see them disappear one by one as Sage flew through them. Finally, when Sage reached the far left Noctowl, it was the real one. It was struck by a wing attack, which was then followed by its own confusion attacks. The attack was powerful enough to knock it out.

Lyn returned her Noctowl immediately before it collapsed on the ground. So now, it?s one down, five to go.

?A good battle,? Lyn smirked. ?Now let?s see you go over this,? She threw another Pok?ball and out came a large black Pok?mon on all fours. I immediately recognized this Pok?mon as a Houndoom. It let out an ear-piercing howl as it wagged its long pointed tail and snorted at Sage.

Sage flinched as the Houndoom howled. I did too since its howl sent shivers through my spine. I heard Emily let out a small squeak of terror as the howl echoed down the walls. The echo sounded as if there were multiple Houndooms in the gym.

?Your move,? Lyn smirked at me.

I steadied myself as I tried to think of a strategy to defeat this Houndoom. I?m not completely sure what this Houndoom is capable of?

?Wing attack!? I shouted. My voice resounded through the whole stadium.

Sage sped towards Houndoom with incredible speed. Before the attack could hit Sage, Lyn?s Houndoom jumped up an incredible height, evading the attack quickly and leaving it enough time to counter attack.

?Crunch!? Lyn shouted at the split second Houndoom jumped. Before Sage could realize what was happening, Houndoom came crashing down with its ferocious pearly, white teeth protruding. The counter attack connected as Houndoom plunged its teeth on Sage?s body. Sage let out cries of desperation as it was pinned down to the ground, struggling to escape from Houndoom?s crunch attack.

?Sage! Fly up!? I yelled, but my efforts were fruitless. Houndoom sank its teeth deeper and deeper down Sage?s body. ?Stop it!? I yelled as Sage finally fainted. I returned Sage immediately and gritted my teeth that was all too savage and all too quick. Lyn simply smirked back at me as I took out my great ball. I sent out my Milotic and I know I?ll have an advantage over Lyn?s Houndoom.

?Ah, so you?re going over weaknesses, eh?? Lyn smiled. ?Do you remember how I easily defeated that girl?s Squirtle from before??

I nodded but this is my only chance. Abby?s attacks wouldn?t do much to Houndoom since psychic attacks have no effect on dark types. Further more, I have two steel type Pok?mon in my team, making myself a disadvantage to fire types. Blaze could battle but I need to save him for later.

?I?m fine by your standards, then,? Lyn replied to my nod. ?Iron tail,?

Lyn?s Houndoom lunged forward with its gleaming tail aimed at Gabby. It ran towards Gabby with amazing speed but my command was quick enough for Gabby to execute.

?Hydro pump!? I shouted. Gabby inhaled and then launched out a powerful blast of water from its mouth. I looked up to Houndoom but I saw it quickly evade the attack by jumping up high. Now, it?s going to attack Gabby if I?m not going to counter attack back to it.

?Ice beam to it!? I commanded Gabby as I pointed to Houndoom, which was coming down to strike Gabby pretty quickly.

Gabby sent out an icy blue beam on Houndoom. The attack connected and froze Houndoom. Now, Houndoom is just a lump of ice that?s going to fall on the ground. Gabby dodged the falling Houndoom as it landed on the floor with a loud thud.

Before I could hesitate, and conclude my thoughts of winning this round, Lyn commanded an attack.

?Flame wheel!? She yelled. At once, the ice around Houndoom turned to a vivid red and the heat started to melt the ice. It?s going to break free of the ice.

Before it could break free, I know what I?m going to do. ?Hydro pump!? I yelled.

At the same time I yelled my command, the ice shattered around Houndoom and released it. Houndoom let out a powerful howl as it shook itself from the freezing water. Before it could react, Gabby?s powerful hydro pump blasted Houndoom out of the ring and sent it crashing to the wall, cracking it.

To my surprise, Houndoom landed on its feet, making a swift recovery from the attack. It barked at Gabby and showed its bloody teeth.

?Houndoom, fire blast!?

I took that attack as an advantage. I remembered clearly all the battles I?ve watched and this time, I?m going to have to use my current knowledge. ?Mirror coat!? I yelled.

As the wheel of flame attacked Gabby, a wall appeared in front of her the moment I called the attack. The wall reversed the attack and sent it back to Houndoom. Confused to what?s happening, Houndoom received a full blast of the attack, which was doubled the power.

Lyn muttered miserably as she returned her fainted Houndoom. ?I guess I?m the one who misjudged you,? She took out another Pok?ball and summoned out a small black Pok?mon with uneven ears and sharp claws.

It was a Sneasel. I know these Pok?mon to be quick, tough, and sneaky. Now, I braced myself for this round.

To be continued...
 
Really grate chapter!!! The battle sceen was grate!! Garys doing pretty well ~_^ This fanfic is awsome!!
 
Go gary!beat that egg stealing pokemon!
 
No new chapter today, guys. But guess what?
I've edited the first two chapters and made a prologue. I'm going to edit the fanfic slowly as I write. You might find some dialogue changes and some scenes are going to be eidted.

Try re-reading the first two chapters, guys! Don't worry, I'll add a new chapter tomorrow! ^_^
 
I will.and I'll wait.Your capters are always worth waiting.When this is done you're going to have to make a new long fanfic,because this is part of what I do before I go to bed and after I wake up.Cheak back to see if there's more chapter.
 
Very good chapter Oni!
This match is described very well.
Couldnt see any errors.
Beat that Sneasel! :cool:
 
New chapter!

Chapter 67: Twin Hearted (Part two)​

Lyn had the first move this time. I braced myself since I know that Sneasels shouldn?t be under rated. They?re pretty quick and powerful.

?Quick attack,? Lyn commanded her Sneasel.

Before I could even react, the short, slim, black Pok?mon advanced towards Gabby. It stretched its claws, ready to strike. Its small claws turned to long, sharp claws. It positioned itself in attack position then rammed itself to Gabby in one quick strike.

Gabby yelled in pain as Sneasel somersaulted back to where it was standing while sticking out a tongue at Gabby and me. Gabby growled as it recovered from the attack.

?That was fast!? I yelled since the attack all happened in a blink of an eye.

Lyn nodded. ?I?m just getting started, Gary.? She then smiled. ?Your turn or I?m gonna get you, Gary!?

?Okay, Gabby, hydro pump!? I shouted.

Gabby let out a powerful yell and then blasted a powerful surge of water towards Sneasel. To my surprise, Sneasel avoided the attack without any effort at all. Then, in a quick motion, Sneasel immediately advanced forward and performed a slash attack at Gabby.

?Gabby, you okay?? I yelled to her.

She responded with a nod but didn?t growl more. She simply glared back at the Sneasel, which stuck out its tongue at us.

?Sneasel, icy wind!? Sneasel let out a shrill cry and out of nowhere, the winds began to surge around us. A colossal wind followed and hit us. I looked behind me and noticed Emily was hugging the wall in order to be not blown away by the wind.

Me on the other hand, was blown away by the wind since I wasn?t holding into anything. I felt a sharp pain on my back and on the back of my head as I was slammed to the wall. I cried out in pain as I fell down to the floor as the attack ended.

I looked up and Gabby was still holding on by a thread. She was wheezing and gasping as she struggled to stay up. I felt a hand help me up when I tried to stand up. Emily was helping me up.

?Thanks,? I said as finally stood up and dusted myself. My hands were a bit shaken and my knees were trembling.

She smiled back at me. ?Don?t give up yet.?

I nodded and smiled at her as she let go of my arm. I walked up and readied myself. ?Recover!? I yelled with a shaky voice.

Gabby glowed a bright blue color. That bright color immediately dispersed itself, revealing a fully healed Gabby.

?Very good,? Lyn smirked at me. ?That?s a very good strategy. But how can you match my Sneasel?s speed??

?I?m not sure?but I?ll find a way,? I replied back at her. ?G?Gabby, hydro pump!?

Gabby fired another hydro pump to Sneasel but it dodged the attack once more. Again, Sneasel advanced towards Gabby once more with its claws outstretched and ready. It let out its shrill war cry as it advanced towards Gabby. The attack connected and Gabby yelled back in pain as Sneasel somersaulted back again.

?This is useless?? I thought to myself as I gripped my fist. ?How am I supposed to beat it with that speed.?

?Icy wind!?

?That?s it!? I yelled out loud. ?Mirror coat!?

I could see the violent winds surging towards Gabby. I could see the wind and the snow blowing towards Gabby and then reflect back towards Lyn and her Sneasel. I yelled triumphantly as the attack was successfully executed.

As the winds cleared, Sneasel was still awake, barely. It was holding itself up with one hand. Lyn was standing as if the attack didn?t faze her much. Her long dark hair was the only one that seems to have been harmed by the attack since it was disheveled and let loose.

?Impressive,? She simply muttered as she eyed me closely. Her Sneasel was still gasping for air in front of her. ?I fell for that trick twice,? She smiled.

I smiled back, trying to stay calm. Gabby was tired from the continuous attacks from Sneasel even though she recovered from the previous attacks. ?Gabby, let?s do this!? I yelled, trying to boost her morale.

Gabby let out a cry of appreciation and readied herself. ?Blizzard!? She inhaled and let out a powerful cry that rattled the whole gym. Winds came out from her direction towards Sneasel. Snow mixed with the winds buffeted Sneasel. I could see through the winds and the ice that Sneasel was getting beaten down.

Then, the winds ceased and ice was all over the place. Sneasel was lying on the ground, fainted from the powerful attack. Lyn returned it immediately and took out another Pok?ball. She paused and hesitated and glanced at the Pok?ball. Then, she threw it immediately. Out came a large red Pok?mon with huge claws and a huge, yellow star on its forehead. It glared at Gabby with its menacing eyes.

Before I could pull out my Pok?dex, Lyn introduced it to me. ?This is a Crawdaunt. I?m sure you?ve never seen one before??

I nodded my head. This one?s a real challenge for me since I don?t know what type it is yet. It?s most likely a dark type like most of Lyn?s Pok?mon are?but I?m not completely sure.

?Okay, Gabby, recover!? A bright blue light covered Gabby. Then, in a blink of an eye, the light dispersed in many different colored drops then disappeared. Gabby now recovered from her previous injuries. ?Your turn,?

?That?s the spirit!? Lyn smiled and then commanded an attack. ?Crabhammer!? She yelled while pointing at Gabby.

Her Crawdaunt scurried across the battlefield in quite an amazing speed. I was letting it come close so that I can counter attack it. Crabhammer must be a physical attack?that was what I thought at first. Crawdaunt was five feet away from Gabby when it suddenly stopped and stretched its arms. I was shocked when its massive claws stretched and slammed it on Gabby. Gabby recoiled and tried to recover from shock and from the massive damage from the attack.

?What the heck was that?? I yelled but Lyn already made Gabby open for another attack.

?Crunch!? Crawdaunt stretched its two claws this time and snapped them on Gabby. The massive attack made Gabby faint.

I returned Gabby immediately. ?Thanks,? I said to her while she was in her Great ball. ?You did a great job.? I took out another Great ball. And this time, I?m not going to let go of this battle so easily. ?Damian!?

My Scizor responded as it came out from its container and landed on the floor with a metallic thud. It glared at Crawdaunt with its shining eyes and snapped its two red pincers at it. Now it?s my turn to attack. ?Metal claw!?

With its metallic wings, Damian sped towards Crawdaunt. He stretched his arms wide, waving his menacing, red claws at Crawdaunt. Before the attack could land, Crawdaunt immediately caught the attack.

?What the??? Crawdaunt grabbed both of Damian?s pincers. It then followed with a successful counter attack blowing enormous amounts of bubbles towards Damian. The attack was so fierce that Damian was knocked back to where he started. Damian grabbed to the ground, stopping himself from skidding further.

?You were reckless,? Lyn chided while she stroked her hair in a lazy fashion. ?You shouldn?t be attacking mindlessly,?

?I know that!? I yelled. I was getting pretty much frustrated. This is giving me quite a challenge. I was trying to find out what Crawdaunt?s weakness is. I wanted to take out my Pok?dex but I had a sudden urge that told me not to. ?Damian, double team!? I yelled.

Damian multiplied immediately into many other forms, surrounding Crawdaunt. All forms of Damian swung their arms fiercely at Crawdaunt. I looked at Lyn to expect a wave of desperation in her face. I was wrong when I could see a smirk of satisfaction instead.

?Crabhammer!? She yelled.

Crawdaunt immediately stretched both of its arms in opposite directions. It hit two false Scizors. I was about to call an attack but Crawdaunt wasn?t finished. It turned around, into a 360-degree spin, hitting all Scizors. Damian was immediately hit by the attack and was dragged by the massive claw of Crawdaunt.

?Damian, hold it back!? I yelled. Damian responded and flapped its wings, trying to push back the Crabhammer attack. I didn?t notice that Crawdaunt was spinning faster and faster and Damian was flapping his wings faster and faster, too.

I could see in a big circular wave of red what was happening. Crawdaunt was spinning as fast as it could with its flailing arms while Damian was struggling to stop it. Finally, Damian managed to land its feet on the floor. His feet landed on the floor hard as rocks and tiles were thrown everywhere. I could see his solid red wings flap harder and harder.

At the same time, Crawdaunt was spinning slower and slower. It was getting busy, and at the same time, Damian was forcing it to stop. Finally, after a few seconds of spinning aimlessly, Crawdaunt finally stopped dizzily. Damian recovered immediately from the attack and flew up towards Crawdaunt and slashed it with his metal claws.

?That?s it, Damian!? I yelled. ?Slash!?

After multiple slashes, Damian?s claw glowed and with a sudden final blow, Damian slashed Crawdaunt fiercely that it flew back to Lyn. She returned her Crawdaunt immediately and readied her next Pok?mon.

The battlefield lay in great destruction. A huge circle marked the place where Damian struggled to get away from Crawdaunt?s grasp. I sighed with relief, as the fourth Pok?mon was defeated?two more left?

To be continued...
 
Grate Chapter Oni! Gary's doing well ^^ he can beat her!
 
Great chapter Oni!
He fought that Sneasel well. Crawdaunt was a tough poke.
I hope he pulls through. Go get em Gary! :D
 
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