Tokyo Mew Mew Super Adventure

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pink-tiger said:
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(Hia smiled to Rayna)
(She turned around and look at Alan with sad but happy eyes)
So lets go Alan i'll give that thing a try.....(she mummble a little)
It's really late we should get going......
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alan smiles, "Alright, get on, and I'll make sure to get you home in the same amount of peices that you're already in." he laughs to himself. "Just kidding, you'll be perfectly safe I promiss."

Alan starts up the bike and waits.
 
After dinner Reyna went up to her room. Her paretns were trying to talk to her but she was trying to avoid them. She didn't want them to find out that she was a Mew Mew. She loved her parents but she couldn't make then worry anymore then they had all ready.

Reyna took a look at her bed. She found a stuff bunny's head on her bed. It was ripped off butthe bottom was sew over to keep the stuffing in. Reyna took a look at her closet to find mostly black outfits. She remember a memeber that she could remember which is the oldest memory she had from the last few weeks. She remember the room was mostly black and the closet was mostly full of black clothes. She remember that most of the stuff in her room were thrown out to fit her taste. She didn't like what she had before. She doesn't remember why she had those clothes. She did remember she wanted that she didn't want the bunny head thown away.

"Why can't I remember anything past the last few weeks." said Reyna.
 
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(meanwhie)
Uhh..(I wonder if I should really get on) she though to herself...
(she put her leg on one side of the bike..then when she opened her eyes, she was alreaddy behind Alan)
Ahh..what if I fall off...
Uhhh..I hope you know what your doing Alan..Im trusting you..
 
pink-tiger said:
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(meanwhie)
Uhh..(I wonder if I should really get on) she though to herself...
(she put her leg on one side of the bike..then when she opened her eyes, she was alreaddy behind Alan)
Ahh..what if I fall off...
Uhhh..I hope you know what your doing Alan..Im trusting you..
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Alan smiles, "No one has ever fallen off, and you're not going to be the first." He says taking her arm and placing it around his waist, "Worry not..."

He starts up the bike, "I'd still suggest that you hang on."

He starts off at a slow 20 MPH.
 
ic:
Ugh..okay...(she squeezes his waits tight)
Umm I guess im ready...(she was blushing a little, when she hold on his waist)
I cant believe your allowed to ride this type of bike...
Dont you need a licence for this?

Its really dangerouse.......ahhhhh..
 
pink-tiger said:
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Ugh..okay...(she squeezes his waits tight)
Umm I guess im ready...(she was blushing a little, when she hold on his waist)
I cant believe your allowed to ride this type of bike...
Dont you need a licence for this?

Its really dangerouse.......ahhhhh..
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Alan smiles, "Don't worry about It, I've had my licence for a year now." he speeds up a bit. "We'll be at your house in a few minutes."
 
ic:...Its a little fast...
And theres lots of wind..its getting chilly..it must be cause of the speed were going....

Ugh im not so worry of getting home early..just to get there in one peace....

Ahh...watch out......dont get in a a wreak....
(she closed her eyes, cause she though it was to fast)
 
pink-tiger said:
ic:...Its a little fast...
And theres lots of wind..its getting chilly..it must be cause of the speed were going....

Ugh im not so worry of getting home early..just to get there in one peace....

Ahh...watch out......dont get in a a wreak....
(she closed her eyes, cause she though it was to fast)
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Alan slows a bit, and remuves his jacket, "Here put this on." he stops the bike." i don't want you to get sick or anything, and if your really afraid, put on the helmet that's int he back." he points to a compartment between her legs.
 
ic: Okay thanks..im okay without the helmet...its just cold..thanks..now lets.go.
I dont want you to get home late even if you live alone..I dont want you to be sleepy at school.You may fall asleep and then you'll get in trouble..(the go around the cornner)
There..theres my house..(the bike stops and she gets of )
Thanks for the ride..bye..see ya tomorrow(she rushes to the door and comes in..then she looks out the window)
 
Before anyone goes "you've left this RP alone for so long, why are you attacking it now?". I'd like to say, yes, I've been trying to ignore it out of laziness, but now I think I need to put my foot down...

First off, I try not to enforce quantity too much, but a lot of your posts are just short little lines of nothing, which I conclude to be there just for the sake of posting. You need to add substance to your posts, making them more interesting to read, and it adds to both the overall quality, as well as quantity of the posts.

Next, you do NOT use any form of writing style here other than full sentences, like a short story. No more using (,),*, ect to show actions. Instead of "(she closed her eyes, cause she though it was to fast)", make it something like "as she closes her eyes because she thought it was too fast", or something.

pink-tiger, I reccomend you find someone capable of tutoring you on how to RP properly, because, no offense, your sentences are poorly formed without much proper punctuation use. I've also noticed you tend to overuse "..." a lot for no apparent reason.

This RP hasn't complied with the rules since Day 1, so I'm amazed I've left it like this so long. If you fail to start posting according to the rules, then I'll have no choice other than to close this.
 
okay,I'll do that.Thanks for telling us about it.
 
Ok.... lets see if we can make this as good as she wants it....

Alan smiles seeing Hia standing at the window, some girl... he start up his bike, "I think I'll paint it black... and modify it..." he says to himself as he drives off into the darkness. he smiles as the cool air brushes his face. "Goodnight Hia..." he whispers.

He reaches the Orphanig a few minutes later, "I'm home!" he calls up to the dark windows. "like they care..." He walks his bike into the garage, "I might as well work on you all night..." he says parking it in its place next to the large red van that Mrs. Anderson uses to take the kids places, like the park.

Alan works long into the night, finnishing long before he expects it was gorgiuse, "For this I need a new look...." he looks out the window it was almost morning, "hmm.. what am I gonna do, I'm not tired..." He sits back to ponder.
 
Reyna was rolling in her bed. She had a small dinner with her parents after she was done in her room. Her parents were trying to talk to her which was willing to talk to them but she really didn't want to. After dinner she went back to her room to sleep. As she slept she kept the the stuff bunny head with her.

Her dream was about the day she guess she receive the her Mew Mew powers. She was dressed in all black clothes and a long black jacket. She was able to reconize the jacket because it was place over her when she woke up later after the beam hit her. Still the rest of the clothes she was unable to reconize them because she never wore them before. Then the beam was shot and hit Reyna. After that she felt as if something was being pulled out and she fainted. She woke up after that.

"The same dream." said Reyna.
 
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next morning
(said Hi as she brushes her hair all the way to the tips of it)
And why with all of this..its still seems the same as the others..
Well another day and another school day as well.
(Tied her hair and then rushes over down stairs)
Okay lets get this day over with.
Now I hope theres no fight today.We have a big test on cells and I cant fail it at all.
Ahh, oww,ugh I fell, thats what I get for running so fast.Now my legs all scratched up..and in pain.oww it hurts( she tries to get up but cant)
uh.got I cant stay like this..people will see me.ahh.I dont want that!!!!
 
~Morning~

Yuu was walking in the school hallway, with its plain white walls, dirty brown classroom doors, gray tile floor, and dim lights on the ceiling. As he was taking his time walking down the stairs, he spotted a speck as he came down. That spec turned out to be HIa, on the floor, holding her leg in such a way as if she was in pain. He blinked, then came forward and held out his right hand so she could get up.

He asked, "Hia, you okay?"
He looked a little worried, hoping she wasn't badly injured like she was the day before.
"You don't need to go to the nurse, do you?"
And then, he grabbed her hand and heaved her up.
 
Alan stops his new and improoved bike right infront of the school, although he didn't like classes, he knew he had to go. He steps off it shined brightly even thought it was pure black. He pulls off his helmet and a hush filled the parking lot. That very morning he had died his hair blond, and he looked much better, if he did say so himself. He puts down his helmet as he sees a tall blond in a miniskirt come walking over to him. "hey ther big boy.. what's your name?" He asks leaing on his bike so that he could look down her shirt if he wanted to.

"If you dont' know my name, then you arn't worth my time..." he says turning away from her and walking into the school. His long half cape hit against her leg as he did so.

he enters the hallway only to recive the same hush, and see Hia being helped up my Yuu, "What happend?" he asks going over, "Did you fall Hia?"

He places his hand on her arm, seeing her blank look.

[PokeCommunity.com] Tokyo Mew Mew Super Adventure

((same minis the sword))
 
ooc: How 'bout we give this opportunity to have a rivalry scene with Yuu and Alan?

ic: Yuu was statled a second as he heard a voice approach him that sounded very fimiliar. His eyes widened a little, realizing that it was Alan. He looked to his right where Alan was standing, and he stared for a moment. He blinked, then his face twisted in confusement.
"Whoa, did you dye your hair? It looks nice.."
He said this with a little of a glare on his face. His eyes grew a red color,
then back to amber. He looked kind of tense. Now that Hia was up, he let go of her hand and immiediately fwished his head to the other direction.
 
Reyna woke up with the morn of her radio. She saw that she still had the stuff rabbit head in her arms. She then said, "I must have slept with it." She then got out of bed and prepare for the school day ahead. "Maybe I can not get in trouble for doing nothing today. I can always hope." She smiled.

Reyna left her house with little things to eat but felt full all the same becasuse she wasn't that hungry but still loved to eat breakfest. She then hopped onto the bus and waited to get to school. She then looked up into the sky to see someone who looked like her. She then looked again to find the figure was gone.

Once at school she looked around for her friends. Today she was wearing a black bow in her hair even though she hated black but it was her only bow she had. "I hope no body mind if I wear this."
 
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Ugh,Im okay thanks you two, now I think we should go.
C'mon Alan, Yuu.
Why arnt you know moving or listening to me, (she though)are you two coming anytime soon? Because we can be late if two dont hurry.(herleg still hurting, but looking in their eyes she sees something not good)
Huh..I dont understand you two..You guys are just standing in the middle of the hall way and not moving..
I really have to go, sorry to leave you two.But I really do have to go to class early today.
See you there.
 
alan was bairly able to hear Hia, but then he broke the trance, "what... oh... yeah.. lets get you to class Hia, I´ll be gentlmenly enough to take you."

He takes her hand so that he can lead her to class.
 
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