Tony and Bridget (Flame of Destiny)

[Hardy Har Har]

Hello, and this is my first card for my Pokemon game (Flame of Destiny). Tony is one of the Gym Leaders. Don't forget to leave comments.

 

[QFred]

The last part about discarding is pointless, since you always discard trainers you use unless other command leads otherwise.

Other than that, I must know: why is the card so large and delta supporter blank?

The Pokédex data mechanic is very hard to implement, but I guess it is no problem, and I believe there are no wording flaws.

The smallest issues are fonts and placement. But that depends much on your faking art program.

Nice job.

 

[Hardy Har Har]

The last part about discarding is pointless, since you always discard trainers you use unless other command leads otherwise.

Other than that, I must know: why is the card so large and delta supporter blank?

The Pokédex data mechanic is very hard to implement, but I guess it is no problem, and I believe there are no wording flaws.

The smallest issues are fonts and placement. But that depends much on your faking art program.

Nice job.

I resized it to make it huge like the other cards at my computer. I didn't know what to put it in the delta supporter.

EDIT: Anyway I'm using MS Paint, so the font is hard to justify.

 

[QFred]

It is pretty nice for Paint, but if you could redo it in a different and smaller blank it would be much better. And you should also provide illustration info.

 

[the bitter end.]

Lol, I remember that movie, our teacher had us watch it in fourth grade XD. Any who, I don't see what it has to do with pokemon though... (CAT Pokemon, what the...)

 

[Hardy Har Har]

Lol, I remember that movie, our teacher had us watch it in fourth grade XD. Any who, I don't see what it has to do with pokemon though... (CAT Pokemon, what the...)

Team C.A.T. is the villainous team in my game, you know...