Torterra10's sprite thread V2

torterra10

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    hi everyone! i would like to show you my newest sprites since i came here.
    Please c+c. NO SPAMMING! I'd take any critique, but pease mention that i dont have to take it seriously.

    Here are my sprites:

    Neon Leaders:
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    From Left to Right: 1.Damon 2.Keilani 3.Alora 4.Staven 5.Wanda 6.Syann 7.Baron 8.Gregory

    Neon Elite 4:
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    From left to right: 1.Fisten 2.Nicki 3.Stephen 4.Electra 5.Champion Hiroshi

    VS Intros:

    Damon:
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    Keilani:
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    Headshots:

    Damon:
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    Keilani:
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    please c+c!

    anyone??????????????????????????????????​
     
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    gregory looks like tintin from hergé :D
    the vs-banners are graet, keep up the work
     
    They look great :] Keep up the good work, love the neon leaders
     
    ahhh, to many routes.
    You got no structure on that map.
     
    torterra10 said:
    thanks! if anyone has a hack and they need a spriter, they can pm me!
    current activity:working on the neon region map HG/SS style

    bump:
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    The Neon Region Map! Please C+C!
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    I reworked it! Here it is again:
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    The Neon Region Map! Please C+C!
     
    hi, i dont remember giving you permission to use my silver sprite or edit it in any way possible. could you please take it down or i will have to contact the mods.
     
    Very good. I'm pretty sure they are scratches. If not, they are damn good splices! I like the excentricity of the 8th gym leader. Not sure about the name "Fisten" though. Sounds painful.

    Your region map is a good start but lacks topographical detail.

    Good luck.
     
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    First person: The arms look a bit skinny, but everything else looks nice.
    Second person: The arm blends into the hair.
    Third person: The skirt and legs shading looks off.
    Fourth person: The shoes look weird, and the hair looks a little to straight.
    Fifth person: This one is pretty good, but I don't really like the position.
    Sixth person: The shading in the clothes are weird, and it doesn't look like there is a neck.
    Seventh person: The pants shading looks weird, also a bug catcher as the seventh leader... weird. :P
    Eighth person: This guys shading NEEDS a complete overhaul. It's terrible!

    Overall the sprites are good, but the shading needs work.
     
    you are really good at making sprites. 5/5:)
     
    The champion is awesome, looks a bit like the two-face guy from Batman. (Forgive me if that's not his name.)
     
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