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Trylog's victory

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Chris saw 2 wings and rubbed her eyes. I-I-I'm just seeing things she thought. Chris snatched the egg from Rain. " None of your business" Chris snapped. She swiftly shoved the egg in her backpack and ran. Better not get any more attention. She ran for about a yard and tripped again. " Dang!!!" She started running again and bumped in to something. A charazard and a boy were in front of her. She fell back and her eyes widened. " I-I'm so sorry... I-I'm in a rush peas I-I mean please excuse me " she stuttered.
 
"I would advise watching where you're going before you break your neck or something," Rain says, comming over. "If it makes you uncomfortable, I won't question you any farther, unless your freaked out about these," she says, motioning to her wings.
 
OOC: Better me then a mod to say this but four lines. Just saying.

IC:

MIke was looking around to see what this island had to offer. He just saw lots of rock and a feeling of sorrow came over him. THis place made him feel sad but still the connection with this island was strong.

THen a girl had bumped into MIke which pushed him back a bit. He looked down at her and smiled. He then heard her talk in a rush and smiled, "Its ok. I should have been watching my surrondings. I should have seen you coming."

Char gave the girl a reensuring smiled to show that everything was ok.

MIke then looked at the two girls and then asked, "Do eirther one of you two girls know what is on this island? IS there anything important on this island?" He was hoping to find out what was on this island.
 
"There is 4 statues," Rain says thoughtfully. "I've served as the guardian of this island for about 5 years now, and if I recall correctly, the statues where formally 4 trainers that where turned into stone because they opposed Trylog," she says. Of course, through my training, I built up my mental defenses, it would take a psychic more powerful than Mewtwo to penetrate my mind, and reveal my true intentions, she thinks to herself.

(Don't blame me, even among the fairest of regimes, thoughts of revolution shall be stirred up in the people.)

Rain looks to the sky. "Ahh, that would be Rina with the scouting report," she says, and a Flygon lands next to her.
 
Mike hear what the girl with the blue wings had said. SHe mention someting about 4 stautes and how they had went against a thing called Trylog. He had no idea who this Trylong person was but felt that he was some who knew this Trylog but couldn't connect who he was.

Mike then looked around and saw the flygon. He then said to the girl with blue wings and who had the flygon by her side, "So if you are the caretaker could you tell me where these stautes are? Could you also tell me about this Trylog person." He didn't found his question strange.
 
"Sure," Rain says. "Oh, I'm Rain by the way, Rain Skylark," she says, offering a handshake. "And Trylog, well I don't know all the details, but this is what I do know. Trylog is technicaly, and biologicaly, an experiment, a pokemon created with parts of different pokemon. He took over here years ago, and he was the one who put me in charge of guarding the dead of this island. If you wish to seek the statues, follow me," Rain says, and starts walking towards the island's interior, Rina and Ruby (a Salamence) take flight, and fly above us. Of course, because of my, abnormality, some rules don't apply to me, therefore I am technicaly not a trainer, the pokemon that come with me are nothing more than my friends, my only friends, she thinks, and a tear runs down her face. After all, they're the only one's that accept me for what I am.
 
MIke heard what Rain said and she began to lead Mike to the stautes. MIke appreciate Rain's assistance to help him. For some strange reason Mike had wanted to see the stautes. Still he couldn't believe that an experiment. Mike then shook his head and corrected himself, a pokemon had taken over the world. No matter what the origin of a pokemon it was still a pokemon. Still Mike wonder how long he has lost his memory.

Mike then relized that he hadn't introduce himself. He smiled and said to Rain, "While mine name is Mike Anone. The charizard right behind me is my friend and partner Char. I have a few others too but they are in pokeballs." What Mike had just told Rain was the few things the he could remember.
 
"Its a pleasure to meet you," Rain says with a smile. "The Flygon, as you might've guessed is Rina, and the Salamence is Ruby. There's 4 other pokemon that travel around with me around the island," she says, and leads him up to the statues that rest in the exact center of the island. Rain reaches into her pack, and removes a bushell of flowers, and places them at the feet of the fallen trainers. "There's a quote from Ralph Peters, it goes like this: 'Revolutions happen, above all, in the minds of men.'," she says with a sigh. "Remember that, Mike, and maybe our time on this planet won't be for naught..." she says, and then looks more closely at one of the statues, and then at Mike. "Oh my..."
 
Mike and Char nodded to the flygon named Rina to show their greeting. MIke repeated the same words that Rain had said, "'Revolutions happen, above all, in the minds of men." He knew what they meant but didn't understand how it applies to the situation there was today. He can only guess that the rule of Trylog must be a harsh one but that was all. He couldn't prove his idea since he never had an look of the world outside the small portion of this island and the little place he made on Fire Island away from communities. The only people he knew was his pokemon and these two girls.

Mike then looked at the stautes and saw one that surprised him. THe staute that surprised Mike looked like him but was much taller with long brown hair and a sharper nose. He wore a long cape that would have draged on the ground when he walks. He was much more musclar compare to Mike but he could see their simlarites. Still the stautes eyes were more fieirce as if he was fighting for something that was a matter of life and death.

Mike felt a connection between he and the staute but wasn't sure. He then said, "This is intresting. I never have thought." Char was in the some state of disblief.
 
"I didn't make the connection myself until right now, you could be, his reincarnation or something," Rain says, then wonders. "Have you ever had any sudden flashbacks of things you don't remember ever happening to you? Or remember names or events that you never knew about before?"
 
Kit blinked sleeply and slowly sat up, shaking her head. How long have I been asleep, she thought, getting up. The eon evolution shivered at the cool air wafting in her cave. Brrr...It's chilly... She purred slightly and bounded out, shaking her head once more, as if to show off her rose red neck frills. The Vaporeon's strangely finned tail swished back and forth.

"Va! Vaporeon!," The Pokemon squeeled in delight as it ran towards a nearby spring.
 
"Well, there are.......gulp the umm.... gulp 4 island statues, long ago the regions were in peace but after Trylog atacked their peace was lost. 4 trainers trided to attack him but he turned them to stone." Chris barrily choked out the words. She knew that talking about Trylog would make him mad. " The 4 statues are still here today."
 
Even with my, precautions, I am still weary of Trylog's power, Rain thinks, brushing her long white hair back, a small device hooked to her ear, she takes it off, and makes a few adjustments. "This thing keeps breaking down, I gotta get it fixed somehow," she says, using a screwdriver she took out of her bag.
 
Chris snatches the device out of Rain's hand. " And whats this hmmmm. Is it some kind of tracing code? Are you a spy?? Where did you get this?? " Chris glared at Rain. I don't trust her one bit she thought. She is problably one of those Anti Trylog rebellers! I'm not going to give this to her so she will cough up some anwsers. " Who are you and who are you working for ," Chris yelled.
 
"Its just a Pokemon Translator," Rain says. Crap, my cover might be blown, even though that really is just a translator, she'll be suspitious, and even though it can't be verified that I'm a revolutionary, I feel like I'm stuck in the middle of the Left Behind books, she thinks. "I have no reason to rebel against Trylog. And may I please have it back?"

(I try my hardest, sorry.)
 
OOC: Sorry its hard to tell if it's 4 lines.
I'm not sure how to put on paragraph form anyway.
I type like 7 lines and it comes out as 3.
 
(I edited, it should be fine.)
 
Yeah, well, I usually give people time to add or edit previous post's- I noticed that none had been. Check, if it comes out as three or four, before leaving, and I won't get on your case about it. And, one-liners are even worse since those are blantantly stated to be against the rules in the rules thread.

If you want to check as to why I say it's three lines and it looks like four to you- use the Blue Variant Layout, and you'll see why.
 
(Look, my computer registers these around 4 or 5, and the other's I just ran out of ideas for.)
 
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