Under the Bed

[Daydream]

Under the Bed

Into the night.
A fright, A fright.
Gone into night.
A fright.

On my door.
Under the floor.
Inwards it seeps.
Inwards creeps.

Into the night.
A fright, A fright.
Gone into the night.
A fright.

"Mother" , I call,
Before I fall.
"A monster in here,
And it gets near!"

Into the night.
A fright, A fright.
Gone into the night.
A fright.

"Father!" I shout,
"Make it get out!"
Still, so I lie.
I start to cry.

Into the night.
A fright, A fright.
Gone into the night.
A fright.

Soft warm glow and,
A smile does show.
A hug, with love,
Gives the demon a shove.

Into the night.
A fright, A fright.
Gone into the night.
A fright.
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We all had monsters in our rooms right? This little poem is to express that. Any help is much appreciated, my wording on some of the lines may be a bit awkward.

 

[MegaSlowBro.]

This is good! ^_^ I really liked the format and the way it rhymed. Everything was good, but I stumbled a bit where the father part comes in. Just the punctuation on "Still, so I lie" I think I paused too long ^^; Other than that, great work! I'd like to hear other poems from you later on =)

 

[Daydream]

It's good to know someone likes it. (: I actually struggled with the writing of "Still, so I Lie." I wanted to rhyme and still make some sense and that was the only way I could seem to make it fit really.

Thanks again for reading the poem. (:

 

[malicreet15]

That's pretty awesome. I must be a Pokefreak, because I thought 'Haunter' when it go to the part about the smile. XD

 

[Daydream]

Aha. xD Poetry has lots of levels! But I wasn't even thinking Pokemon when I wrote this. o.o A poem about a Haunter, huh? Interesting...

 

[TJgamer]

Heeheeheeee! Interesting work you've done here.