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I don't know how good I am a rping but I will try.
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Name: Marcy
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Hometown: Octave City
Appearance: Marcy has long blonde hair and she has a muscular build. She is very short but that doesn't mean anything because she can kick the butt of people almost twice her height. Marcy wears a tank top sports bra top thingy and pants. She never wears shoes. She sometimes wears sports shorts too.
Personality: Marcy is a tough hard worker who never gives up. She is a mean person but and sometimes hurts people's feeling but she doesn't mean too. Marcy does care about the people she loves too and you can see it even though she has a mean personality.
Backstory: Marcy was born to bodybuilder parents. Originally the parents wanted a son to take over with bodybuilding but were disappointed having a daughter. However as a toddler Marcy took an interest into lifting weights so the parents decided to turn her into a bodybuilder. They started training her at age 3 but didn't work her too hard because of her age.
Over new few years she started to grow muscles and get stronger. Marcy's parents decided to get her a Pokemon to help her with her training since she became too strong for her parents to train her. They decided on Machop since he is a strong Pokemon who could help her get stronger. Training with Machop is the reason Marcy wanted to become a Fighting type master. Marcy decided not to go off on a journey at age 10 to focus on her bodybuilding training.
Now at age 14 she is ready to go out and catch some Fighting type Pokemon and become a Fighting type master.
Starter: Muscles the Machop. Gender: Male Ability: No Guard
Moves: Strength, Bulk Up, Focus Energy, Scary Face. Muscles is more of a trainer than a fighter.
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Welcome to the RPT! This isn't a bad start for a first try, but there's some things you could do to make it better. Firstly, your image really doesn't look fourteen, even a really buff fourteen. So it might be a good idea to age her up a couple of years. A little more written info in the appearance section couldn't hurt, but since you included an image it's really not necessary.
Where you are lacking though is Personality and Backstory. Two lines isn't really enough to communicate an interesting three dimensional character. Try thinking about multiple positives/negatives, things she likes/dislikes or any interesting personality quirks she has. For her backstory, you have a solid foundation but it would be good to include motivations for going into Pokemon battling over following more closely in her parents footsteps and some mention of what her life at home has been like. Maybe, for example, since she started bodybuilding training insanely young, her parents are the pushy sort, which would definitely influence her motivations and home life (or any other origin you want, that's just an example).
Keep it up!