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unique suicune

yuuka

purifier
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    19
    Years
    with eyes so bright
    that shimer in the moon light
    roaming across the grassy fields
    with water that heals
    the beautiful howls
    that echoe with no bounds
    icy winds are strong attacks
    you surly can't beat that
    all of these are things you should see
    that lies with in n' will always be:pokeball:
     
    Suicune poetry? Still related to Pokemon, so I'll move this to Pokemon fanfiction. ^_^;
     
    thanks but i still think it could use some work
     
    Pretty ^_^ It flows so softly, which is a break from typical poetry. I'd rate it a 10/10, except you made some spelling errors:

    Shimer = shimmer.
    Moon light = moonlight.
    Echoe = echo.
    Surly = surely. (Surly is another word)

    Other than the spelling errors, this is a lovely poem. I look forward to more of your poetry! Overall: 8/10.
     
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