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Up in Smoke [PG-13]
This is just something I wrote up last night and finished today (the first chapter, at least), and I figured it was an interesting idea, so I went ahead and decided to post it. I have to admit, though, it's a little info-dump-ish in the beginning, and I still have no idea where it'll actually go in terms of plot. >_>; Just going along as I write, I guess.
EDIT: PG-13 for language and, uh, couple of dirty jokes. Couldn't help it, see...
EDIT #2: Dying without decent outline. Now that the actual story is beginning to form, both in the writing itself and in my head, I'm poking at all sorts of little plotholes I've been able to ferret out in my writing. ._. Especially-ecially-ecially the Rayquaza incident, because this fic originally wasn't intended to take place in any certain timeline, and now that it does I have to take it into consideration. And the news. And stuff. I want... to rewrite so that my story will actually get somewhere. >_>;
Flannery watched with disinterest as her Torkoal bit into a pile of coal from a bag she had recently bought to feed it. The skies were clear this afternoon, making the already hot town of Lavaridge even hotter, and she was beginning to wonder why the hot springs were even open today. There was really no more need to sweat. You did enough of it outside the springs, and if that wasn't enough, there was always the top of Mt. Chimney. Lavaridge was a lazy little town with more old people than young people, and the younger ones often moved out as soon as they were able to because this town was just that boring.
No, Flannery didn't like her hometown in particular; it was simply a small hot springs town and couldn't compare to bigger cities like Petalburg and Evergrande. She had heard some people say that it had some sort of earthy, rustic charm to it because it was so small and right next to an active volcano. She didn't think so, of course, since she had lived there her whole life. She found nothing special about it. It was tiny and ancient, and so were most of its people. Big deal.
If anything, though, living in such a sleepy little town made her pretty lazy about her various Gym Leader duties. There was training to do and the Gym's upkeep, as well as various issues, the politics, really, of the town. Gym Leader status was equal parts esteemed and loathed, due to the power one had as a Leader and the massive amount of effort one had to put into their job in order to justify that power. Gym Leaders were more influential than most of the world knew, in fact. They helped to to make important decisions in their respective cities, especially those involving Pokémon. Most of the older, more experienced leaders were actively involved in their city councils, Pokémon-related or not.
Flannery, of course, was not. The Lavaridge City Council didn't trust her enough for her to even approach the building. As she was fairly new to the job, she was more or less an ignorant little girl for all they cared. The fact that she was notoriously absent-minded and often as lazy didn't help, either. She hadn't really chosen to be Gym Leader, though, as because of the lack of young people and consequently, active Pokémon trainers in town, they really had no other choice. The former Gym Leader was retiring due to old age (unsurprisingly), and because Lavaridge would not give up one of its few main attractions, they needed a replacement. Thus, they plucked the hapless young Flannery out of town, and made her train fire-type Pokémon so that the Gym wouldn't fall into disrepair.
The forced and sudden propulsion to Gym Leader status was confusing and disorienting to her at first, since she had never been interested in Pokémon training before and would have really rather wasted her days doing nothing in Lavaridge. Heck, she would have sooner taken over management of the hot springs than become a trainer. It was too much work, really... But instead, she had received the very large (and forced) obligation of becoming a Gym Leader and the representative of Lavaridge Town to the entire Hoenn League. Thus, she began the awkward task of learning how to train and take care of all those pocket monsters.
Nevertheless, it proved some interesting experiences for the formerly bored and lethargic girl. None of her Pokémon actually ever ended up being very quick; they were all rather slow in terms of physical speed. Torkoal was her first Pokémon, and then came Slugma and Numel. In fact, they all seemed as sleepy as she did, and her tutors found themselves having a hard time getting Flannery and her various monsters to pay attention to what they were doing. Eventually, she learned to enjoy battling somewhat. It was something exciting and out of the ordinary. It help to make life go a little faster, so to speak, and the change wasn't necessarily bad. Such were her thoughts, and so she went through and earned certification to take over the Gym. The former Gym Leader could finally retire after years of waiting for his replacement. It was not a quick process at all, but everyone seemed to figure that was how Lavaridge worked: very, very slowly.
The problem was that she was losing most of her battles. She wasn't thinking or caring enough about strategy or winning, and the trainers looking for their Heat Badge were getting it far too easily. Norman was beginning to complain about the sudden influx of bad trainers coming through and lack of recent good challengers. Of course, it was Flannery's fault for not living up to the League's expectations.
She had known this for a while, and it really, really sucked. She had never wanted the position in the first place. She wasn't like Norman or Winona or those other Leaders who were so passionate about their job. She wasn't passionate about it, and that was that. Unfortunately, life would not bode well for the tiny town of Lavaridge if she didn't get her act together and start battling like a real Gym Leader. The City Council would hate her even more, and she would be considered a disgrace to Lavaridge and to trainers everywhere, and so forth and so on. It was an extreme dilemma, especially in terms of immediacy, that not even her usual excuses would be able to save. She was used to taking things slow. Now it seemed that she just couldn't.
Watching her Torkoal, slow and inert as it finished off its lettuce, she suddenly remembered this and groaned inwardly. Her social life and Lavaridge Town's consistently good reputation were now in turmoil, and it was mainly her fault for her previous laziness. She was training a lot more often now, but fire types, she soon found out, were difficult to train when they were weak to three abundant types. How was she supposed to counter all those water-, ground-, and rock-type Pokémon so that only the trainers who deserved the badge were actually getting through?
Flannery sighed and shook her head, and gave an awkward smile at Torkoal as she watched it eat. Why her, huh?
She had a surprising amount of confidence in herself when the matter at hand dealt with things other than battling, however. In fact, she believed that if she put some decent amount of thought to it, she'd actually be useful during city council meetings. It was true. Flannery might have been exceptionally lazy, but that didn't mean she was exceptionally stupid. Quite the opposite; she didn't have much imagination to rely on during her daydreamy moments, so she focused her thoughts on matters that would actually be useful to her in real life. They never became reality, though. She didn't aim for any lifelong goal in particular, and she was about as boring on the inside as her initial appearance to other people was exciting and flamboyant.
"You done?" she asked, patting her Torkoal on the head.
The strong, stocky Pokémon uttered a throaty grunt in affirmation and pushed the half-empty paper bag towards her.
Her relationship with her Torkoal was probably the closest out of all her Pokémon, and for good reason. It was mainly due to him that some of her battles were actually won, and, she figured, the whole matter was being kept afloat. If Torkoal gave up, then everything would come crashing down for their small town. He was connected to her, and she was connected to Lavaridge. It was a fragile, intimate balance, and Flannery happened to be the factor most prone to fluctuation.
The pressure was all on her and... her Pokémon. They were stupid things, regardless of whether she loved them or not. The whole situation was making her grouchy as hell, and not even the hot springs could help that. Maybe she had eventually grown immune to its supposed healing effects after being around them for so long, but spending time in the hot springs never did anything to cure the constant headaches of politics and Pokémon and this and that and so on and so forth. Not being able to laze around made her a damn irritable person, except maybe around Torkoal, and only around Torkoal.
She watched as it slowly began to make for the Gym. Flannery looked to it and then down at him, and then walked over to the Gym door once she realized he was actually heading towards it. She opened the door and let him through.
Wait, open? The gym was supposed to be locked...
"Flannery," came a deep, throaty voice from inside the gym, "good timing."
She stopped dead at the doorway, noticing an old, gray-haired man between the regulation twin statues that adorned every Gym. Usually, she would have brushed it off as any of the other hundreds of old men that lived in town, but this person was something else. She recognized him as the former Gym Leader of Lavaridge, Mura.
"Oh, crap, Mura! What are you doing here?" Flannery spluttered. "Aren't you supposed to be doing senryuu or something?"
"You think I would not be up to date on the conditions of my former Gym?" asked the old man, narrowing his wrinkly eyes. "You should have realized I would be coming back a long time ago, and prepared. Now what? I see my old Gym is doing terribly! Heat Badges are being given out like pieces of candy! I entrusted this job to you, because I believed you would be able to do it."
"Yeah? I didn't want to do it. You forced me into doing it. I had nothing to do with Pokémon before you had to leave. Now I can't even sleep with half the people in town nagging me about the Lavaridge Gym. It's horrible! It sucks! I hate it! And I still don't want to have anything to do with Pokémon."
Mura sighed and shook his head. "You know, Flannery," he said, looking up, "there was a certain reason why we chose you, and not any other of the young people in town. You may be incredibly inert, but, as you must know, you're a clever girl. You might not like Pokémon, but you're a thinker. So few people in town are like that anymore. They're old. They're jaded. They do nothing but complain. You understand? There are less and less people coming to Lavaridge. No one likes the hot springs anymore, and it's getting harder and harder to ensure that our little town is doing well in both the Hoenn League and the region itself. With so much competition, we really needed something to attract more young people to the town, and of course the Gym was the most obvious choice."
"So why'd you leave the Gym in the first place?"
"I'm old!" he said, throwing his hands up. "Battles are tiring for me, not exciting. And my Typhlosion is getting old and tired as well. I wouldn't be worth a fight anymore when there are so many trainers around now. When I announced I was retiring, I really meant it, and I didn't get to until you came along and started training for the position. If you wanted to know, I requested you. I know you, Flannery. I was hoping—and I still am—that you'd become a great leader for this town. It doesn't matter what other people think of you, or even what you think of yourself. You're one of the smartest people in town." He nodded. "I'm not kidding."
Flannery clenched her teeth. "Tch. Yeah? You think so? I don't doubt it; I think so, too. There're a lot of stupid people in the world, Mr. Mura, but how much does stupidity have to do with Pokémon?"
"There's strategy involved, of course, something I've heard you're not taking advantage of enough. I'm sure you could easily defeat any trainer that comes to you, if only you paid more attention." Mura sighed again. "But I know, I understand you don't like battling, and you only have the job of Gym Leader because you were forced into it. And the people in town don't like it one bit. There was another young person, in fact, that some of the City Council had wanted to take over. I think his name was... Oh, I can't remember anymore. Well, his name doesn't matter, but the point is that's another one of the reasons why you're so detested in your own hometown."
"Yeah, thanks."
"But I believe in you."
"Did you really think that would mean anything to me?"
"Well... no."
Flannery gave a lopsided grin. "Good. I was beginning to think you were an impostor or something."
A waft of white smoke puffed up in front of her, and she noticed Torkoal looking up at her. His eyes were always closed, hidden under heavy eyelids, but his head was turned and his neck was straining to go up.
"I just wish," said Mura, his expression another one of anxiety, "that you would be more serious about this! I have no doubt that you are a good Gym Leader, it's just that you're too lenient about it, and now you've got the whole town in turmoil."
"I know, I know, I know. Everyone's been telling me that. I hate living in such a small town. Everybody knows who I am."
"Well, you are a Gym Leader..."
"Even the people who don't have anything to do with Pokémon?"
"It's... common knowledge. Anyway, I was hoping to give you some advice, if you'd care to take it, on how to solve this dilemma." He looked up at her. "Are you willing to take it?"
"You'd better talk now," Flannery said, bending down and stroking her Torkoal's shell, "while I'm still in the mood."
Mura's face began to light up. Flannery was a precocious girl, probably due to her having been raised by her grandparents in a town full of the elderly and experienced. He just wished the rest of the younger people in town were like that, but they all wanted to go somewhere else. She was an exception; perhaps it was due to her laziness, but she had said that she would stay in Lavaridge for the rest of her life. She hadn't shown that much interest in traveling, but she hadn't shown that much interest in the town or anything else, for that matter, either. Flannery was just a lethargic little girl with a better brain and less ideals than most.
"Well, you've been given some time before the League begins considering the shutdown of the Lavaridge Gym, correct?"
"Yeah," she said, rubbing the back of her neck in thought, "I've got about two months to show some decent battling. I've been training some because of that, but the period's just started and I haven't been showing good results, apparently. They say the whole point of Gyms is to moderate the influx of trainers from one town to another, apart from testing the trainers' skills and whatnot. That's why they're beginning to consider moving the Lavaridge Gym to some other town and getting a new leader for it in the process. Makes sense, I guess; it's more technical and more practical than the more advertised aspects of Pokémon Gyms."
"Yes, certainly. And since you haven't been taking care with your Gym battles, Norman's getting far more trainers than he can handle, and Winona and the next few Gym Leaders are suffering from a drought of trainers. It's causing the entire system to go haywire. Officials are even getting worried about the next League Tournament! You realize how far your simplemindedness has gone? You have to take more care in your battles."
Flannery's shoulders slumped and she groaned, wiping her face with her hand. "Yeah, you make everything sound so much easier." She stood up and looked him in the face. "It's a total crapshoot from here on out," she said with an uncertain expression, "and I'm doing as much as I can. I swear! It's just... hard, you know? Battles are fun and all, and training turns into results, but I never really liked either of them, and forcing myself to do them has messed up the entire system. Sometimes, you know, I wonder if I should really just let 'em tear down the Gym and rebuild it somewhere else. This whole problem isn't going anywhere good, it seems, no matter how hard I try."
Mura looked down. "You... really think so?"
"To be honest, Mr. Mura, I don't want to lose the Gym. It's been here for as long as the Hoenn League has, hasn't it? Plus, the change would probably postpone the League Tournament some, next year's, at least. It would be a huge change in administration. I might ruin it even more if I decide to give up the job." She frowned. "I don't really have a choice, do I? Damn..."
"Well..." said Mura with uncertainty, "I'm just glad you're still able and thinking. You may be inert, but you're certainly not inept. May I, uh... see how you've been doing, lately?" His eyes wandered over to her Torkoal.
"What, you mean like a battle?"
"Yes, of course. I want to see how you've been battling. I'm sure I can help you somehow in that aspect. Perhaps not anywhere else... but..."
Flannery stared down at Torkoal, and then at Mura. "...All right, I guess."
"Three-on-three, we'll make it, then."
Mura walked to the challenger's side of the field and Flannery walked all the way up to the Leader's, Torkoal following behind her. She watched with a rising dread as a Typhlosion materialized onto the field.
"Well... here goes nothing."
This is just something I wrote up last night and finished today (the first chapter, at least), and I figured it was an interesting idea, so I went ahead and decided to post it. I have to admit, though, it's a little info-dump-ish in the beginning, and I still have no idea where it'll actually go in terms of plot. >_>; Just going along as I write, I guess.
EDIT: PG-13 for language and, uh, couple of dirty jokes. Couldn't help it, see...
EDIT #2: Dying without decent outline. Now that the actual story is beginning to form, both in the writing itself and in my head, I'm poking at all sorts of little plotholes I've been able to ferret out in my writing. ._. Especially-ecially-ecially the Rayquaza incident, because this fic originally wasn't intended to take place in any certain timeline, and now that it does I have to take it into consideration. And the news. And stuff. I want... to rewrite so that my story will actually get somewhere. >_>;
Chapter One: The Circumstances of the Lavaridge Gym
Flannery watched with disinterest as her Torkoal bit into a pile of coal from a bag she had recently bought to feed it. The skies were clear this afternoon, making the already hot town of Lavaridge even hotter, and she was beginning to wonder why the hot springs were even open today. There was really no more need to sweat. You did enough of it outside the springs, and if that wasn't enough, there was always the top of Mt. Chimney. Lavaridge was a lazy little town with more old people than young people, and the younger ones often moved out as soon as they were able to because this town was just that boring.
No, Flannery didn't like her hometown in particular; it was simply a small hot springs town and couldn't compare to bigger cities like Petalburg and Evergrande. She had heard some people say that it had some sort of earthy, rustic charm to it because it was so small and right next to an active volcano. She didn't think so, of course, since she had lived there her whole life. She found nothing special about it. It was tiny and ancient, and so were most of its people. Big deal.
If anything, though, living in such a sleepy little town made her pretty lazy about her various Gym Leader duties. There was training to do and the Gym's upkeep, as well as various issues, the politics, really, of the town. Gym Leader status was equal parts esteemed and loathed, due to the power one had as a Leader and the massive amount of effort one had to put into their job in order to justify that power. Gym Leaders were more influential than most of the world knew, in fact. They helped to to make important decisions in their respective cities, especially those involving Pokémon. Most of the older, more experienced leaders were actively involved in their city councils, Pokémon-related or not.
Flannery, of course, was not. The Lavaridge City Council didn't trust her enough for her to even approach the building. As she was fairly new to the job, she was more or less an ignorant little girl for all they cared. The fact that she was notoriously absent-minded and often as lazy didn't help, either. She hadn't really chosen to be Gym Leader, though, as because of the lack of young people and consequently, active Pokémon trainers in town, they really had no other choice. The former Gym Leader was retiring due to old age (unsurprisingly), and because Lavaridge would not give up one of its few main attractions, they needed a replacement. Thus, they plucked the hapless young Flannery out of town, and made her train fire-type Pokémon so that the Gym wouldn't fall into disrepair.
The forced and sudden propulsion to Gym Leader status was confusing and disorienting to her at first, since she had never been interested in Pokémon training before and would have really rather wasted her days doing nothing in Lavaridge. Heck, she would have sooner taken over management of the hot springs than become a trainer. It was too much work, really... But instead, she had received the very large (and forced) obligation of becoming a Gym Leader and the representative of Lavaridge Town to the entire Hoenn League. Thus, she began the awkward task of learning how to train and take care of all those pocket monsters.
Nevertheless, it proved some interesting experiences for the formerly bored and lethargic girl. None of her Pokémon actually ever ended up being very quick; they were all rather slow in terms of physical speed. Torkoal was her first Pokémon, and then came Slugma and Numel. In fact, they all seemed as sleepy as she did, and her tutors found themselves having a hard time getting Flannery and her various monsters to pay attention to what they were doing. Eventually, she learned to enjoy battling somewhat. It was something exciting and out of the ordinary. It help to make life go a little faster, so to speak, and the change wasn't necessarily bad. Such were her thoughts, and so she went through and earned certification to take over the Gym. The former Gym Leader could finally retire after years of waiting for his replacement. It was not a quick process at all, but everyone seemed to figure that was how Lavaridge worked: very, very slowly.
The problem was that she was losing most of her battles. She wasn't thinking or caring enough about strategy or winning, and the trainers looking for their Heat Badge were getting it far too easily. Norman was beginning to complain about the sudden influx of bad trainers coming through and lack of recent good challengers. Of course, it was Flannery's fault for not living up to the League's expectations.
She had known this for a while, and it really, really sucked. She had never wanted the position in the first place. She wasn't like Norman or Winona or those other Leaders who were so passionate about their job. She wasn't passionate about it, and that was that. Unfortunately, life would not bode well for the tiny town of Lavaridge if she didn't get her act together and start battling like a real Gym Leader. The City Council would hate her even more, and she would be considered a disgrace to Lavaridge and to trainers everywhere, and so forth and so on. It was an extreme dilemma, especially in terms of immediacy, that not even her usual excuses would be able to save. She was used to taking things slow. Now it seemed that she just couldn't.
Watching her Torkoal, slow and inert as it finished off its lettuce, she suddenly remembered this and groaned inwardly. Her social life and Lavaridge Town's consistently good reputation were now in turmoil, and it was mainly her fault for her previous laziness. She was training a lot more often now, but fire types, she soon found out, were difficult to train when they were weak to three abundant types. How was she supposed to counter all those water-, ground-, and rock-type Pokémon so that only the trainers who deserved the badge were actually getting through?
Flannery sighed and shook her head, and gave an awkward smile at Torkoal as she watched it eat. Why her, huh?
She had a surprising amount of confidence in herself when the matter at hand dealt with things other than battling, however. In fact, she believed that if she put some decent amount of thought to it, she'd actually be useful during city council meetings. It was true. Flannery might have been exceptionally lazy, but that didn't mean she was exceptionally stupid. Quite the opposite; she didn't have much imagination to rely on during her daydreamy moments, so she focused her thoughts on matters that would actually be useful to her in real life. They never became reality, though. She didn't aim for any lifelong goal in particular, and she was about as boring on the inside as her initial appearance to other people was exciting and flamboyant.
"You done?" she asked, patting her Torkoal on the head.
The strong, stocky Pokémon uttered a throaty grunt in affirmation and pushed the half-empty paper bag towards her.
Her relationship with her Torkoal was probably the closest out of all her Pokémon, and for good reason. It was mainly due to him that some of her battles were actually won, and, she figured, the whole matter was being kept afloat. If Torkoal gave up, then everything would come crashing down for their small town. He was connected to her, and she was connected to Lavaridge. It was a fragile, intimate balance, and Flannery happened to be the factor most prone to fluctuation.
The pressure was all on her and... her Pokémon. They were stupid things, regardless of whether she loved them or not. The whole situation was making her grouchy as hell, and not even the hot springs could help that. Maybe she had eventually grown immune to its supposed healing effects after being around them for so long, but spending time in the hot springs never did anything to cure the constant headaches of politics and Pokémon and this and that and so on and so forth. Not being able to laze around made her a damn irritable person, except maybe around Torkoal, and only around Torkoal.
She watched as it slowly began to make for the Gym. Flannery looked to it and then down at him, and then walked over to the Gym door once she realized he was actually heading towards it. She opened the door and let him through.
Wait, open? The gym was supposed to be locked...
"Flannery," came a deep, throaty voice from inside the gym, "good timing."
She stopped dead at the doorway, noticing an old, gray-haired man between the regulation twin statues that adorned every Gym. Usually, she would have brushed it off as any of the other hundreds of old men that lived in town, but this person was something else. She recognized him as the former Gym Leader of Lavaridge, Mura.
"Oh, crap, Mura! What are you doing here?" Flannery spluttered. "Aren't you supposed to be doing senryuu or something?"
"You think I would not be up to date on the conditions of my former Gym?" asked the old man, narrowing his wrinkly eyes. "You should have realized I would be coming back a long time ago, and prepared. Now what? I see my old Gym is doing terribly! Heat Badges are being given out like pieces of candy! I entrusted this job to you, because I believed you would be able to do it."
"Yeah? I didn't want to do it. You forced me into doing it. I had nothing to do with Pokémon before you had to leave. Now I can't even sleep with half the people in town nagging me about the Lavaridge Gym. It's horrible! It sucks! I hate it! And I still don't want to have anything to do with Pokémon."
Mura sighed and shook his head. "You know, Flannery," he said, looking up, "there was a certain reason why we chose you, and not any other of the young people in town. You may be incredibly inert, but, as you must know, you're a clever girl. You might not like Pokémon, but you're a thinker. So few people in town are like that anymore. They're old. They're jaded. They do nothing but complain. You understand? There are less and less people coming to Lavaridge. No one likes the hot springs anymore, and it's getting harder and harder to ensure that our little town is doing well in both the Hoenn League and the region itself. With so much competition, we really needed something to attract more young people to the town, and of course the Gym was the most obvious choice."
"So why'd you leave the Gym in the first place?"
"I'm old!" he said, throwing his hands up. "Battles are tiring for me, not exciting. And my Typhlosion is getting old and tired as well. I wouldn't be worth a fight anymore when there are so many trainers around now. When I announced I was retiring, I really meant it, and I didn't get to until you came along and started training for the position. If you wanted to know, I requested you. I know you, Flannery. I was hoping—and I still am—that you'd become a great leader for this town. It doesn't matter what other people think of you, or even what you think of yourself. You're one of the smartest people in town." He nodded. "I'm not kidding."
Flannery clenched her teeth. "Tch. Yeah? You think so? I don't doubt it; I think so, too. There're a lot of stupid people in the world, Mr. Mura, but how much does stupidity have to do with Pokémon?"
"There's strategy involved, of course, something I've heard you're not taking advantage of enough. I'm sure you could easily defeat any trainer that comes to you, if only you paid more attention." Mura sighed again. "But I know, I understand you don't like battling, and you only have the job of Gym Leader because you were forced into it. And the people in town don't like it one bit. There was another young person, in fact, that some of the City Council had wanted to take over. I think his name was... Oh, I can't remember anymore. Well, his name doesn't matter, but the point is that's another one of the reasons why you're so detested in your own hometown."
"Yeah, thanks."
"But I believe in you."
"Did you really think that would mean anything to me?"
"Well... no."
Flannery gave a lopsided grin. "Good. I was beginning to think you were an impostor or something."
A waft of white smoke puffed up in front of her, and she noticed Torkoal looking up at her. His eyes were always closed, hidden under heavy eyelids, but his head was turned and his neck was straining to go up.
"I just wish," said Mura, his expression another one of anxiety, "that you would be more serious about this! I have no doubt that you are a good Gym Leader, it's just that you're too lenient about it, and now you've got the whole town in turmoil."
"I know, I know, I know. Everyone's been telling me that. I hate living in such a small town. Everybody knows who I am."
"Well, you are a Gym Leader..."
"Even the people who don't have anything to do with Pokémon?"
"It's... common knowledge. Anyway, I was hoping to give you some advice, if you'd care to take it, on how to solve this dilemma." He looked up at her. "Are you willing to take it?"
"You'd better talk now," Flannery said, bending down and stroking her Torkoal's shell, "while I'm still in the mood."
Mura's face began to light up. Flannery was a precocious girl, probably due to her having been raised by her grandparents in a town full of the elderly and experienced. He just wished the rest of the younger people in town were like that, but they all wanted to go somewhere else. She was an exception; perhaps it was due to her laziness, but she had said that she would stay in Lavaridge for the rest of her life. She hadn't shown that much interest in traveling, but she hadn't shown that much interest in the town or anything else, for that matter, either. Flannery was just a lethargic little girl with a better brain and less ideals than most.
"Well, you've been given some time before the League begins considering the shutdown of the Lavaridge Gym, correct?"
"Yeah," she said, rubbing the back of her neck in thought, "I've got about two months to show some decent battling. I've been training some because of that, but the period's just started and I haven't been showing good results, apparently. They say the whole point of Gyms is to moderate the influx of trainers from one town to another, apart from testing the trainers' skills and whatnot. That's why they're beginning to consider moving the Lavaridge Gym to some other town and getting a new leader for it in the process. Makes sense, I guess; it's more technical and more practical than the more advertised aspects of Pokémon Gyms."
"Yes, certainly. And since you haven't been taking care with your Gym battles, Norman's getting far more trainers than he can handle, and Winona and the next few Gym Leaders are suffering from a drought of trainers. It's causing the entire system to go haywire. Officials are even getting worried about the next League Tournament! You realize how far your simplemindedness has gone? You have to take more care in your battles."
Flannery's shoulders slumped and she groaned, wiping her face with her hand. "Yeah, you make everything sound so much easier." She stood up and looked him in the face. "It's a total crapshoot from here on out," she said with an uncertain expression, "and I'm doing as much as I can. I swear! It's just... hard, you know? Battles are fun and all, and training turns into results, but I never really liked either of them, and forcing myself to do them has messed up the entire system. Sometimes, you know, I wonder if I should really just let 'em tear down the Gym and rebuild it somewhere else. This whole problem isn't going anywhere good, it seems, no matter how hard I try."
Mura looked down. "You... really think so?"
"To be honest, Mr. Mura, I don't want to lose the Gym. It's been here for as long as the Hoenn League has, hasn't it? Plus, the change would probably postpone the League Tournament some, next year's, at least. It would be a huge change in administration. I might ruin it even more if I decide to give up the job." She frowned. "I don't really have a choice, do I? Damn..."
"Well..." said Mura with uncertainty, "I'm just glad you're still able and thinking. You may be inert, but you're certainly not inept. May I, uh... see how you've been doing, lately?" His eyes wandered over to her Torkoal.
"What, you mean like a battle?"
"Yes, of course. I want to see how you've been battling. I'm sure I can help you somehow in that aspect. Perhaps not anywhere else... but..."
Flannery stared down at Torkoal, and then at Mura. "...All right, I guess."
"Three-on-three, we'll make it, then."
Mura walked to the challenger's side of the field and Flannery walked all the way up to the Leader's, Torkoal following behind her. She watched with a rising dread as a Typhlosion materialized onto the field.
"Well... here goes nothing."
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