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[Question] What is missing in my first city?

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    • Seen Aug 21, 2020
    Hi everyone.
    I started making a game that will mix all the current gens of pokemon and i made the first city with a gym.
    The problem is i feel like something is missing...
    Another problem is the type of the gym.
    I need some opinions.
    Thanks for the help.
     

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  • It looks pretty busy. There's a lot of detail. Don't be afraid to ease it up a bit. A lot of detail can overload the player.
     
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    It looks pretty busy. There's a lot of detail. Don't be afraid to ease it up a bit. A lot of detail can overload the player.

    My objective was to make a very detailed and good game with good story but i'll have in mind what you said 😄
     
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    It looks appealing, but here are my thoughts:
    - Too square (external part)
    - Getting from the top-left to bottom-right will be a nightmare; points of interest are all the way at the bottom
    - The area right above the Gym and Mart appears to be a heavy trading/selling site - perhaps remove the only house in that area (red roof) and make a path there instead? It also feels as though there should be a path where the Mart is at. Having one path seems awkward and makes it more difficult to navigate around. Having two paths on the side of the Pokemon Center is kinda good, since that's probably the first place players may want to go.
     
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