[NovaPirate]
And the rest went riding on.
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- Seen Feb 13, 2011
mmk. Sorry to rain on your parade, but as my duty as official ne'er do well and annoying pessimistic person of the SC/TC zone, I must say that although the Manaphy part incites some humor, it just doesn't make up for the beginning part.
ahem...
You have used paint default two tone graphics. They get the point across, but not entirely. A little bright. I would say a battle background, or an FPV, but they're both too small. And due to the fact that the pe2k sprites have some white in them, certain things change to the background color (i.e. Zapdos's eye). Laxatives are a tad overused, but the plot leading up to that point is very creative x], so it was a unique twist on a normal idea . Also, wouldn't Arceus be able to breed. (Er hem. That would be a good idea for a second one, please make a sequel, for that reason o for any other). Furthermore, not as criticism, but out of curiosity, where was Manaphy?
I am terribly sorry for repeating what everyone else has said, with the exception of Zapdos's eye, ciao.
ahem...
You have used paint default two tone graphics. They get the point across, but not entirely. A little bright. I would say a battle background, or an FPV, but they're both too small. And due to the fact that the pe2k sprites have some white in them, certain things change to the background color (i.e. Zapdos's eye). Laxatives are a tad overused, but the plot leading up to that point is very creative x], so it was a unique twist on a normal idea . Also, wouldn't Arceus be able to breed. (Er hem. That would be a good idea for a second one, please make a sequel, for that reason o for any other). Furthermore, not as criticism, but out of curiosity, where was Manaphy?
I am terribly sorry for repeating what everyone else has said, with the exception of Zapdos's eye, ciao.