Will Satoshi get a real Mega?

He was even able to beat Legendary Pokémon in Sinnoh League. So why ruining that approach now?
This could be misleading. He was able to 'beat' a Darkrai, for instance, but only at the expense of a significant part of his team, or in brief by that point it had already almost defeated him. He was then faced with another one, and in that sense two of them were portrayed as able to take out their whole team. In that sense, if they leave legendaries out of the League, it might come across as a softer one, but conversely they're still probably portrayed as a bit too much for Ash. It is valid that might prefer to avoid using such things, as it isn't really their MO, ultimately.

Yes, the fact that Shōta's improvement occurs entirely off-screen with the audience rarely getting a chance to see him training and growing stronger (just the results of it) is a significant flaw with him. I think that has more to do with the fact that the anime introduced Shōta way too late and too infrequently to really do much in that area.
That's not really only their problem, the main characters have also been suffering from a lot of fairly lax writing or arbitrariness so far as battles and strength generally goes. There has been a lot of display of Pokémon fainting arbitrarily quickly, while others hang around for a while, as well as the performance plot-line which is essentially just arbitrarily attributing a result at the end which may or may not be related to anything that has come before, and in general doesn't much improve the coherence of the thing as it goes forwards. In the episodic format, you would usually expect some form of coherent, justified character development, but as things are you might expect characters to adjust mostly to plot convenience and hence not stand out by themselves as coherent, which trivialises the battle form and so on.

If it's not your story, then you don't get to decide what a fictional character deserves or doesn't deserve.
While Famon rarely changes, obviously they can evaluate the validity of a piece of fiction without having written it. This includes whether or not a fictional character 'deserves' something, or in general if it is arbitrary or justified within the story, while of course Alain does partake of a certain arbitrariness because they are a promotional character rather than a serious one. In any case, the author can't simply make up their own moral compass for a work, that others have to obey, they are dealing of course with characters in situations analogous to normal ones, and people can hence evaluate them from there.

They can't give or take things from the character without writing it, usually - although authors are often susceptible to foreign influences anyway - but that's not really what they're trying to do anyway, just evaluate what is already there. A piece of fiction cannot necessarily override concepts from elsewhere like 'deserving,' and it certainly cannot arbitrarily declare itself good or justified - and Famon was there criticising its writing somewhat - without being subject to evaluation.
 
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Yes, the fact that Shōta's improvement occurs entirely off-screen with the audience rarely getting a chance to see him training and growing stronger (just the results of it) is a significant flaw with him. I think that has more to do with the fact that the anime introduced Shōta way too late and too infrequently to really do much in that area.

That said, in every battle we've seen Shōta in up to this point he's gotten destroyed by every trainer he's come up against. Citron defeated Kimori in XY064, Satoshi was clearly beating him in their double battle in XY073, Mâche defeated him that same episode, Satoshi crushed him 0-3 in XY075, Satoshi crushed him again in XY&Z013.











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Shota losing in the past isn't a prize !
Specially if you consider Bianca , Georgia and Burgundy who got crashed by everyone they fought !
Shota's case is no diiferent them specially considering he was just a rookey with 1 badge ! It would have been insulting for Ash , Clemont and valeric to lose to someone like that .
And How late was he ? No more then Barry or Morrison .

Shōta's paid his dues plenty at this point, and not having him win something would be a massive disservice to the character and the narrative being told with him.
That doesn't mean he just appear out of nowhere and curdstump Ash just because he train in x place with x guy for x time ! Even Ash couldn't curdstump Paul , Gary or Trip .
He paid nothing ! He was treated like any one rookie without any special treament would be treated.

And I just explained what price Alan had to pay in his quest. Because of Alan (or, at least, as he sees it), Manon's Harimaron is unconscious in a hospital bed. The entire point of him "becoming the strongest" was to protect the things he cares about. Alan got stronger over the course of TSME – defeating 10 Mega Evolution trainers, including the Kalos E4's Pachira – but at the cost of his entire point to doing so. And on top of it all, he doesn't even know that he's actively helping the bad guys and throwing the Kalos region into its greatest crisis.

If you can't see how Alan is paying a price here, then you're not paying attention.

Oh please , Your using Manon Chespin for Alain's Prize !
The One who's playing the prize is Manon , Not Alain !
Just because Alain care for Manon doesn't mean Writer can make Manon pay the prize for anything Alain gets.
I mean , Why doesn't writer make Serena pay prize for anything Ash gets ? Obviously Ash will be sad if any of his Friend suffers because of him.
But not how Ash work , He himself suffer for anything he gets ! Writer never his friend suffer for him.

None of this has anything to do with XY&Z.

TSME Act IV disagrees.

Alan isn't interested in the League, so his victory over Pachira doesn't mean anything to him so long as he still can't protect the people he cares about. Thus, the battles were ultimately rendered meaningless when Hari-san got hurt.

And at the end of the day, Alan and Lizardon will probably end up losing to Satoshi and Gekkouga anyway.

Off course , His victory over Malva mean something ! He wants to be the strongest and beat a Megevolution User on E4 Level means a lot .
Also , I highly doubt Writer would let their precious Alain be beaten by Ash ! They probably create a excuse to avoid just that.

So losing to Fleur-de-lis, losing to Zumi, being outmatched by Daigo, being unable to do anything against the Primal legendaries and having to be saved by Manon doesn't count as a struggle? If anything, Alan has struggled more in the span of four TSME specials than Satoshi has in over a hundred episodes of XY and XY&Z.

All of that sound PALE Compare to What Ash did in 20 yeear !
By your theory , Ash should be the most strogest and unbeatable trainer in the series like Atem.

I don't give a **** how popular a series is (and I've never read One-Punch Man, so I can't speak for that), if there's no conflict then it's not a good story. Conflict is central to storytelling.

WHY ? Just because it doesn't follow your flawed theory?
Writer made Ash struggle though BW Series ! The series even made him Struggle against Rookie but Did it made the series better ? Creating Conflict doesn't mean making only Protagonist struggle while everyone gets free stuff . In Real story , Everyone goes though same conflict Protagonist goes though.

Nobody that we're talking about here is getting anything for free. Satoshi has to struggle to master the Satoshi-Gekkouga form, Shōta had to take five complete ass-beatings to finally get to a point where he can challenge Satoshi, Alan got "stronger" to absolutely no point when his friend's Pokémon got hurt. And these are the characters who are at least getting something out of the narrative. For all your complaining about what Satoshi has to go through (a whopping... six episodes is what comprises this "trial" of his and Gekkouga's?), he at least gets something and isn't just standing around on the sidelines of the action like Serena and Citron are

None of them are Prize , It just a desparate attempt make them look like a Prize.
Ash , Clemont and Valeric are experience trainer so they suppose to kick Shota's ass.
Just because Shota got beaten by experience trainer doesn't mean Shota earn the right to kick everyone ass !
Burgundy have even worst losing stack but that doesn't mean she should just start kicking everyone else and make them to keep whatever pokemon she wants them to keep.

Also , Alain didn't paid any Prize ! Just because Manon suffering because of Alain doesn't mean He pain in full for his free Keystone , Mega Pokemon and Pseudo-legendary pokemon.
In fact , That jerk should paY double prize for what he did to Manon ! A JERK LIKE HIM DOESN'T EVEN DESERVE A KEYSTONE OR MEGEVOLUTION !

If you learn nothing else from this (you won't), then at least remember this (and you won't):
Shōta's paid his dues plenty at this point, and not having him win something would be a massive disservice to the character and the narrative being told with him.
Shota didn't paid any prize !
What do you expect ? Experienced trainer like Ash , Clemont and Valeric should lose to a Rookie !If We take Rookie Ash into account then he suffer worst defeats then Shota but he still had to pay prize. He got A charizard that never listen to him , He lost in the 1st round of the main Indigo Tournament in a HUMILIATING Way and again suffer a humiliating defeat in Unova League .

If it's not your story, then you don't get to decide what a fictional character deserves or doesn't deserve.

Atleast , I don't make myself look like a Writers Lackey and actually say my real opinion.
 
Sorry imtnt, but I have to disagree. I always hate it when they bring back Ash's old Pokémon for league and his current roster is neglected. That's why I hated Johto League and Sinnoh League (though here they did it to promote Johto Pokémon, but that made it even more stupid IMO) and if they will do this in Kalos League, I will hate it too. And even more if they will bring back Charizard, who is, after Pikachu, Ash's most used Pokémon. Plus we saw a lot of other Charizards already. and most likely will see another with Trevor (presumably Mega Charizard Y), so there's no reason to give him more time. If they had to bring back old Pokémon, which I hope they will not, then I prefer Pokémon who were more neglected, like Tauros or Kingler. But I really hope they will just give Ash some other Kalos Pokémon, possibly one who can Mega Evolve, though as I wrote before, I don't hold my hopes for that high.
And Legendary for Ash? NO, NO, NO, NO, and once again NO! The whole point of Ash's determination is he doesn't need the power of legend. He was even able to beat Legendary Pokémon in Sinnoh League. So why ruining that approach now?

You are right Horn, he doesn't need any power of a legend, just as much he doesn't need a key stone for the mega power. I couldn't agree more, thought it could be nice you must say.
Then again I think Charizard is one of Ash's most related pokemons, and his comeback couldn't be for nothing - he must return to the show now. Ash needs to relay on something better than types or luck after all :)

Shota losing in the past isn't a prize !
Specially if you consider Bianca , Georgia and Burgundy who got crashed by everyone they fought !
Shota's case is no diiferent them specially considering he was just a rookey with 1 badge ! It would have been insulting for Ash , Clemont and valeric to lose to someone like that .
And How late was he ? No more then Barry or Morrison .

None of them are Prize , It just a desparate attempt make them look like a Prize.
Ash , Clemont and Valeric are experience trainer so they suppose to kick Shota's ass.
Just because Shota got beaten by experience trainer doesn't mean Shota earn the right to kick everyone ass !
Burgundy have even worst losing stack but that doesn't mean she should just start kicking everyone else and make them to keep whatever pokemon she wants them to keep.

What do you expect ? Experienced trainer like Ash , Clemont and Valeric should lose to a Rookie !If We take Rookie Ash into account then he suffer worst defeats then Shota but he still had to pay prize. He got A charizard that never listen to him , He lost in the 1st round of the main Indigo Tournament in a HUMILIATING Way and again suffer a humiliating defeat in Unova League

Thats abs right, Ash should be better than any rookie but he gets his ass kicked time after time... But, maybe this is why he will loose to Shota
 
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A piece of fiction cannot necessarily override concepts from elsewhere like 'deserving,' and it certainly cannot arbitrarily declare itself good or justified - and Famon was there criticising its writing somewhat - without being subject to evaluation.
But that's not what Famon is doing. He made no attempt to evaluate Alan as a character on his own merits. He arbitrarily decided that Alan doesn't 'deserve' Mega Lizardon for no reason whatsoever other than the fact that Satoshi doesn't have one.

Fans have the right to critically examine a piece of work and decide if the story the writers are telling works. What fans shouldn't get into the habit of doing is criticizing a show for not telling the story they want it to tell. That's not being fair to either the writers or to the characters they created.

Unless you actually write for the show, you don't get to decide what a character 'deserves' to have or not. You only get the ability to argue if it works within the narrative. And for something like The Strongest Mega Evolution to even work in the first place, Alan has to have a Mega Evolution of some kind.

Blind and idiotic ranting about not getting the story you wanted isn't criticism. Actual criticism means attempting to engage the work on its own merits, and I've never once seen Famon do that.

Shota losing in the past isn't a prize !
It's a struggle. Shōta wants to become stronger and he sees defeating Satoshi as a step towards that, thus he's made it a goal. Shōta's defeats against Satoshi represent his struggle on the way to that goal. This is extremely obvious.
Specially if you consider Bianca , Georgia and Burgundy who got crashed by everyone they fought !
I'm not going to consider them because this isn't Best Wishes. This is XY and XY&Z, the two series Shōta and Alan actually exist in. Don't hold them accountable for whatever the writers did in BW.
Shota's case is no diiferent them specially considering he was just a rookey with 1 badge ! It would have been insulting for Ash , Clemont and valeric to lose to someone like that .
Which is why Shōta didn't defeat them as a rookie with only one badge and what we can assume (judging by his not knowing that Dragon-types were ineffective against fairies) very little experience. At that point, Shōta was crushed by all three, as he should have been.

But Shōta is no longer that rookie. He has eight badges now, and at least five Pokémon – all of which have evolved at least once. Shōta has experiences to draw from. In this case, Shōta has his knowledge of all his past battles with Satoshi. Moreover, XY&Z013 showed us that Shōta has been analyzing his battles with Satoshi and studying his Pokémon's (namely, Gekkouga's) battle styles. That's not insulting. To the contrary, that's the writers paying respect to Satoshi's strength by presenting him as someone Shōta actively has to prepare for.

Satoshi does this with just about every Gym Leader he comes across. And if Shōta not having the experience of Satoshi means he shouldn't be able to win, then Satoshi has no business beating the likes of Viola, Zakuro, Fukuji, Mâche, and Gojika – all of whom are older than he is, and presumably have much more experience.
And How late was he ? No more then Barry or Morrison .
When Jun first showed up, DP still had about two years to go. XY&Z presumably ends later this year, when Sun & Moon comes out. Jun will have had more time than Shōta did. And Masamune was basically a League rival, anyway.
That doesn't mean he just appear out of nowhere and curdstump Ash just because he train in x place with x guy for x time ! Even Ash couldn't curdstump Paul , Gary or Trip .
Who is saying Shōta should curbstomp Satoshi? I'm certainly not.

What I'm saying is that Shōta isn't "appearing out of nowhere" here. He's had a level of buildup to come to the point where he can presumably beat Satoshi.
He paid nothing ! He was treated like any one rookie without any special treament would be treated.
Almost every rookie we've watched in this series (Satoshi, Haruka, Hikari, Serena) have all gotten stronger at some point. Why not Shōta, too?
Oh please , Your using Manon Chespin for Alain's Prize !
The One who's playing the prize is Manon , Not Alain !
Just because Alain care for Manon doesn't mean Writer can make Manon pay the prize for anything Alain gets.
You know, there actually is room to criticize TSME for its handling of Manon. She really serves little other role in the specials' narrative except to provide exposition or marvel at the Mega Evolutions. As a character, she's almost completely dependent on Alan and displays little agency of her own. Without getting into a bigger discussion about this (basically, it's the kind of thing that happens to female characters way too often), I think that TSME Act IV leaving Manon and Hari-san to be stuck in a hospital waiting on Alan to make things right is a flaw in how the writers wrote her character throughout the TSME specials.

But that doesn't change that she very much is Alan's "price". He drove Manon off in Act IV and that's how Hari-san got into its condition. Because of that, now Alan is traveling around attempting to redeem himself. This is why Act IV ended the way it did, and why Alan invests himself so much in trying to gather Mega Evolution data. He clearly feels guilty about what happened. That's the price he paid for getting stronger. And regardless of what you think of that, it's a pretty familiar storytelling trope.
I mean , Why doesn't writer make Serena pay prize for anything Ash gets ? Obviously Ash will be sad if any of his Friend suffers because of him.
But not how Ash work , He himself suffer for anything he gets ! Writer never his friend suffer for him.
For one thing, Satoshi and Alan are two different characters with two different storylines going on. What works for one doesn't necessarily work for the other. The same goes for Serena and Manon. And for as much grief as fans gave Serena, from the beginning she displayed more agency than Manon ever did and that's why she's not being used simply as fodder for Satoshi's own arc.

This is a good thing, by the way. Satoshi's issues should be about him and his Pokémon, not Serena.
Off course , His victory over Malva mean something ! He wants to be the strongest and beat a Megevolution User on E4 Level means a lot .
Alan only wants to be the strongest because he thinks it's what he needs to do to protect those closest to him. Which is a goal he only adopted because Fleur-de-lis told him to. If Alan still can't protect anyone, then beating Pachira and getting stronger doesn't mean anything to him.

Alan isn't after strength for its own sake like Satoshi is.
Also , I highly doubt Writer would let their precious Alain be beaten by Ash ! They probably create a excuse to avoid just that.
We will see. But I'm sure even if Satoshi does beat Alan, you'll still find something wrong with it.
All of that sound PALE Compare to What Ash did in 20 yeear !
Alan didn't exist for the vast majority of those nineteen years, so whatever the writers did then is irrelevant when regarding him. XY and XY&Z are the only two series we should discuss Alan or Shōta in – not DP, OS, BW, or AG.
By your theory , Ash should be the most strogest and unbeatable trainer in the series like Atem.
Do you even know what my "theory" is?
WHY ? Just because it doesn't follow your flawed theory?
No, because just about every story ever told involves some form of conflict –internal and/or external – with its main character.
Writer made Ash struggle though BW Series ! The series even made him Struggle against Rookie but Did it made the series better ? Creating Conflict doesn't mean making only Protagonist struggle while everyone gets free stuff . In Real story , Everyone goes though same conflict Protagonist goes though.
As shown already, Alan and Shōta have both been going through their own conflicts.

And BW wasn't bad because Satoshi struggled. BW was bad because there was no point to it. Satoshi lost, suffered setbacks, and nothing ever came of it. He didn't grow as a character nor did he get any stronger. He just continued to be a loser.

The irony is that, for all your ranting about BW, this is exactly what you seem to want for Shōta. For him to continue losing with no actual growth or purpose.
Just because Shota got beaten by experience trainer doesn't mean Shota earn the right to kick everyone ass !
No, but as the rookie with a goal of getting stronger… Shōta actually has to get stronger at some point. Otherwise, there's no point to Shōta's character or reason for him to be in the show.
Atleast , I don't make myself look like a Writers Lackey and actually say my real opinion.
LOL.

From what I can tell, your opinion is based off whatever you think everyone else likes. I've never seen you make a statement on the quality of a character or series without referring to its popularity (or lack thereof) in some way. Your opinion is stolen from what you think other people like.
 
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It's a struggle. Shōta wants to become stronger and he sees defeating Satoshi as a step towards that, thus he's made it a goal. Shōta's defeats against Satoshi represent his struggle on the way to that goal. This is extremely obvious.

But Shōta is no longer that rookie. He has eight badges now, and at least five Pokémon – all of which have evolved at least once. Shōta has experiences to draw from. In this case, Shōta has his knowledge of all his past battles with Satoshi. Moreover, XY&Z013 showed us that Shōta has been analyzing his battles with Satoshi and studying his Pokémon's (namely, Gekkouga's) battle styles. That's not insulting. To the contrary, that's the writers paying respect to Satoshi's strength by presenting him as someone Shōta actively has to prepare for.

Almost every rookie we've watched in this series (Satoshi, Haruka, Hikari, Serena) have all gotten stronger at some point. Why not Shōta, too?

... as the rookie with a goal of getting stronger… Shōta actually has to get stronger at some point. Otherwise, there's no point to Shōta's character or reason for him to be in the show.

Agree. This is exactly why I think Shota might win, Plus we must remember its not only "Ash-greninja" vs sceptile here. there are more options on hand and Shota is ready to be calculated, while Ash is reckless most of the time.

But, I think Famon is right - Ash should not be beaten there. He should master his Greninja form already and win it. Ash should win this easily, but we all know if it was that simple it wouldn't be intresting- lets wait and see.

My guess is that Ash wont win, or at least will make it by luck as he used to when he was rookie.. Def not because he is stonger or else it will be lame episode.
 
Serebii note:
Episode 925: Ash-Greninja VS Mega Abomasnow! The Giant Water Shuriken Triggers!!
Episode 926: Find Carbink! Goodra and Dedenne!!

Goodra reappearing.. is that weird considering that he may have to battle diantha again with hers?

And Mega-Abomasnow!!! possibility for Ash or not?
 
It's a struggle. Shōta wants to become stronger and he sees defeating Satoshi as a step towards that, thus he's made it a goal. Shōta's defeats against Satoshi represent his struggle on the way to that goal. This is extremely obvious.

Shota being beaten by Ash is no prize or Struggle !
Ash has more experience , He should have beaten Shota that way .
And You pratically basising your point of "Imaginary Struggle" Shota gone though your imagination.
When In Reality , Shota just appear out of nowhere to battle Ash and Leaves ! Nothing else.
Just because he couldn't beat Ash doesn't make it a struggle.
Just like its no a struggle for Jessie and James to lose to Ash.

I'm not going to consider them because this isn't Best Wishes. This is XY and XY&Z, the two series Shōta and Alan actually exist in. Don't hold them accountable for whatever the writers did in BW.
Why , Because your theory doesn't work ?
Those character are part of Pokemon anime , Not a Different Anime
Shota is no more Special then Burgundy is.
However , Burgundy never beaten Clian so there nothing that claim that Shota should have a victory over Ash.

Which is why Shōta didn't defeat them as a rookie with only one badge and what we can assume (judging by his not knowing that Dragon-types were ineffective against fairies) very little experience. At that point, Shōta was crushed by all three, as he should have been.

But Shōta is no longer that rookie. He has eight badges now, and at least five Pokémon – all of which have evolved at least once. Shōta has experiences to draw from. In this case, Shōta has his knowledge of all his past battles with Satoshi. Moreover, XY&Z013 showed us that Shōta has been analyzing his battles with Satoshi and studying his Pokémon's (namely, Gekkouga's) battle styles. That's not insulting. To the contrary, that's the writers paying respect to Satoshi's strength by presenting him as someone Shōta actively has to prepare for.
That doesn't mean Shota had paid his prize for Mega sceptile.
Because Ash gone way more Struggle then Shota So he deserved to Keep Goodra and get Free Keystone.
But Writer still made Ash pay for it .
He got Goodra that he was force to release and a "Something like Mega" that kills him.
If you think that Shota defeat pay for Mega Sceptile Then that Humilating Unova League pay for anything Ash get in Kalos , He shouldn't have pay any more prize for it.

Satoshi does this with just about every Gym Leader he comes across. And if Shōta not having the experience of Satoshi means he shouldn't be able to win, then Satoshi has no business beating the likes of Viola, Zakuro, Fukuji, Mâche, and Gojika – all of whom are older than he is, and presumably have much more experience.
Here is the question , Do you think Gym-leader use their stronger team ? Do you think they have only two or three pokemon ?
Looking at the team Ash faced , It feel like Gym-leaders use only one experience pokemon in Battle.


When Jun first showed up, DP still had about two years to go. XY&Z presumably ends later this year, when Sun & Moon comes out. Jun will have had more time than Shōta did. And Masamune was basically a League rival, anyway.
Shota appear last year ,
Which mean , He also had 2 years if you count this year.
Pokemon Sun & Moon will not come out until November or December ! And I don't expect us to see Pokemon Sun & Moon anime right when Pokemon SM releases.

Who is saying Shōta should curbstomp Satoshi? I'm certainly not.

What I'm saying is that Shōta isn't "appearing out of nowhere" here. He's had a level of buildup to come to the point where he can presumably beat Satoshi.
Where did he has a Level Build-up ? Have you ever seen him to build up Level ? Or you just using your imagination because that where Shota exist off-screen.

Almost every rookie we've watched in this series (Satoshi, Haruka, Hikari, Serena) have all gotten stronger at some point. Why not Shōta, too?
Lets see , Ash got nearly beaten by Paul if it wasn't for Infernape's power.
In fact , Paul still able to read him like a book and remain one-step ahead of him.
There is no proof Ash can beat Paul ever again.
Also May got her ass kick by Drew in her first Grand-festival while Dawn never even beaten Zoey.
Why Should Shota be treated any special then that ?

You know, there actually is room to criticize TSME for its handling of Manon. She really serves little other role in the specials' narrative except to provide exposition or marvel at the Mega Evolutions. As a character, she's almost completely dependent on Alan and displays little agency of her own. Without getting into a bigger discussion about this (basically, it's the kind of thing that happens to female characters way too often), I think that TSME Act IV leaving Manon and Hari-san to be stuck in a hospital waiting on Alan to make things right is a flaw in how the writers wrote her character throughout the TSME specials.
Oh , your saying Manon should Just pay prize for Alain just because of her small role.
Here is a suggestion , If Alain gets another Mega Pokemon or Anything Special then the Anime should kill off Prof Sycamore .
After all , That should be right prize because Alain want to protect Prof Sycamore that most So Prof Sycamore should suffer for Alain .
Truth is , Manon's Chespin just a excuse for Alain receiving free thing! Because Real Prize is something that only Alain pays , Not someone else pays for him .

But that doesn't change that she very much is Alan's "price". He drove Manon off in Act IV and that's how Hari-san got into its condition. Because of that, now Alan is traveling around attempting to redeem himself. This is why Act IV ended the way it did, and why Alan invests himself so much in trying to gather Mega Evolution data. He clearly feels guilty about what happened. That's the price he paid for getting stronger. And regardless of what you think of that, it's a pretty familiar storytelling trope.
That's no prize , That's a Desperate excuse to make it look like Alain paying a great prize !
Alain Prize should something he pays himself , Not some character suffer for him.
Manon doesn't deserve to suffer any prize for Alain ,

For one thing, Satoshi and Alan are two different characters with two different storylines going on. What works for one doesn't necessarily work for the other. The same goes for Serena and Manon. And for as much grief as fans gave Serena, from the beginning she displayed more agency than Manon ever did and that's why she's not being used simply as fodder for Satoshi's own arc.
Ash and Alain are the character of the same Anime on same storyline !
And You point ,

--Ash : Who himself pay prize for everything

--Alain : Who makes other pay a Prize for him.

Plus , Are you saying that Ash doesn't to protect his friend ? That Alain is the only one who trying to protect people he loves

This is a good thing, by the way. Satoshi's issues should be about him and his Pokémon, not Serena.
Same thing work with Alain ,
His issues should be about him and his Pokemon , Not Manon.

Alan only wants to be the strongest because he thinks it's what he needs to do to protect those closest to him. Which is a goal he only adopted because Fleur-de-lis told him to. If Alan still can't protect anyone, then beating Pachira and getting stronger doesn't mean anything to him.
Oh really , Do you think Alain is only guy who has the cliche goal of protect closest to him ?
Alain goal was to be the strongest Megevolution user and he actually close to that Goal.
Unlike Ash who stayed longer then him and still haven't come close to winning a League.

Alan isn't after strength for its own sake like Satoshi is.
Actually it is ! Alain just make it sound like its for others sake but at the end its for his own sake.
That what lead Manon to suffer.

Alan didn't exist for the vast majority of those nineteen years, so whatever the writers did then is irrelevant when regarding him. XY and XY&Z are the only two series we should discuss Alan or Shōta in – not DP, OS, BW, or AG.
Even what Ash did in Original series trump Alain !
Just because your theroy does work doesn't mean you can ignore all Ash's struggling from other series.

Do you even know what my "theory" is?
Ya , Your thoery is that Only Protagonist should suffer in name of conflict.
I on the otherhand , Believe Every character should go though same conflict Protagonist has to go though.
Even Yugioh had more conflict even after Atem was nearly Unbeatable and had 3 of the most strongest card .

No, because just about every story ever told involves some form of conflict –internal and/or external – with its main character.
And Others Characters.
Conflicts doesn't only involve Protagonist.

As shown already, Alan and Shōta have both been going through their own conflicts.
Conflicts ?
Shota Conflicts is just losing to Ash and appear out of nowhere with free power-up.
Alain's pay no prize for his Free Mega Charizard and Metang ! He just make Manon pay prize for him.
Those aren't conflict.
Even Ursula shown better conflict then Shota ! And She was a far better rival then Shota.

And BW wasn't bad because Satoshi struggled. BW was bad because there was no point to it. Satoshi lost, suffered setbacks, and nothing ever came of it. He didn't grow as a character nor did he get any stronger. He just continued to be a loser.

The irony is that, for all your ranting about BW, this is exactly what you seem to want for Shōta. For him to continue losing with no actual growth or purpose.
If Writer want to show Shota's growth then they create another Punching bag for him.
Ash already been Punching bag for Shootic , Cameron and Iris !
That was ENOUGH .
If writer care so much of Shota development then they should find another guy to lose to him.

No, but as the rookie with a goal of getting stronger… Shōta actually has to get stronger at some point. Otherwise, there's no point to Shōta's character or reason for him to be in the show.
There was no point in Shota from the beginning.
Even Beating Ash won't gave him any point ether! He was just a boring ass rival from the beginning.
The Main reason for Gary and Paul to be a better rival was due to Ash's intense desire to beat them. Ash hated the idea of losing to Gary and he wanted to change Paul philosophy of training ! But Shota is no different then Conway or Barry.

In feat , I would prefer someone like Ursula instate of Shota ! That would be more entertaining rival.
From what I can tell, your opinion is based off whatever you think everyone else likes. I've never seen you make a statement on the quality of a character or series without referring to its popularity (or lack thereof) in some way. Your opinion is stolen from what you think other people like.
My point come from what happening in Anime.
Your point is Writer knows better then everyone.
Ya like Writer knew what they are doing when They made Ash lose to Cameron in 6 vs 5 battle.
I guess writer also knew what they are doing when they kicked out Goodra.
 
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Shota being beaten by Ash is no prize or Struggle !
Ash has more experience , He should have beaten Shota that way .
And You pratically basising your point of "Imaginary Struggle" Shota gone though your imagination.
When In Reality , Shota just appear out of nowhere to battle Ash and Leaves ! Nothing else.
Just because he couldn't beat Ash doesn't make it a struggle.
Just like its no a struggle for Jessie and James to lose to Ash.

But since your point is out of the anime, why do you think Shota is weak? He gets 8 badges thats for sure, and we might see him rise in the league as the rival always does. He struggles in order to be a great trainer, with calculated moves - a realy good way to go by the way, not as Ash's reckless way to win any match. I think Ash wont be less of a trainer if he is loosing some battles, it is only making him stronger anyway in the anime.

I dont even care what Shota does off screen: When Shota shows up we are getting a clear picture of him evolving but not getting yet to beat Ash by luck or legendary bond with his pokemon that gives him the extra (so not clearly the EXP). Why do you think Ash will win in a 3 vs 3 match that easily? It wont be easy with or without depending on Greninja special form - which he cant relay on to beat 3 pokemons just as any Legendary pokemon in the series as lost before (Darkray the other day is a great example). Is Shota capable of beating 2 of Ash's pokemon and keep 3 pokemons on hand against 1 Ash-Greninja? Oh yeah... {:3}

On the other hand, I agree with most of your thoughts, and the idea of Alain getting the Mega for nothing at all in the anime is realy not bothering me. Ash is suffering and this is why he gets to bond with all his pokemons in a legendary kind of way :)
 
But since your point is out of the anime, why do you think Shota is weak? He gets 8 badges thats for sure, and we might see him rise in the league as the rival always does. He struggles in order to be a great trainer, with calculated moves - a realy good way to go by the way, not as Ash's reckless way to win any match. I think Ash wont be less of a trainer if he is loosing some battles, it is only making him stronger anyway in the anime.

I dont even care what Shota does off screen: When Shota shows up we are getting a clear picture of him evolving but not getting yet to beat Ash by luck or legendary bond with his pokemon that gives him the extra (so not clearly the EXP). Why do you think Ash will win in a 3 vs 3 match that easily? It wont be easy with or without depending on Greninja special form - which he cant relay on to beat 3 pokemons just as any Legendary pokemon in the series as lost before (Darkray the other day is a great example). Is Shota capable of beating 2 of Ash's pokemon and keep 3 pokemons on hand against 1 Ash-Greninja? Oh yeah... {:3}

On the other hand, I agree with most of your thoughts, and the idea of Alain getting the Mega for nothing at all in the anime is realy not bothering me. Ash is suffering and this is why he gets to bond with all his pokemons in a legendary kind of way :)

Near 200 people collect 8 badge and enter a Pokemon league of every region in every year.
So , Collecting 8 badges doesn't signify strength.
Let me remind you that Cameron also had 8 badges and beat Ash with 5 pokemon !
Do you see anyone considering Cameron a strong character or just a noob who was favored by the writer ?
It doesn't matter what Shota does off-screen , That doesn't make for having Special treatment compare to other rookie trainer.
I mean , Ash still isn't allowed to get a Key-stone or Pseudo-legendary despite all the experience he earned and all the struggle he's been though. So Why does Shota be allowed those thing just because he couldn't beat Ash ?

Do I remind you that Gary was a stronger Rookie but he couldn't even pass the qualifying round while Ash suffer a humiliating defeat because of Charizard.
Morrison also couldn't go further then Top 16 .
So , If Shota reach Top 8 then he would automatically suppress all the rookie trainer in the show.
Not to mention That Shota has better team then Ash has and collected 8 badge before him.
I mean , Ash's XY team pretty much sucks with 3 flying type with all Speedster pokemon! Its like having 3 Elemental Monkey with a starter and a mouse.
Creating a Great Pokemon Team is like an Art But its seem like Writer used his art more on Shota team rather then Ash's team.
Not only Shota has Mega Sceptile But also a Pseudo-legendary that will evolve and A unique Ghost/Steel type pokemon that MANY FANS WANTED ASH TO CATCH.
Not to mention , Ash might not even catch a 6th pokemon for god knows what reason.
Plus , Shota receiving Key-stone that Ash still isn't allow to have.
Which mean , Shota can not just megevolve Sceptile , He megevolve his any other pokemon as long as he get a mega stone.
But Can Ash Synchiro-evolve his other pokemon ? Even though he has 5 other pokemon that deserve special evolution beside Greninja ?

From what I see , Ash doesn't need to struggle against Shota Because Shota already got many thing better then Ash for FREE.
In fact , The right prize for Shota would be "Never Beating Ash" .
But That's not coming true considering Writers planning to let Shota curbstump Ash until Greninja goes berserk and battle remain unfinished in the next episode.
Even though Noivern deserves a Victory after his defeat against Metang. Specially when he's fighting a Doublade that People wanted for Ash.
 
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Near 200 people collect 8 badge and enter a Pokemon league of every region in every year.
So , Collecting 8 badges doesn't signify strength.
Let me remind you that Cameron also had 8 badges and beat Ash with 5 pokemon !
Do you see anyone considering Cameron a strong character or just a noob who was favored by the writer ?

To be clear, I consider him as a strong noob who got some luck to face against Ash - the only trainer his pokemon loose EXP during the series(As for Pikachu who did already Super-Mega-Electric-ball once and can't do it over again).

It doesn't matter what Shota does off-screen , That doesn't make for having Special treatment compare to other rookie trainer.
I mean , Ash still isn't allowed to get a Key-stone or Pseudo-legendary despite all the experience he earned and all the struggle he's been though. So Why does Shota be allowed those thing just because he couldn't beat Ash ?

He shouldn't be allowed those things because he was losing over and over. On the worst case scenario he whould be allowed those things only in order to be a legit rival to Ash. Ash might be motivated by him getting a Mega, just as he was motivated by fighting Articuno the other day. Not saying it's fine by me cause realy Shota didn't do anything special - just as Alain or anyone else didn't (for whoever watching the anime at least).

So , If Shota reach Top 8 then he would automatically suppress all the rookie trainer in the show.
For me Ash losing to Trip's Snivy is the worst case of all times in the anime - Realy Pikachu should have owned the battle without using any electric-type moves. Its not related to the league but still..
Not to mention That Shota has better team then Ash has and collected 8 badge before him.
I mean , Ash's XY team pretty much sucks with 3 flying type with all Speedster pokemon! Its like having 3 Elemental Monkey with a starter and a mouse.
Creating a Great Pokemon Team is like an Art But its seem like Writer used his art more on Shota team rather then Ash's team.
Not only Shota has Mega Sceptile But also a Pseudo-legendary that will evolve and A unique Ghost/Steel type pokemon that MANY FANS WANTED ASH TO CATCH.
Not to mention , Ash might not even catch a 6th pokemon for god knows what reason.
Plus , Shota receiving Key-stone that Ash still isn't allow to have.
Which mean , Shota can not just megevolve Sceptile , He megevolve his any other pokemon as long as he get a mega stone.
But Can Ash Synchiro-evolve his other pokemon ? Even though he has 5 other pokemon that deserve special evolution beside Greninja ?

From what I see , Ash doesn't need to struggle against Shota Because Shota already got many thing better then Ash for FREE.
In fact , The right prize for Shota would be "Never Beating Ash" .
But That's not coming true considering Writers planning to let Shota curbstump Ash until Greninja goes berserk and battle remain unfinished in the next episode.
Even though Noivern deserves a Victory after his defeat against Metang. Specially when he's fighting a Doublade that People wanted for Ash.
Shota is getting the better team because it seems Ash doesn't even care about his build up. We only know Ash is reckless and will be prob catching an underrated pokemon- if anything at all. This is exactly why some rookies like Shota can climb faster than him (This trainer is actually thinking and trying to evolve, practically).
 
Shota is getting the better team because it seems Ash doesn't even care about his build up. We only know Ash is reckless and will be prob catching an underrated pokemon- if anything at all. This is exactly why some rookies like Shota can climb faster than him (This trainer is actually thinking and trying to evolve, practically).

Who said Ash doesn't care about his build up ? Ash wants to catch as pokemon as possible.
However , Its the writers who hold supreme power who doesn't let to catch any pokemon even if a strong and wild pokemon dance front of him.

He shouldn't be allowed those things because he was losing over and over. On the worst case scenario he whould be allowed those things only in order to be a legit rival to Ash. Ash might be motivated by him getting a Mega, just as he was motivated by fighting Articuno the other day. Not saying it's fine by me cause realy Shota didn't do anything special - just as Alain or anyone else didn't (for whoever watching the anime at least).
Well , He's getting a Keystone and Mega Sceptile.
Not to mention , He will get a "Freaking Salamence" that he gets to keep and use whenever he wants while Ash had to dump his Goodra.
Just Losing to Ash in past is No Prize for that.
 
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Who said Ash doesn't care about his build up ? Ash wants to catch as pokemon as possible.
However , Its the writers who hold supreme power who doesn't let to catch any pokemon even if a strong and wild pokemon dance front of him.

Well , He's getting a Keystone and Mega Sceptile.
Not to mention , He will get a "Freaking Salamence" that he gets to keep and use whenever he wants while Ash had to dump his Goodra.
Just Losing to Ash in past is No Prize for that.

Lets hope Ash will get Goodra back, and lets hope his wish to catch more pokemons will hit him soon enough - cause to get a weak/not experienced pokemon right before the league is the worst case scenario realy.
 
Lets hope Ash will get Goodra back, and lets hope his wish to catch more pokemons will hit him soon enough - cause to get a weak/not experienced pokemon right before the league is the worst case scenario realy.

I had faith that Writer will never let a Rookie beat Ash But they already let me down.
If Current Writer can't stop favoring their creation (Alain & Shota) Then This Anime will hit rock bottom.
The movie confirm No Goodra in Ash's Team or any 6th pokemon.
Seriously Wasn't near-death and No Megevolution was ENOUGH prize for Ash that writer also had to disallow Ash to catch a 6th pokemon ?
I believe that Ash deserve an Aegislash more then Shota does.
And Ash's Charizard deserve his Megevolution more then Alain's SALVE CHARIZARD does.
Not to mention , Serena is Officially the 2nd Best Performer in Kalos! But Ash will never get that far because he need to win the Kalos league and compete in Champion league to officially challenge Diantha.
 
And Ash's Charizard deserve his Megevolution more then Alain's SALVE CHARIZARD does.
To be fair, the slave thing there is in some ways related to the Mega-Evolution, they might not want to detach Mega-Evolution from that completely. The Charizard, for instance, is pretty much compelled to continually change to another form, and can't really do much by itself. In addition, it's sort of implied that Alain often just does things based on various ends, and Charizard is just forced to comply with all of this, in part due to the Mega-Evolution. It sort of represents the Charizard's relation to Alain and Mega-Evolution generally, and they might not want to just give Ash a Mega-Evolution, having introduced Alain in that manner, without similar trappings.
 
Shota being beaten by Ash is no prize or Struggle !
Ash has more experience , He should have beaten Shota that way .
And You pratically basising your point of "Imaginary Struggle" Shota gone though your imagination.
When In Reality , Shota just appear out of nowhere to battle Ash and Leaves ! Nothing else.
Just because he couldn't beat Ash doesn't make it a struggle.
Just like its no a struggle for Jessie and James to lose to Ash.
Shōta's goal is to overcome Satoshi. A struggle is represented by the setbacks one faces towards getting to that goal. Thus, Shōta losing to Satoshi represents his struggle to catch up to him, in the same way that Satoshi losing to Shinji throughout DP represented Satoshi's own struggle at that time to beat his rival. Or that Satoshi and Gekkouga fainting or losing battles to Alan, Carnet, Shōta, and Urup represent their own struggle to master the transformation.

This is basic ****, man. Let the fanboy bias go and see stories for what they are and not what you want them to be.

Why , Because your theory doesn't work ?
Those character are part of Pokemon anime , Not a Different Anime
Shota is no more Special then Burgundy is.
However , Burgundy never beaten Clian so there nothing that claim that Shota should have a victory over Ash.
Cabernet never beating Dent or even showing any notable improvement against him was a huge flaw in her characterization and one of the myriad reasons as to why BW was so bad. The writers set up a storyline and then failed to follow through with it. There's no reason to saddle Shōta with the same idiotic writing. If the writers set up a storyline with him ("get stronger against Satoshi"), it needs to be followed through in some way.

The good thing about it is now that Shōta has already done that in XY&Z026, Satoshi can beat him at the League.

That doesn't mean Shota had paid his prize for Mega sceptile.
Because Ash gone way more Struggle then Shota So he deserved to Keep Goodra and get Free Keystone.
But Writer still made Ash pay for it .
He got Goodra that he was force to release and a "Something like Mega" that kills him.
If you think that Shota defeat pay for Mega Sceptile Then that Humilating Unova League pay for anything Ash get in Kalos , He shouldn't have pay any more prize for it.
The Isshu League already happened and what's done is done. Writing a future series as a way to compensate for it isn't going to make BW any better, and just makes the current series worse.

Shōta already paid his dues for Mega Jukain, by struggling and having to steadily get stronger with it. When we first met Shōta, we see Kimori taking losses against Citron and Gekogashira. It evolves into Juptile during a battle with Satoshi and still loses. We see their improvement (which Satoshi acknowledges) in XY&Z001 against Team Flare. By the time Jukain appears, it shows even more improvement against Satoshi's Gekkouga, even winning until the Satoshi-Gekkouga form knocked it out. Now, in XY&Z026, Shōta's Jukain has beaten Satoshi's Gekkouga and demonstrated how much stronger the two have gotten since then. Shōta hasn't been given a "free" Mega Jukain. It's something he's clearly had to work for.

Just because you're too biased against Shōta to see that doesn't mean it hasn't happened, or that the anime hasn't been building up to it.

Where did he has a Level Build-up ? Have you ever seen him to build up Level ? Or you just using your imagination because that where Shota exist off-screen.
Have you actually been watching Shōta, like at all?

In XY064, we see Shōta's Kimori being beaten handily by Citron's Rentorar.

In XY073, we see Shōta's Kimori knocked out by Satoshi's Gekogashira and his Tatsubay beaten by Mâche's Shushupu.

In XY075, we get the big 3-on-3 battle between Shōta and Satoshi. Satoshi dominates two rounds against Shōta (Pikachu vs. Tatsubay; Luchabull vs. Peroream) before Satoshi gives him some valuable advice. Shōta makes use of that in the Kimori-Gekogashira battle, which Kimori is losing until it evolves into Juptile. Although Juptile loses, it has a moment where it's able to surprise Satoshi and Gekogashira, suggesting that Shōta can perhaps grow into a strong enough trainer to challenge Satoshi one day.

In XY&Z001, Shōta and Juptile return and help Satoshi and Gekogashira deal with Team Flare. Satoshi acknowledges Shōta's help, suggesting that Shōta is getting stronger.

In XY&Z013, Shōta battles Satoshi again and introduces Jukain. Although he loses, Jukain dominates Gekkouga – which is acknowledged by Citron – until the latter pulls the "Satoshi-Gekkouga" form against it and wins.

In XY&Z026, Shōta's Jukain defeats Satoshi's Gekkouga – which it had shown the ability to be able to do in Shōta's very last appearance.

This was being built up to as early as the first Satoshi vs. Shōta 3-on-3 battle in XY075.

Lets see , Ash got nearly beaten by Paul if it wasn't for Infernape's power.
In fact , Paul still able to read him like a book and remain one-step ahead of him.
There is no proof Ash can beat Paul ever again.
Also May got her ass kick by Drew in her first Grand-festival while Dawn never even beaten Zoey.
Why Should Shota be treated any special then that ?
Haruka then came back and defeated Shuu in the second Grand Festival, so let's not forget that. Hikari's also showed far more improvement against Nozomi in the final battle of the Grand Festival than she did in their first battle in DP012, a fact that's acknowledged in the show itself.

And Shinji was only a step ahead of Satoshi for part of that battle. Satoshi wrecked that when he had Goukazaru blow up the field, which is acknowledged in-series by Reiji. Not to mention the clear efforts of Bouysel, Pikachu, and Glion in defeating Shinji's other Pokémon. And that Satoshi and Goukazaru had even grown to a point where they could control the latter's power was itself an improvement in their abilities, and something that Shinji could never do.

All of these examples work against you.

Shōta isn't treated any differently than they were. The only difference is that he's not a main character whose growth can be chronicled in over a hundred episodes. He loses to Satoshi, gets stronger, and narrowly beats him, much like Satoshi did with Shinji.

Oh , your saying Manon should Just pay prize for Alain just because of her small role.
Here is a suggestion , If Alain gets another Mega Pokemon or Anything Special then the Anime should kill off Prof Sycamore .
After all , That should be right prize because Alain want to protect Prof Sycamore that most So Prof Sycamore should suffer for Alain .
Truth is , Manon's Chespin just a excuse for Alain receiving free thing! Because Real Prize is something that only Alain pays , Not someone else pays for him .
No, I explicitly said that you could criticize TSME for having Manon be the "price" Alan has to pay. But criticizing something doesn't mean you get to ignore that it happened, which you seem to have trouble understanding. A "price" can be anything so long as it affects the main character (and TSME Act IV showed decisively that it does), you don't get to make arbitrary rules as to what it is.

Ash and Alain are the character of the same Anime on same storyline !
They have two different personal arcs and fuctions in that storyline. They're not the same character, which means the writers get to have them do different things.

Actually it is ! Alain just make it sound like its for others sake but at the end its for his own sake.
That what lead Manon to suffer.
What lead Manon and Hari-san to their problem was that Alan told Manon not to travel with him anymore and chased her away, but his stated goal was always "get stronger, so I can protect the people close to me". He says this in TSME Act IV. This is even shown in TSME Act II when Fleur-de-lis plants the idea him to "become the strongest" in the first place. This is undebatable.

Even what Ash did in Original series trump Alain !
Just because your theroy does work doesn't mean you can ignore all Ash's struggling from other series.
Of course it does, because Alan didn't exist in the original series. How the hell are Alan and Shōta supposed to be able to struggle in a series they didn't exist for?

This is precisely why only XY and XY&Z are relevant to discussing their characters. It's not a fair comparison if we're taking 19 years' worth of history that neither character could ever possibly measure up to.

Conflicts ?
Shota Conflicts is just losing to Ash and appear out of nowhere with free power-up.
Alain's pay no prize for his Free Mega Charizard and Metang ! He just make Manon pay prize for him.
Those aren't conflict.
Even Ursula shown better conflict then Shota ! And She was a far better rival then Shota.
As long as a situation affects a main character negatively, then it is a conflict.

And the one thing of note Urara ever did as a rival was get inadvertently get Hikari over that "Pikari" problem in DP161-162. Her characterization is better than Shōta's by far, but she brings about as much to Hikari as a rival as Shōta does to Satoshi – which is to say, not very much.

If Writer want to show Shota's growth then they create another Punching bag for him.
Ash already been Punching bag for Shootic , Cameron and Iris !
That was ENOUGH .
If writer care so much of Shota development then they should find another guy to lose to him.
In what universe is XY's Satoshi – who has beaten Shōta twice to Shōta's one victory, so far – a "punching bag"? There are only about four characters in all of XY and XY&Z I can remember who've defeated Satoshi without him getting a win back at some point: a CotD from XY013, Sanpei, Carnet, and Alan. One of those four people is a freaking champion.

This is just fandom entitlement. XY!Satoshi gets a special transformation with Gekkouga, gets to have the upper-hand against a champion in battle (something no other character can claim), and goes about a year without losing a battle on-screen, and you still think he's a "punching bag" because he has to go through a trial that will inevitably make him even stronger than he already is.

There was no point in Shota from the beginning.
Even Beating Ash won't gave him any point ether! He was just a boring ass rival from the beginning.
The Main reason for Gary and Paul to be a better rival was due to Ash's intense desire to beat them. Ash hated the idea of losing to Gary and he wanted to change Paul philosophy of training ! But Shota is no different then Conway or Barry.

In feat , I would prefer someone like Ursula instate of Shota ! That would be more entertaining rival.
There's about as much of a point with Shōta as there is with any other rival not named Shinji, Shuu, or Nozomi, who are the only three rivals I can think of who've actually helped their protagonists develop. But that's not what we're discussing.

Shōta has had to struggle more for what he has than Satoshi has had to in XY, or even other characters like Shigeru (who was always presented as "better" than Satoshi for no real reason other than that Satoshi needed a rival).

My point come from what happening in Anime.
Your point is Writer knows better then everyone.
Ya like Writer knew what they are doing when They made Ash lose to Cameron in 6 vs 5 battle.
I guess writer also knew what they are doing when they kicked out Goodra.
There's plenty of room to criticize the writers for the decisions they made with this anime. But the thing about constructive criticism is that it requires one to actually engage with the work instead of childishly ranting in every other thread about how the writers won't do what you want.

That's the problem with your posts. You don't care what they're trying to do or what's being presented to you. You just want the story to bend to what YOU want – and more often than not, what you want reads like a bad fanfiction. And you apparently think that saying anything differently than that is to believe that the writers know better than everyone else.
 
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Shōta's goal is to overcome Satoshi. A struggle is represented by the setbacks one faces towards getting to that goal. Thus, Shōta losing to Satoshi represents his struggle to catch up to him, in the same way that Satoshi losing to Shinji throughout DP represented Satoshi's own struggle at that time to beat his rival. Or that Satoshi and Gekkouga fainting or losing battles to Alan, Carnet, Shōta, and Urup represent their own struggle to master the transformation.

Just because Shota gets his ass kicked by Ash in the past doesn't mean he struggled.
What your point ? That if Shota never gotten Mega scetile then he should have kick Ash's ass without any experience like Trip ?
Shota was a newbie and he lose at all like a Rookie ! That doesn't mean he cost a great prize for Mega Sceptile .

Cabernet never beating Dent or even showing any notable improvement against him was a huge flaw in her characterization and one of the myriad reasons as to why BW was so bad. The writers set up a storyline and then failed to follow through with it. There's no reason to saddle Shōta with the same idiotic writing. If the writers set up a storyline with him ("get stronger against Satoshi"), it needs to be followed through in some way.
Oh ,Was it also a huge flaw in Ursula's characterization that she never beaten Dawn and rank lower then Jessie ? Was it also a mistake that Zoey won the grand-festival while Dawn never beating Zoey once in her life-time ?
Ursula was far more better rival then Shota , in fact Ursula was more popular then Zoey because she had more comparative spirit and drive to beat Dawn.
That something that every rival of Ash in BW & XY series lacked ! None of them has the comparative Spirit that worth calling them rival.

The good thing about it is now that Shōta has already done that in XY&Z026, Satoshi can beat him at the League.
Ash shouldn't even need to be beaten him , Dawn never beaten Zoey but that didn't allow her to beat Zoey in Grand festival !
Ash's relationship with Shota is same as Dawn & Zoey ! So Why Does Shota need to have win when Zoey never gotten a lost ?

The Isshu League already happened and what's done is done. Writing a future series as a way to compensate for it isn't going to make BW any better, and just makes the current series worse.
But it still Canon.
No matter what Ash does now , He still be the guy who lost Unova League to an Idiot who didn't even bother to bring a 6th pokemon.
An Idiot like Cameron will always remain stronger then Ash and Ash won't get a chance to beat him in rematch .

Shōta already paid his dues for Mega Jukain, by struggling and having to steadily get stronger with it. When we first met Shōta, we see Kimori taking losses against Citron and Gekogashira. It evolves into Juptile during a battle with Satoshi and still loses. We see their improvement (which Satoshi acknowledges) in XY&Z001 against Team Flare. By the time Jukain appears, it shows even more improvement against Satoshi's Gekkouga, even winning until the Satoshi-Gekkouga form knocked it out. Now, in XY&Z026, Shōta's Jukain has beaten Satoshi's Gekkouga and demonstrated how much stronger the two have gotten since then. Shōta hasn't been given a "free" Mega Jukain. It's something he's clearly had to work for.
WHAT ACTUALLY SHOTA PAID ?
Your idea is that Shota lost against Ash in the past so he should get everything for FREE.
Ash lost and struggled more then Shota did in his life But he still has to pay great prize for Ash-Greninja and Goodra ! So you think that Just because Shota lost to Ash in past , He should have everything for FREE .
Let see what Shota got in his first year as a trainer --

--Keystone
-- Mega Sceptile
--A Psuedu-legendary that will evolve
--Better team
-- Getting 8 badge before his mentor
--Beating his mentor before the league .

All those thing that Ash still can't get despite 20 year of struggle. And You think , Shota paid a great prize for all of them by losing to Ash in past ! So he should kick his ass without any experience if he never got those thing.

SHOTA PAID NOTHING! HE LOST TO ASH BECAUSE OF HIS LACK EXPERIENCE , NOT BECAUSE HE WAS GETTING A MEGA SCEPTILE!

Have you actually been watching Shōta, like at all?

In XY064, we see Shōta's Kimori being beaten handily by Citron's Rentorar.

In XY073, we see Shōta's Kimori knocked out by Satoshi's Gekogashira and his Tatsubay beaten by Mâche's Shushupu.

In XY075, we get the big 3-on-3 battle between Shōta and Satoshi. Satoshi dominates two rounds against Shōta (Pikachu vs. Tatsubay; Luchabull vs. Peroream) before Satoshi gives him some valuable advice. Shōta makes use of that in the Kimori-Gekogashira battle, which Kimori is losing until it evolves into Juptile. Although Juptile loses, it has a moment where it's able to surprise Satoshi and Gekogashira, suggesting that Shōta can perhaps grow into a strong enough trainer to challenge Satoshi one day.

In XY&Z001, Shōta and Juptile return and help Satoshi and Gekogashira deal with Team Flare. Satoshi acknowledges Shōta's help, suggesting that Shōta is getting stronger.
Those aren't struggle , They are just the obvious outcome that any Rookie would suffer against an experience trainer.
Just because he lost in the past doesn't make him any special then other Rookies .

In XY&Z013, Shōta battles Satoshi again and introduces Jukain. Although he loses, Jukain dominates Gekkouga – which is acknowledged by Citron – until the latter pulls the "Satoshi-Gekkouga" form against it and wins.

In XY&Z026, Shōta's Jukain defeats Satoshi's Gekkouga – which it had shown the ability to be able to do in Shōta's very last appearance.
Ya , Clear favoritism showing in the way.
Ash barely beat Paul's Electrivire and Trip's Serperior But Shota completely dominate Greninja.

Haruka then came back and defeated Shuu in the second Grand Festival, so let's not forget that. Hikari's also showed far more improvement against Nozomi in the final battle of the Grand Festival than she did in their first battle in DP012, a fact that's acknowledged in the show itself.

And Shinji was only a step ahead of Satoshi for part of that battle. Satoshi wrecked that when he had Goukazaru blow up the field, which is acknowledged in-series by Reiji. Not to mention the clear efforts of Bouysel, Pikachu, and Glion in defeating Shinji's other Pokémon. And that Satoshi and Goukazaru had even grown to a point where they could control the latter's power was itself an improvement in their abilities, and something that Shinji could never do.
And Few episode later , Drew comes back and effortlessly beat May! Dawn never even beaten Zoey no matter improvement she shown.
Also , Paul still nearly beaten Ash ! The Refree was about to declare Paul as the winner until Electrivire intervene.
Nether Ash , May and Dawn completely dominated then Rival.

Shōta isn't treated any differently than they were. The only difference is that he's not a main character whose growth can be chronicled in over a hundred episodes. He loses to Satoshi, gets stronger, and narrowly beats him, much like Satoshi did with Shinji.
Narrowly ? Does the previous battle feels anything Narrowly.
In fact , If Writer are fair then they will make Shota pay a huge prize for getting so many thing for free in Kalos League.
Just because Shota hides in Off-screen doesn't mean he deserve Special Treatment.
Can you name any reason why Shota's Sceptile should megevolve instate of Ash ? Don't say anything stupid like Ash not wanting to megevolve Sceptile ! Ash is interested in Megevolution and he would megevolve Sceptile if writers give him the material for it.
No, I explicitly said that you could criticize TSME for having Manon be the "price" Alan has to pay. But criticizing something doesn't mean you get to ignore that it happened, which you seem to have trouble understanding. A "price" can be anything so long as it affects the main character (and TSME Act IV showed decisively that it does), you don't get to make arbitrary rules as to what it is.
Except , Manon isn't Alain prize to be Stronger because Its Manon that suffering.
And Your the one whose trying to establish Manon as Alain's Prize .
At the end of the Day , Alain lost nothing ! Its is Manon who's losing something.
Just because Alain use Cliche line like "I want to be stronger so I can protect everyone" Doesn't mean Others people has to suffer for Alain ! Everyone want to protect their love-one , Not Just Alain !

Alain paid nothing , he didn't lose anything ! He just feel sympathy for Maon , Nothing else.


What lead Manon and Hari-san to their problem was that Alan told Manon not to travel with him anymore and chased her away, but his stated goal was always "get stronger, so I can protect the people close to me". He says this in TSME Act IV. This is even shown in TSME Act II when Fleur-de-lis plants the idea him to "become the strongest" in the first place. This is undebatable.
There is a difference between "Paying a Great Prize" Or "Being Outright Jerk" .

They have two different personal arcs and fuctions in that storyline. They're not the same character, which means the writers get to have them do different things.
They are part of the same Anime of same Continuity of same Storyline !
Stop trying to make it sound like Different Anime.

Of course it does, because Alan didn't exist in the original series. How the hell are Alan and Shōta supposed to be able to struggle in a series they didn't exist for?

This is precisely why only XY and XY&Z are relevant to discussing their characters. It's not a fair comparison if we're taking 19 years' worth of history that neither character could ever possibly measure up to.
That does mean they should everything for FREE because they didn't exited in Original series !
If Ash still has to pay prize for Ash-Greninja and Goodra then those deverse to pay even greater prize then Ash.
Here is the prize , Shota suffer a humiliating crashing Defeat in Kalos League and Alain loses his Keystone ! That What call prize.

And the one thing of note Urara ever did as a rival was get inadvertently get Hikari over that "Pikari" problem in DP161-162. Her characterization is better than Shōta's by far, but she brings about as much to Hikari as a rival as Shōta does to Satoshi – which is to say, not very much.
That doesn't change the fact that Ursula was a better character who struggled more then Shota.

Shōta has had to struggle more for what he has than Satoshi has had to in XY, or even other characters like Shigeru (who was always presented as "better" than Satoshi for no real reason other than that Satoshi needed a rival).
Shota didn't struggle nearly as much as Ash did.
Your just using trying to dismiss other series to give Shota a clean sheet.
Because Ash took 20 year to reach where he is now ! while Shota gets Ash's 20 year of development for free.

There's plenty of room to criticize the writers for the decisions they made with this anime. But the thing about constructive criticism is that it requires one to actually engage with the work instead of childishly ranting in every other thread about how the writers won't do what you want.


That's the problem with your posts. You don't care what they're trying to do or what's being presented to you. You just want the story to bend to what YOU want – and more often than not, what you want reads like a bad fanfiction. And you apparently think that saying anything differently than that is to believe that the writers know better than everyone else.
Oh really , I guess writer knew what they doing during Unova League ? Or When they kicked out Goodra .
Even a Doujinshi artist and Manga arthur write better story all by themselves While Pokemon written by 5 writer together but they still does stupid thing that even an amateur wouldn't do !

I'm not a writer lackey ! Pokemon written by professional writer so they should know what type of rival and romance the series need.
But instate they tries the most stupid idea like Unova League fully knowing its a stupid idea and people will criticize it.
 
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Hey, guys. I just want to know what you think might happen if Ash's Charizard, Heracross, Sceptile and/or Glalie refused to Mega Evolve, wanting to resist their Mega Evolution?
 
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