would it be ok if i post my sprites here to get them review

[raze sawr]

Hi, I am quite new to making sprites and am self-taught, so I wonder if it would be ok if I post my sprites here to see if they look ok.

 

[raze sawr]

Well nobody has said no so I just post my sprite and see what people think and if they complain then i remove it







I made three images and well I think the second and third looks ok if you ignore the shoes on the third I am kinda worried about the first because it's the biggest change I ever did to an already existing image
ps any tips to make them look better would be accepted

 

[WolfPP]

Well nobody has said no so I just post my sprite and see what people think and if they complain then i remove it

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I made three images and well I think the second and third looks ok if you ignore the shoes on the third I am kinda worried about the first because it's the biggest change I ever did to an already existing image
ps any tips to make them look better would be accepted

Hmmm if you see, the trainer sprite have more pixel between pixel (lol). Lets see:

Check this, a custom sprite:

https://www.deviantart.com/mastokid/art/Pokemon-trainer-sprites-196869169

And compare, hmm, to your glasses in second sprite. Can you see? Your glasses is to small cuz have half of sprite.

So, if you increase more pixel, will be better.

Mine for example:

https://imgur.com/a/vQZgKef

PS: And yearh, my trainer haves some half pixels too lol

 

[raze sawr]

i thought about doing it but i read on a guide it would look very bad if you mix sprites with different amount of pixels

 

[Fairy]

You need to work on creating softer corners by using better sel-shading. Make sure you keep in mind where the light is coming from.

 

[raze sawr]

thank you