Recent content by [NovaPirate]

'Ello Alistair, good to see you. I can't find your license, could you point it out to me? And about that last WIP, the boxes on the far bottom seem almost /too/ aligned for the clutter, and it looks a bit weird to me. But it might be just me. Really, REALLY love the new stuff, and the trees...

-woof- I'm going to pop in here, throw this crit. in like a smoke grenade, a disappear, 'kay? Now, about your Tyranitar revamp: It's all good, I like it, but it looks like maybe you could shrink the body a bit, because poor Tyranitar looks like he's eaten around sixteen too many hamburgers...

[OoC; Well, I didn't see any official closure of the RP, so I'm going to join. Mind you, I'm new to the PC RPing community, although I've been RPing for a couple of years now. I've scanned the rules and such, but if I do something you disapprove of, point it out. Oh yes, if the RP is closed...

Because the quality was reduced by saving it as a .gif, just resaving it won't do much. I don't know, I just recommend saving all future comics as a .PNG and not worrying about it. By-the-by, just posting all comics as images is obnoxious, I recommend posting them as links.

That would explain the problem with close-ups. Are you on a Mac, Windows, or Linux computer?

Honestly, that should not be necessary. You don't need to have played every Pokémon game to know what's going on in a Pokémon based sprite comic. But, however, it's acceptable for now.

Wow. I'm confused. I really don't know what's happening, and that's a problem. For somebody who /hasn't/ played any KH games (that's me!), this makes /no/ sense. And that discourages readers. So you really need to explain what's going on, using some kind of exposition-like comic. Just a small...

The whole comic is blurry, but the "zoom-ins" are especially bad. You used a .gif file. The colors will be blurry on every computer. Save as .PNG (.PwNaGe) to get rid of this blurriness and make everyone else happy. As for your "zoom-ins", do you use paint, or some other software?

Errm. My main problem is with the low quality caused by using .GIFs, and the badly done "zoom-ins." I suggest you switch over to .PNGs, find a better way to zoom in, and make the plot a lot clearer. It's okay, but you shouldn't need to explain it with a paragraph. Maybe visual cues can help...

Ehh. Your comic is /okay/, to be honest. A lot of the jokes are things we've seen before in "spoof-comics", and the strange and random "warps" to other dimensions are a bit annoying (and again, we've seen 'em a million-and-a-half time before), because they don't offer anything to the plot or...

You're confusing the lack of activity in this section with a lack of activity in your thread. This place is pretty much dead. Was on the rebound. Just keep on pumping out comics and maybe we can dust off the cobwebs.

Ahh, yes, around that number. It's quite embarrassing, and I'm incredibly determined to get this one off the ground as quickly as possible. I think I might have actually hurried it a bit, but oh well. The NovaPirate? I'm flattered :D And if you ever post a new comic, [That would be your...

Thanks for the first comment :D Nice to see that even this dying section can provide a comment faster than Serebii. And yeah, like it says at the veery bottom in the notes, I use Photoshop Elements 4.

[.NP Productions presents to you yet another comic doomed to fail due to a lack of time to ever complete it] It's.. [POKEMON!: A FADING TWILIGHT] [The Story So Far;] Will slowly be updated with each comic to include more and more of this world's past.. In a land corrupted by the chaos of...

He's back! Hey Ajust! Golly, the sprites for this are amazing. You also manage to make the characters more... human with the facial expressions in the boxes. The plot works, but it's a little confusing as to what's going on sometimes. You can guess most times. Continue on please!