Rating time~ o__o
Ryouki;; All the displacement effects seems to be concentrated on he left side of Edward's face (our right), whereas everywhere else in the banner, you can see a bit too much of the motion blurred background, which looks quite dull. As I have already told you, I think that the lighting is way too bright, although the positioning is quite good. I can't say I can really comment too much on the text, since it is a similar style to the one I used in the tutorial, but the font seems okay (still needs work, though), and you should make something different in the clipping mask. For example, I added that red soft brush spot. Overall, it's okay, but it's definitely not your best.
BreD;; I will attempt to not comment on the render, then. The banner has nice flow and the lighting seems good. The front bit of the effects looks a bit over sharpened, though. But I like how it has depth, with the background effects being less sharpened than the front bit (or it just looks like that). Also, if you look at it for a while, the effects almost start to look monotone. Mix in some other colours maybe? Oh, and the text looks really weird. Try moving it somewhere else? Add something to the black, as well. It just looks really empty at the top left corner, even with the text there.