FireRed hack: * | Pokemon Soul Charm | *

[Blue Beedrill]

POKEMON SOUL CHARM
HACK OF [FIRE RED]
THE AERO REGION

It is you and your twin sisters 15th birthday.
Your parents then decide that it is time for you two to set off in to the world.
You will receive your first Pokémon from your farther and your journey will begin.
During your journey you will meet with a young trainer named PAUL (one of your rivals).
He is the head officer of The Heaven Elite,a group of the top ranking officers from every city in the Aero Region.
The Heaven Elite group is tracking down The Black Charm Squad and PAUL needs one more team member for his group, so he decides to give you a shot.
After would he tells you that there are still 3 more test to complete if you want to be a Heaven Elite.
Test 1: Beat Heaven Elite ( Josh )
Test 2: Beat Heaven Elite ( Mindy )
Test 3: Beat Heaven Elite Paul at his best.
Paul then leaves you.

You carry on your journey (A couple of mini events will happen).Once you head towards Jachi town (named after the pokemon Jirachi) you see Jirachi being attacked by some bandits. The Bandits then reveal them selves to be none other then The Back Charm Squad.
You are able to stop them for now by getting Jirachi to safety but they will be back.
Jirachi Suddenly Disappears. The Black Charms Squad's Plan is to use Jirachi's Wish capability to bring back every fossilized Pokémon in the world and put them under there control.
They also unknowingly bring back Groudon and unable to control Groudon it starts rampaging across the Aero Region. It is up to you to stop Team Black Charm and the Evil Groudon.


THE EPIC BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL HAS BEGUN.


*Story may change *

! New Region !
@ New Tiles @
# New OW's #
$ New Sprites $
% New Scripts %
^ New Trainers ^
& New Badges &
* New Gym Leaders *
- New Evil Team -
+ New Intro +
= New Tittle Screen =

AND MORE TO COME

Me,
Myself,
And I.
Plus Heizer.

Doing Everything.

Spoiler:

[IMG]https://i944.photobucket.com/albums/ad283/HeizerStyle/1.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]https://i944.photobucket.com/albums/ad283/HeizerStyle/2.jpg[/IMG]

First i would just like to give a special thanks to Poke Community for the awesome site.
And thanks to Nintendo Gamefreak and the affiliates of those Companys for creating the game pokemon.

 

[Curt_09]

Your tiles and palettes look nice, and the intro screen is great.
What drives me away is some of the grammar in this thread...

 

[Neo-Wolf]

Curt said all that needed to be said. But I recommend changing the story a bit.

 

[Syrael]

lookin good. need any help?

 

[SharpPoint]

Yes, the grammar is a turn off but everything else is good.

 

[BlitŻ1]

[FONT=&quot]The grammar and story need to be worked on. It seems that it's another cliché game, which usually fail in the first weeks of production. To make a cliché game good, you're going to need a lot of appealing features, such a Pokemon Mahogany. It has an overly used story, but a lot of nice features that make it enjoyable. What I suggest is that by inserting tiles that shed its nintendo-ish look and make it more appealing is a good idea, along with having intersting sciprts.

Maybe for the story, provide a back plot in the antagonist team. Why are they called their name? Why do they do what there doing? Also, change there goal from just stealing Pokemon or whatever they do to something more sinister. Imo, Sinister is something more hacks need.
[/FONT]

 

[Swolligator]

the tiles and pallets are great, am looking forward to its beta version but i agree with the others, you need to tweak your story a bit

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

The OW's are good, but you should try fixing up the Grammar like everyone else said.

Another than that, this Hack's fine.

 

[Blue Beedrill]

Thanks guys for the feedback

lookin good. need any help?

Not at the moment thanks.

The OW's are good, but you should try fixing up the Grammar like everyone else said.

Another than that, this Hack's fine.

Thanks but im thinking of changing the OW's


And also theres an update for the storyline.
Since nobody really liked what i had wrote before.
Hopefully my grammar is better.

Ill try make it better if i find the time.

Harmony Town
Mapping 90% Done
Scripting 40% Done

Ill Show some screen shots soon of what i got.

 

[Blue Beedrill]

Yay New Stuff:

New Palette
New Tiles
New Scripts
New Banners

Screen Shots:

Route 100:

Harmony Town GYM:

Route 101:

Support Banners:

 

[starlightartist]

Woah, Beedrill This Is Awsome, When It's Finised I Will Definately Play It

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Uhh... the screens are good, but... you should fix the Hero's left pose...

 

[Blue Beedrill]

The problem is i haven't made it yet.
Im going to make a new set for the Hero's.

 

[Satoshi Ookami]

Very nice hack...
I think this'll be really good when it's gonna be finished
By the way... is that May on those screenies or it's male hero with different cap?

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

By the way... is that May on those screenies or it's male hero with different cap?

It's a glitch that happens to me all the time :X

 

[Blue Beedrill]

The bandanna is basically May's look but the rest of it is custom made.

As i said before im still gong to change the OW's.

 

[Blue Beedrill]

New New Newwwwwww................ I have for yous a new Hero OW And a new tiles And 30% of MT. Hikurangi is done. And Heres the new screens

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

The OW's are good.
Here's a suggestion.
For the heroine, you can use the Hero OW you used before.
He looks like a girl to me.

Good luck.

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

That was a boy? O.o
As said, use Ruka's suggestion.

 

[Heizer]

Wow! great hack BB.
I see i have taught you well in the ways of the dragon. hahahahahahahaha......

Nah yea but nice hack your tiling has gotten way better.
The Ows look great and your scripting has improved.

Ill have a look at the hack as soon as i get back see you later...