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I've always loved reading poetry but I've never given it a go myself, so I thought it was about time to try! I didn't write any biggies yet since it's 3am and I don't time at the moment, but if I get round to it then I'll make sure to post them :D These are just some basic smaller poems, mainly only tried out the styles that looked particularly interesting... Lots of feedback would be wonderful (no matter how negative - it's great for improving!) and hope you enjoy them to some degree! I think one or two of them are certainly pretty bad but I'll let you decide that for yourself haha. Also sorry about the titles, I really had no idea for most of them .-.
The Alternative - (Diamonte)
War
Murder, betratyal
Conspiring, unrelenting, devastating
Savaging, destroying -- Pacifying, harmonising
Invigorating, loving, caring
Wholesome, halcyon
Peace
Survival - (Haiku)
Corroding the shell
Time wasting away in sand
Never ending race
Running - (Acrostic)
Running
Under the pressure of time
Never going to stop
Never looking back
Inspiring more than ever
Never saying never
Going on till the very end
Fire & Water - (Mirror Cinquains; Crapsey)
Fire
Warming, glowing
Burning, sparking, growing
Ever setting our hearts alight
Friendship
Alone
When all has changed in an instant
Cooling, calming, waiting
Tepid, silent
Water
Playtime - (Limerick)
On the island of Saint Regalo
The children played screaming, "ee!" and "oh!"
But the teacher was cross
And the laughter was lost
When the children all bit her down low!
The Alternative - (Diamonte)
War
Murder, betratyal
Conspiring, unrelenting, devastating
Savaging, destroying -- Pacifying, harmonising
Invigorating, loving, caring
Wholesome, halcyon
Peace
Survival - (Haiku)
Corroding the shell
Time wasting away in sand
Never ending race
Running - (Acrostic)
Running
Under the pressure of time
Never going to stop
Never looking back
Inspiring more than ever
Never saying never
Going on till the very end
Fire & Water - (Mirror Cinquains; Crapsey)
Fire
Warming, glowing
Burning, sparking, growing
Ever setting our hearts alight
Friendship
Alone
When all has changed in an instant
Cooling, calming, waiting
Tepid, silent
Water
Playtime - (Limerick)
On the island of Saint Regalo
The children played screaming, "ee!" and "oh!"
But the teacher was cross
And the laughter was lost
When the children all bit her down low!