Hey, sorry to be a pest, but could you give me some more tips on getting my RPing up to par? Your RP looks really interesting, but my last app seemed to be rather subpar. What you said about the character pretty much not working was pretty right, and the RP is short on Utopianists, so I totally tossed that SU and wrote up/posted a new one. Could you look at it and give me some more details about how I can improve it and get it up to par with your RP?