I'd read your story, but it is violence and gore and i'm not much for either of those.
I accidentally posted my comment back to you on my own page. Here it is:
Lol me too, my computers having problems with this site. Sorry, the avatars are so confusing! Astinus has a guy as her avatar and Thesis has a girl for his. Why can't we have a picture matching our gender? Or at least have the little caption on the side saying "Isn't (he / she) adorable/beautiful?" or something?
Needed to rant.
Well, if people want to be noted by gender they should have avatar genders to match. They can't blame anyone else for that =P