Eh, it was still a good chapter for a short one. For a moment I thought Gold was post-high when he said the munchies.... XD
Anyways, I'm writing an OT Kanto fic, but I'm mixing it up a little:
-Hero does not start in Pallet Town
-Hero does not get starter from Oak
-Oak probably won't have a role in this story, but I'm still in the thinking process
-Custom characters
-Team Rocket will be more involved than they already are
-Maybe a touch of Manga via violence
-Adding of the realism factor of MUSIC! (Not orchestral, real damn good music like Atreyu, A7X, blessthefall, Escape the Fate, Papa Roach, Saving Abel, etc.)
that's all I got for now.