Venia Silente

Oh wow, what languages do you speak?

I think staying on topic was out the door at the "orgy" phase

I'm enjoying my time off, I was just wondering how its going in general.

Still liking the conversation in the lounge?

Hey Solovino, how's it going?

A-ha, I just found out that you read the whole Journey to Isle of Jade. I don't know many people who read the whole thing, and I can't remeber getting any feedback from you... So, tell me, does my memory fail me or did you give me any comments about that fic?

If you did, I'm sorry for not remembering and I shall go and look for that comment right away. If you did not, I think I'm going to pester you with my army of insane Sentret with flamethrowers until you tell me your whole opinion about that damned fic! xD

Thanks for giving me time off, I was just wondering.

I need to get a hold of my other client, I have yet to receive anything from him.

Hows chapter 2 coming along?

I finally started on a Fic that I had been wanting to write some time, I just couldn't come up with a plot.

Okay, I will tape my eyelids open if I have too to stay awake to make sure that I get the story back to you before I go to sleep.

I am working on your chapter, you can beat me later for taking so long.

Anyway where are you going to end the chapter, I need to know where I can stop editing. Are you going to finish the chapter just before the flashback?

I'm really sorry its taking me so long, Its supposed to be rainy tomorrow, and I don't have to work, so I'll make sure I get the rest of that chapter back to you.

I have no idea what you mean by the last part, and that was my almost exact reaction.

I was like "Ohoo that has toaahhahahahaha."

My character is originally from Lavender ^_^ So they could connect through that maybe

don't forget Brock! He's goin' down! >D

I like funny things, I also like Buizel, so...

Maybe its getting attacked, either way it's getting its but burned.

I have an answer to your question.

I am torn really, I think that either place would be a good place to stop the chapter. The first one is great, it leaves the reader wondering.

However; the way you end it is... great. It shows some character development, and a little but of humor. I think that Syd's recation could be worked on, but it's still worth keeping, so I'm sorry I am not much help here.

Either way, the chapter ends with enough of a cliff hanger for the reader to be chomping at the bit for the next chapter.

Sorry its taking so long with beating, I am working on it.

if it goes against your character, you don't have to. Or we could write it in a way that made it seem forced, lol.
Hahaha
"Where are the Vine Whips coming from!?!?!"

hey cool dude ^_^
I'm looking forward to partnering up in the RP =D

I'm working on your story now, but I have a question: Is "Syd" supposed to speak with bad grammar?

Good to have you back o> With you and jeffb- I mean POB gone for a while, I've done practically nothing else than slacked off. Now maybe I can get something done, too... :laugh:

Lol XD
That was my 3rd/4th option, I retook the test :)

Thanks :D
You are very mature aren't you :)