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  • You've been too sweet. I highly doubt it'll be you who sets me off.

    Most of them are Billie, but I tried to get some with the whole band in them. I got a really good picture of Mike (bass guitar). & Thanks; n_n
    I can gaurantee it. It's bound to happen.

    He's so cute in the video too; I love that song. Their music videos are usually pretty good.
    I was getting some screenshots from 21st Century Breakdown, so I figured that I could do the same with Know Your Enemy.
    I try to be mild, that's why. I'll snap eventually, I'm sure.

    Here's the video that I made the screenshot from. It's Billie Joe Armstrong <3
    You don't know... Lol, bye then. See you in hell.
    Oh wait, you're probably going to heaven, so I guess we won't meet again.
    no, Transations
    Like something to move from one point of the story to another
    like one bit you could be talking about fighting parents but then lets say you atoumaticly switch to a park a mile away. It would be ok if they were seperate chapters. Or wait, It could work if their seperation like so

    Spot 1-..................................................................
    ........................................................................
    -Few line break-
    Spot 2-..................................................
    ...................................................
    .......................
    Even though im not a "Writting Expert"
    Heres some tips im gonna give you.

    1) Try to space after dialouge(?)

    "Wait up!"_I yelled as I ran down the hall, reaching my arms out I finally grabbed around his waist and slid to the floor. "You alright"_He said as he helped me up with a smile on his face.

    2) Try too add some more Transations. I read the last two story bit VM's that you left your sister. I found it kind of hard and confusing between the parts of
    Tai & Sora
    T.K & Kari
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