Hey, I just stopped by to suggest something. It's not really important, it just has to do with your hack thread names. Specifically, one is in all caps and the other uses caps only at the start of each word. I'd just recommend picking a style and applying it to all of your hacks that are related to Pokemon Adventures, just because it has a more "connected" and consistent feel. Again, this is completely unimportant and you can just ignore this.
Also, good job. I make it a point not to VM/PM people with about hacking too often because I'm aware of how often it happens, but it's nice to see a rather furnished manga adaptation, especially since, in my early years as a hacker, all attempts at it were dropped. I don't play many hacks these days, but this one caught my eye, and to see it having progressed this far is something to be proud of.