Hey, sis! Guess what? I reviewed your One Shot "Non Sequitur"...but at fanfiction.net. XD; Here's the review I had written. Sorry that it sucked. ^^;
Hey, Sunnybeam. This is me, Bay. Sorry for the LONG WAIT...been really busy. ^^;
I say, this is an interesting piece. Like how this is all in Mystil's POV. At first in the first part of the story you seemed to jump events from point A to point B a little too fast, like from Mystil's capture to suddenly talking about the battle with Crasher Wake, but I guess you did that to moreso go through the events more important to this short story. The part at Mt. Coronet is what got me. You really portrayed the events and the emotions well.
There's one other thing I want to mention real quick.
"The first time Kalia truly took note of his peculiarity was several weeks later, in the battle with Crasher Wake. The rest had fallen; Staravia, Gastrodon, and Machoke at the end of Gyarados' powerful attacks, Grotle and Luxio from Floatzel's vicious assault."
Real quick: are those Pokemon all of Kalia's or both Kalia's and Lewis' Pokemon?
Anyways, enjoyed this one shot a lot. Looking forward to The Sixth Warrior. ^^