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I agree with Esupio, mixed styles, but what I found bad was the fact that Oak's replacement says absolutel nothing in the lab, 'cept 'pick one'. Also, you repeated text, as in one of the last panels where they say "Go Poke'mon." And the breaking ball, grammar. I had no idea what the Rocket said, or what the girls were saying. Spell out PKMN if your going to use large bubbles I (nice attempt) suggest you use the space. Also, no character edits, you just used regular characters (the better the characters, the better it makes the comic look), Oaks face you can't see, and why would he be wearing a sleeveless shirt, Proffessors do not wear sleeveless shirts.