lilbluedemon
Crunching the numbers!
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Spoiler:Looks good! I like the bridge, and your overall layout is not too crowded nor too empty. The different roofs help the Pokémon Center and Mart stand out from the other buildings (although I'm used to tuning out that particular roof since it's just for gatehouses; maybe use your own design?). And nice use of flowerpots as decoration. I'm already curious about the officer by the Gym and I'm not even playing your game yet. :)
I do think the bridge would look more like a bridge if it had supports. Also, you're not the only person to make Berry trees not-green, but since they're on top of green grass the transparent dots end up clashing with the rest. If you like the red tree and/or want to use the green palette entry for something else, I'd suggest filling them in. Lastly, your main trees have a noticeable horizontal artifact across their middle, looking kind of like a graphical glitch.
Here's the map with those changes to it:
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![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Paradise Green [PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Paradise Green](https://orig10.deviantart.net/1ca1/f/2017/008/1/8/bridge_by_lilbluedemon-dauoiw3.png)
Sorted.
Thanks for the advice <3
Also been scripting the first rival event:
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Paradise Green [PokeCommunity.com] Pokémon Paradise Green](https://orig06.deviantart.net/b3f1/f/2017/008/f/c/rivale_by_lilbluedemon-dauoj26.png)
SOmeone refused this handsome lad of his dreams.
Whatta shame.