Alright, I'm pretty sure something is missing in this RPG idea of mine. I have the whole plot pretty much typed up, but everytime I read it something feels wrong. Think anyone could check through this for plotholes and parts that would make sense to me but be confusing to others?
Believe it or not, there was a time when the world was indeed at peace. A time when humans lived in harmony with pokemon and nature, having little need for more than food, a place to rest, and a good friend to talk with. As the humans advanced, however, they lost sight of the importance of nature and its creatures. The humans moved away from nature, trading the simple life for a more balanced and high tech one. The invention of electricity started a golden age, but it also started their downfall.
War, famine, crime, destruction. Everything the humans did to this earth was killing it from the inside out. And quite frankly, the legendary pokemon were becoming quite tired of this. Long ago they had given the humans a chance to change, to stop polluting and clean up their mess. The humans paid no heed to this warning, and continued with their tinkering of the environment; completely uprooting forests, converting liveable areas into deserts, spreading their biological warfare wherever they could. The rampant destruction of the environment took many lives, including most of the grass and ground pokemon, as well as the mythical Celebi herself. The earth couldn't hold out much longer, and the legendary pokemon became fed up with the humans who had ignored them. They decided to act.
The legendaries' first thought was to restore the world to the way it was. Unfortunately this could not happen. They needed a combined effort from all the legendary pokemon, but sadly Celebi was no longer with them. The pokemon of time had a direct connection to the environment; as it was wasted away, so was she. The only other plan they had was a destructive one, one that could easily backfire. However, they felt they must do something. They only wished they didn't have to resort to this.
And that was it. The humans had been completely annihilated. They were wiped out by an odd plague in which no cure could be found quickly enough before too many victims were taken. It spread like wildfire, killing any human that caught it. This painful sickness completely passed over the pokemon, but no human was left alive. The non-legendary pokemon wept at the loss of their foolish friends, and how the world was when the plague finally lifted. Nearly all the lands were barren; rarely did trees, or any type of plant grow. The waters were polluted, and the skies were always a thick grey color. The combined effort of the humans and the plague had worn Earth out, then left it to rot in the solar system.
The legendaries were unaware of the consequences of the plague they had set on the land, for they had disappeared shortly after releasing it. It almost seemed as if they had given up on this world, or had hid themselves away in shame for being unable to stop the destruction that the humans had caused. Some say these powerful creatures traveled through the solar system to another galaxy, other tales say they are in an eternal sleep, waiting for the time when they can truely be depended on again. Though some say they have spotted fleeting glimpses of Celebi, most passed this off as being highly ill or insane. Celebi is dead after all.
The rest of the species, however, refused to simply give up hope as the humans and legendaries had. Slowly, but surely, they began to rebuild, to restore, what little they could of the barren planet. Those who were strong enough took down the buildings, grinding them into nothing but ancient and often dangerous ruins. The technology and electronics of the human age were lost. The grass, ground, and rock pokemon spread out across what was left of the land, regrowing and nourishing what they could. The water pokemon went out of their way to clean the oceans and other bodies of water, making them clear again. Everyone did what they could, and given time the world became a little bit better, and was slowly recovering itself. Everything was peaceful, and it would remain that way.
At least, they were hoping the peace would last. Unfortunately, something was missing, and that was the presence of human beings. Many thousands of years have passed since the humans or the legendary pokemon have been seen on this planet. However, just because they cannot be seen doesn't mean they don't exist.
Stand and awaken!
You are surrounded by darkness, not knowing just where you are. A small, yet powerful light appears before you. It is soft and welcoming; it flies in circles around you then hovers away from you and bounces up and down, as if beckoning you to follow. Not knowing where else to turn, you follow the tiny ball of light as it flits away from you. Its speed increases, and soon you must break into a sprint in order to keep up with it. The ball suddenly comes to a halt and you stop before it. It hovers for a moment before shivering wildly in its place; a soft laughter filters through the air. The ball of light becomes bigger and brighter, and you shield your eyes as it errupts.
When you open your eyes, you find yourself near the ruins of Celebi's shrine in the dark, gloomy Ilex Forest.* Not really understanding why, you walk inside the building, making your way over, under, and around the ivy covered debris. You come to a seemingly undestroyed area, though the tannish-white walls of the area are still covered in light green vines with upturned leaves. A large, intricately patterend skylight in the ceiling lets the moonlight in, illuminating everything in an eerie light. In the center is a stone altar with odd heiroglyphics carved into it. Of course, the most surprising thing is what you see floating above the altar, and it makes you stop dead in your tracks.
You pinch yourself and feel a stinging pain as you look on at the sight before you, instantly realizing that this is no dream. Floating above the altar, supported by a mystical golden light is none other than a human. She is wearing little more than a plain, white, tank-top like dress that hangs down to her knees. Her long, dark green hair is flowing in an unseen wind, and her eyes are closed peacefully as if she were sleeping. She looks to be no older than ten perhaps; her features are young and child-like.
As you gaze onward, not really believing in what you're seeing a deep, mysterious male voice booms out around you. You hear several muffled gasps and realize that you are not the only one in the room. Before you get the chance to look around, however, your attention is directed back to the girl floating before you.
Listen carefully guardians, I have much to tell you. It is time that you are sent on your mission, the destiny that fate has picked specifically for you six. It is imperative that you pay attention, as I do not have much time. If you wish for the world to be restored to the way it was before, to the time when humans existed and everyone lived in harmony with nature, then you need to listen up. The human girl you see before you is the key to everything, you must guide her to where the legendary pokemon of the old age lie dormant. Only with her help can they restore everything to the way it was. Your journey will be long and difficult; it will be a constant test of your mental and physical capabilities. I am sorry to throw this all at you at once... but surely this cannot be the first time you have seen this girl?
There was a pause of silence as you and the other pokemon begin nodding and murmuring in agreement.
Yes yes, you're remembering now. You all were chosen from birth to lead this girl to where the legendaries sleep to restore the world. However, this doesn't mean you have to. You can choose to ignore your fate-given mission and be on your merry little way. This mission is your destiny, but if you wish it you can try to ignore your destiny and go somewhere else. As stated before, you all are indeed the guardians of this girl, but you can still choose to leave her die here. It is entirely up to you.
Keep in mind that there are others who are aware of what is happening right now. There are those who do not want the humans to return; those who want the world to stay like it is now because they do not understand that it is decaying without the balance of life. They will do anything in their power to stop you from acheiving your goal. I must go now, I wish you the best of luck.
The voice faded out, leaving you and five other very confused pokemon sitting on the ground before the altar. The shimmering light that surrounded the girl faded away as she floated downwards and landed on the altar in a sitting position. Her hair settled down around her as she opened her eyes. Her amber gaze swirled around the room and finally landed on the six pokemon before her. She smiled as if recognizing you and the others instantly, but does not speak.
Now, what will you do? Do you accept your mission, or will you toss it aside?
*For story purposes, Celebi's shrine is a large, temple like building instead of a small little offering place like in the anime. Go poetic license!