[Other FULL] Fire Emblem: The Rift War [OOC] [M]

@Colony, okay, no problem. I'll be sure to tie in that afilliation somehow. Any suggestions in particular? Wouldn't want to make something up accidentally outside the scope of the RP. :)

Edit: I edited my SU to make her an emissary of sorts to the Empire of Belial. Arya's own rise to power serves as an inspiration to Ana and planted within her a secret desire to bring the two realms under closer ties. I think this fits with the character quite nicely and gives her ties to the empire. Let me know if it works. I've put what I added to the SU below for your convenience. :D

[Despite the inherit neutrality found within the realm of Evrend, Ana took note of the rising power that Empress Arya Maven had procured in the past. Her ability to command and take destiny into her own hands was a legend that impressed upon Ana's young mind. Respect formed for the Empress and her empire of Belial. While perhaps disagreeing with some of the tactics employed, Ana came to view the woman as an inspiration of sorts.

With much subtle convincing of her father, she was able to become an emissary of her nation to the empire of Belial. With just such a position, she awaits the opportunity and secretly guards her support of the empire from those within her own kingdom. This was her chance to seize her future, to turn the quiet land of Evrend into something far more than it ever had been before. Belial and their conquests seemed like the future and she was determined to see her own nation not be left out in the cold.]

Beacon you're reasoning for Ana aligning with Belial works for us! Unfortunately we can't just let a class with a cap get snatched up first-come-first-served, so we need to wait before we accept any Lords for sure so others have a chance to try. Thus you are reserved for right now. For the record though the SU is good enough to be accepted :P So you're definitely in the running.

Dr. Ken McMuerte Aster is awesome too! But yadda yadda all that stuff I just said to Beacon reserved.

PS: Geras don't worry about supports, there will be plenty of time for supports to grow during the RP, and besides that they're completely optional to begin with.

@Sephy: I understand completely, thanks for accepting it as a reservation for now. Don't mind me as I go and chase away other potential Lord characters... *whistles innocently* >_>

Edit: I seriously just realized that I had misspelled "throne" in my SU. I really shouldn't have checked for typos so late at night. Oh God... xD

I wouldn't worry about it too much, you never know there's plenty of classes to pick from, you and Ken might not even get any competition. >> I didn't even notice the typo, maybe I shouldn't evaluate SUs so late at night XD

KJNGBJKSDNV:SF:KKNLSF! *tries to reserve a spot*

Name: Gerard. Just Gerard.
Race: Human, of course!
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Class: Villager (Intending on going the Hero path, but we'll see.)

Appearance: (What does your character look like? Please use at least one full paragraph for body and another for clothing. This section and inventory will likely change at least a few times throughout the RP)

Inventory:
Iron Sword of Destiny!: A typical iron sword that Gerard bought using every last ounce of gold he saved in the last month or so.

The Lucky Charm!: Gerard keeps a lucky charm with him. It's a typical piece of silver jewelry with an amethyst embedded in the center. He wears it as a good luck charm, but nobody is quite sure if it is truly lucky. Gerard likes to think so.

Fighting style: Gerard's style can be best described as, "Non-Existent." He is the master of improvised combat and is extremely adaptable, despite his lack of formal education. He comes up with his own strategy at the beginning of every battle, usually involving the environment or something to that effect. He can pick out the most obvious strengths and weaknesses of an opponent and exploit them. When faced with an adaptable strategy such as his own, however, he won't be able to compensate as quickly.

Personality:
Gerard, if anything, is a dreamer. His mother raised him on stories of knightly valor and glory, leading him to have an insatiable hunger for it. If there is anything that this hometown-hero wants to be, it's a hero. He looks up to pretty much any band of warriors that passes through his town, almost blindly. Gerard thinks that as long as you are willing to fight for a cause that he views as important, that makes you a 'good guy.' If you stand against his wish, however, you are considered a villain in his eyes. He is willing to do anything to rise to glory and make his mother proud. He wants to come back to his town as a hero after the war is finished. He has pictures of his mother and father cheering for him, along with the rest of the town's meager population.

Despite his high-flying ambitions, Gerard has literally no formal education. His math skills are rudimentary, meaning he can barely count money as is, and he can't read or write, leaving him at a disadvantage with the rest of the world. He is, however, highly adaptable and a fast learner, so if one made an attempt to teach his something they would meet with great success. He has no view of politics, viewing them as 'Dinner for the pigs.' He prefers his simple lifestyle of farming to a life filled with luxury. It would make him feel uncomfortable to feel overly comfortable. His normal speech can be filled with old-timey sayings that he's heard his parents say over the years, or proverbs that originated in his town. He has little, to no, philosophical views other than his views of 'right and wrong,' although he will occasionally say something that is strangely profound for its simplicity.

Gerard is as friendly as anyone can get. He warms up to people rather quickly. He's easy to talk to, and is embarrassed by nothing. Everything is out in the open with him. Everything. His simple lifestyle has lead to a lack of filter, seeing as he talked to the pigs and cows more often than human beings. Gerard has a love of getting dirty and growing things, remnants of his life on the farm. He is eager to learn of society and it's rules, although he knows they will most likely disagree with his farming lifestyle.

History: (At Least 3 paragraphs, but unless your character is filling a specific role or some history about their parents is relevant don't bother making it too long either, by the beginning of the story none of these characters have done too much.)

Support: Pretty much D with everybody, unless someone wants to collaborate ;)

Can't believe how much of a struggle it was to get this out, but here's the Belian prince's SU. If anybody would like to discuss any possible supports feel free to message me.


Race: Human

Age: 15

Class: Pupil

Appearance:
Felix is unmistakably his mother's son, sharing the same loose-curled, raven-colored hair and piercing violet eyes iconic of the Empress. Unlike his mother, though, Felix wears his hair to only about chin-length. Despite his rare appearances out in the sun without his hood, his skin appears a lightly sun-kissed bronze. Felix's face is still extremely youthful due to his young age, barely displaying any typical masculine features other than the general shape of his face. As for his build, he isn't particularly impressive. He's only 5' 7" and is neither lanky nor athletic, instead falling into some fleshy middle ground only inhabitable by those dedicated to magic. However, the recent increase in his activities has resulted in a subtle hint of muscularity.

Felix's wardrobe is rather peculiar. As many a mage, Felix wears a traditional hooded tunic, pants, and cape, though his is much more practical. Both his tunic and pants are unremarkably grey, save for the small amount of purple trim around the face of the hood. The cape isn't as large as most, only barely reaching his shoulders when flayed out. The underside of the cape is a golden yellow, while the outside of the cape is purple. All of his pupil clothes help promote versatility and mobility. In addition to his pupil clothing, Felix wears a vest, which is the same shade of purple as his cape, for carrying trinkets and other valuables. Finally, a golden belt keeps his clothing in place and his grey shoes are trimmed with a similar golden color as his belt.

Inventory:
Thunder

Black Tome

Allegiance: Belial Empire

Personality:
One would never be able to distinguish Felix as the heir apparent to the Belial Empire by his personality. He displays very little ties to the Empire, specifically the council, due to a personal dislike towards many of the nobles. And although he does truly care for his mother, he feels no obligation to seek her approval. That does not mean he isn't interested in succeeding her, though. Felix does indeed have plans to rule Belial and, if he has his way, the entirety of Vojun. Thanks to his tactical mind and manipulative hands, Felix has a dangerously strong chance of accomplishing his goals. Nothing will prevent Felix from attempting to succeed in his plight either, whether it is conventional morality, a rival nation, or any other perceived obstacle. With that said, though, Felix is still rather unpredictable.

Very few aren't surprised at any odd behavior or action done by Felix, and even fewer actually expect him to do these odd incidences. It isn't unheard of him to make a complete 180 degree flip on a situation with little to no warning at all. Some say it's his wild card mentality, which has him often exploring unconventional approaches to gain a new outlook or improve upon his perspective. Others simply say he's as insane as his mother. His behavior is only made harder to guess since he almost never indicates any specific emotion, instead displaying a façade of nothingness. Felix's hard to read emotions have led many within the nobility to ponder his intentions, but only a few close confidants understand the true reason behind his calmness.

Not a single living soul ever knows what's going on in Felix's head, and for good reason. He's troubled by the thoughts of spirits, something he was told was linked to dark magic. The constant pestering and berating of voices has hardened Felix's ability to think, enabling him to remain collective in even the most distracting of situations. Occasionally, he even gains insight from the voices, learning of things that should otherwise be unknown to the world. These spirits have offered him even more knowledge, but at a price that he is unready to pay. Even still, the information gained has become a subject of motivation for his future plans.

History:
Never knowing his father, Felix's parentage is an enigma. His mother, Arya, was never documented as ever being in any relationship. There were no lovers, no princes, no political engagements. Rumors spread across Belial as to whom the possible father could be, but only outrageous stories surfaced. One such story implied that Felix was sired by something otherworldly, spirits to be precise. The rumor became somewhat pronounced due to the shamanistic nature of the Empress, but the Empress' allies quickly eliminated the rumor to prevent paranoia. These rumors persisted well after Felix was born, exemplified during his early childhood, which ultimately led to his apprenticeship to a retired sage.

Felix was unusual in that he rarely behaved like a child. He never pouted or threw any fits of rage, rarely cried as an infant, and spent more time in books than questioning his surroundings. It was clear to everyone that Felix's mental state was abnormal. Due to Felix's peculiarity, Tommen Aster, an ex-councilor on the council of seven, became interested in the boy. Eventually, Tommen approached Arya about apprenticing Felix, to which she agreed.

After Tommen received Arya's approval, he brought Felix into his care to learn the ways of sage. Felix was only six at the time, but he would spend the next eight years learning from the retired sage. At first, he was unable to understand the concepts of magic, but as he studied, magic came to him with increasing ease. Even so, Felix's magic was not anything considered strong, especially not for his lineage. Tommen sensed that there was a reason behind Felix's weak abilities, since it was unheard of for someone to be so adapt at learning magic and yet so weak. Unable to find a solution or cause to the aforementioned problem, Tommen shifted Felix's studies. Felix began to learn more about strategy and magic as a whole, all in an effort to prepare him should he not be a traditional mage. Like his previous studies, he quickly caught on and excelled in his application of the new knowledge. Tommen was truly surprised by Felix's progress. This would lead him to inquire Felix about his ability to learn such advanced material so easily. Felix simply explained that there were voices that aided him. Realizing the potential danger of what Felix had revealed, Tommen informed Arya of Felix's association with spirits. She dismissed his concerns and canceled Felix's apprenticeship, implying that she had already known.

Now free of his structured learning environment, Felix was guided by his own interest to learn. He focused on three primary subjects including anima magic, dark magic, and Vojun's history, all of which were suggested to him by the spirits. Three years passed by, and in that time his cunning had developed tremendously. The ancient strategies employed by various kingdoms among the annals of time had conveyed to Felix a most wicked path to war. Unfortunately, Felix's studies were cut short by his mother and the council of seven.

Empress Arya had proposed for Felix to take a position among the council of seven, though the council objected. She then suggested a trial to prove Felix's worth, to which the council agreed. She furthered the movement by allowing the council to decide on the trial's task. They decided that Felix would be given a band of soldiers, of which he or Arya could select, to take a region on Aecilia's borders. With no choice in the matter, Felix accepted his fate. He went through a rigorous selection process and, with a few choice additions by Arya, had his regiment march towards the objective. Now, Felix and his troops are warring on the brink of Aecilia, pressing to succeed in Felix's mission, both the one given to him by his mother and his personal one.

There are many anecdotes that can be found within Felix's past, such as his experiences with his ward, but for now they shall remain unknown.

Support: TBA (C)

Elswin (C): Felix developed a friendly rivalry with Elswin during a squad training exercise. They were leading opposing teams, and even though they served on different sides, they both recognized each other's talents.

Anastasia (D): Felix and Anastasia have only met once, specifically during one of Belial's political galas. Their meeting was far from the basic meet and greet that normally occurred at such events. No, it was a meeting where they discovered that their objectives were beneficial to one another, and that they would be more likely to achieve their goals with cooperation. Still relative strangers, they danced around each other in a dangerous tango, both trying to get what they wanted from the other. Being new allies, there is room for growth and discovery. Each person's knowledge of the other is vague, but their desires share a common trajectory that propels them forward together.

Race: Human (Beorc)

Age: 19

Class: Prince

Appearance: Leon definitely looks the part of Aecilia's prince, standing at 6'2 and cutting an impressive figure. His skin is naturally bright, but he has a light tan from extensive time outdoors. Like most of his family Leon's eyes have deep amber irises, and his short, messy hair stands out in any crowd because of it's unique color. His ancestry can be noted at a glance for someone well informed thanks to the Hadaways being known for having green hair, Leon's hair in particular is a lighter spring green. His handsome face sports strong, chiseled features, helping him look regal, but not pampered. The rest of his body is fairly toned and muscular from exercise and training, but none of him is bulky, all in all he's burlier than someone would expect from a prince.

Leon pulls off the "warrior prince" look pretty well. When dressed for combat his upper body is adorned in a long-sleeved white cotton shirt with a light blue brigandine over the shirt and a light blue surcoat with white trim over it all. The surcoat has small leather pauldrons the same color as the rest of it on the shoulders. His forearms are garbed in leather-padded steel bracers of a slightly darker hue held on by red leather straps with black finger-less gloves on his hands. He wears a sturdy cape on his back that's dark green on the outer side and crimson on the inner side, with a thick hood folded up just under the top of the cape so it can function as a cloak in harsh weather. His sword belt is also crimson, and goes around his surcoat as well, to keep the upper half of it taut while the bottom half can flow freely so as not to inhibit his mobility. He has a plain brown scabbard attached to the belt for his Rapier and a small dagger on the belt at his back.

Leon has simple white pants that are slightly loose for comfort and freedom of movement on his legs, leading into large brown boots that go halfway up his shins. He also has small steel plates used as shin guards right above the boots. When he has time to adequately prepare for a battle ahead of time Leon also has a small buckler strapped to his left forearm. This buckler is no good for regular blocking or projectile projection, and is almost purely for parrying (which for Leon is basically back handing the oncoming melee weapon as hard as he can to knock his enemy off balance.) Leon also wears a gold-chain necklace with a small, barely noticeable pendant holding what appears to be a perfectly round, smooth ruby. The pendant doesn't make much of a visual impact when one looks at him, but he becomes defensive and dodgy if asked about it, merely explaining that it's important to him.

Inventory: Rapier

Cloth-wrapped bundle

Parrying dagger

Leon's Pendant

Allegiance: The Kingdom of Aecilia

Fighting Style: Some people have called Leon's fighting style "the Dance of Death" the name really bothered him at first, but after ruminating on it's meaning he's come to appreciate it. Thanks to all his dueling practice, and the myriad of war games he's played Leon's no one trick pony. He excels at graceful fencing as well as two-handed swordplay, and both manage to blend themselves together into a single form within Leon. He always "dances" around his opponents at first, doing his best not to leave any openings in his own defenses while poking and prodding at his opponents'. As soon as Leon catches a single flaw in his enemy's movements his apparent timidity makes a complete face turn and he goes one-hundred percent on the offensive. Once Leon starts on his attacks he keeps it up with almost feral ferocity until either he's won, he hits a brick wall in his opponent's defenses, or is forced back into defending by superior skill.

Being a Hadaway, Leon has had extensive practice with multiple weapons, not just swords, especially bows. However he's not yet confident enough with any other tools of war to fight with anything other than swords, although he can use just about any sword put in front of him. When fighting an opponent with a fighting style too similar to his own Leon draws his parrying dagger to increase his options and throw his enemies off balance.

Personality: Leon's not the best at first impressions, he's polite and cordial, but he's never had a thing for being formal. He has a minor inferiority complex thanks to his brother always being so much more "princely" than him, and won't let anyone get away with talking down to him unless they can prove they're right. Above all else he's determined to prove he's worthy of his bloodline, and the trust of his people, and of course to become a great warrior who can protect his home. He is not always arrogant, but thanks to all the time he's been taught the values of fighting for one's beliefs he can sometimes be rather broad in his judgement of people who are reluctant to fight. He is a kind soul however, and generally takes it hard if he realizes he's actually offended someone without good reason, and he tries never to insult someone's beliefs.

Although Leon can be very diplomatic when he needs to be, he hates politics, he sees them as a never-ending line of lies where the first person to be honest and fair suffers for it. He would much prefer to protect his people with his own hands, and leave the political dithering to the coots and croans in their embroidered tunics. Leon wants to know everybody around him, he feels that the more of his comrades he knows and the better he knows them, the better he could lead them and the more they could learn for each other. Sometimes this can make him seem a bit nosy, but he believes part of a leader's burden is shouldering those of his allies. Most of Leon's pride is personal, not based on the fact that he's royalty, and he never looks down on those "of lesser birth" Which makes him as popular as his brother among Aecilia's common folk.

Despite all of Leon's healthy morals and philosophies on being a leader, he doesn't have a great mind for long-term strategy. He has a great head for tactics, he can rally a group to react to an attack at a moment's notice, but if he ever tries to plan something ahead in the long term, he gets too caught up in the details and his strategy suffers for it. Tack on to that the boy's inexperience and it might seem quite laughable to any veteran that he's been put in charge of other warriors, but as anybody knows everyone has to start somewhere. Thankfully Leon is a great judge of character, he excels in more practical negotiations because he's great at detecting whether somebody is trustworthy or not, what may be troubling them, and what the other side may want in a trade-off.

Leon's favorite academic subject is by far history, he's read nearly every historical text in Aecilia. His knowledge on Vojun's history surpasses most people by far, thanks not only to how much he's read, but because every time he's ever been around Manaketes he's listened to as much as they had to tell. He thinks a lot about the less privileged people of Aecilia, both because he believes royalty always should and because of his disdain for politics and some of the aristocracy.

History: The story of the errant prince starts much like you'd expect royal beginnings to be, that is to say he never wanted for food, or shelter, or attention. Leon was born the second son of the king and queen of Aecilia, and they were so happy to have another child, one who needn't be groomed quite so extensively as the kingdom's proper heir: his older brother Elwyn. Of course the young prince was not allowed to simply play around either, a large chunk of every day in Leon's young life was dedicated to studying, and practicing dueling with Elwyn using wooden swords.

When Leon grew a bit older he graduated to war games, which he excelled at whenever he was against someone other than his brother. He had a knack for thinking very quickly on his feet, he could change tactics at a moments notice to knock his opponents off guard. Sadly, it seemed tactics were all he excelled at when it came to war, the boy experience very little success at chess or anything else that required too much planning ahead. Overall though Leon showed a good amount of promise as a leader, he was a competent warrior and an excellent speaker, however there was one glaring issue.

Leon's utter disdain for politics and politicians has always been the biggest wall between him and proving his worth as second-in-line to the throne. Ever since the first time Leon was sent to tag along with Elwyn on some diplomatic visits, to him every greeting and gift anybody from the various aristocracies offered was hollow and merely to try and increase their standing with their larger neighbors. After two tag-alongs Leon was already fed up with politics, he still supported diplomacy but that seed of disgust led to further problems and arguments with his parents, as well as Aecilia's own aristocracy. He kept following in his brothers footsteps and going with his father's wishes as best as he could without going on anymore visits of state but he still quickly became the black sheep of the Hadaways in the eyes of many important people.

The only visits of state Leon ever enjoyed were those to the city hidden in the mountains, he found the Manaketes intensely fascinating. He was awed by the power and wisdom many of them showed, and learned a lot from them, especially about the past. Although he was not so enamored with their princess as he was with their people as a whole, Leon gained a great deal of knowledge, and respect for the dragons during his short visits.

Over time Elwyn proved himself an excellent heir again and again, until he'd gained such prominence in Aecilia that he became the lead general of Aecilia's army. As proud as Leon was of his brother, it didn't really help his own situation that much, people had been comparing him to Elwyn for a long time. Now that Elwyn had risen up so high that even people who had been impressed by his younger before simply saw how far apart their accomplishments were. Despite his intelligence, talents, and morals Leon grew lower and lower in the eyes of those who considered themselves important enough to judge him until there was only one choice left to his father.

Only a week ago Eldridge Hadaway announced to his retainers, advisers, and the most influential families of Aecilia that Prince Leon would be put in charge of a small band of soldiers and other warriors to investigate the recent reports of trouble on the kingdom's borders. It should serve as an adequate test of Leon's leadership abilities, and after he finally proved himself to his 'peers' he could start becoming a bigger part of Aecilia as he should have been.

Support: Adina - D


Aster - C


William - D


Elswyn - A

(More supports will be added as the story goes and characters bond, and of course I'm still open if anybody would like to work something out to already have a support with Leon before the story begins.

I'mma move this here. How does this look so far?

Name: Gerard Kellic
Race: Human, of course!
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Class: Villager (Intending on going the Hero path, but we'll see.)

Appearance: (What does your character look like? Please use at least one full paragraph for body and another for clothing. This section and inventory will likely change at least a few times throughout the RP)

Inventory:
Iron Sword of Destiny!: A typical iron sword that Gerard bought using every last ounce of gold he saved in the last month or so.

The Lucky Charm!: Gerard keeps a lucky charm with him. It's a typical piece of silver jewelry with an amethyst embedded in the center. He wears it as a good luck charm, but nobody is quite sure if it is truly lucky. Gerard likes to think so.

Allegiance: Aecilia

Fighting style: Gerard has a strange style of fighting. He has better reflexes than most fighters, not to mention his more-than-formidable endurance, and a good deal of strength in his arms, but he possesses almost no speed when it comes running. He prefers to stand his ground and fight rather than run away and deal as much damage as he can. His ability to parry or dodge an attack is better than most because of his reflexes.

Personality:
Gerard, if anything, is a dreamer. His mother raised him on stories of knightly valor and glory, leading him to have an insatiable hunger for it. If there is anything that this hometown-hero wants to be, it's a hero. He looks up to pretty much any band of warriors that passes through his town, almost blindly. He is easily impressionable, and is likely to take up the tendencies of others. Gerard thinks that as long as you are willing to fight for a cause that he views as important, that makes you a 'good guy.' If you stand against his wish, however, you are considered a villain in his eyes. He is willing to do anything to rise to glory and make his mother proud. He wants to come back to his town as a hero after the war is finished. He has pictures of his mother and father cheering for him, along with the rest of the town's meager population.

Despite his high-flying ambitions, Gerard has literally no formal education. His math skills are rudimentary, meaning he can barely count money as is, and he can't read or write, leaving him at a disadvantage with the rest of the world. He is, however, highly adaptable and a fast learner, so if one made an attempt to teach his something they would meet with great success. He has no view of politics, viewing them as 'Dinner for the pigs.' He prefers his simple lifestyle of farming to a life filled with luxury. It would make him feel uncomfortable to feel overly comfortable. His normal speech can be filled with old-timey sayings that he's heard his parents say over the years, or proverbs that originated in his town. He has little, to no, philosophical views other than his views of 'right and wrong,' although he will occasionally say something that is strangely profound for its simplicity.

Gerard is as friendly as anyone can get. He warms up to people rather quickly. He's easy to talk to, and is embarrassed by nothing. Everything is out in the open with him. Everything. His simple lifestyle has lead to a lack of filter, seeing as he talked to the pigs and cows more often than human beings. Gerard has a love of getting dirty and growing things, remnants of his life on the farm. He is eager to learn of society and it's rules, although he knows they will most likely disagree with his farming lifestyle.

History: (At Least 3 paragraphs, but unless your character is filling a specific role or some history about their parents is relevant don't bother making it too long either, by the beginning of the story none of these characters have done too much.)

Support: Pretty much D with everybody, unless someone wants to collaborate ;)

@<Challenger>: The SU looks fine so far, though the Fighting Style is actually meant for Lord SU's, since Lord's have been known to use almost every kind of weapon type there is. Also, you seem to be missing the Allegiance section of the SU. The options for the Allegiance section can be found on the IP, but for convenience's sake they are Aecilia, Belial, and Neutral.

A bit of side note, though. I'm personally not a huge fan of one name characters unless it makes sense, and there isn't anything shown yet that justifies Gerard not having a last name. Granted, this is more of an opinion than anything else, so it wouldn't really affect your SU's judging.

Duly noted. Thanks Colony. But I DID have allegiance there, but something happened. The gods hid it from me. I'll continue to work on it. Thanks.

I'm sorry if the indents are bad for you they aren't for me. Sorry if I change my character around a lot before finalizing, it's hard for me to be happy with a character and I really get picky about the littlest things regarding their appearance.

Is there a spot for one moar, if there is i would like to reserve

Yes gentleman, there's definitely more room in the RP, and hopefully we can get some more Belial people soon.

Chuckles I have a few problems with what you've put up so far, although some of this may be because I should have been more specific in the descriptions. Almost all Laguz are fundamentally against using human weapons unless they absolutely have to, and even then most of them aren't proficient with them, the most you're likely to ever see are daggers strapped to belts for skinning animals and such. Basically the whole thing about him finding the golden holy sword would never happen because, because the Laguz would never have such a thing. And even if the Laguz did like to use weapons, if you look up on the OP I mentioned characters would be restricted to plain iron weapons at first, nobody can just have some epic holy weapon. In addition I believe I mentioned in the description of Fyrsang that the mountains are the territory of the Bird Laguz, the beast Laguz prefer the valleys and plains and such.

I am afraid these criticisms seem to be a core part of the history sample you've put up so far, so you'll likely not be able to use much if any of it.

Thanks, I've decided against the Laguz character and regarding the holy sword. I should have been more in-depth. It wasn't a gift or weapon for Wukong to use but something that was of religious significance and a totem (if that's the word) belonging to the tribe and was to test if they were worthy or such.
also another question, what is the minimum age. Like I'm not talking extremetys like 6 or 7 but less crazy. i.e. 16 or 17?

When do you guys think you'll be starting the RP? I was thinking about making an SU but I don't want to hold things up.

Don't people want to make some Belial characters? *cough cough* *wink wink* :3

Chuckles I'm glad to hear you didn't plan on your character using a sword, but I still can't imagine any Laguz ever attaching any symbolic importance on a weapon either. I'd say the minimum age would probably somewhere around there, there shouldn't be too many people below the age of 18 since children don't generally fight in wars, not even in the FE Multiverse :P

And Kiklion don't you worry about holding us up too long, with the current balance between characters for Aecilia and Belial I seriously doubt we'll be starting too soon. I'm sure you'll be fine.

Ill post my SU soon, Ive been constructing him, but i havent really sat down to finish it. also with the alliegience, is it either Belial or Aecelia (prob spelled it wrong) or is it any faction

@Tyler1616: As I understand it, the only sides are Belial, Aecilia, or Neutral. The war is between Belial and Aecilia, and I imagine all the other factions will get drawn into the war eventually on one side or the other, so even if you pick neutral you'll probably have to pick one of the other two eventually, as it says in rule 2 of the RP.

Putting this here for now