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Mia appeared from the hotsprings after taking a bath. She noticed the little Pichu they had met earlier in the cave sitting in a corner. She spotted Karzai walking away from Exploud and Carrick talking to Tirus. All seemed good at the moment. She went to the board to notice that the other two had been added to the board and Karzai had been moved up. Then Sparky's status caught her attention.

"Researcher?" Miao whispered. "Don't tell me I have to also work with a mouse." She turned to look over Sparky. Ok so she was a cat Pokemon after all..and he was a mouse Pokemon. Cat+Mouse=....well she was sure anyone could guess that. She just sure hoped that he wouldn't be in her room either. She decided that she might as well introduce her self.

She walked over to Sparky, holding out a paw. "The name's Miao, but you can call me Mia," she meowed. "Seeing you're researcher, I guess me being Spy and Information Officer..we're going to have to work somewhat together."

My family would so kill me for this if they knew....
 
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Rho couldn't help but smile as he heard Miao whispering to herself. "Don't tell me I have to also work with a mouse." Rho laughed, startling her. "You got lucky, I have to work with a duck." Rho walked off to his room where Karzai was waiting. He plumped down on his bed and immediatly passed out out of fatigue. He dreamed of all the pokemon he had met in the guild, his new friends. He saw Carrick and Tara, Nick and Karzai, Miao and Sparky, and everone else. This was the first good dream he had had in years...
 
As soon as they got the stone the cave seemed to be colapsing so they took the stone back to the guild where they were greated by a chansey in a frantic mood "Oh dear!! Oh dear!! look at you poor kids, hurry eat this Heal Herb, and Root Powder. Oh dear! oh dear!! Better give you some shower too, look at the dirt, they can affect your health! watch out for germs, now be good and have a shower go away shoo!" Briane took the hearbs and powder but it tasted horible! He whent to the storage to find something to replace the horible flavor, he found four ripe tamato berries but those would make the flavor worse, he ended up eating a couple of sitrus berries while walking to the hotsprings for a bath. He waited for a spot to open and ate the last of his berries.

After his bath he headed back to his doorm for a good night's sleep. He got there to find Costali was'nt there yet so he decided to just lay in bed.
 
Carrick listened as Trisu spoke "well, i just wanted to say...that i'm sorry."That was a REALLY bad time for me to show up, and i couldn't even help.." he trailed off. He turned away, and walked towards his dorm, his head hung low. Carrick didn't knew what the problem was and has Miao was keeping Sparky entertained Carrick headed towards Tirus's dorm and said " It's okay everyone makes mistakes, i know it was not against the protocol to you to come at the cave all of a sudden, but it's fine i guess you were only trying to help, now have a good sleep and think of a better tomorrow okay goodnight tirus. Saying this Carrick walked to his room; Carrick still felt a bit uneasy he felt something strange inside him, not weakness but some sort of strange power.
 
Karzai woke up the next morning. It was still somewhat dark, the sky orange as the bright sun peeked over the horizon. He walked into the Mess Hall, making himself an assorted berry platter. He sat down and slowly chewed at the berries. It seemed he was the only one awake, so he went to take a quick look at the town, hoping there would be something to do. Hearing Kangaskhan the secong he walked out the door, he hurried to the storage facility. Kangaskhan was rummaging through box after box in her shop when Karzai showed up.

"What's wrong?" Karzai asked, expecting her to have simply misplaced something.

"Oh, it's horrible! Something very important has been stolen from me!" Karzai wasn't thrown off by this, though he was surprised.

"By who?" He asked, his voice suddenly in a much more serious tone.

"Some local gang of Skorupi," she said hurriedly, "they just left for the forest east of here."

"Alright," said Karzai, "I'm on it. I'll be back by sunset." Karzai hurried, stopping at the guild for a couple of Oran Berries and to leave a note, informing the rest of the guild of the situation. He went off to the forest to find the Skorupi.
 
SU

Name : Falco
Nickname : Flash
Nature : Hasty
Guildname : Flame
Gender: Male

History:Falco was an average Pokemon looking for his own true purpose, he never like to stand out but always loved to help. When he first heard about the Guild, he never though much about it, in fact he didn't think it made much of a difference because he doesn't believe in true justice based on all of the trials he went through in the past.

He finally had a different view about the guild when he saw a little Oddish stuck in a tree, he truly did not want to help it but everyone knew of his amazing ability to jump. He finally decided to save the helpless Oddish. His entire town saw him as a hero telling him he has the making of a true guild member this finally changed his view on the guild.

Personality : Falco is quiet and to him self, he doesn't have much friends and hates meeting new people. He hates helping people and hates to be offered help, this is all because he hates to feel needed and also hates to feel weak. Falco is very smart and tactical when he want to be, he is also very helpful when he's not being selfish (Like the oddish incident, for example)

Every since learning about the guild, he has learned to put his abilities to good use. Since helping the Oddish, he went on to be a somewhat-hero. He also loves to feel useful and if he's not helping people then he is most likely training and enhancing his abilities for future tasks.

Species : Chimchar

Appearance : Falco looks like any other Chimchar, but their are things that make him different, like the fact that his fire burns almost twice as hard as other Chimchar. Also he is known for his scar on his eye from a fateful encounter with a Zangoose that he fought to save a helpless Seviper. Falco also has harder fangs from eating hard food throughout the years. Also eyes are more serious and dark than the usual Chimchar.

Quote : "Got it?"

Motto : Put others before you, and you will be rewarded

RP sample ( Just now made up, based on saving Oddish scenario)

Falco usually went to the City to find a quick meal when he didn't feel like eating his hard
food found in the wild. Falco heard a commotion coming from the lake close to a small shop

"Someone has to get my Oddish out of that TREE!" said a Vileplume in anguish.

"Huh" Falco said running to the scene.

Falco saw a moderately high tree with an Oddish in it, his first though was, "How did it get up there"
he looked around to see if there was any effort to save it, but no one was doing anything. He noticed
everyone looking at him with the corners of their eye, hoping he would do something but to afraid to
ask.

"ALRIGHT ILL SAVE IT!" Falco yelled with all the tension in the air upon his arrival.

Falco walked up to the tree and looked up with a look as if he was going to regret his decision, he
looked down and got into a jumping position. He took one great leap and then another and another
from branch to branch, until he got to the Oddish.

"Are...are you hear to...save me?" Said the Oddish as if it were afraid of Falco.

"No Im hear to eat you" Said Falco in sarcasm as he grabbed the Oddish and jumped down from the
tree. Everyone was surprised that Treeko actually took the time of his life to save someone else, they were all to shocked to say a word, until the Vilplume let out a loud burst of relief

"THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH!" said the Vileplume as she grabbed the Oddish.

"No problem" Said Falco looking around at the surprised crowd.

"YAY! OUR HERO!" Everyone yelled as Falco walked away from the scene to find a snack as if the
situation never happened, but deep down Falco was happy he got all of the attention.
 
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Briane woke up and headed to the storage room to find some breakfast and noticed a spilt basket of oran berries so he picked them up. For some reasom he felt like something was going to happrn so he took some and a couple of cheri berries for breakfast. He headed for the table and noticed a plate with a leter next to it he read the letter. It said he whent out to the forest to go retrive a item that is important to the storage keeper in the town, a gang of scorupi took it. It was signed by Karzai. He thought, who is karzai again? Oh right it was the psyduck! He ran outside and headed for the town.

"Going in alone was a bad idea, he could've at least woken someone up!" then it hit him, he did the same thing... "Too late to go back now..." He made it into town and rushed over to Kangaskan, "Have you seen a psyduck around?!" "Yes he rushed over to the forest over there to go stop gang of scorupi that stole something precious to me" she replied. "Thank you" Briane yelled as he ran to the forest to go find Karzai. He found him quickly becuse he had'nt gone far he caught up to him. "Hey, I found your note and rushed over to help" Briane said.
 
Tirus had gotten up quite early the next morning, earlier than most of the other guild members, to take a walk in the nearby forest, to think. Do I really belong here? He thought. After a couple of hours had gone by, and the sun shone through the canopies of the forest, he decided it was about time to head back and get some breakfast. On his way back, however, he noticed a group of rather frantic skorupi running in the opposite direction of town, a few of them constantly looking behind the group, most likely scouting for witnesses--they didn't see Tirus, however.

When they got close enough, Tirus leaped out of the foliage and stopped the group in it's tracks, an intimidating look on his face.

"where you guys headed?" he asked nonchalantly.
The skorupi looked confused, as if none of them knew what to say, until the biggest one came up and said, "none of your Combees-wax, now move before we have to hurt you."

Tirus wasn't alarmed at first, but he then realized that he was outnumbered four-to-one. Oops, he thought, I shoulda thought this one through.

Then, he noticed a couple of pokemon coming towards them--it was karzai and briane! They seemed to be searching for something; or someone!!

"karzai! Briane!" he yelled, "I think I found what you guys are looking for!"
 
"Ok this is the address that the typhloson gave me," Rehoma thought to himself as he came across a door. He walked in the unlocked door to find a lounge that had a table in the middle of the room. Rehoma looked around the room to see if anyone were there, but the place was empty "I will wait until someone shows up then I will ask them if I'm at the right place.
 
Karzai was glad that someone had come after reading his letter. Briane was probably going to be a big help with the Skorupi if push came to shove. He looked down and noticed some footprints, but they weren't from Skorupi. 'Do they have some sort of leader?' Karzai thought to himself. He followed the footprints and heard someone calling for him and Briane. It was the new guy, Tirus. These must be his footprints.

"I think I found what you guys are looking for!" Tirus exclaimed, pointing.

Karzai looked in the direction he was pointing to, and saw a gang of Skorupi. Four, and one was holding a box labled "Fragile". Karzai wondered what it could be. Tirus turned his head away from him and Briane to the Skorupi. The Skorupi looked intimidated.

"You'll be sorry..." their leader said, slowly putting down the box. The Skorupi ran into the bushes.

"I wonder what he meant by that." Karzai said, as Briane walked over and picked up the box.

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"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU LEFT IT!?" screamed a Pokemon, hidden by shadow.

"We're real sorry, boss" said the Skorupi, weakly "We'll get it back."

"NO," the Drapion said as he stepped out from behind the shadows. "I'LL GET MY REVENGE ON THEM MYSELF."
 
Mike woke up to the warm sun on his belly. The Totodile groggily got out of bed and went on over to the mess hall to get some Oran Berries. After filling himself up, he noticed a Pichu with a strange whistle around his neck. He decided to go and introduced himself. "Hi, I'm Mike!".
 
Rehoma sat there for what seeemed to be a pretty long time bofore anyone showed up. After a little while the door that he went through opened before revealing the pokemon that opened it. It was a pichu that looked like it had something around its neck. "Hi, I am Rehoma is this the place that the cool guild is located. Also, may I ask what is that around your neck."
 
"Here you go," said Briane, handing the box over to Kangaskhan. They started walking back to the base. Briane and Tirus went on to do their own things around the guild. Karzai was greatful they had shown up, or else he probably would have had to fight the Skorupi. He looked over and saw a Charmander talking to Sparky. Karzai had forgotten that he was a relatively new member himself, although he hardly considered that now with all of the new guys.

Karzai walked back to his room to take a nap. He noticed that Tirus, Briane, Sparky and the new guy were the only ones awake. He would have to get that Charmander's name after his nap, he thought to himself. He walked in to see Rho, still in the same position he'd fallen in the bed in the night before. Karzai layed down on his bed, and drifted off into a deep rest.

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"RUNT!" called the Drapion.

"Y-yes, s-s-sir!" the smallest Skoupi said, shivering in fear.

"GO FIND OUT WHEN THAT GROUP WILL BE LEAVING THEIR BASE NEXT," he said "I DON'T WANT ANY INTERFERENCE NEXT TIME."

"R-r-right away, sir!" the Skorupi yelled, and skurried off down the woods.
 
OOC : Okay Everyone Wake up! You all have slept enough xD. Also,

Killet513, Falcon Wing are Accepted.

Waiting for Spark166 to complete his SU
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IC :

Carrick woke up, realising he was very late, he had a letter beside him, probably dropped by a pelipper through the window opening, it read.

Dear Children,

I hope you all are doing fine, i'm fine and so are my allies, we are very much doing good in Virgo Town, pokemon hear are as caring as Treasure Town, there has been no sign of Darkrai niether of his minions lately but we are still working hard and i hope you are doing good too. I don't have much to write right now so i just hope the best for you, i hope everything's fine and i have send some new recruits to the base, and i find someone more capable i'll let him or her join Pokepals for now goodbye

Your's loving
Cresselia.

Carrick was overjoyed reading it, he went to the centre and saw Sparky, A new Charmander, and Mike standing he read them the later. And hurried to ring the Announcement bell so that everyone would wake up. Seeing the time, Carrick knew he woke up late, and other's too were sleeping still, he hoped that the bell would wake them up. " I hope all of them wake up soon, anyway, i wonder where chimecho is." Carrick thought, he also felt a strange power surging within him, he wondered if it had anything to do with the stone which shot some light at him.
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Falco woke up in the morning with a strange feeling. He finnaly felt as if he had a purpose after the Oddish incedent, he was also exited about the Guild.

"Time to check things out" He said jumping out of his bed and grabbing one of his hard fruits he is so known to eat, he took a big and hard chunk out of it an ran out of the door. He saw all of the new and strange Pokemon in the Guild he had never saw, making him feel as if there was a whole world of wonders, which made him more exited to join the Guild.
 
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As Rehoma sat there talking about the guild a mudkip ran up and read a letter of to us. Then the mudkip rang this awful bell. Rehoma looked over at him to see him. The look on his face said that he was worrying about something. Rehoma stood from where he was sitting and walked over to the pokemon

"Hi, I'm new and you seem to know where things are. My name is Rehoma, in that letter did she say how many new recrutes there were?" Rehoma asked worried he was the only one. Noy waiting for a reply because the scent of fresh berries caught him. He followed his nose to where it seemed to be a room, and it was. But there is something aboutthis room. It had so many berries Rehoma couldn't count them all. After looking at the berries he got three cheri berries and went back to where he first came in. He went back over to his new found friends to talk to them some more.
 
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Falco was the only person not conversing with anyone, he wouldn't even know what to say. He looked around at all of the noise there was and then he looked up at the Mudkip, the look on his face was a nervous look.

"Where do I even start?" He said as he looked at his own hand with the little piece of the Hard Berry that was still in it. He threw it in the air and caught it in his mouth and started chewing, then he walked towards the rest of the crowd.
 
*grumble**grumble*
"uhhhhh..." tirus moaned, " I need something to eat."
He headed over to the mess hall as fast as he could, and when he got there, he immediately took a few sitrus berries and began eating. He walked back to his room, his arms and mouth full of food, and noticed a few new(er) members: a couple charmanders, and a treecko.
"hm," he said, and didn't give it much thought.


After finishing his food, Tirus lay in his bed staring at the ceiling.
Gosh, I'm bored..., he thought, I wonder what's to do around here?
That's when it hit him. "wait," he said, "I'm not here to fool around." Tirus proceeded to go out to the main hall and check the missions board to see what mission he could do. A notice on the far right side of the board caught his eye.

WANTED: DRAPION and his gang of theiving SKORUPI
Possible Location: Deep within Treasure Woods
Reward: ???

Those skorupi, he thought, could they be the ones described on the board? He took the notice down and rushed over to karzai's room.
"karzai!! I think we got our lead on those skorupi we saw!" he said, while holding up the notice.
 
Falco walked over to the group of Pokemon only about a foot away from them, he felt socially awkward so didn't want to join in their conversation.

"What am I doing here!" he said turning around. He felt his stomach grumbling from the lack of nutritious food, all he ate for the last two days was the hard berries which he was getting tired of. He looked around for any food, he felt delusional as if his vision was blurring from all of the unfamiliar things he was seeing as if he was in a different world.

He took a deep breath and yelled, "Wheres some food around here!" He yelled over the sound of his stomach grumbling trying to get someones attention.
 
OOC: Lot's of dialouge in this one.

"Where's some food around here?" screamed a chipmunk in a superhero costume, "I think we have a lead on those Skorupi!!!"

Karzai fell out of bed. Tirus was standing in front of him.

"What's a chipmunk?" Karzai asked.

"W...What?"

"Nothing, what were you saying?"

"I was saying I think we have a lead on the Skorupi that stole from Kangaskhan!"

"What's the lead?"

"Come look at the Outlaw Board."

Sure enough, there was a notice for a Drapion and a gang of Skorupi. Karzai didn't think much of it, seeing as his "gang" had retreated so easily before.

"I don't think we have much to worry about. Anyways, we need to put this out of our minds, Carrick says we're planning an expedition." said Karzai, nonchalantly.

Karzai heard a sound that sounded sort of high-pitched and squeaky.

"You hear something, Tirus?"

"Nope."

"Huh."

"OH JESUS." called an unfamiliar voice. Karzai looked behind him to see a Treecko crawling towards him. "OH PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FOOD."

"Uh, the mess hall's that way." Karzai said, pointing to a door. "Help yourself."

"OH THANK YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH." said the Treecko, dragging himself to the door.

"How did that Treecko get in here?"

"I dunno."

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"Anyways, we need to put this out of our minds, Carrick says we're planning an expedition." said the Psyduck from before.

"Hah! The boss is gonna love this!" said a Skorupi from the outside of the base. He ran off into the woods, as fast as his silly little feet would carry him.
 
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