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□□□□ Pokemon : ƉдЯҚ Forces □□□□

Who should win..?

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Battle Members:
+ Nick - Aron
+ Rho - Cyndaquil
+ Briane - Cubone
+ Karzai - Psyduck
+ Sparky - Pichu

Rho was furious, he charged at the Onix with his fire blazing. Onix takes 5 damage! Onix Fainted!

Enemies:

+Geodude - LV. 7 - HP 25/35

+Onix - LV. 10 - HP 0/50

PokePals:

+Karzai - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Rho - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Briane - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Nick - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Sparky - LV. 5 - HP 25/25
 
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OCC: Yes Fishy you didn't update Onix's health after you had Karzai attacked it. It would be left with 5/25 of hp. Then with Rho's attack, it would be dead.
 
OOC: I've come back! Thanx for helping me in my time of need! I cant attack becuse there is an order right?
 
Fishyman said:
OOC: Sorry, my bad. I'll have Wolf change his when I see him.
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cerulean15 said:
OCC: Yes Fishy you didn't update Onix's health after you had Karzai attacked it. It would be left with 5/25 of hp. Then with Rho's attack, it would be dead.
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Proddit said:
((Guys onix should be dead. Just thought you should know.))
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sandeon said:
OOC: I've come back! Thanx for helping me in my time of need! I cant attack becuse there is an order right?
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OOC : guys please in the OOC, and remember 4 line rule, let this thread not get locked down, today i'll also playing up as PMD since he's gone out, and to be honest this battle was very lengthy and confusing for everyone , better end this meh >.<

IC :

Battle Members:
+ Nick - Aron
+ Rho - Cyndaquil
+ Briane - Cubone
+ Karzai - Psyduck
+ Sparky - Pichu

The Huge Onix Fell besides Carrick and his teammates who were trying to remove! Geodude got scared and did nothing out of here and Attacked himself with 10 Damage. ( HP 15/35 )

Nick Attacked the Geodude with a Normal Attack. Geodude Suffered 5 Damage ( HP 10/35 )

Enemies:

+Geodude - LV. 7 - HP 10/35

+Onix - LV. 10 - HP 0/50

PokePals:

+Karzai - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Rho - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Briane - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Nick - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Sparky - LV. 5 - HP 25/25
 
Battle Members:
+ Nick - Aron
+ Rho - Cyndaquil
+ Briane - Cubone
+ Karzai - Psyduck
+ Sparky - Pichu

Rho wanted to take the geodude out quick he lunged his attack and hit the Geodude hard for 5 damage! (5/35)


Enemies:

+Geodude - LV. 7 - HP 5/35

+Onix - LV. 10 - HP 0/50

PokePals:

+Karzai - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Rho - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Briane - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Nick - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Sparky - LV. 5 - HP 25/25
 
"Hmm..." Tirus said, "Not bad."

The Larvitar took a picture out of his pack, stared at it for a second, and said, "This is for you..."

He ran towards the exhausted PokePals and said, "Hey! You guys need some help? I know the way out of this God-forsaken place, just follow me!"
 
( Carrick )
​

Oh Tirus..? Weren't you there at the base, anyway we are not leaving till that goddamn geodude falls down and unless we take this stone out, Carrick points Tirus towards the stone. See..? this stone when we touch it, it pains a lot and this is what caused those zubats to attack us, now we must take this and report it back to Chimecho, Let's get on with it.
 
"Do you think the Zubat's touched the stone or something?" Miao asked. "I mean, we haven't attacked anyone yet." She glanced up at the Zubat that were still circling above her, her eyes narrowed. "Anyway...we better get this out before their boss makes some move and attacks us."
 
Battle Members:
+ Nick - Aron
+ Rho - Cyndaquil
+ Briane - Cubone
+ Karzai - Psyduck
+ Sparky - Pichu

Karzai quickly ended the fight, attacking the Geodude for 5 damage! Geodude fainted!


Enemies:

+Geodude - LV. 7 - HP 0/35

+Onix - LV. 10 - HP 0/50

PokePals:

+Karzai - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Rho - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Briane - LV. 5 - HP 18/25

+Nick - LV. 5 - HP 15/25

+Sparky - LV. 5 - HP 25/25
 
"whew.." Tirus sighed, "I got here at the worst possible time, i suppose, but, I'm here now! Let's get the stone and get out of here--NOW!!!"
 
OOC : whew finally.. -_-

IC :

The Battle Ends in a Victory!

Nick, Rho, Karzai, Briane and Proddit get 6 EXP points from the battle.

Nick Leveled UP!! Nick grew to LV 6.

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Seeing that the battlen had finished Carrick successfully removed the stone stuck from the wall, the stone gleamed very brightly and almost hurt Carrick's eyes, Carrick looked at the Stone and got hypnotised, suddenly just staring it for a while, suddenly the stone grew very bright and shot out something very fierce from it which hit Carrick and send him flying away to a nearby distance. " Ugh, i feel dizz-zy.. i am feeling some sort of power -- i don-nt no never felt this be-fore.

Suddenly the Cave started shaking a lot giving loud thunders, and rubbles and stones falling from everywhere, " Watch out guys! let's get out of this cave quick someone please handle this stone, strangely the stone didn't glow any light and wasn't painful as before. Anyway Carrick and his pals had to rush soon.
 
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Karzai hadn't noticed the others until now, and saw a vague looking stone. He looked over at Rho and Nick, who had both been badly wounded by the Onix. As the others pushed the stone down the cave, Karzai picked up Rho, and had Briane pick up Nick, and followed closely behind the team heaving the strange stone, carrying their friends on their back.

He looked at Mia, she looked in pain, and he lokked at the others who were touching the stone, also noticing the pained look upon their faces.

"What's wrong, guys?" Karzai asked, feeling worried. "Did you get hurt in the battle?"

"No," Said Carrick, his voice rasp from the pain he was in, "it's this damn stone."

Karzai studied the stone, this was the first time he noticed the details. It looked very expensive, but Karzai knew that the price had nothing to do with it. He had remembered those Pokemon saying something about the stone. They were protecting it. But why, Karzai thoughts were suddenly cut off from the pain in his head. He decided to try and relax until he got to base.
 
( Carrick )
​

I'm Fine, Carrick assured Karzai has all of them ran through the cave, soon they saw an opening and rushed through there and the cave finally crept in, Carrick noticed that all of them had made out by inches from the Cave, Carrick was happy they were successful in getting out from the Cave and having had finally found the stone, They Soon Rushed to their base, Where the injured Pals were treated by chansey.

( Chansey )

Oh dear!! Oh dear!! look at you poor kids, hurry eat this Heal Herb, and Root Powder, the Pals didn't like the medicines given to them they tasted awful! Oh dear! oh dear!! Better give you some shower too, look at the dirt, they can affect your health! watch out for germs, now be good and have a shower go away shoo!


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Since Chimecho was out for a while, Carrick entrusted the Stone to Exploud who put it in a storage, after a quick heal up and shower. Carrick saw the new recruit Sparky, who Carrick and his team had brought him in not only him but Tyson and Michael were new base recruits too all send in by Cresselia. Sparky was sitting alone seeing something, Carrick neared him and asked " Is something the matter Sparky..?", you look a bit sad. Is something the matter..?
 
Karzai sat against against the wall waiting for his turn at the hot spring the PokePals used to bathe. He looked over at Rho and Nick, they were laying on their beds, which they had passed out on when they had made it back. He smiled, grateful that they were healthy.

He stood up and walked through the hall that contained the rooms for the team. He heard Sparky whispering to himself, but decided that rest was his top priority at the time. He walked into his room and looked into a small compartment in which the only clue to his past, the gem, lay inside. He walked back out of the room and had some berries. He was glad to get the horrible taste from the medicine out of his mouth. He walked into the guild's recreational room, where Exploud studied the stone.

"Why did we go through that to get this stone, Exploud?" Karzai asked, "I know it isn't for money,"

"I can't tell you," Exploud said, a grim look on his face, "Not yet..."

Karzai exited the room, and looked at the boards, and noticed he had been promoted! Third Lieutenant, which was more than a rank up from Fighter. He decided to hit the springs and go to bed, and Karzai thought to himself how the day had certainly ended with a good vibe...
 
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Are you Sure..? Carrick asked Sparky, it's okay i know you are new and young and everything's just too much for you maybe, but don't worry lot of our Pals are to be honest troublesome but there are lot of good pokemon's too, and hitting the beach or Treasure town may always help you a bit, and don't worry cry your heart out to me, i love other's sharing their sorrows to me, after all what are friends for right..? now bucker up and tell me what's keeping you..? I'm not forcing you but still.. just remember one thing forget about the past and be good.
 
Standing with the group, silent, Tirus became uneasy. He walked around the base, conversing only once or twice with the other Pokemon, but never saying very much. He finally mustered up the courage to talk to someone from the cave, as he was too unnerved by his untimely arrival to really say anything.
"Carrick!" he said, "could i talk to you for a second?"
 
Carrick swas happy with Sparky's response, atleast he talked. Carrick was amazed by Sparky, since having a Pichu in the team was pretty rare and Carrick expected more new pokemon's in the future. Carrick looked Sparky as he adjusted himself to reply, before Carrick could say anything again to Sparky, Tyrus suddenly came up and asked "Carrick!,could i talk to you for a second?".

" Carrick asked Sparky to hold on for a second, And approached towards tyrus, he was yet another new addition to their team. " Yes, what would be the matter Tyrus..?, Carrick questioned.
 
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As Carrick approached him, Tirus gathered his words in his head. "well, i just wanted to say...that i'm sorry." he said, "That was a REALLY bad time for me to show up, and i couldn't even help.." he trailed off, his shame in himself stopped him from saying any more. He turned away, and walked towards his dorm, his head hung low. I couldn't even help, he kept saying in his mind, this is not what you would have wanted...
 
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