Є•~Acha's Super Awesome Comic Factory~•Э

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

Yes, I've decited to start comic making again :P
And, I ring to you:
the most awesomeness filled Comic you ever hoped for:

I hope you enjoy these comics, cause I sure as hell don't like how they take so long to make XD

[AGELIMIT]Whatever the perticular comic is rated, from G - PC-15 ratings[/AGELIMIT]

Character Bios:

Spoiler:

(From left to right)

T
Pokemon: Magikarp
Bio: Usually The Boss of things, accepting only what he thinks is right. His sister is Riley.

Weebo
Pokemon: Whismer
Bio: Has no mouth, so he speaks in muffles. He happly goes along with his friends, no matter how stupid thier plan is.

Gary
Pokemon: Ralts
Bio: Being Sarcastic and Agrevated most of the time, He is the most annoyed one of the group. His best friend of them all is Weebo, since he is the only one who goes along with his way.

Sam
Pokemon: Skitty
Bio: Extremely rich, and Happy-go-lucky. She can support the group the most, and is always concered about her friends.

Riley
Pokemon: Staryu
Bio: She's the kind of type who will be the voice of reason. Her brother is T, who she must control so he dosen't get in his own way.

Jeeves
Pokemon: Dusclops
Bio: the Katz family butler, who was sent to go along with the group. He will help the kids, especally risking his own life to save them.

Mr. Mecha
Pokemon: Porygon
Bio: Pokemon scientist and Inventor, He is probably the most handy of the group. MOST of his inventions work like a charm.

Hunter
Pokemon: Sneasel
Bio: Sarcastic, Territorial, and sometimes can be emo and go sit in a corner.

SOS
Pokemon: ???
Bio: Is a Red "Special Offence solider". Always takes any objective and treats it like if he was deactivateing a bomb.

???
Pokemon: ???
Bio: ???

Comics:

Rating system: G PG 14+

1: Cliche and Faggy starters? well, maybe...
2: Freakin' Ghosties
3: An exciting rescue? Nope. Not enough Panels.
4: MEH EYES!!! *Blood Splat*
5: Blue Scadoos?!
6: Don't Piss Off Jeeves
7: You got mail!
8: Watch out for the fangirls, Gold!
9: Lets see what's behind Door Number 2!
10: WTF IS THAT?!
11: My Girlfriend who lives in Canada!
12: The truth that's going on with the weather... or the affair, depends...
13: It's poorly made, BUT IT STILL BURNS!!!
14: Note to self: Don't make sandwiches for hikers
15: Ladies and Gentlemen, I think we have a spaz
16: Life's gonna suck when you grow up
17: HOLY BAJEBUS!
18: Floating Lotads? 0.0
19: Kisuke is a sammich head!
20: Fate loves irony
21: You rock old man!
22: What Floaty does when he's offscreen
24: If you value your life, you will not ask

[Entry image for The "Lendgendary" Trio to come :D]​

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Character Bios:

Spoiler:

Coming soon

Comics:

[1]: "Importance"
[2]: "Personal"


SCRAP HIATUS COMICS

"LOL PC"​

Mozilla Vs. Internet Explorer Saga
1: Brokeback Xairmo
2: Falling to pieces (Literally)

Fan Stuff:

Burst Ninja
I swear... I've seen you somewhere

Charchic

Sprite Credits:
Tinypic (for hosting)
The Spriters Resource (For sprites)
Tbone (For set up)
Paint
Microsoft Word
My friends (For support)
Burst Ninja
Blue Guy
Tutti
Avenue Q
Gymleaderlily
Klippy
Photoshop

 

[BurstX]

awesome, those comics are really good, i love the characters, especially weebo, lol muffle talk. there some spelling errors, but they're good, the comics not the errors

 

[PB.]

The graphics look really cool, and its funny!

Very God Job There Achamo-chan

 

[Arceus123]

I mean to sound mean. this is a very bad comic, in more than one way.
Humor
I can see the humor that is supposed to be funny, but it turned out very very corny, crude, intollerant, and un-funny. I give it a 2/10.

Speech Bubbles
use them...un-panel text screams noob comic.

Characters
very un-original recolors along with a idiot in the comic that seems to just be a clone of Kenny from South Park. for character design 2/10.

Grammar
this may sound hypocritical, but improve your grammar, spelling, and puncuations. I choose to type like this, but I dont make comics. While on this topic, in comics dont have an all capitolized sentence. it looks very un-proffesional. 1/10.

Lack of credit
you totally took the magikarp in your banner from tSR. i suggest you credit Timmeh. and Im betting you didn't rip your OW's that you editted your characters for, or the maps. no real rating, just dissapointment.

no need for a complete calculation, you get and F in my book.

 

[PB.]

I mean to sound mean. this is a very bad comic, in more than one way.
Humor
I can see the humor that is supposed to be funny, but it turned out very very corny, crude, intollerant, and un-funny. I give it a 2/10.

Speech Bubbles
use them...un-panel text screams noob comic.

Characters
very un-original recolors along with a idiot in the comic that seems to just be a clone of Kenny from South Park. for character design 2/10.

Grammar
this may sound hypocritical, but improve your grammar, spelling, and puncuations. I choose to type like this, but I dont make comics. While on this topic, in comics dont have an all capitolized sentence. it looks very un-proffesional. 1/10.

Lack of credit
you totally took the magikarp in your banner from tSR. i suggest you credit Timmeh. and Im betting you didn't rip your OW's that you editted your characters for, or the maps. no real rating, just dissapointment.

no need for a complete calculation, you get and F in my book.

I Think your being a little too harsh, you should be giving advice instead of being negative.

 

[Arceus123]

I Think your being a little too harsh, this is his first attempt and its ok if its not perfect when its a first try, you should be giving advice instead of being negative.

Bzzzzzt! panel says youre incorrect. this is like his 10th comic in 2 years and he fails to learn after all this time. its about time someone tells him what he's doing wrong. and it IS advice, you do notice that the things that are pointed out ARE pointed out for a reason?! if everyone tells someone "ITS TEH BOMB" and it's really horrible, they just want to be nice, the creator never learns.

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

I mean to sound mean. this is a very bad comic, in more than one way.
Humor
I can see the humor that is supposed to be funny, but it turned out very very corny, crude, intollerant, and un-funny. I give it a 2/10.

Speech Bubbles
use them...un-panel text screams noob comic.

Characters
very un-original recolors along with a idiot in the comic that seems to just be a clone of Kenny from South Park. for character design 2/10.

Grammar
this may sound hypocritical, but improve your grammar, spelling, and puncuations. I choose to type like this, but I dont make comics. While on this topic, in comics dont have an all capitolized sentence. it looks very un-proffesional. 1/10.

Lack of credit
you totally took the magikarp in your banner from tSR. i suggest you credit Timmeh. and Im betting you didn't rip your OW's that you editted your characters for, or the maps. no real rating, just dissapointment.

no need for a complete calculation, you get and F in my book.

Hm... To sound mean...

Humor:
Yeah... um... It hasn't really gotten funny much, so.. yeah. I have better material than this. And if you don't think it's funny, then... Don't read it.

Speech bubbles:
First of all: HEART SPEECH BUBBLES. I rather perfer to make them with boxed text at the bottom, they are extremely better in my taste. I worked with speech bubbles in paint, and the comics I made looked exactly like pokechow setups, but they took up too much space.

Chariters:
Very Un-original? I don't see anybody else making these OWs, and About Weebo, He's not an idiot, he doesn't have a mouth. But I must agree with you for the kenny simalairity, but he has a personality of his own.

Grammer:
Hey, Everyone makes spelling mistakes. If you admitted it that you make mistakes.
BTW, Professinal is not my aim.

Lack of credit:
Oops, forgot about credit.
Now it's fixed.

Bzzzzzt! panel says youre incorrect. this is like his 10th comic in 2 years and he fails to learn after all this time. its about time someone tells him what he's doing wrong. and it IS advice, you do notice that the things that are pointed out ARE pointed out for a reason?! if everyone tells someone "ITS TEH BOMB" and it's really horrible, they just want to be nice, the creator never learns.

10th comic?
lets see... Miny Clip, Pokemon Truth, Ghost hunters, Pokemon Weird, Super Cheesy Adventures of the Kirby Brothers, and x2 Adventures were the ones before this one.
Everyone except Pokemon Weird was a FAILURE, that's why I stopped making them.

Fail to learn? During my inactiveness as a comic maker, I was making comics with speech bubbles, with different text forms, different custom chariters, I've learned, I just perfer this style the best. "It's about time"? exuse me... but WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN MY INTIRE PC LIFE?! did you just join to search my profile, then rant about how my comics suck using the failed comics as your defence? If people compliement, it's nice, I'll continue making them, and if you think they're horrible, don't come back to rant each time there is a new comic. I've learned, you just weren't there. And How dare you Come in here and be mean towards my friends. You have absoulutely NO right to do so.

In conclusion, You don't have to read them, your advice sucks, and you can go back into the dark corner and cut yourself reapetively saying "The world sucks" Now. >:|

 

[Hackrex]

hey, its a very good comic. Have you used the VBA, played and than written the text?

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

Well, I have tried putting them inadvanced bubbles as so;

I've tried different sizes of boxed text, but I like this the best. The comic is just the way I like it.

BTW, comic 4 is done:
MEH EYES!!! *Blood Splat*

 

[PB.]

That 4th comic is really funny. I love its wittyness.

Achamo-chan: your picture doesn't work in the post above.

 

[doesn't matter]

Perry!, Burst Ninja and Hackrex, your posts are lacking in the constructive department. Try to state the reason behind your opinion of the comic.

That said, Arceus123, as valid as your points may be, they are needlessly harsh and in the end, do not actually achieve any greater good. In fact, it seems that you are simply trying to deter people. If you really wanted to help people out with your comments, we'd see you posts of yours commenting upon the strengths in people's work - constructive crit isn't all about pointing out the faults.

That said, if you're going to comment on the grammar of others, it would be best to worry about your own first, since most people intentionally use good grammar here.

Achamo-chan, do not censor bypass - that's why we have the censors in place. Furthermore, constructive crit, no matter what way or form it's presented, should not be taken to heart, so don't react as such in the future. Furthermore, only ratings up to PG-15 are permitted, so anything more will be removed.

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

Perry!, Burst Ninja and Hackrex, your posts are lacking in the constructive department. Try to state the reason behind your opinion of the comic.

That said, Arceus123, as valid as your points may be, they are needlessly harsh and in the end, do not actually achieve any greater good. In fact, it seems that you are simply trying to deter people. If you really wanted to help people out with your comments, we'd see you posts of yours commenting upon the strengths in people's work - constructive crit isn't all about pointing out the faults.

That said, if you're going to comment on the grammar of others, it would be best to worry about your own first, since most people intentionally use good grammar here.

Achamo-chan, do not censor bypass - that's why we have the censors in place. Furthermore, constructive crit, no matter what way or form it's presented, should not be taken to heart, so don't react as such in the future. Furthermore, only ratings up to PG-15 are permitted, so anything more will be removed.

did I censor bypass?
hm... I don't remember putting a swear in thier without covering it up with *'s...

anyway, I must thank you for one thing of telling me about the rating thing-
I wasn't planning to make MA comics anyway.
I'm only twelve :/

I'll promise this will not happen again.

 

[BurstX]

i loved comic 4, mr.mecha's timimg was so funny, good job

 

[deco11]

apart from having pokemon sprites the comic have nothing much to do with pokemon.

they look good and are quite funny though.

good job achamo-chan

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

Oh, don't worry, The pokemon will come in soon.

Eppy 5 is done! :D

5: Blue Scadoos?!

 

[Nytkoi]

I love em. They're inyresting. I like the chara, too.

 

[PB.]

Number 5 is really great, theres alot of funny bits spread around.

The comic is improving very well

Keep up the good work

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

Thanks for the compliments guys. :3

Updated:
New Chariter bios
and Comic 6!

6: Don't Piss Off Jeeves

 

[BurstX]

omg your so crule to tat couple, and the camera man that is priceless, relly good job

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

Thanks burst,
it's always good to have support.

Now, I got some updates:
Updated chariter bios!
New comic!
7: You got mail!