Cut the borders, they're a little out of style now n___n
In any case this is your best. You've gotta work on dynamics though, from your tags I can see right away you rely on big stocks, your backgrounds are falling behind and just being sorta... backgrounds, and not fitting the tag very well. This being a prime example.
try working with filters and even take game wallpaper stocks as backgrounds. C4D's liquified to create the initial flow is also a very good technique. Which is another thing you need to concentrate on, bringing out the focal, ensuring nothing is taking away from it ie. a second focal, and add flow if needed (often is). Anyway, go in the direction of the first tag I linked, it's a little crowded but a step in the right direction indefinately.
Keep going.
Wow they're ace :knockedou Are you thinking about making them for people here? Cos if you are I would like one.. :3
Lol, thanks and I will be making them hopefully for people once my exams are over with.
Oh right, ok. I take it your doing your GCSE's? If you are good luck with them :classic: