Ace Phantom Custom Tiles

[Crimson Stardust]

Hei everyone,i am making custom tiles for my hack but some of them are for public...​

Here goes...This is a few tiles i come up with..btw,i make them from scratch..​

*Tileset 1*

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*Tileset 2*

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Some revamping tile,edit version from tileset 1 and new tiles​

Torn World Tile Set

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Heart Gold & Soul Silver tiles

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They are not that good..but along the way,i will pick up more skills and my skill will improve and i can come up with much more better tiles..
So stay tune for more updtes...XD:);)​

Your pc buddy,
Ace Phantom​

 

[Ray Maverick]

These are nice tiles!I like them, Ace.Keep up, and fix some dimension mistakes, k?

 

[gummybarz]

These are nice tiles!I like them,Ace.Keep up,and fix some dimension mistakes,k?

Could you be more elaborate next time. You didn't crit him at all or tell him what you think he should improve. Your not helping by saying "These are very nice tiles!" Some of them do need work...

My review is in the spolier...

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The first house i think you need to re do, the first thing i noticed
is the top, both the left and right side are not connected right.


The second house very well done, the shading is good and the shape.
The only thing i would say to change is he door, but that's just me.

For the 5th house i do not like the left corner, it doesn't match the rest
i think you should fix it.. But it's up to you.

Very well done, i think these are the best out of all of them. The only
thing i'm going to say is, about the small one. I don't like the shape of the top.

This one i think is your worst, The first thing is the roof needs changing.
The right side overlaps the top and it's not equal with the left. Then the next section
i don't like the colors you used for it maybe a lighter brown next time. The rest is fine just fix these little mistakes and you will be good

 

[Crimson Stardust]

Could you be more elaborate next time. You didn't crit him at all or tell him what you think he should improve. Your not helping by saying "These are very nice tiles!" Some of them do need work...

My review is in the spolier...

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The first house i think you need to re do, the first thing i noticed
is the top, both the left and right side are not connected right.


The second house very well done, the shading is good and the shape.
The only thing i would say to change is he door, but that's just me.

For the 5th house i do not like the left corner, it doesn't match the rest
i think you should fix it.. But it's up to you.

Very well done, i think these are the best out of all of them. The only
thing i'm going to say is, about the small one. I don't like the shape of the top.

This one i think is your worst, The first thing is the roof needs changing.
The right side overlaps the top and it's not equal with the left. Then the next section
i don't like the colors you used for it maybe a lighter brown next time. The rest is fine just fix these little mistakes and you will be good

owhkae..cool...i will fix them up and post the fixed tiles after i finish them....XD

 

[Kindo]

Well since I don't know much about spriting but these have nothing bad in them except maybe you could fix the top left corner(Already mentioned)And the last one of them all by making the roof on the right side equal to the left side and then they will be almost perfect.

Good Job!

-Mr. Hack

 

[Logan]

Some reviewage below xD Not too much, but meh!

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Well, some of the lines on these are way too scratchy. You really need to either, make them straight or learn to make them rather more rounded. Here you have used not very much shading, and what you have is actually rather bad. Okay, I can't say much more other than keep spriting.

These are again the lines are way to scratchy and not normal. Again, you don't seen to have learned the concept of shading. I suggest checking Chesu's stickied tutorials as he has a very good one on shading.

Hmm.. The interior of it isn't too bad. But it is way too repetitive, maybe try making a new pattern of maybe, checking the actually tiles from Platinum and adjusting or using that design. But then again Platinum's design wasn't too good. You could improve on that. On to the side and top outline. Again it's way too repetitive and they are just little dips then squares and really badly done tbh. Onto the bottom, these too are badly done, the curves? Are really badly outline and more square and straight then the curves they should be. Sorry, but just trying to help.

This one isn't too bad. But, it's way too similar to other houses of it's nature. This time the lines aren't half bad. But again, it's the shading that's letting you down, just work on it ;)

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Sorry about that, but I'm only trying to help ;)

 

[Crimson Stardust]

hey

Some reviewage below xD Not too much, but meh!

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Sorry about that, but I'm only trying to help ;)

hey..its okae..i did say i accep advice and critism..it can help me improve on my tiles..
btw,i knw about the shading as i am not sure to do the shading and the palletes stff..lol...but i will check chesu tut

 

[Tunaboy88]

The First 3 tiles are great but it is just the last two tha are weird in a way, I meant who lives in a triangle house itz cool but weird and the other just seems odd at the top corner anyways good luck in the futrue.

 

[Crimson Stardust]

The First 3 tiles are great but it is just the last two tha are weird in a way, I meant who lives in a triangle house itz cool but weird and the other just seems odd at the top corner anyways good luck in the futrue.

owhyeah..i notice that..i will not be editing them though..i will fix the others...

 

[Crimson Stardust]

I think it's really nice.!!!

hey tanx..XD
i am making a sheet of tiles..

 

[Vannah☆]

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Everything here except for the second does not look like its from a birds eye view like how buildings look in the games. To fix this you should add a bit more of the roof ... I think. Shorten the view of the bottom of the building a tad and add to the top a bit more. Especially on the third one.

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This is nice, but please oh please! xD I don't know if you meant to or not to prevent steeling, but please don't save on paint. xD It ruins the sprite. Save on paint.net or photoshop. ;)

Keep up the great work! These are wonderful for your first few tiles!

The First 3 tiles are great but it is just the last two tha are weird in a way, I meant who lives in a triangle house itz cool but weird and the other just seems odd at the top corner anyways good luck in the futrue.

Played DP? That triangle house sorta reminds me of this:

I think its a cool idea. xD

 

[Crimson Stardust]

Everything here except for the second does not look like its from a birds eye view like how buildings look in the games. To fix this you should add a bit more of the roof ... I think. Shorten the view of the bottom of the building a tad and add to the top a bit more. Especially on the third one.​

Tanx for the advice..i have problem doing the roof or making it look like the tiles in-game...but i am trying hard to make it look nice...


Vannah:This is nice, but please oh please! xD I don't know if you meant to or not to prevent steeling, but please don't save on paint. xD It ruins the sprite. Save on paint.net or photoshop. ;)
Keep up the great work! These are wonderful for your first few tiles!

Tanx..XD






Vannah:Played DP? That triangle house sorta reminds me of this:

I think its a cool idea. xD[/QUOTE]
I know..that is why i try to do it triangular but it does not look pleasing{my tile}but i will improve on it...

Here is a tiles i make...{the pallete still need a little bit work i think or the roof or anything}
comment on it...{critism accepted as if there are none,i will not know my mistake...}

Practice makes perfect...

 

[Vannah☆]

That first building is off to a great start. :o But it looks almost G/S/C -ish. Give the spheres some shading. The roof is lacking some sort of new mechanic that was used in FR/LG, R/S/E, and D/P/P but I can't quite place my finger on it. You made the base part of the house look very nice. Just do that with the roof. Maybe some different shading with dithering pixels.

Second one: I like the idea for the roof and stuff. xD The door needs some work and the roof needs some more shading in my opinion.

Third: Very nice. Clearly R/S/E style -ish. I'm no expert though. ^_^;;

Fourth: Odd, but I like it. Could use another window. Maybe use that striped lining roof style for the first building?

Fifth: I love the bottom part of the house except for the fact that the door could use some shading. I see what you were going for with the overall look combined with the roof and all, but you need to do it better. The roof looks like a bunch of brown play-doh snakes drooping off the center piece. I think it calls for more of that vertical lining.

Sixth: Nice little cabin, just like the third, though the door could use a light brown color striping instead of the black.

Seventh: It's alright, but I don't like the overall idea very much. It reminds me of the munchkins from the wizard of oz. Something that they would live in. Door could be...bigger?

Eighth(final): Looks like a little lego house. I guess it could be sort of a little beachside run down PC, but it needs some more hightech kinda stuff for the big city. Larger size, more roof detail, and some high class shading and extra windows.


Keep it up!

 

[Crimson Stardust]

That first building is off to a great start. :o But it looks almost G/S/C -ish. Give the spheres some shading. The roof is lacking some sort of new mechanic that was used in FR/LG, R/S/E, and D/P/P but I can't quite place my finger on it. You made the base part of the house look very nice. Just do that with the roof. Maybe some different shading with dithering pixels.

Second one: I like the idea for the roof and stuff. xD The door needs some work and the roof needs some more shading in my opinion.

Third: Very nice. Clearly R/S/E style -ish. I'm no expert though. ^_^;;

Fourth: Odd, but I like it. Could use another window. Maybe use that striped lining roof style for the first building?

Fifth: I love the bottom part of the house except for the fact that the door could use some shading. I see what you were going for with the overall look combined with the roof and all, but you need to do it better. The roof looks like a bunch of brown play-doh snakes drooping off the center piece. I think it calls for more of that vertical lining.

Sixth: Nice little cabin, just like the third, though the door could use a light brown color striping instead of the black.

Seventh: It's alright, but I don't like the overall idea very much. It reminds me of the munchkins from the wizard of oz. Something that they would live in. Door could be...bigger?

Eighth(final): Looks like a little lego house. I guess it could be sort of a little beachside run down PC, but it needs some more hightech kinda stuff for the big city. Larger size, more roof detail, and some high class shading and extra windows.


Keep it up!

okae..tanx...i will fix up them to make them more perfect..lol..XD
btw,i forgot to add in this tile too...

Hey guys..i want more comment on all my current tiles..please drop a comment/critism here to make me make tiles better..:p

 

[Crimson Stardust]

they are very good better than what I could do any day XD like the oneyuo just added in your post its nice

hey tanx..is there any problems with it you can point out..?

 

[Naruto Uzumaki The Nine Tailed Fox]

I love this one, you did a great job on it.

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These are also very well done.

 

[Nyu~♥!]

Those are awesome! I can't do any better anyway, your doing great! I've never done tiles before, just fakemon sprites.

 

[Crimson Stardust]

I love this one, you did a great job on it.

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These are also very well done.

i like the tom world tiles!
Great job dude!

Those are awesome! I can't do any better anyway, your doing great! I've never done tiles before, just fakemon sprites.

tanx you guys..
btw,is there any problems you can point out??

 

[gary_productions]

its a verry nice Tree :)
Can il use some tiles in our hacks?you get credit of course

 

[Crimson Stardust]

its a verry nice Tree :)
Can il use some tiles in our hacks?you get credit of course

yeah..sure..
you can use them...XD