Crystal Clair
Shinji lover
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- 19
- Years
- Age 34
- In the Forest of Hesitation with Shinji
- Seen Mar 24, 2013
Hey G-man! Sorry I wasn't here for two days, a morning and an afternoon. I was at my grandparents' summer place in the Pennsylvanian Poconos (I got pictures too)
I just purchased two new anime books where they really get into the topic. Now, even I've improved.... but it's mostly on paper.
I FINALLY pinpointed a problem you have with your eyes
When you do your eyes on the girls, like Pearl, you make the line thick in the wrong place. You're supposed to make it thick on top of the original line.
Pearl's done perfectly, even her hands are perfect and that's quite good for you.
Diamond: that knuckle line isn't needed. The fist thingie is done okay. I have a tip though. They say a fist is a lot like a paisley the way it curls up. So sometime compare your fist to a picture of a paisley (google's the best bet) and you'll be surprised.
Cassandra: her eyelashes (whatever those things are) they stretch down too far and should stay more on the top. And the position of her mouth is weird. Her arms are kinda fat too, but she got nice boobies! The legs are kinda fat and the foot facing forward looks like a horse hoof! XD but you're a lot better than you were a while ago. In a way, you're kinda at my level but I can do freehand, paint with acrylics, watercolor, pastels and can do a variety of artistic things. I'm also good with backgrounds too. And I kinda have this weird artistic sense where I can tell if something's wrong right away. You'll eventually develop an artistic sense with practice.
Kenji: You dont have to do his hair so light..... I mean it was black in the orange islands so why not meet halfway? Besides I know you like the faded black but here's why I think black black is better. You dont have to shade! That's about all with him...... hold it! His hand has SIX FINGERS! There's a little runt on the end there. Just edit that one out and it'll make a difference!
That's about all for now. Good luck and uh count the fingers when you draw them!
I just purchased two new anime books where they really get into the topic. Now, even I've improved.... but it's mostly on paper.
I FINALLY pinpointed a problem you have with your eyes
When you do your eyes on the girls, like Pearl, you make the line thick in the wrong place. You're supposed to make it thick on top of the original line.
Pearl's done perfectly, even her hands are perfect and that's quite good for you.
Diamond: that knuckle line isn't needed. The fist thingie is done okay. I have a tip though. They say a fist is a lot like a paisley the way it curls up. So sometime compare your fist to a picture of a paisley (google's the best bet) and you'll be surprised.
Cassandra: her eyelashes (whatever those things are) they stretch down too far and should stay more on the top. And the position of her mouth is weird. Her arms are kinda fat too, but she got nice boobies! The legs are kinda fat and the foot facing forward looks like a horse hoof! XD but you're a lot better than you were a while ago. In a way, you're kinda at my level but I can do freehand, paint with acrylics, watercolor, pastels and can do a variety of artistic things. I'm also good with backgrounds too. And I kinda have this weird artistic sense where I can tell if something's wrong right away. You'll eventually develop an artistic sense with practice.
Kenji: You dont have to do his hair so light..... I mean it was black in the orange islands so why not meet halfway? Besides I know you like the faded black but here's why I think black black is better. You dont have to shade! That's about all with him...... hold it! His hand has SIX FINGERS! There's a little runt on the end there. Just edit that one out and it'll make a difference!
That's about all for now. Good luck and uh count the fingers when you draw them!
