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[Pokémon] Challenger - Omega Ruby Nuzlocke Novel *FINISHED*

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  • Interesting subplot concerning Erik dealing with the Tentacools. Yeah those can be pretty annoying especially with Hoenn having a lot of ocean, haha.

    Steven's speech with Erik concerning his bond with his Pokemon is expected (hey, it's Pokemon =P ), but I like you have Erik what motivation Steven has if at all.

    Pretty big battle Erik had with Ty and Gabby, considering whenever you battle them they only have the evolution line of Magnemite and Whismur. In my end notes of my beta I did wonder if the other Pokemon you pulled from other trainers or you picked random, though I can see why you would go with this route to give more tension to the battle. I'll have to agree Erik's battle with Ty is more exciting than with Gabby as he had sent out a variety more of Pokemon. I did like at the end Ty and Erik respected one another there. Looking forward to more!
     
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    Chapter Eighteen - Revelations



    Grovyle leapt into the air, looking both as flexible and graceful as a ballerina as the grass typed Pokemon tightly grabbed onto the Magma Grunt's Zubat before sinking sharp claws deep into the creature's rough purple skin.

    "Keep it up!" Cecilia roared to her Pokemon in encouragement, appearing to be loving the fierceness of battle. The Institute technician alongside her was faring a little worse, his Shroomish had been thrown into the glass wall next to Erik as he had entered the building, cracks appearing in the pane from the force of the attack. The technician's next Pokemon, a Breloom, was barely holding its own against a Magma Mightyena.

    "Cecilia?" Erik asked, unable to believe his eyes that this was the woman who had offered him shelter in her treehouse a few weeks ago. Each previous encounter with the Pokemon researcher had led him to believe she was sweet, innocent and kind, but seeing her now in the heat of battle brought a new side of her to his attention. She combined passion and fury into a seamless blend of fuel for her Pokemon to feed off.

    "Finish this!" she bellowed, too ingrained in the fight to notice Erik behind her. The Grovyle, who had been a Treecko the last time Erik had seen it, obliged without hesitation. It was loving the conflict almost as much as its trainer was, as the researcher's Pokemon leapt into the air again, grabbed the Zubat and threw it into the Mightyena. Grovyle landed gracefully, before firing a barrage of razor-sharp leaves at the duo of opponents, cutting the two to shreds and defeating both of the Magma grunts at once.

    "Cecilia," Erik said again as he approached. The woman tensed and spun around on her heel as if she expected another Magma grunt, but relaxed herself when she realised that it was Erik behind her. "Sorry to startle you," he added.

    "It's okay," she smiled sweetly, as if the fiery lady brimming with passionate rage had vanished and the other half of Cecilia had returned.

    "What's going on?" Erik enquired as he scanned the room. They were in the reception area, a desk with an accompanying computer that greeted anyone who entered the building as the pinewood object rested against a thick wooden wall. To the left was a metal door, a sign reading "Staff Only" placed in the centre, and to the right of the room lay a set of stairs, scorch marks ascending them like a burnt snake.

    "Team Magma and their boss Maxie are here," the technician replied. Both his ripped labcoat and the cuts on his face made it look like he was attacked by a Pokemon. "I tried to stop them but there were too many. Luckily Cecilia was here otherwise I would've been captured and tied up along with the rest of the tech team."

    "I was here for research purposes," Cecilia added, her voice taking a more serious tone, "I wanted to write a paper on the effects different types of weather has on certain Pokemon, when Magma suddenly raided the place. Maxie has taken the Institute's director hostage, but I have no clue as to their intentions."

    "Let's find out," Erik said sharply, leading the trio up the stairs and into the next floor, an office-laboratory combination lined with desks and technical equipment.

    Immediately two more grunts charged at them, brandishing Pokeballs from pockets in their crimson cloaks. Cecilia's Grovyle sprang into action, with the technician's Breloom lagging behind.

    "Erik, go to the top! We'll hold them off," Cecilia bellowed, with Erik duly obliging. He trusted her to win the fight down here whilst he took down Maxie at the top, it would not only be rewarding to put the Magma leader in his place once more, but to find out his side of the story with Team Rocket.

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    Erik reached the top floor, a roof of solid aluminium hovering over his head giving the reasonably spacious area a strangely claustrophobic feel, despite being surrounded by glass walls which peered out into the sky which slowly turned to darkness as the sun set. The stairs had led him to a single room filled with a blood-red carpet, with two leather sofas both facing towards a coffee table, sat on a circular rug, lying in the room's centre.

    Shifting his gaze from a mug of spilled tea which was now soaking into the oaken table, Erik eyed a thick wooden door suspiciously. Behind the sofa on the right hand side lay another room, with thick wooden walls and a large door, there was no doubt in his mind that the director and Maxie awaited beyond.

    Storming through the first room, he shoved open the door to the director's office so aggressively that it slammed against the wall and almost fell off its hinges, Erik was met by two familiar faces who had stood guard on the other side; Mylos and Grant.

    "Ahh, if it isn't Erik," Maxie said coolly as his Koffing menacingly taunted an elderly man in a lab coat. The director looked as if he had seen a ghost, shaking like a leaf in the wind as he cowered behind another coffee table, this one having been tipped on its side and now being used as a shield by the office's owner.

    "We'll deal with this one, boss," Mylos said in his usual gruff voice, as if gravel was lodged in his throat.

    "No, Erik's mine," Maxie ordered, to which the hulking Admin immediately backed down. Grant had remained motionless the entire time, seemingly unsure of which person in the room he feared most as his wide eyes flickered from Erik, to Mylos, then Maxie, before finally returning back to Erik.

    "I know you're just a puppet of Team Rocket," Erik half-laughed as he uttered the powerful words to Maxie, causing his two minions to cast cautious glances back to their leader. "Giovanni told me everything."

    "And you still refuse to join them?" Maxie smirked. "Good."

    "Good?!" Erik growled.

    "Yes. Good," Maxie repeated, "I wish for you to join us, not them."

    "You're the same organisation, Maxie."

    "We were," Maxie replied, remaining as calm as ever, "and they think we still are. You see, when Magma first started out, it was just Mylos and I, along with another gentleman named Tabitha, and a lady named Courtney." Mylos seemed to tense at the mentions of the other two names, and although Erik did not know why, he assumed he was about to find out.

    "We saw humans living in a region ruled by Pokemon," Maxie continued. "Hoenn was raw and untamed, full of uninhabitable rivers and lakes, seas and volcanoes, mountains and deserts. Pokemon could live there, but we couldn't, so the four of us made a pact to change things." The Magma boss stopped to clear his throat, as if speaking of such things was forbidden, but carried on regardless. "We started out by collecting powerful artifacts like precious stones which could forcefully evolve or strengthen Pokemon, to help us overpower any who would eventually oppose us."

    "The four of us had strong enough Pokemon to challenge gyms," Mylos added, before Maxie shot him down.

    "A fair few gyms," the leader interrupted. "We were never violent however, we were seekers of knowledge, wanting to know how to make the land inhabitable, but had no idea of how to do so."

    "It was Tabitha's idea to get help," Mylos spoke again.

    "Yes, external help, and as we were at a dead end, we agreed," Maxie continued. "A month later a man named Giovanni found us at Courtney's house, my fiancee as it happens. Tabitha informed us that he was a very powerful man looking to expand his enterprise into Hoenn, and was also very much interested in our ideas."

    "But I knew who he was," Mylos said, sounding regretful, "I'm from Kanto myself so I know all about Team Rocket, and that they were headed by a man similar to the one who came to us that day. I told the rest of the guys he was in charge of a criminal gang."

    "So we declined his offer. But Giovanni is not a man you say no to." Maxie dropped his head in shame as he forced the words out of his mouth. "He just looked at us and said that if we comply, we will have unlimited resources and backing in order to achieve our goals and put us on the map. If we refuse, he will find other ways of getting us on board. But we remained stubborn in our refusal."

    "We didn't know then that Tabitha had betrayed us," Mylos added. "When I moved from Kanto I worked as a security guard for a research institute where Tabitha and Maxie worked, we were all like brothers.

    "Two weeks after the visit of Giovanni, Courtney disappeared," a sorrow had now taken Maxie's voice whole. "After a further week of no contact from my wife-to-be, nor from Tabitha, a letter arrived in the mail. Tabitha had tricked Courtney into getting on a ship to Kanto, saying the vessel would only take her a short way to the other side of Hoenn where he had made a discovery. My fiancee had been kidnapped and Tabitha given a nice cushy job as a reward, and now if Mylos and I didn't join forces with Team Rocket, then I'd never see Courtney again."

    "Team Rocket will never give her up, you do know that, don't you?" Erik said, trying to sound sympathetic. Maxie and Norman seemed to be one of a kind, forced into service to Team Rocket in order to protect those that they love.

    "I can only hope, but a contingency has been put in place. We will feign service to them for now, then if Courtney is not returned to my side, we will take Hoenn for ourselves and use it as a base to destroy Team Rocket in Kanto."

    Erik considered informing Maxie of Team Rocket's true intentions, to bury Magma, but before he could say anything the crimson leader continued.

    "I have always been honest with you Erik, join me as my right hand man and help we can take down Team Rocket together."

    "Honest? Then tell me what you're doing here." Erik demanded, a slight rage clouding out his other thoughts. Maxie instantly told him the truth.

    "We wanted to investigate the effects the legendary Pokemon, Groudon, had on the weather thousands of years ago, and see if we could control it the same way. We could dampen desserts with rain or boil lakes with heatwaves. Humanity would prosper."

    "So what do you say, Erik," Mylos extended his hand out for Erik to shake as he spoke.

    "Controlling the weather, forcing Pokemon out of their homes for us to live," Erik thought to himself. "Maxie's motivation is understandable, but his goals are not, and Team Rocket won't allow Hoenn to fall into the hands of anyone else." Erik had made his decision. He shook his head solemnly before saying in a voice barely above a whisper, "I'm sorry, Maxie."

    "Then you leave me no choice!" Maxie roared uncharacteristically, speaking of Courtney had caused him to lose his usual calm, collected persona and now he was about to unleash his fury on Erik. "Koffing!"

    "Horde, it's your time," Erik shouted as he threw his Tentacool's Pokeball. He now felt more determined than ever to take both Giovanni and Team Rocket down.

    The Tentacool stood tall on its makeshift legs, before launching a pulse of water at the Koffing which sent the foe rocketing through the glass, causing shards to scatter everywhere. The Koffing was unable to stabilize itself in time, the force of the blow rendering it senseless as it crashed into the ground many floors below.

    "Watch the glass!" the director screamed, peeking over the coffee table now that the Koffing had stopped taunting him, but he was quickly silenced by a quick slap to the back of the head from Grant, who had remained silent until that point.

    A Mightyena was Maxie's second choice, Erik responding with Dive. Maxie's new Pokemon faced as much luck as his last, the Wailer hitting the dark-typed foe with a pulse of water much like Horde before her, and just like before, the Mightyena was sent through the now open hole where glass used to be.

    Maxie's Pokemon suddenly shot out a paw and clung onto the edge, but as quickly as it had grabbed the ledge, Dive bounced up and slammed down on the paw, forcing the Mightyena to let go and fall down to the surface, landing directly next to the Koffing.

    Two down with ease, and four to go for Erik and his team. A Golbat stood no chance against Dancer with the Pikachu zapping it out of the air as it swiftly attacked her, Erik's Pokemon taking some mild damage, a couple of faint scratches appearing on her skin. But Dancer remained strong to send a fatal bolt of electricity at her foe.

    "This is too easy, and Maxie won't be going easy on me this time, he must have some sort of trick up his sleeve," Erik thought to himself.

    He remained perplexed as a Numel was washed away easily by Horde, the Tentacool slotting into Erik's party with apparent ease. Dancer then took down another Golbat even more easily than before, not even taking a hit this time around, leaving Maxie down to one Pokemon, his favourite, Camerupt.

    Erik sent Horde out again, the Tentacool's water type having a double advantage over the fire and ground dual type. Horde moved with surprisingly speed, aiming a violent pulse of water towards the holes in Camerupt's back, causing Erik to briefly remember that Tentacools are deceptively intelligent creatures, using terrain to their advantage and making use of their opponents' weak points.

    Maxie's Pokemon responded instantaneously, launching itself into the air and stomping down so powerfully the whole building shook, causing cracking noises to surrounded the room as the glass splintered and smashed with the sheer force of the attack.

    Erik kept his focus firmly fixed on the battle, with Camerupt keeping his rear foot powerfully lodged against its opponent, trapping it underneath and choking the life out of Erik's Pokemon. He had forgotten Horde was also a dual type, with his Tentacool's secondary poison type weak against ground moves.

    Erik grabbed Horde's Pokeball and moved to recall it, but was unable to aim the device directly at his Pokemon. The Camerupt had placed his body over the Tentacool like a shield, leaving Erik with only one choice, he would have to enter the battlefield himself to save his Pokemon. He stepped forward, but a huge roar from the Camerupt stopped Erik in his tracks as it shattered the glass around them, a blustery wind forcing its way through the gaping holes the glass had left in its wake.

    Horde was lost as the life was suffocated out of him. Erik slammed his eyes closed as frustrated tears filled his vision; it seemed to him that each time a new Pokemon was set to become a strong part of his team, they'd be defeated before he could fully establish a bond with them. He had lost so many friends now.

    "Please, survive this Horde," he whispered, feeling a fire rising inside of him as he spoke the words, holding on to a small sense of hope within himself.

    An overwhelming brightness engulfed his closed eyelids, like sunrays suddenly bursting through dark clouds, followed by a groan of disbelief by Maxie across the room. Erik threw open his eyes to see the Camerupt thrown onto his back, before a dozen long snake-like tentacles constricted themselves around the Pokemon and threw it effortlessly out of the room, the huge beast crashing to the ground below.

    "Horde.." Erik whispered delightedly to himself, his Pokemon had evolved into a Tentacruel at just the right moment and had won him the duel.

    He withdrew Horde but instantly felt like releasing the newly evolved Tentacruel and celebrating with his Pokemon, or throwing a taunt in Maxie's direction, but was interrupted by a loud crashing sound from behind him. The whole battle had proved to be a mere distraction as Grant loomed over the freshly fallen bookcase which now blockaded the only exit from the room as it sat neatly below the handle, leaving the door unable to be opened from the outside.

    As Erik pondered why Grant would topple a bookshelf to barricade the quintet in a room, Mylos grabbed him with both arms. Erik felt helpless as the Magma brute dragged him through the room as easily as a Slaking would carry an Oddish.

    "Over the edge," Maxie ordered to his admin.

    "You deserve this," Mylos growled at Erik, as he threw the young trainer over the edge of the building, where the glass once was.

    Erik gasped in horror as the ground below stared upwards at him like a death sentence, before feeling a strong grip grab him by the wrist; Mylos had caught him.

    "What're you doing?!" Erik squeaked, unable to speak clearly through the immense fear he now felt as he dangled over the edge, rain battering his face. The wet weather caused Mylos's grip to weaken.

    As Erik slipped slowly to his doom he threw up his free hand, grabbing the Magma admin's wrist and clinging on for his life.

    "Join us or fall," Maxie hissed, his usual calm and collected persona had vanished into the wind, to be replaced by something demonic. The boss's voice was almost lost in a blur of rain, wind and fear, as Erik felt his heart beating rapidly, like it wished to punch its way out of his chest and escape the perilous situation.

    "He's not saying anything!" Mylos shouted to his leader. "What do I do?!"

    "Drop him," Maxie replied casually as Erik felt his own grip slipping.

    "What?!" Mylos roared back indecisively.

    Erik's hand slipped off Mylos's arm, the only thing now keeping him from a fatal fall was the admin's weak grip on his other hand.

    "Do it," Maxie ordered, he sounded as if the decision was as simple as choosing what to have for breakfast.

    "I…" Mylos replied, but the choice was taken from him. Erik's rain soaked hand slipped out of the Magma member's grasp, faintly hearing the admin shout "NO!" from above.

    Erik dropped at pace, the ground below becoming larger and larger as he neared it. He closed his eyes as he accepted the fact it was the end for him. Friends he had lost along the way flashing before his eyes, favourites like Gully, Ziggy and especially Ice stuck in his mind longer than the others as he braced for an impact that never came.

    "Follow them!" came a voice that sounded distinctly like Maxie's.

    He felt himself soaring through the air at a fast pace. "Is this what death feels like?" he asked himself, before carefully opening his eyes, only a little, to see Steven staring straight at him; they were on the back of Latias.

    The crimson and white creature let out a huge screech as they soared through the skies, through the lands of Hoenn at a casual pace.

    "Latias hasn't really been tamed, so we can only take it slow," Steven shouted across to Erik, his voice almost getting lost in the wind. "So outrunning those guys won't be possible," he followed, pointing behind Erik.

    Erik spun his head to see both Mylos and Grant riding atop Golbats as they trailed the duo. He was in a state of shock, feeling his eyes wide open and finding himself unable to speak.

    "It's alright," Steven chuckled, "you're safe now. Got yourself in a bit of a sticky situation back there I see. Don't worry, Latias and I watched it all unfold, you were never in any danger."

    "You could've come sooner," Erik finally managed to say, but Steven just laughed his words off.

    "Then you wouldn't owe me another one!" he joked in response. "You owe me two favours now, and it's time I took you up on the first!"

    "Which is?" Erik enquired, speaking more effortlessly now. He felt fatigue settling in, the events that had transpired at the institute had taken their toll on him, and he now worried if Cecilia and the director had managed to get out of Magma's grasp in better shape than he did.

    "We are going to a small unnamed island in the ocean, off the coast of Hoenn, where Latias and Latios call their home. I believe meteor rocks fell there during the shower that created Meteor Falls, and these space rocks may contain answers I'm looking for about a newly discovered phenomena, 'Mega Evolution'."

    "'Mega Evolution'?"

    "Some specific Pokemon are capable of harnessing the power of certain meteor rocks, temporarily absorbing the energy stored within to enter a new form. The effects aren't permanent, however, and the Pokemon reverts to its original state after a short time, and must wait for the power within the meteorite to recharge until it is able to mega-evolve again."

    "What are the side effects?"

    "Unknown. As I said, we have only recently discovered the phenomenon."

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    Latias landed softly on the island, which was more akin to a huge piece of rock jutting out of the ocean. The land rose sharply towards a square shaped summit at the island's highest point, the grass covered pathway that led there clouded by thick oak trees. A Latios could be seen nesting at the island's peak, the creature looked almost identical to his sister, apart from a palette swap. Where Latias was crimson and white, the Latios was aqua and silver.

    Erik and Steven silently climbed the pathway, unsure of what to expect. They pushed their way through thickets and low hanging branches from menacing looking trees, the climb to the top was short, however the journey upwards wasn't as quick as they would've hoped.

    Steven reached the summit first, waiting a moment for Erik to catch up then proceeding ahead to the Latios. Erik noticed the peak of the island was littered with meteorite, from small powerless brown stone to huge hulking black rocks almost the size of himself.

    A sudden screech from behind caused the duo to spin around, as the Magma Golbats landed behind them, Mylos and Grant leaping off in unison. Latios instantly flew away startled, unused to visitors; the beast seemed to Erik to be a powerful Pokemon, so he was unsure why it would flee instead of protect its territory.

    "Why'd you do that?!" Steven groaned to Mylos, who had stepped forward ahead of his comrade. "We landed down there so we didn't scare the Latios off!"

    "Oops.." Mylos muttered sarcastically, before turning to Erik. "Err, yeah, sorry for that back there."

    Erik felt an anger surge within him. Mylos had almost killed him, and would have if Steven hadn't saved him, but the admin just seemed rather bemused by the whole situation. He made sure to keep his cool, but what Mylos said next really shocked him.

    "So," the admin started, "you're the Pokemon Champion of Hoenn," he chuckled to Steven. "Not quite the Pokemon World Champion, mind, but impressive anyway I guess. What're you doing helping this runt?" he asked, pointing to Erik.

    "None of your business. Leave this island at once," Steven demanded. Even when he raised his voice, he still seemed so calm and in control.

    "How about we make ourselves a little deal," Mylos countered. "A double battle, and the loser must leave this island never to return. We will see what little stunt you're pulling here."

    "Are you insane?!" Grant shouted, before straightening suddenly. "Err.. sorry boss, it's just.. that's the Champion, and Erik has beaten both of us before, more than once."

    "Didn't Maxie give you some new Pokemon?!" Mylos roared. Unlike Steven, you could feel the admin's fury when he raised his voice. "Besides, I've bought my A-Team, just follow me."

    "Deal," Steven interrupted the duo, speaking for both himself and Erik. The Latias and Latios both hovered above the island, out of range of any wild attacks, but close enough to watch the battle unfold on their home island.

    Grant threw a Koffing into the fray, Mylos beside him using a Camerupt. Erik sent Pip out for a taste of battle, with Steven using a Pokemon that he had never seen before, Metang.

    Steven's psychic and steel dual type beast destroyed Koffing with ease, using psychic mind waves to fry the poison type from within. Pip tried to follow up by aiming a water pulse down the hole at the top of Camerupt's armour, using the same method Horde had shown her in the fight with Maxie.

    The Wingull glided towards Mylos's creature, hovering just above the slow moving beast to launch liquid, but she had underestimated the Camerupt. The fire and ground type Pokemon leapt into the air and grabbed Pip in its jaws, before crushing the life out of Erik's Wingull with ease. Another friend lost caused Erik to tear up once more, but this time there was no evolution to save his Pokemon.

    Dive was out next for Erik, with Grant only left with the Golbat he flew atop of.

    "Don't use that to battle you fool, that's our only way out of here!" Mylos roared, with Grant immediately stopping in his tracks, a weak "sorry" squeaking out.

    Erik's Wailmer didn't have to move as the Metang zoomed over to the Camerupt and picked up the beast with surprising ease, tossing it over the edge as if it were a small boulder. Leaving Mylos with only his Golbat, which he also declined to use.

    Upon seeing their defeat, the two Magma members recoiled. But Erik wasn't about to let them leave easily.

    "You tried to kill me!" he roared, charging towards the defeated duo. "Do you just do what Maxie tells you?! Are you just puppets?!"

    Grant slipped over as he retreated, but Mylos merely held out a hand. "You got us wrong, kid."

    "How?! You dropped me!"

    "It's Maxie, he's not right. He's getting paranoid, thinking there's a traitor in our midst, telling Team Rocket everything that we plan. But he's wrong, they are one step ahead of us because they have more resources, more manpower, they have Tabitha telling them all about our ways. Maxie is losing his mind, he realises more and more every day that he'll never see Courtney again, and it's killing him." Mylos's head dropped lower and lower with every word, as if what was occurring to his best friend was tearing him apart internally. "Come on Grant, let's get out of here."

    Without a word the grunt followed his superior as the two mounted their Golbats and flew from the island, Latios and Latias landing softly back on their homeland as the threats disappeared into the distance.

    "I know you're the Champion, but I didn't expect you to be that tough," Erik said in wonderment to his battle partner.

    "No Erik, you're the real star," Steven replied as the Latios crawled over to Erik and began rubbing his nose against him. "And Latios knows it!" Steven laughed. "The emotion you show when losing a Pokemon is commendable. Usually when a trainer gets a few badges and loses many Pokemon, they become hardened to it, or they begin to see their Pokemon as just tools used in battle. You, however, really do care for yours, like they're your friends. No wonder Latios wishes to fight for you, he senses your inner strength."

    "He does?!" Erik blurted, before locking eyes with the psychic and dragon dual type. He realised that the two had bonded already. "You do, don't you," he whispered lovingly whilst stroking the creature with both hands. "I'm going to name you 'Soar'."

    "Here," Steven followed, strolling over to one of the huge hulking black rocks, and ripping out a strange coloured circular stone which was lodged within, handing it to Erik.

    The stone fitted neatly into the palm of Erik's hand. It reminded him of an eye, clear all the way through apart from the centre containing an aqua and silver iris which matched the Latios's skin. Steven ripped a second stone from the rock, this one featuring a crimson and white centre, before attempting to search for more.

    "The stones are usually clear all the way through," Steven shouted to Erik as he ran his hands along the rock, feeling for any loose parts. "But as soon as a Pokemon absorbs the energy within, part of them enters the stone, creating a link between the two. Because the meteorite landed here, I guess Latios and Latias absorbed the power themselves unknowingly."

    "How do I get it to work?" Erik asked, rolling the stone around in his hand as if it would reveal the answer.

    "Just direct it at 'Soar', he'll absorb the energy and mega evolve. As I said before though, the effects are only temporary and you'll have to wait for the stone to recharge before using it again." Steven circled the rock once more, but was unable to find any more of the special stones. "Must've just been those two, come on, time to go."

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    Erik had no clue as to how to fly atop a Pokemon, so he watched Steven do so on his Latias instead, taking lessons in between some much needed sleep as they returned to the Weather Institute. The two had parted ways with a smile and a thank you, leaving Erik facing the Institute Director at the bottom of the tower.

    "Where's Maxie," Erik asked first.

    "He left with Mylos and Grant," the director replied in a more assured tone than Erik had heard previously. "I think they gave up when they realised we had no information on what they were searching for."

    "And Cecilia?" Erik asked, noticing she was not present.

    "She has already left, said something about dropping the paper she was writing as all her notes had been destroyed in the fighting, and taking a new direction in her life."

    "Did she say what that may be?" Erik asked with genuine intrigue.

    "Nope, just said something about this whole scenario showing her that she can actually make a difference, whatever that means."

    "Maybe she plans to become a trainer?" Erik thought to himself. "Or maybe take the fight to Magma? Interesting."

    "I must thank you," the director continued, noticing the silence. "We here at the Institute all keep a Pokemon named Castform to study because of their ability to change with the weather and absorb its effects. I'd like you to have one, as without you, I don't know what Magma would have done to me," his voice trailed off as he handed over a Pokeball.

    "Absorb? Then I'm going to name you 'Sponge'!," Erik whispered to the Pokeball, before seeing it zap off to storage, now that Soar was his sixth Pokemon. "Thank you Director, I suppose I should now continue on the road to Fortree City and the sixth gym!" he barled in excitement as he spoke about the next destination on his journey.

    The director smiled back at him as he began his trek towards the next city, the journey wasn't far at all. So much had happened today but he still had more questions than answers: What next for Magma? Had Maxie really lost his mind? What's Cecilia's "new direction"? Along with many more.

    He was snapped from his thoughts as he reached the edge of the city, firstly by the entire place being atop trees. Secondly, by another familiar face standing on a wooden pathway between a couple of the treehouses, as May caught sight of him.

    "Erik!" she screamed with genuine joy, rushing towards a ladder before descending to greet him.
     

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  • Oh, nice to see Ceilia at the beginning. The mention of her leaving at the end seems kind of sudden and it would have been nice if she and Erik did a goodbye scene. She starts to grow on me, so perhaps we'll see her again?

    I already mentioned to you real quick you have Erik meet with Maxie earlier than expected and the backstory concerning Team Magma's involvement ith Team Rocket.The beginning of their battle was a bit rushed, though understandable, but things got much more interested with Horde and Camerupt (yay Horde evolving! ) The double battle with Steven and Erik against Mylos and Grant does has a bit of comic relief, but I think I prefer the battle with Maxie as it's more exciting. Shall be interesting to see if Erik will use Latios in battle sometimes.

    A couple grammar/awkward sentence corrections I probably forgot while betaing this chapter:

    "I…" Mylos replied, but the choice was taken from him. Erik's rain soaked hand slipped out of the Magma member's grasp, faintly hearing the admin shout "NO!" from above.

    Hm, this parts sounds like Erik's hand heard Mylos shouting, lol. I think I suggested under the lines of "Erik's rain soaked hand slipped out of the Magma member's grasp and he faintly herad the admin shout "No!" from above." That way, the pronoun "he" refers to Erik. You can also rewrite it as "Erik's rain soaked hand slipped out of the Magma member's grasp, the trainer faintly hearing the admin shout "No!" from above."

    Erik's Wailmer didn't have to move as the Metang zoomed over to the Camerupt and picked up the beast with surprising ease, tossing it over the edge as if it were a small boulder. Leaving Mylos with only his Golbat, which he also declined to use.
    Can't remember if I suggested something for this part. Either way, bolded part you can change it to "That left Mylos with only his Golbat (etc)", which would sound better in my opinion.

    Overall another fun chapter, looking forward to more!
     
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    Chapter Nineteen - Aerial Ascension​


    Dozens of oak, beech, mahogany and elm trees arched over a sizable dome compiled of strong wooden layers, with thick beechwood houses resting neatly within the canopies. Dappled sunlight barely touched the ground's surface as Erik and May strolled through the thick undergrowth to reach of the hardiest looking trees; a towering elm which loomed over the duo, the aging bark on its surface peeling off as if it were shedding its skin.

    A ladder indented itself into the majestic tree's trunk, seemingly carved in by the residents of this strange town. The climb upwards was slow and steady, with little grip to be found on the ladder's rungs as Erik felt as if he could slip and fall at any time.

    As he and May reached the top of the ladder, they ascended onto a wooden platform which acted as the front porchway for one of Fortree City's humble homes. A score of houses spread out across the treetops, nestled in as if they were bird nests in the trees with each having its own platform. The porchways were connected by treacherous looking rope bridges, but despite the apparent peril, Erik knew he'd have to clamber across if he wished to reach the gym.

    "This place is dangerous," Erik remarked, a strong fear of heights surging through him like poison in his veins.

    "Oh Erik," May giggled, "stop being such a wuss! The people that live here manage just fine."

    "Where's the gym anyway? I'm here to win my sixth badge not play in the trees!" Erik retorted, attempting to sound tough, but May only chuckled to herself once more.

    "Did you not see that huge dome, dummy?"

    "That was the gym?!" he remarked in awe.

    "It is a flying type gym, the birds need the space to do their thing." She fluttered Erik a smile, which felt not only a little patronising to him.

    They stepped onto the first rope bridge, which wobbled and shook like jelly as soon as Erik stepped on it, before he received the fright of his life as he was flung forward. May had pushed him.

    "Hey!" he shouted back, panting.

    "You're so slow," May laughed, the sound as melodic as birdsong in the trees.

    He picked up the pace a little and despite being terrified he didn't wish to show any more weakness to May. "Why are you even here in Fortree?" he asked as the thought re-entered his mind.

    "Visiting an old family friend, who we're going to see quickly before you head off to the gym."

    "We are?"

    "Yep, I met her when I was a child and we have been friends ever since, even though I'm ten years younger than her."

    "And why are we visiting your friend, exactly?" he enquired, slightly irritated that he couldn't go straight to the gym, but May didn't appear to be listening. Instead, she was staring at a huge treehouse, certainly the largest in the city, at the other end of the rope bridge they were trekking across.

    Instead of beechwood, this house was contrived of oak, with glass windows and a roof made out of both straw and leaves. It dwarfed the other houses in the vicinity. Whereas Fortree City's other homes consisted of a single large room, this one had two floors; the lower of which being larger as it held up a single room that appeared to be a bedroom.

    "We're here!" May shrieked in delight, banging on the door with an enclosed fist. A cheery woman in her late-twenties burst through the door, holding her arms aloft and hugging May at the sight of the researcher. The woman wore an aqua blue top with white trousers and shoes, but most peculiar about her was a matching blue helmet with goggles resting lazily atop. Her helmet had a hole on either side where her lilac-coloured hair sprang forth like wings.

    "It's so good to see you again May," the mystery woman remarked, her commanding voice flowing through the air like wind. "And who is your friend?"

    "This is Erik, he's looking to challenge the gym here," May replied. "And Erik, this is Winona, the Fortree gym leader."

    "Getting someone else to do your dirty work for you as usual May?" Winona chuckled, her facial muscles tensing fiercely as she did so. May blushed.

    "Well..." she began, before considering her answer. "If Erik solves your problem, will you allow him to challenge the gym?"

    "What problem?" Erik interrupted, feeling even more irritated now that we would have to wait even longer until he has able to challenge for the gym badge.

    "We have a Kecleon problem, they change colour and type to camouflage into their environment, and we are currently infested with these invisible creatures who're eating all of our stockpiled food," Winona started. "I would clear them out but have no idea how to find the Pokemon, so I asked May and her father for help."

    "And I bought this!" May shouted excitedly, reaching into her backpack and withdrawing a pair of blue goggles with lime green lenses. "A Silph Scope, rebranded as the 'Devon Scope' over here in Hoenn, it allows you to see invisible Pokemon through thermal vision."

    "Here you go," May added, before handing the goggles over to Erik, who promptly proceeded to wrap them around his head, covering his eyes with the device. All around him the room was a dark blue, apart from the two blood-red and orange figures of May and Winona hovering in front of him. "Good luck!" May chuckled, making him immediately feel used by her, and not for the first time.

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    The Kecleons proved no match for his thermal vision, the creatures appearing through the goggles as visibly as a fire on an open field. The easy victories allowed Erik to finally challenge for his sixth badge.

    He cautiously climbed down another ladder, emerging at the dome's door. The interior was eerily empty but surprisingly spacious. Fans rotated effortlessly on the walls, hoping to aid flying Pokemon as they soared through the air. But what struck Erik most was a smoke machine at the top of the dome, which generated a huge layer of fog above the two rows of fans for the aerial beasts to conceal themselves within. A spiral staircase took up the far corner of the room, presumably leading up to the smoke machine.

    "A challenger enters!" a boy of around eighteen roared as Erik gawped at the thick layer of smoke. He hadn't noticed the two trainers until now. Winona, however, was nowhere to be seen.

    "I'm Kylee," a slightly older woman followed, her ocean blue hair wrapped up in a bun as she lay her piercing mud-brown eyes upon Erik. "And this is Will," she continued, her friend's coal black hair was spiked up so highly he reminded Erik almost of a pineapple. A loud and annoying pineapple.

    "Who will the challenger battle first?!" Will demanded, speaking with a boom in his voice as if he was attempting to be an announcer.

    "Kylee," he replied instantly, ineffectively hoping to shut the boy up.

    "The challenger chooses Kylee!" Will roared into the vast openness of the room, his female counterpart a complete contrast as she looked Erik up and down, judging him with an unbreakable calmness the entire time.

    "Swellow, bring me good fortune," she spoke, giving her Pokeball a soft kiss before launching it into the air.

    Erik replied with Dive, the Wailmer rolling along the floor joyfully as his characteristic wide smile spread gently across his features. He also released Blaze from his Pokeball to stand by his side. He had always taken comfort in his eldest friend's presence.

    The huge bird stretched its navy blue and white wings outwards, flapping them slowly but powerfully to propel itself into the air, then it was gone. Ascending swiftly into the generated fog the Swellow became invisible in the thick smoke, as if Kylee's Pokemon had vanished completely.

    "Dive," Erik began, speaking softly to his Pokemon. "Shoot up water blasts, it can't hide forever and you never know our luck."

    The Wailmer responded instantly, opening its wide smile to reveal a humongous mouth, jets of water streaming outwards, powerful waves of aqua that pushed towards the smoke.

    The two rows of fans that surrounded the mid-level of the dome suddenly roared into action, from slowly moving propellers to rapid rotators. The water blasts smashed into the aerial currents and exploded on contact, leaving a bucketful of water falling back downwards, smacking into the wooden floor and splashing both Erik and Kylee.

    "There must be a switch up there," Erik thought to himself, trying to spot the device but unable to see a glimpse of anything through the smoke. Suddenly his attention was thrown back to Dive, his Wailmer rocketing across the room before crashing into the floor. The Swellow had used the opportunity to attack, before rapidly retreating back into the fog.

    Erik and Dive remained clueless, they both had no idea how they could attack the Swellow as it zoomed back downwards, aided by the rapidly rotating fans. The flying type launched a fast paced attack leading with its beak, smashing into the Wailmer who had almost reached her breaking point.

    Erik recalled Dive, sending out Dancer in her place. He hoped that the Pikachu's agility and type advantage would pull through here, but still had no idea as to how to attack the Swellow. Luckily, Dancer did. The Pikachu sprinted over to the spiral staircase, climbing each stair quickly with little hops as she ascended towards the fog herself.

    However, her attempts were in vain, as soon as Dancer reached the halfway point of the stairway, vigorous gusts of wind launched her over the edge. All that kept her from falling to her doom was an iron railing that snaked its way around both sides of the staircase, as she gripped on tightly with both of her front paws.

    Swellow seized the opportunity, diving down as straight as an arrow towards his dangling foe. Kylee's Pokemon dived underneath Erik's Pokemon in an attempt to shoot back upwards and knock the Pikachu off. The Swellow had fallen into Dancer's trap.

    Dancer released her grip, the wind pushing her backwards slightly but just enough for her to be able to grab onto the ascending Swellow's back. The duo shot into the smoke and all that followed was a momentary silence, like a few seconds of calmness in a thunderous storm. Before, like a storm, the clouds lit up with electricity.

    The fried Swellow fell through the air, past the fans which had suddenly calmed down, and to the ground. Dancer rode her foe in a crouched stance the whole time, like a surfer preparing to hit a wave, and leapt off at just the right moment.

    "The challenger wins the first round!" Will boomed.

    "Skarmory," Kylee followed, before softly kissing her next Pokeball. "Avenge Swellow."

    The metal bird roared into life as it escaped the capsule, a metallic screech piercing the air. Erik gave a quick nod to Blaze in response, knowing his fire type always did well against steel Pokemon.

    Kylee's flying type aimed directly for the smoke, and to what Erik presumed would be the fan switch. Blaze wasn't about to let his foe have the opportunity, launching a barrage of fireballs which cut through the smoke like a hot knife through butter, each missing the target as new smoke covered where the old had dissipated.

    Erik waited for the inevitable, the fans were sure to speed up any second now and Dancer's trick wouldn't work twice. Time moved in slow motion as anticipation swelled within him, but nothing happened, the fans remained ticking along slowly.

    Blaze continued launching fireballs. One such parted the smoke to hit something solid, the object emanating a metallic screech as the Skarmory fell from the sky, twirling effortlessly like a falling feather as its limp body tumbled to the ground. In the brief moments the smoke had parted, Erik saw that the Skarmory had been desperately attempting to get a switch to work next to the spiral staircase. Presumably the fan speed switch had been fried by the electrical attack from Dancer.

    "And the challenger leaves Kylee to her last Pokemon!" Will once again sounded, resulting in a fierce look from his colleague.

    "Shut up and fix that switch!" Kylee growled, her usual calmness disappearing alongside her hopes of defeating Erik. Will complied without a word, seemingly struck back by his friend's fury, and he began to climb the staircase.

    Kylee's final Pokemon was a Swablu, Erik countering with Horde, knowing the fans could restart at any time he now tried a new tactic. One he had thought up whilst Kylee and Will bickered.

    Horde waited, the Tentacruel now mature enough along with a bond strong enough to read his trainer's thoughts. The fans blurred into action, but still Horde remained motionless, almost inviting the Swablu to attack even if his foe had the fan-generated currents to support it.

    Kylee's Pokemon attacked, riding through the currents and gathering speed. The Swablu flew through the air nowhere near as quickly as the Swellow, it's small and weak wings made it seem as if it moved while carrying an extra ten tons.

    Horde whipped out a tentacle like a lash, followed by another, then another, until a half-dozen or so thick arms wrapped themselves around the creature and crushed the life out of Kylee's Pokemon. Erik had won the first matchup just as the fans clicked back into action. Will climbed back down the staircase, ready to fight.

    A brown ball of fur sprouting a duo of bird-like heads and two large clawed feet was Will's first fighter. The Duduo made no attempt to fly, before Erik remembered that the Pokemon had no wings, a strange choice in a gym full of aids for flying types - and so it proved.

    Blaze ruthlessly attacked his opponent, incinerating the Pokemon as if it were a ball of fluff in a stream of lava. Will had lost the first of his four Pokemon within seconds.

    "No announcement?" Erik teased, Will's expression at the taunt changing from focused to tensed. The gym trainer stayed silent, launching a second Pokeball into the air.

    "Dancer," Erik followed up. "You know what to do."

    The Pikachu purred in response, studying her opponent. The Pelipper ascended quickly, aiming for the switch to blast the fans into action. Dancer charged up an attack, and fired. But she was too slow. The fans blazed into life, emitting aerial currents that sucked the electricity out of the air and rendered the Pikachu's attack useless.

    Dancer recoiled as her attack failed with Will's Pokemon swiftly taking the opportunity to strike, surfing the fan currents at high speed before being fried by an electrical attack. Erik's Pokemon had feigned weakness once more and tricked her opponent. Dancer was becoming a master of deception.

    Will whispered something to the next Pokeball. Erik was out of earshot, but saw tears forming in his opponent's eyes. He felt slightly sorry for his foe, but being a Pokemon trainer was a ruthless career, especially if you wished to be a future gym leader. A second Doduo was the Pokemon Will had pinned his hopes on.

    Erik reached to his belt and brushed two fingers over Soar's Pokeball, before pulling his hand away and nodding to Blaze. His Latios could wait until he battled Winona, he wanted to keep the legendary Pokemon as a surprise alternative. Not only that, he also feared the power of mega evolution. He was clueless as to the consequences of unleashing the megastones's energy on Soar.

    Blaze's tactic was identical to how he handled the previous Doduo, blasting the flying type with fire in an attempt to incinerate the bird.

    "Doduo! Pull through, please!" Will screamed, his childlike demeanour shining in the light of the flames.

    Erik suddenly realised the shine wasn't coming from the flames, but instead a bright white light in the middle of them. Once Blaze stopped attacking and the fires dissipated, a new Pokemon emerged from within. Doduo had evolved. The Pokemon that had taken its place had grown an extra head along with all its features becoming enhanced. The creature now stood at almost twice the size.

    The Dodrio moved quickly, taking advantage of a stunned Blaze and launched an attack from each of its heads. The right hand side beak shot a blast of fire, the middle head a wave of electricity and the final one a burst of ice. All three collided with a single wave of roaring flames from Blaze simultaneously, the Combusken's attack equally as powerful as the Dodrio's tri-attack.

    Both Pokemon were thrown backwards from the resulting explosion, crashing into the ground behind them. Moments passed as they clambered back to their feet in unison, before Blaze used his remaining energy to leap across the room, grappling onto the bird's middle head. The Dodrio had him just where it wanted, the two flanking heads prepared an assault, inhaling air before launching an attack of both ice and fire.

    Blaze released his grip, falling to the floor as both attacks crashed into the middle head, creating another explosive reaction which seemed to fry all three of the bird's brains at once. Or maybe, Erik thought, only the middle head had one singular large brain.

    "No!" Will screamed, throwing his final Pokeball into the air with force. A second Pelipper materialised from within. Dancer was once again released into the fray.

    "Is that all you've got?" Erik laughed, provoking his opponent up even more.

    "Just shut up!" Will yelled, his voice like a childs who had had their toys snatched away from them.

    The fans had remained whirling in full force as the Pelipper escaped into the smoke. The dual water and flying type lingered in the clouds awaiting Dancer to make her move, feeling safe and secure whilst out of sight.

    Dancer sprinted up the spiral staircase for a second time, but this time, when she hit the air currents, she clinged on forcefully to a railing. Sidestepping her way slowly up the stairs, the Pelipper remained stationary in the smoke, feeling safer to wait there than risk an attack.

    "Your Pikachu can't trick my Pelly! He's smart!" Will roared, anger surging through his childlike features in the form of twitches and tense expressions.

    "Or he now knows that Dancer has tricked two Pokemon in this gym, and doesn't wish to be the third," Erik replied with complete calm.

    "But how would he know? He's been in his ball this whole time," Will countered.

    "Pokemon channel their trainer's thoughts and energies, they know what you know," Erik replied, feeling like he was echoing Steven's advice to himself.

    Dancer had reached the top of the wind currents, she was safe and Pelipper knew this all too well. Will's Pokemon launched a stream of water at the Pikachu, who retaliated by electrifying the attack. Once the electrified water hit Dancer she soaked up the electricity, taking minimal damage. The electrical current flowed through the water which resonated from the Pelipper's mouth, and once it reached the source, it destroyed the Pokemon from within. Erik had earned the right to challenge Winona.

    Will slouched to the ground, his eyes clouded with both frustration and exasperation as they remained locked on Erik.

    "How did you beat me so easily?" Will cried out, finally lowering his gaze as he slammed a fist into the ground.

    "You had no connection with any of your Pokemon except for that Dodrio," Erik started, feeling like a father advising a son. "That's why your Dodrio gave me such a challenge."

    "But you said Pelly could hear my thoughts?!" Will shouted, like a petulant child.

    "He can, but having a strong bond with a Pokemon and having you and your partner fight for each other is completely different to your Pelly channeling your thoughts inside a Pokeball."

    "So what do I do?"

    "Treat your Pokemon like friends rather than tools for battle. Open up to them emotionally and allow them to channel your anger, your fears and your strength. Like you did with your Dodrio," Erik finished, before strolling outside without a further word, he needed to visit the Pokemon Centre before he battled Winona.

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    Erik returned to the gym after healing his team at the Pokemon Centre on the outskirts of town. The climb through the trees was easier to him the second time around as his thoughts remained focused entirely on the upcoming battle. Although he did not recall seeing Winona during his duels with both Kylee and Will.

    "Surely she must have been watching?" he thought to himself during his descent down one of the built-in ladders. He had spent the majority of the trek pondering battle tactics. He knew Winona would use the smoke and fans more effectively than her subordinates.

    He pushed aside the large oakwood door, a loud creak flowing through the air as he did so. When he entered the towering dome the entire interior appeared to have changed. Erik blinked twice in disbelief, before realising that the only difference was the lack of smoke. The machine had been turned off, causing the building to seem twice as large.

    "Erik," Winona beckoned from the apex of the spiral staircase, her voice echoing sharply around the room. "Follow me."

    The gym leader climbed out of a trapdoor at the top of the stairway which led to the roof, Erik briskly following. He half-ran up the staircase, each stair leading onto another, and then another, it seemed to be everlasting as he impatiently awaited the fight for his sixth badge.

    He finally reached the top of the stairway. Gasping for breath, he pulled himself through the trapdoor, which led to a ladder on the other side. Climbing the metal rungs which were still slick with rainwater one at a time, he ascended onto a large platform which towered over the trees.

    Large drops of rain battered him. He hadn't noticed the weather until now, the trees protecting him from the falling water as he had wandered the city. The platform was grass-green in colour and completely flat. Two human-sized birdcages lay to either side, glued to the ground by gigantic metal bolts which pinned the rim to the surface. There were no rails or barriers to stop a Pokemon from falling over the edge, giving flying types a distinct advantage.

    "Peaceful, isn't it?" Winona spoke as she lifted her head and inhaled deeply, taking in the scent of the open skies above her. "Please enter your cage, it will stop you from being swept over the edge in the fight."

    Erik complied, but as he made his way to the cage he found himself bracing as he battled harsh winds due to the altitude. The gusts made it seem as if nature itself was acting as the two layers of rapidly rotating fans that affected the battle so heavily back in the dome.

    As soon as he stepped into the birdcage, its metal door slammed shut. A sharp clicking briefly followed to signal that he was locked within. Presumably to stop him running after a falling Pokemon and withdrawing them into their Pokeball just before they hit the ground.

    As he pondered the thought, he was snapped back to attention by Winona releasing a Swellow into battle, the large bird sweeping its wings furiously as it launched itself into the open skies aided by the howling winds.

    Erik brushed over Blaze's Pokeball, then Dancer's, before deciding that he wanted to save the two for Winona's stronger Pokemon. Leaf was weak against flying types and Soar still being kept for the element of surprise later on, leaving him with a choice of either Horde or Dive. The former got called to fight for his proficiency against flying types in battle against Kylee.

    Horde shot streams of ferocious water and stinging poisonous liquid at his foe, but the Swellow had already shot up into the skies, the attacks missing the target before Winona's Pokemon managed to ascend even further out of reach.

    A couple of seconds passed before the Swellow divebombed the platform. Horde shot out further blasts of water followed by poison directly upwards, which surprisingly missed the bird. Until Erik realised that the Swellow wasn't aiming for Horde. Both Pokemon and trainer were caught out by the rapid movement of the descending flying type, the Swellow flashing past the platform like a bolt of lightning.

    All that could be heard for a few moments was the melodic pattering of rain against the platform's surface, as Erik's Tentacruel warily crawled over to the edge. Horde leaned over in an attempt to spot the Swellow in the depths of the city until he was suddenly hauled over, the Swellow gripping onto his large nose with her strong beak and hoisting Horde over the side, the Tentacruel tumbling towards its peril.

    Horde hastily whipped out his many arms, grabbing onto the edge and swinging himself back over with all his might despite the Swellow remaining attached to his face. The two Pokemon crashed down onto the platform's hard, plastic surface with a thud.

    The Swellow looked to regain an immediate advantage, shooting back off into the skies. Horde had no wish to let his foe escape from his grasp, spitting a plethora of acid at the bird which harshly bit at the Swellow's skin on contact.

    In agony, the Swellow swept downwards for an attack, Horde launching a pulse of water at her in return. Winona's Pokemon appeared to morph into two as it moved with such agility through the air, dodging the watery blasts and landing an attack on her foe before flying back into the air.

    Horde recoiled before he could compose himself, the Swellow beginning her descent once more as she prepared for a final assault on the weakened Tentacruel. Winona's Pokemon reused her double team tactic, but this time Horde remained perfectly still, biding his time. Swellow opened her beak and roared, sensing victory, before a half-dozen tentacles lashed up and whipped the bird out of the sky, then wrapped themselves around the flying type and squeezed the remaining life out of Winona's Pokemon. Horde had won Erik the first fight, collapsing in a heap through exhaustion.

    Winona launched her second Pokeball into the open skies, a Skarmory roaring repeatedly as it emerged. Blaze fried steel type Pokemon for fun, and so Erik hoped it would happen once more as his oldest friend stepped into the arena to face off against Winona's next Pokemon. The dual type soared into the skies instantly, performing pirouettes in the sky to avoid fire blasts before divebombing the Combusken, scratching Erik's Pokemon a couple of times and ascending back into the air whilst dodging yet more waves of flame in its twirling ascension.

    The Skarmory swept down for a second flurry of attacks, but this time Blaze was ready. The Combusken waited calmly until Winona's Pokemon was almost upon him, before launching two fierce kicks into the creature's abdomen. The Skarmory crashed into the surface, to be met by a blast of fire from Blaze who melted the Pokemon's steel shell whole.

    "Darn," Winona growled, her voice almost lost in the howling winds and ferocious rain. "But you have no chance against my strongest Pokemon!" she declared, launching a Pokeball into the skies to reveal an Altaria. The huge blue dragon flapped its pearl-white cotton wings powerfully as it began its own flight into the clouds.

    "Aim for the wings!" Erik shouted to his Pokemon, not wanting to waste time by switching his Combusken out, even though Blaze seemed to recoil every few seconds, as the rain slowly chipped away at his friend's health.

    Blaze launched fire at the cotton formed wings of the Altaria, but the dragon type turned sharply on its side, avoiding the flames and launching a counterattack. Winona's Pokemon attacked with dragon breath, the force of the move throwing the Combusken backwards and nearly over the edge as he crashed into the ground alongside Erik's cage.

    "Blaze, get up!" Erik shouted as he saw the Altaria charge towards her foe. But his shouts were in vain.

    As his Pokemon climbed to his feet, the Altaria grabbed him in her talons, swiping the Combusken off his feet. Winona's creature flew up both high and far enough until she hung over the far edge of the dome, and dropped Blaze.

    Erik flew forward, grabbing the cage door in desperation as he tried to force it open so he could recall Blaze, but once again his efforts were in vain. The door was locked shut. He closed his eyes, and spoke to his Combusken almost in prayer, wishing his words would help Blaze survive a fatal fall. But even in his most hopeful thoughts, Erik knew that surviving a drop from that height would be impossible.

    "Whenever I've needed you, you've saved me," he begged, tears streaming relentlessly down his face. "Whenever I've been unable to fight, you've pulled us all through the pain. Please don't leave me," he paused momentarily in his thoughts as visions of his father walking out on him as a child entered his mind, before he continued. "Enough people have left me, please not you too, I need you, I believe in you."

    "No way.." he heard Winona mutter in disbelief. Erik forced opened his eyes to see a dim light in the distance, as the Altaria perched itself and cooed victoriously atop her trainer's cage. He turned to see a ruby red coloured Pokemon rapidly running up the side of the dome, it bore orange feet and had flames emanating from around its wrists. A white mane sprouted from its head, held up by a red crest with two sharp points.

    "Blaze.." Erik whispered, as the Pokemon lunged through the air, leaping an impossible height and kicking the Altaria with feet covered in flames. The strange Pokemon then began pounding its foe with fists of fire, before it collapsed in a heap on the ground.

    Erik grabbed Blaze's Pokeball and withdrew the newly evolved Blaziken. The process of evolution must have saved his life, just like it had with Will's Dodrio, and the surge of adrenaline had allowed him to carry on momentarily fighting, but nothing could save him from the exhaustion and weakness his Blaziken now felt.

    "You pulled through again," Erik whispered to Blaze's Pokeball. "Now time for Soar."

    Altaria roosted atop the cage, regaining health along with Winona applying a hyper potion, the dragon flapping its wings happily at the treatment. Altaria was now almost back to full health before Erik even had time to switch in his Latios.

    "How did you get a legendary Pokemon?!" Winona howled through the winds and rain.

    Erik remained silent, his full focus remaining on the fight as Soar and Altaria ascended into the skies and traded blows. The two dragons proved evenly matched, swapping swipes and dragon breathes between each other before Erik dipped into his pocket almost subconsciously, rubbing his fingers over the megastone as he desired to witness its power.

    As Altaria crashed into the Latios, Erik made his move, hoping to swing the battle in his favour. The instant he pulled out the stone and pointed it in his Pokemon's direction, it engulfed Soar in what at first seemed like the light of evolution. However instead of a bright white light, pure darkness shrouded his Pokemon. The black cloud hung menacingly in the air for a few seconds until two red orbs pierced through the shadows. He noticed the stone in his hand had also turned completely black, like the soul had been drained out of it.

    The darkness dissipated leaving a huge dragon in its place. The Mega Latios seemed twice as large, his calm eyes replaced by two red slits. The colouring of his skin had changed as well, from ocean blue to turquoise. A deathly screech emerged from from the creature's mouth.

    "What is that?!" Winona shrieked, as Erik felt goosebumps upon his skin.

    The Latios focused its glare upon the Altaria, who seemed to be backing off slightly. Erik's Pokemon blasted its foe with a powerful beam contrived of pure darkness which seemed to evaporate the Altaria within its midst.

    Mega Latios let out another piercing screech, the sound so ugly it harshly banged against Erik's eardrums, forcing him to clap his hands over his ears, dropping the stone in the process. His eyes were drawn back to the megastone, colour slowly returning to the alien rock as the Latios dropped out of the sky, resuming its normal form as he crashed into the platform. The Pokemon looked weak and fragile after the ordeal, as if the lifeforce had been drained from him.

    Winona moved to grab the final Pokeball off her belt, until her hand froze in place. She looked shocked, like she had seen something she could not believe. She conceded victory to Erik and handed over her badge without a further word.

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    "I'm glad you won't use it again, it sounds dangerous," May whispered to Erik as they sat on a sturdy tree branch, their feet dangling freely over the edge. He had just filled her in on the gym battle and what had happened with Latios.

    "I just feel sorry for Latios," Erik replied, his head dropped low as he held his hand in hers.

    "You weren't to know what would happen." He felt May's eyes on him, as if her gaze pierced his skin and entered his soul. "So, what comes next on Erik's grand adventure?"

    Erik felt himself smiling. "Well I have two more badges to collect, and of course Team Magma to deal with. Maybe Giovanni too. But firstly I need to apologise to Latios. And do this."

    "Do what?" May replied curiously.

    His head felt as if it weighed a ton as he slowly lifted it, before he locked gazes with May and felt a huge rush of emotion. He leaned in and kissed her softly.

    Erik pulled away after only a couple of seconds, but May wasn't about to let him go. She grabbed Erik forcefully and pulled him back to her. She kissed him firmly, their lips interlocking then releasing as they weaved shapes with their tongues. For the first time in what seemed like forever, Erik felt joy, and for only a few moments, he was at peace.

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    "I'm sorry," Erik whispered to Soar, stroking the beast's long neck. "If I had known mega-evolution would cause you pain, I would never have tried it."

    The Latios purred softly in response, he seemed to have forgiven its trainer.

    Soar crouched down, beckoning Erik to mount who complied after a moment's hesitation. He grabbed onto the Latios's back before clambering onto his Pokemon.

    Soar took off, launching itself from the ground with its trainer in tow, who clung onto his Latios for his life. Erik felt his fear of heights take over him, before his Pokemon roared triumphantly. The sound was almost soothing to his ears as he sat up on his Pokemon's back, releasing his grip as the Latios hovered smoothly in the air.

    Erik shouted a jumble of words in glee, he could go wherever he wanted to now on the back of Soar. He was free.
     

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  • I do like the battle before Winona you have another trainer's Pokemon evolved. I've seen the main character's Pokemon evolved in several stories but don't see much the same thing happened to their opponent, so kudos for that! I also like the addition at the end of Erik's battle with Will over bonding Pokemon.

    Even though I mentioned seeing main character's Pokemon evolved earlier, still cool to see Blaze evolved too! The twist with Soar's mega stone is very interesting too. I may have a theory or two concerning that:

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    His head felt as if it weighed a ton as he slowly lifted it, before he locked gazes with May and felt a huge rush of emotion. He leaned in and kissed her softly.

    Erik pulled away after only a couple of seconds, but May wasn't about to let him go. She grabbed Erik forcefully and pulled him back to her. She kissed him firmly, their lips interlocking then releasing as they weaved shapes with their tongues. For the first time in what seemed like forever, Erik felt joy, and for only a few moments, he was at peace.

    Already mentioned this, but about time. =P Their relationship started off a bit rocky in the beginning, but it's starting to developed much better as the story progresses.

    Looking forward to next chapter!
     
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    Chapter Twenty - Stones​




    ?I only have to delay you!? Grant roared, his voice carrying across the mountaintop. The grunt sounded as if he was attempting to reassure himself as his fearful body language betrayed his words. The grunt peered at Erik through the dimming daylight, the setting sun?s heat continually waning as a chill slowly took to the air.

    ?How many times have I beaten you now?? Erik countered in a controlled tone, feeling a slight irritation at having to fight the Magma grunt. He had sighted a small wooden crate filled to the brim with various meteor fragments atop a small ridge. Mylos accompanied the box of stones, glaring down at him from beside the crate, clutching in his hand a ruby-red orb the size of Erik?s fist. ?And delay me for what?!? Erik followed.

    Grant quickly glanced back to Mylos, searching for a response, but the admin remained stiff, as if he were awaiting something. The grunt turned back to Erik, casting his gaze over the rock-strewn battlefield. They stood atop Mt.Pyre, oblivious to the battles which raged mercilessly all around them. Aqua and Magma members clashed all the way from the base of the mountain to the summit.

    ?Erik,? a gruff shout reached him from a couple of metres below. He turned to find a Sharpedo ramming into a Magma Numel and launching it off the edge, the fire type plummeting downwards to the calm waters of the lake which surrounded the mountain. ?Don?t let him distract you, we need to stop them from using the stones!? Archie barked, his fierce voice levitating over the sounds of battle, before the Aqua leader was engaged by two more Magma members clutching Pokeballs.

    Erik threw his backpack to the ground, rapidly reaching into the bag to find only a single hyper potion. His team were weak, most of them barely able to stand. Both the climb and the Magma resistance as he ascended the mountainside had depleted them.

    ?Here,? Cecilia shouted, throwing two bottles of soda water over a ledge to him. ?I mixed in some healing powder, they should do the job.? After throwing the bottles she immediately returned to her own battle, her freshly evolved Sceptile battling two koffings.

    A huge explosion rattled the ground he stood on as he caught the bottles, followed by yells of help as both a Magma grunt and Aqua member were launched over the edge of the mountain by a Koffing self destructing halfway down Mt. Pyre. All that was left of that particular battle was a gaping hole in the cliffside. Erik tried focusing on task at hand, but his mind carelessly wandered through his memories, searching his brain to how he had gotten to this point?

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    The crisp morning wind sailed through Erik?s chestnut-brown hair as he inhaled deeply, taking in both the fresh, warm air and the view. Both Route 120 and Route 121 spread out from underneath Soar?s body. The former was littered with ponds and small rivers, long grass and thick trees, all within a permanent mustiness. Route 121 however, was a single long path, carving its way through a vibrant rolling grassland.

    Erik had added two new Pokemon to his team, who now rested within storage. A Gloom called Happy for the constant smile on its face, despite the grass type usually being a rather grumpy Pokemon, as well as a Pelipper which he had named Pelly, after Will?s. The gym?s trainer had inspired him somewhat, seeing the youthful enthusiasm and naivety that he himself used to contain.

    Route 121?s main attraction however, was the Safari Zone. The Safari was a massive open area, full of fresh grasslands and open pools of water, the whole Zone contained Pokemon who called it their home. Many people volunteered to work there and look after all sorts of creatures that inhabited the area, which was split into four zones. By law, a trainer was allowed to enter and capture a Pokemon from each zone, although the Hoenn rules still applied so only the first Pokemon they encountered could be caught.

    The first of Erik?s conquests of the Zone was a Psyduck, the water type chased out of a pond by Dive before Horde wrapped its tentacles around the Pokemon for Erik to easily capture his new partner, who he named ?Quack?.

    Entering the second zone, he immediately spotted a Rhyhorn upon a manmade hill, the stone carved to resemble the natural habitat of certain Pokemon. Horde shot out leash like tentacles once more, wrapping the foe in them, before recoiling in agony. The Rhyhorn?s sharp, rocky skin piercing the Tentacruel?s arms. The rock and ground dual type charged at Horde, its horn like a knife on the front of its head. To defend himself, Erik?s Pokemon shot out a powerful foamy blast of water, which did more damage than Erik had wanted. The Rhyhorn now lay lifeless on the ground, unable to be captured.

    The third and fourth zones led to more success. A Xatu named Blitz and a Pinsir he called Warrior were Erik?s final two captures from the Safari Zone.

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    Erik?s mind snapped back to the present as he withdrew Blaze back into his Pokeball after dousing the Blaziken?s wounds with the hyper potion. Horde and Dancer sipped happily on the soda water, their health slowly restoring as the healing powder within the mixture hit their system.

    He flashed a glance back to Grant, before almost falling backwards in shock. The Magma grunt?s Koffing floated menacingly before him, before it closed its eyes and began to self destruct. Erik felt himself being hauled to the ground as the explosion shook the mountain, the force of whcih blasted Horde off of the edge. Dancer had tackled him to the ground just in time, but his Tentacruel wasn?t so lucky.

    Horde lashed out a dozen tentacles, grabbing onto anything and everything he could find. He managed to cling onto two large boulders which jutted out of the cliff side, and using the rocks to propel himself back up the mountain, barely managing to pull himself over.

    Grant?s Numel lay in wait for the Tentacruel, with Erik and Dancer still on the ground. The grunt?s Pokemon immediately charged at Horde, lowering its rock-encased skull to ram Erik?s Pokemon for a finishing blow, aiming to send the Tentacruel plummeting over the edge to his doom.

    Horde instantly lashed out his tentacles once more, wrapping them around yet more boulders which protruded from the mountain?s surface and swinging himself over the Numel. As Horde crashed back into the ground he fired a powerful water blast at his foe, launching Grant?s creature over the edge.

    The Tentacruel took a moment to pause for breath, inhaling and exhaling sharply whilst Erik fumbled around his belt for Horde?s Pokeball. Until a Mightyena seemingly appeared from thin air and leapt onto Erik?s Pokemon, grabbing onto the Tentacruel with jaws like a vicegrip. The force of the attack threw both Pokemon over the edge, Horde once more whipping out tentacles in an attempt to save himself, but the impact was too much. Grant?s Mightyena attempted to launch itself off of Horde in a last ditch effort to save its own life, but the Tentacruel wrapped its whip-like arms around his foe. If Horde was going down, he was taking the Mightyena with him.

    Erik ran over to the edge, seeing the duo crash into the mountainside time and time again as they continued their struggle. Each time Horde attempted to lash out tentacles and cling onto anything he could, the Mightyena simply bit down harder, causing Horde to recoil. The battle of the beasts ended abruptly as they crashed into a sharp crowd of rocks, almost out of sight. The lake that surrounded Mt. Pyre licking up and claiming the two lifeless Pokemon.

    An overwhelming sadness took him, the powerful emotion making his limbs feel weak, until he forced himself to feel something else in its place. Anger.

    Erik span on his heel at a sudden sharp sound to find himself face to face with an oncoming Mightyena, the beast looking to catch him unaware, until he was saved once again by Dancer. The Pikachu tackled Grant?s new Mightyena to the ground, before quickly paralysing her foe with an electrical discharge.

    ?Are you trying to kill me?!? Erik roared to Grant, his opponent ignoring his calls as the grunt kept his gaze fixed on the battle. ?Coward!? Erik followed sharply.

    Erik quickly realised what Grant had been staring at. He had assumed the paralysed Pokemon would?ve been easy prey for Dancer, but something had stopped her. The Pikachu held her hands over her eyes and stumbled backwards, confused and frightened. Erik quickly grabbed her Pokeball before she unknowingly tumbled off the edge, recalling her and sending out Soar in Dancer?s place.

    ?What are you playing at?!? Erik passionately roared, he felt his hands clenched into two fists as his whole body shook from rage. Once again Grant ignored him, refusing to make eye contact.

    ?Erik,? Cecilia shouted from below, she had just defeated two Magma grunts as she began her ascension to the summit. ?Mylos,? she followed, panting for breath after a short but treacherous climb.

    Erik turned his head towards the ledge, catching a sadistic grin on Mylos?s face. The admin clutched a circular stone as black as the night in his hand. The object seemed to shine brightly, despite its colouring, as if it had been polished unrelentingly for days.

    ?Interesting to see the effect these alien stones have on Pokemon isn?t it?? Mylos called down, followed by a laugh that sounded more like a bark.

    Erik held his tongue, clenching his jaw in an attempt to contain his fury as a shadow passed overhead. Soar.

    The Latios had grabbed the paralysed Mightyena in his claws with little resistance, flew out over the mountain and far enough to ensure the drop would be lethal, and released Grant?s penultimate Pokemon; sending the Mightyena flailing helplessly to the surface.

    Soar rapidly flew back to the battlefield as Grant?s Golbat aimed straight for the undefended Erik. The Latios emitted a burning wave of energy from his mouth; but instead of the pure darkness that emerged from his mega-evolved form, this attack was the opposite, a powerful blast of light which fried the Golbat within.

    ?No!? Grant yelled. ?I lost again!?

    ?Not to worry,? Mylos followed. ?You?ve slowed him down enough.?

    ?What do you mean?? Erik barked as both Cecilia and Archie climbed to meet him. He received no response as Mylos walked off out of sight on the raised ground.

    Grant had taken a side pathway which led around the back of the ledge of which Mylos had stood upon. The trio followed in pursuit.


    The peak of the mountain was also surprisingly flat. Grant had two new Pokeballs in one hand, digging through the crate with his other as he crouched beside the box of stones. Mylos stood before the trio, a Camerupt by his side who was, by the look of his empty belt, the admin?s sole Pokemon.

    ?Where?s Maxie?!? Erik roared, receiving a disarming look from Cecilia.

    ?Stay calm,? she whispered, placing a hand on Erik?s arm which he shrugged off.

    ?He?s preoccupied,? Mylos smirked. ?I think we?ve served as an adequate distraction.?

    ?If you?re just a distraction then what?s that?? Archie questioned, pointing at the crate of stones.

    ?Oh just a gift for that rich ponce and his son,? Mylos responded, his and Archie?s gravelly voices almost a perfect match for another. ?Well,? he followed, holding up the ruby red orb in his right hand, which caused Erik to notice that his left hand lay resting in his pocket. ?This one is for us.?

    ?What does it do?? Cecilia asked, before Erik could say anything.

    ??Tis a surprise,? Mylos replied instantly, a scowl on his face as he failed to recognise the woman.

    ?You still haven?t explained why you?re up here!? Erik roared. ?Why not take the stones to whoever they?re for?!? he shouted even louder, stepping forward to avoid another worried look from Cecilia.

    ?That would be Mr. Stone,? Mylos responded. ?We needed to test them first, we needed to cause a distraction, and..? he paused, feigning ignorance. ?Oh yes, the red orb was up here somewhere, we just needed to find it. There was also supposed to be a blue orb but no idea where that got to.?

    ?Why are you bribing the Stones? anyway?? Archie enquired.

    ?You stupid?? Mylos taunted. ?The region rules and laws and stuff are decided by three voting members, we own two. Just need the third.?

    ?Enough!? Erik almost screamed, grabbing Dive?s Pokeball and launching it into the air. ?If you?re just a distraction I?m taking you down, then you?re telling me where Maxie is!?

    Cecilia reached for her Sceptile?s Pokeball, before Archie stopped her with a hand on her wrist. ?He needs this,? the Aqua leader spoke in a hushed tone.

    ?Wait, what is that?? Archie followed as both he and Cecilia were taken by surprise by a mysterious object Mylos pulled from his pocket; a strange circular stone which reminded the duo of an eye. Clear all the way through apart from a stone grey and crimson red iris, matching the Camerupts colour pattern.

    Erik wasn?t only angry at Magma, Mylos and Grant, he was also angry at himself. Instead of charging into battle with the criminal gang, he should?ve stopped to think. It was obviously a distraction, but he couldn?t have ignored his sighting of Wally on the mountain, as his thoughts raced back once more to how he had gotten here?

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    ?Watch out!? Erik warned Soar, spotting a barrage of fireballs honing in on them. His Latios swerved left and right in an attempt to dodge the plethora of flame, before being overwhelmed. Fire struck Soar in the face, another ball of flame clipping his wing as the Latios lost control in midair, Erik almost falling off the back of his Pokemon, managing to grab onto a wing with a hand as he held on for his life with a loose grip.

    He used his free hand to grab Horde?s Pokeball and release the Tentacruel into the lake below, releasing his feeble hold on Soar to avoid a fireball aiming directly at him. He crashed into the calm waters, colliding with an unaware Surskit who fired bubbles at him angrily in retaliation. Erik struggled to sight Horde through the murky waters as he gasped for breath, inhaling what seemed like an ocean?s worth of water in the process.

    As his vision slowly faded, he felt himself being swept up to the surface. Horde had grabbed him just in time as he coughed and spluttered, choking up streams of water. Soar hovered weakly ahead, battered and burnt.

    Horde lifted up a tentacle to reveal the Surskit trapped in his embrace. Erik grabbed a Pokeball and threw it at his aggressor, naming it ?Bubble?, before withdrawing Soar into his own capsule.
    Erik had only just exited the Safari Zone atop his Latios, the duo racing out towards Lilycove City.

    He climbed to his feet, balancing carefully upon Horde?s slimy skin and lifting his head to spot Mt. Pyre before him. The gigantic mountain which lay in the middle of a triangle of Lilycove, Fortree and Mauville painted Erik?s entire view in the greys and browns of its surface.

    He ascended the mountain with his eyes, spotting red figures swarming it. Magma.

    The army of crimson criminals like ants erupting from their nest. A tide of blue surged up Mt. Pyre to confront Team Magma. Team Aqua were here as well.

    ?Something big must be happening,? he whispered to Horde. ?If both Team Magma and Team Aqua are here.?

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    The Shuppet was caught, Dive?s water blasts enough to weaken the creature enough for Erik to capture his new party member, who instantly zapped off to storage. ?Welcome to the team, Ghost,? he whispered quietly, almost to himself.

    He had passed through the Pokemon graveyard which rested peacefully at the base of the mountain, carved by residents of nearby Lilycove City over a hundred years ago to bury their Pokemon that had died in a great civil war that had engulfed Hoenn. Two armies of trainers battling to decide how the region should be led. The rebels who fought for a fair voting system eventually defeating loyalists who believed Hoenn should be ruled by a single family.

    Erik felt another war would come soon, in Kanto. The common folk fighting to overthrow Giovanni and Team Rocket who ruled supreme in the region. Or so he hoped as he passed through the serene graveyard, occasionally feeling the shakes and hearing the cries of battle raging above.

    He climbed the steps which led to the upper levels of the mountain.

    Back outside, he had to strain his neck as he looked up to see crimson and aqua clashing, the tides of battle moving back and forth. Suddenly, a flash of lime green caught his eye from nearby.

    ?Wally?? he whispered in question to himself, as he recalled the iconic bright green hair of his friend. The figure seemed to round a corner of rock but when Erik got there, it had vanished. ?Maybe he climbed higher up?? he thought, beginning the pursuit.

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    ?Maybe it was just my imagination,? Erik thought to himself. He had heard stories of strange sights in places like this, where the ghosts of deceased Pokemon haunted a location and appeared to be something they were not. If Wally had been here, he wasn?t going to be found.

    Erik had climbed the mountain at pace, battling Magma grunts as he ascended up the cliffsides and rocky spaces. His team were weak and tired from the struggle, but a fresh wave of energy flowed through them as they encountered both Archie and Cecilia.

    ?Joined Aqua now have you?? Erik joked to Cecilia, who wore white sports shoes with a matching bowl hat. A sky-blue tank top held up by a belt and red skirt, with a yellow bag wrapped around her waist. ?And what are you wearing?!? he followed.

    ?My climbing clothes!? she snapped back, almost defensively, before responding to his first question. ?And no, I was visiting the graveyard on my way to Lilycove when an army of Team Magma attacked the place, they?re looking for something and I want to stop them.?

    ?How?d they get so many members?? Erik enquired, more to Archie than Cecilia. It was the Aqua leader who answered.

    ?It?s like Kanto, Team Rocket control the region so they can manipulate the rules and force people to join them if they wish to become a trainer,? he started, staring upwards to where both Mylos and Grant sat atop a ledge, it was still a way to go to reach the duo, but at least now they were in sight of Erik. ?When Hoenn banned trainers without a badge, a ton of people were left with a choice, join Magma or give up being a trainer completely. And you can bet this isn?t all of them.?

    ?Look out!? Cecilia yelled as a Golbat swept passed them, four Magma grunts in close pursuit.

    ?Erik,? Archie growled. ?Get up there and deal with Maxie or whoever?s in charge. We?ll hold these guys off and make our way to you.?

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    Mylos pointed the megastone in his hand at Camerupt. His Pokemon reacted immediately, a startled roar bursting from his mouth which caused the entire mountain to shake.

    Dive recoiled slightly, almost afraid of what was to come. Even Erik felt fearful, he had seen the effect a megastone had on Soar, his Pokemon enduring excruciating pain as the darkest sides of its soul took the Latios in its malevolent grasp.

    The Camerupt let out a cry of agony as a cloud of pure darkness swallowed it whole. A few silent seconds passed until two red orbs pierced the black. The cloud faded, leaving in its wake a true monster. The beast measured at twice its previous size, with Camerupt?s usually placid facial expression replaced by gnarling teeth and and a facial expression filled with hate. The two grey openings on its back replaced by a coal-black mini-volcano, the size of the creature itself.

    Dive blasted water at the creature, who despite usually having a double type weakness to the Wailmer, let the attack ricochet off him as if he were made entirely of solid stone. The monster reacted angrily, the volcano on its back erupting slow-moving streams of molten lava which eased over the Camerupt?s skin before hitting the ground, melting through the rock like acid. The megaevolved Pokemon opened its jaws, a huge jet of pure black lava escaping from within and encapsulated Dive. Once the attack had evaporated, the Wailmer had vanished. Dive had been disintegrated.

    ?What is that?!? Archie cried, grabbing his Sharpedo?s Pokeball. Cecilia followed with Sceptile and Erik with Blaze.

    The three powerful Pokemon combined attacks. Sceptile launching a barrage of razor-sharp leaves, Blaze igniting them as Sharpedo followed in, enclosing his robust jaws around the Camerupts mouth. Mylos?s Pokemon simply shook off the attacks as if they didn?t harm him, before replying with his own.

    Mega Camerupt blasted black fire, the Sharpedo who was still wrapped around his mouth disintegrating immediately. Blaze acted swiftly, tackling Cecilia?s Sceptile to the ground and saving her life.

    ?Get that Blaziken!? Mylos roared to his Pokemon in encouragement, almost laughing at his newfound power.

    ?Big mistake,? Erik whispered to himself. He had felt it when Soar had megaevolved, the Pokemon was no longer under his control, it fought for only two things. Dominance and destruction.

    The Mega Camerupt turned its lumbering frame slowly, each stomp of its foot seeming to cause a small earthquake as the entirety of the ground shook around them.

    ?What are you doing?!? Mylos roared at his Pokemon. Then he realised. Erik saw the admin?s eagerness and pride turn to pure fear in his eyes as his own Pokemon had turned on him. Mylos sprinted towards the ledge.

    ?Run you idiot!? he barked at Grant, who leapt up and followed his boss in close pursuit as the Camerupt finished his rotation. The beast inhaled then erupted a powerful stream of black lava towards the Magma duo.

    A huge explosion caused Erik to fall backwards.

    As he strained to see through the resulting smoke, he spotted both Mylos and Grant huddled together, shaking. They had been saved by the box of stones which had reacted explosively on impact with the Camerupt?s attack. Most of the stones within had shattered in the blast, but a few scorched remnants flew through the air, landing in various places across the mountaintop.

    Blaze and Sceptile took their chance whilst the Mega Camerupt?s back was turned. Leaves brimming with fresh flames collided with the beast but instantly deflected away off of the creature?s rear as if the beast was composed of titanium.

    Camerupt aimed another attack at the exposed Magma duo, before Mylos hurled the megastone at it. The object impacted against a blast of black fire and disintegrated like all before it. Surprisingly, the stone had managed to deflect the attack onto a large boulder beside both Grant and Mylos, which evaporated in the blast.

    Mega Camerupt howled in pain, a piercing deathly screech that sounded like metal being dragged roughly across metal. It de-evolved, shrinking before Erik?s eyes and its previous mega-features morphing back to how they were previously.

    Blaze and Sceptile attacked relentlessly, launching both fire and nature attacks until the beast would never have gotten back up.

    ?Now tell me!? Erik ordered, storming over to the shaking duo. Mylos bolted, but Grant remained frozen in place. Blaze sprinted over and grabbed the grunt, pinning him up against a nearby boulder.

    ?Wha...Wha?? Grant tried to speak, petrified by what had just happened.

    ?Where?s Maxie?!? Erik growled, struggling to hold himself back.

    ?Erik!? Cecilia screamed, but he paid her no heed.

    ?Slateport...Submarine?? Grant managed, shaking like a leaf in Blaze?s grasp.

    ?Behind you!? he heard Cecilia shout again, but it was too late. Mylos barged him to one side.

    As Erik fell to the ground he spotted the red orb in Mylos?s left hand, and a clear megastone in the other. Blaze dropped Grant and span around to confront Mylos, but the admin was on him, placing the megastone against the Blaziken?s chest. Erik sprung to his feet, sprinting over to Blaze who emitted a horrifying shriek as his body reacted with the megastone.

    Mylos grabbed the two Pokeballs on Grant?s belt, lobbing them into the air to reveal a couple of Golbats which the pair escaped on the back of, the red orb remaining in their possession.

    ?Blaze!? Erik shouted, trying to divert his Pokemon?s attention from the pain it was enduring. ?BLAZE!? he roared at the top of his lungs. The Blaziken?s attention snapped to his trainer, Erik catching a glint of fear in his Pokemon?s eyes as he wrapped both arms around his oldest friend.

    ?Please,? he whispered to Blaze. ?Hold on.?

    The Blaziken calmed, slouching to the ground in exhaustion. Erik recalled Blaze into his Pokeball before spotting the megastone on the ground. The clearness within had now been replaced by two intertwining orange and red lines in the centre. Part of Blaze?s soul lay within, the Blaziken now linked to the stone.

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    Daylight pierced through the clouds as Erik strolled through the cobbled streets of Slateport, unable to stop checking the stone in his hand. Blaze?s Megastone seemed to haunt his every thought, he didn?t have to use it, he knew that, but there was so much he didn?t know about the stones. Could they be controlled by others? Would there come a day when temptation would boil over and he?d use it?

    He shook his head in an attempt to force the thoughts out. To no avail.

    Erik shoved the stone into his pocket, withdrawing the two gifts from Cecilia and Archie in an attempt to force his mind elsewhere. The pair had each handed him a unique stone atop Mt. Pyre, saving that he?d know what to do with them more than they would. The trio had planned to head in different directions to counter the Magma threat. Archie would search for their hidden hideout, knowing that it resided within the outskirts of Lilycove. Cecilia heading to Sootopolis, the city birthed within a crater containing ancient secrets that may help them discover Magma?s plans.

    Erik himself volunteered to avert Maxie?s plans at Slateport, unable to overcome a punishing feeling within himself that he was too late. The climb and battles of Mt. Pyre, followed by the silent journey to the harbour town had taken him through the night and into the morning.

    He stared at the two stones which lay in the palms of his hands. The first was a gift from Cecilia, a lime green circle with a large teardrop nestled in the centre which was a darker shade of the same colour. In his other hand rested the gift from Archie, a sand-coloured stone roughly in the shape of the sun. His mind remained clueless as to the uses of both objects, as he emptied his hands into his backpack.

    ?...Of our newly built submarine!? a voice bellowed through the wind as Erik rounded a corner. On landing in Slateport harbour he had buried both Dive and Horde at sea, before a quick visit to the local Pokemon Centre. From there he travelled to Stern?s Shipyard, the captain?s assistant informing him that his superior currently resided in the harbour, delivering a speech to unveil their new submarine.

    Erik withdrew both Splash and Warriors? Pokeballs from his belt, holding one in each hand. He had chosen the former as a replacement water-type, and wished to see what a Magikarp could do in battle. The latter pick was an easy choice for him, Pinsir being his favourite bug-type Pokemon, he had desired to have one in his team since he was a child.

    ?I look forward to launching the expedition!? Capt. Stern finished to rapturous applause. A crowd of twenty or so civilians mixed in with sailors had gather around a small podium where Stern gave his speech. Erik joined the crowd, slowly pushing his way through the onlookers.

    ?Captain Stern!? a loud voice sounded, echoing through the harbour like a series of waves. ?I presume you can hear me,? Maxie followed, his voice flowing loudly out of a megaphone.

    ?What is the meaning of this?!? the captain demanded, scanning the area for the source of the voice. The crowd began whispered in hushed tones, confused as to what was taking place.

    ?Your submarine now belongs to Team Magma,? Maxie continued. ?Take pride in the fact that your invention will serve as a linchpin for the next great step in humanity?s development.?

    Stern?s facial expression switched suddenly from confusion to horror, before the captain bolted into the harbour?s main building. Erik swiftly followed, barging his way through the crowd.

    It was too late, the submarine finished submerging as the duo entered the building.

    ?Erik?!? Stern gasped as the trainer moved alongside him. ?What is going on here?!?

    ?What does it look like,? Erik snapped, in no mood to explain the obvious. ?Do you have any idea what Team Magma would want with a submarine??

    ?The same thing we did,? Stern replied, deflated. ?An ancient Pokemon long believed to be extinct has rumoured to be discovered, its location currently undisclosed but known to be deep within the depths near Sootopolis.?

    ?Why are you going after something like that?? Erik was astonished, what would a shipyard captain want with the legendary Pokemon.

    ?Word came down from the authorities that they wanted a submarine built rapidly for the exploration of caves underneath Sootopolis, hoping to find this...erm... ?Groudon?. Oh dear, how are they going to get their submarine now.?

    ?Dont worry,? Erik answered bitterly, almost biting his tongue in disgust as he reached into his pocket and clasped Blaze?s megastone in his hand. ?They?ve got it.?
     

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  • Erik had added two new Pokemon to his team, who now rested within storage. A Gloom called Happy for the constant smile on its face, despite the grass type usually being a rather grumpy Pokemon, as well as a Pelipper which he had named Pelly, after Will?s. The gym?s trainer had inspired him somewhat, seeing the youthful enthusiasm and naivety that he himself used to contain.

    I like this part. =)

    As I mentioned in the beta notes, interesting you have the scenes not in order for this chapter. I do admit I was confused how Erik found Archie and Cecilia, but as I read further it made more sense and I was able to follow the events fine. Ouch to Erik losing Horde and Mylos's Mega Camerupt going berserk. Also, very close call with Blaze and the megastone.

    I know this happens in the games, but I'm still glaring at Maxie for stealing the submarine lol. Looking forward to more!
     
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    Chapter Twenty-one - Siege


    Erik tasted the salt of the sea on his tongue as cold breeze emanating from the nearby ocean washed over him, the biting wind like a neverending series of waves upon his skin. Wingulls screeched overhead, viciously fighting over scraps of food like their lives depended on their next meal. The journey from Slateport to the outskirts of Lilycove City on the back of Soar had proved uneventful and now the vast city stretched out before him, painted in dull hues of the ominous grey stone buildings.

    The entire city was perched on a hill overlooking the ocean. A sharp descent on the far side led to a small beach, which was all that separated the city from a seemingly endless body of water. Erik scanned the town, looking to find anything of interest. A bustling harbour to the south immediately grabbed his attention, full to the brim of sailing boats, yachts and fishing vessels floating harmlessly upon the water's surface. Bright white pearls against the dark blue of the sea. He pondered for a moment as to why none of the ships were setting sail, all stationary in a motionless rest, but cleared the thought from his mind as he continued scouring the town.

    He spotted a small rise to the north of the city, with a huge monstrosity sitting at its crest. The building, which reached up and touched the sky, was labelled 'Lilycove Shopping Mall' as it dwarfed two further buildings which flanked it, an art museum and a contest hall.

    Erik marched through the city, his intention solely to find Archie. The leader of Team Aqua had headed to Lilycove City in his quest to uncover the secret Magma base, but he hadn't the faintest idea of where to find him. He strolled through the streets, houses constructed with stone clustered the edges of narrow sand littered pathways as the city suffered from overcrowding. He turned a corner, only for a flash of crimson to catch his eye, then another, and another.

    The entirety of the city was infested by members of Team Magma, who sauntered along as if the city belonged to them. In fact, there were far more of the crimson cloaked criminals than there were ordinary civilians. A particular huddle of grunts loitered by the street's edge. Erik ambled up to them then dropped to his knees, pretending to tie a shoelace in order to listen in to their conversation.

    "-Unable to get out," what looked like the leader of the group spoke in a hushed tone, Erik having to lean in slightly to hear.

    "We need to get out of here someday soon, 'Operation: Newage' is set to begin soon!" a grunt chirped in.

    "Newage?! You mean 'New Age' you fool! How do you know about that anyway?!" the head grunt snapped, raising his voice slightly.

    "I saw it written down somewhere," he blurted in response, his quiet voice starting to tremble.

    "Regardless," the head grunt replied, lowering his voice back to a whisper. "Aqua have blockaded the port. We're stuck here. Besieged."

    "Why don't we just force them out? There's hundreds of us and only a handful of them," another grunt added.

    "I don't know, the boss is waiting for something I-" The head grunt's words were cut off by a scream from the hill. Erik leapt to his feet, his view of the rise obscured by a row of houses. He bolted towards the source, ready for anything.

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    "Hand over that rare Pokemon!" the grunt demanded, piercing coal black eyes peeking through her hood. The Magma member pinned a woman against the mall's outer wall by her jumper, the victim hiding a Pokeball behind her back.

    "You can't just take my Swampert!" the woman in distress yelled, to nothing but a harsh laugh from the male grunt accompanying the aggressor.

    "We do as we wish," he replied, a cold snarl painting his face. "We're the law in this region."

    "Let her go," Erik growled, tightly clutching Blaze's Pokeball. He edged closer, making sure he made no sudden movements which could lead to the woman getting hurt.

    "Erik!" May shouted from within the grunt's grasp, the look of her eyes flickering from fear to joy momentarily.

    "You'll back off if you know what's good for you," the hooded grunt threatened, averting her gaze from May for only a second.

    "Time to leave," her partner said, slowly backing away. "That's the one the boss warned us of!"

    May heaved a sigh of relief as the grunt released her before the hooded girl joined her partner in hastily retreating, disappearing into the depths of the dull stone city.

    Erik felt pride bubbling up inside him. From a small boy wanting to prove himself and overcome his father, to a man whose presence made Magma tremble and flee in fear. He confidently strolled over to May, who leapt into his arms.

    He felt her tears soaking into his shirt and her heart pounding against his chest. He pushed her away, only slightly, but enough to lift her head gently with his hand and plant his lips on hers. His own heart thudded violently as they made shapes with their tongues, it was as if his heart wished to reach out of his chest and intertwine with May's.

    They released their lips wet hold on another, as much as Erik wanted to stay with her all day, he knew the region needed him. If what the grunts were saying held true then Magma now controlled it, and Archie had besieged the city.

    "I was only here on a shopping spree," May whispered to him, her shaky voice matching her vulnerable demeanour. "I just wanted some new clothes," she followed, tears freely streaming down her soft cheeks. "Then they ambushed me when I walked outside, I managed to fight them off with Swampert but as soon as I withdrew her in her Pokeball they grabbed me," she sobbed, struggling to bring herself to stop the tears.

    "Magma will pay for harming you," Erik replied, a surge of anger flaring within him.

    "That Archie guy and those Aqua people we met in Meteor Falls," May whispered, her voice so quiet Erik had to focus to hear it. "They're leading the siege of the town."

    "Then I will join with Archie and together we will stop Magma once and for all," he replied matter-of-factly.

    "I want to help." A weak smile flickered upon May's face as she spoke the words, but it vanished almost as quickly as it had appeared.

    Erik thought for a moment. He certainly wouldn't allow her to come with him, it'd be far too dangerous. An idea blossomed in his mind.

    "My friend, Cecilia, is in Sootopolis doing some investigating on Magma and their goals," he began, sure he saw a spark of either anger or jealousy in May's eyes at the mentioning of Cecilia, but like her smile, the emotion had disappeared in an instant. "I need to get a message to her, tell her that Magma are looking for an ancient Pokemon named Groudon in a cave somewhere beneath the area. Can you do that? Then help her uncover where this cave is?" he asked, lightly brushing away the tears on May's face with his thumbs.

    "Yes!" May responded with delight, newfound energy and enthusiasm pouring out of her at the suggestion. "Anything I can do to help, and maybe we can go on another mission together soon." She kissed him softly on his cheek, before grabbing her Swellow's Pokeball. "I know!" she squealed. "I'll come to the caves with you once we find it! See you then!"

    Before Erik could say no, May was already on top of her Pokemon, who took off and soared into the skies towards Sootopolis.

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    Ocean waves crashed against the partly submerged cavern's exterior walls of solid stone. Sprinkles of residue from the impact lashed onto Erik's face as a cold wind clawed at him. Soar roared fiercely, in anticipation of the assault, the Latios hovered cooly above a cohort of Wailmer who lingered expectantly on the sea's surface.

    Erik looked down at the makeshift army. A dozen or so remnants of Team Aqua who each rode their own Wailmer seemed fierce and determined, there was no room for cowards here. The police force had taken many casualties upon Mt. Pyre, reducing them to only a loyal few.

    "Yeah, we're all that's left," Archie shouted up, seemingly hearing Erik's thoughts. "Our pleas to the authorities for new members has been revoked. In fact, I just got off the PokeNav shortly before you arrived. They've disbanded us, saying Magma's no longer a threat."

    "Magma aren't a threat?!" Erik shouted back, before it hit him.

    "Yep, what they said. We all know why."

    "Team Rocket now rule the region," Erik responded, to himself more than Archie.

    "That's why I've gotta do this first," Archie replied. Erik attempted to shoot a reply but the Aqua boss was already sailing to the front of the cavern, holding a hand in the air to tell his grunts to remain where they were.

    Archie span sharply on his Wailmer, the large Pokemon turning in the water as agilely as a bird in the sky. Before he scanned the line of men and women before him, eleven loyal members of Team Aqua and Erik floating above on a Latios.

    "Listen up all of you," he bellowed outwards to the legion. "If you lose in battle today you will all lose your Pokemon licences, and with Magma in charge now you won't be able to get those back. If any of you wish to go home and return to your normal lives and abandon our mission then do so now, I won't think any less of you." He paused for a moment, before continuing after none of his grunts moved an inch. "But we are Hoenn's last hope. If we lose today it is all over, Magma will release Groudon and rule the region with an iron fist. Erik up there says that Team Rocket control Magma, meaning that Rocket would rule the world as we know it!" he roared, passion and hatred stinging his tongue after every word. "Victory today means freedom for not just us, but everyone! Your friends, your family and your future children! So let's defeat whatever we come across inside and…" He paused once more, before punching the air. "Take. Down. Magma!"

    A roar erupted from each and every one of the grunts below Erik, as he locked eyes with Archie. He nodded in approval to the Aqua boss, despite feeling a tinge of fear. He knew every word was true, so much was riding on this assault here today. They could stop Magma in their tracks, before they could even get to Groudon, and relinquish their hold on the region. Or they could fall here and end any resistance to the criminal gang's monopoly over Hoenn.

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    The cavern's interior rose out of the water, and apart from a narrow estuary of water that acted as the entrance, the entirety of the hideout looked as if they were inside a volcano, rather than within the ocean's depths. Contained fires lit up the cave, with crimson banners featuring the silver and black Team Magma logo stitched in hung from the roofs, motionless in the calm air of the hideout. Red hot tubes pumping what looked like lava ran across the walls, adding to the sweltering heat of the base.

    "This is not a drill, response team to their stations. Repeat, this is not a drill," blared speakers in each corner of the room as Erik and Team Aqua ascended from the water and onto the rough rocky surface.

    Large metal doors dotted around the area flew open as swarms of Magma grunts sprinted into the room, grasping Pokeballs in their hands.

    "Hold them off!" Archie barked to his team. They were heavily outnumbered but what they lacked in manpower they made up for in both resolve and skill. "Erik," the Aqua leader continued. "Follow me."

    Archie led Erik away from the confrontation, through a large set of metal doors and into the main hub of the hideout. Computer stations decked the area whilst high energy machines operated across a huge laboratory-like room. Magma members wearing white lab coats and thick rimmed glasses only added to the effect, the scientists ignoring the duo as they charged through the room to another metal door.

    "How do you know where to go?" Erik asked as he panted for breath, not used to running.

    "Same way I knew where to find this hideout," Archie grunted. "Had an informant in this place, until he was discovered," he followed, as another door slammed shut behind them. They were now in a long tunnel with many glass windows running along the walls.

    "So they knew we were coming?" Erik questioned as he looked through each of the glass windows whilst sprinting passed, each contained a horde of either Zubats, Poochyenas or Numels. The rooms here had one purpose: To breed legions of Pokemon to be used by Magma grunts in battle.

    "Yep," Archie answered, holding up a keycard to a scanner. The device flashed green before the door it was securing swung open. "That's why there were so many of them at the entrance."

    "Did you not think to warn me?!" Erik snapped whilst gasping for breath as they finally stopped running. "Or even your team?" he followed. They stopped in their tracks to look around the new location. They were atop a glass bridge, hovering over a dozen or so Magma grunts training in a large open battlefield below.

    "I couldn't," Archie hissed, unsuccessfully trying to whisper. "With Aqua being disbanded by the authorities their loyalty was shaken, telling my boys we were walking into a trap would've push them over the edge!"

    "And what about me?" Erik whispered, making sure to keep his voice low now over the loud roars of battle below them. Grunt faced off against grunt in mock fights. Suddenly, a Numel burnt a Poochyena to a crisp, causing Erik to notice that these weren't friendly practise sessions at all. They were merciless and very real trainer battles, where only the winner would stay on to fight out in the field for Magma. He questioned what would happen to the loser, would they be given another licence by the powers that be? Or turned into a scientist, their lack of skills in battle proven by this test?

    He turned his thoughts to the path ahead. The walkway ended in a sharply descending staircase that looped back around. They'd have to pass through the training zone to get to Maxie, a large door barring their way on the other side thereafter.

    "With what we've seen so far, looks like they're training an army down here," Archie commented, ignoring Erik's question in an attempt to shift the subject. "And it will only get worse further in."

    "Then we have no time to waste," Erik replied, brushing off Archie's ignorance as his mind wandered. With Aqua nearly destroyed and the authorities onside, then why would Magma need an army?

    The answer hit Erik, striking him like a painful bite from a poisonous snake. Magma were preparing to take over Hoenn, wrestling control of the region from Team Rocket with Groudon, increasing the landmass and controlling the population. But this army wasn't for Hoenn. Maxie would've stuck to his word after all, he would've declared war on Kanto and Team Rocket with an army of Magma grunts and the backing of Hoenn.

    Still, Erik had no regrets. Team Magma were just as villainous as their superiors.

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    Erik counted fifteen grunts. All of which were clasping Pokeballs in their hands and honing in on both he and Archie. Normally, he'd fight them one at a time, but this was Magma's region now, in their own home. They would battle him as they wished.

    "Take down the blue one," one of the grunts commanded. "The boss will want to speak to Erik, better weaken the punk first though."

    The grunts obeyed, the majority heading towards Archie but a half-dozen still targeted Erik.

    A plethora of Pokeballs entered the lukewarm air, with no pipes to be seen on the rocky walls. This room was cooler than the rest of the facility. Five Zubats, six Numels and three Poochyenas emerged, the grunts sending out all of their Pokemon at once. Erik responded the only way he could; by releasing all six members of his party.

    Blaze was immediately set upon by the Zubats, bursting flames and launching kicks in an attempt to swipe the creatures from the sky. Leaf and Dancer teamed up against the Poochyenas and a Numel, electrified spores rocketing towards their opponents. Soar agily glided past flame bursts from a trio of Numels, Warrior and Splash taking a remaining Numel each.

    Warrior wrestled his foe to the ground, landing a punch and moving in to slice the fire type with pincers, before roaring flames erupted from within the Numel's mouth. Erik's Pinsir flew backwards swamped by fire, the Numel charging for a finishing blow.

    Soar twirled through another wave of fireballs, before swooping down. But it wasn't the three aggressors he aimed for. He picked up another Numel in his clutches, launching it across the room and into a spiked rocks which jutted out from the wall. Warrior frantically managed to swot out the fires, before returning to battle to help his saviour battle his cluster of Numels.

    Erik turned his gaze to Splash, the Numel fighting her cautiously approached the Magikarp. Splash was flopping harmlessly on the ground, the approaching Magma Pokemon didn't know how to react, it had been borne amongst other Numels, Zubats and Poochyenas, in a habitat that was all about battling with ferocity. As the Numel approached, Splash threw herself into the air, the fire type carefully stepped aside for the Magikarp to flop back to the surface, crashing into the ground and hurting itself in the process.

    "Hey Erik!" Archie roared from across the room, his army of water types evenly matched with around twenty Pokemon facing off against him. "Magikarps are special. Most trainers give up on them after seeing how weak they are, but they require something different to other Pokemon. They need someone to believe in them."

    "I do believe," Erik whispered, smiling at Archie before returning his view to the battle at hand. Splash struggled as the opposing Numel rammed into her, launching the Magikarp across the room.

    Dancer lay helplessly on her back as she held a Poochyena off with both her paws, clasping them around its jaws. She had already defeated one Poochyena as Leaf struggled against both the third and a Numel. Dancer was slowly being overpowered by the Magma Pokemon's tough jaws, as Leaf was launched across the room having been rammed by the Numel. Erik's Gloom crashed violently into the ground next to her trainer.

    Erik felt the top of his right leg burning as if it had suddenly caught fire. He reached into his pocket and immediately withdrew his hand due to the scalding heat within. He had to get whatever it was in his pocket out of there, otherwise it could burn through his leg. He tried again, quickly slamming his hand into his pocket and turning it inside out, the stone inside flying into the skies.

    Leaf climbed to her feet before the Poochyena leapt onto her, the Numel following in closely. The stone stopped suddenly in mid air, hovering for a split second before zooming towards the Gloom, colliding with her body and engulfing her and her two attackers within a bright white light.

    Erik saw Blaze fall to the floor out of the corner of his eye. His Blaziken had destroyed two of the Zubats with fire and kicked a third into the wall, but the final two had overcome him. The poisonous creatures latched their fangs into Blaze, enclosing their mouths around both a shoulder and a leg.

    Soar crashed to the ground after being hit by one too many flame bursts and Warrior was locked in a wrestling match with a Numel as another creeped up behind him, preparing to catch the Pinsir unaware and smolder him into ashes with a burst of flame.

    "Splash," Erik whispered to the prone Magikarp, who flopped weakly on the ground as the opposing Numel closed in for the kill. "I believe in each and every one of my Pokemon, and right now four of mine are about to be defeated and I don't know what will come out of that light Leaf went into. You're my only hope, I need you."

    Splash turned his terrified eyes towards Erik, his gaping mouth gulping breaths of air before she too, was engulfed in a shining white light.

    Dancer tried to fry the Poochyena with an electrical blast, but it was too late. Her foe wrapped powerful jaws around her throat, sinking its fangs inside, until sharp razor-like leaves sunk into the Poochyena, who let out a horrific howl of pain before Dancer launched her attack.

    Warrior overpowered the Numel and sliced it apart with his pincers but failed to notice the blast of fire from behind him. Erik's Pinsir burst into flames before both he and the Numel were swept away by a strong wave of water.

    Dancer sprinted over to check on Soar's health. The Latios was still breathing, albeit weakly, as she blasted away the two Numels circling the beast with electricity.

    Leaf and Splash approached Blaze. The newly evolved Vileplume emitted sleeping powder into the air, sending the Blaziken to sleep as well as the two Zubats, who released their tight grip on Blaze in their slumber. Splash reached down with his long neck, the Gyarados grabbing the Zubats in his huge jaws and eating them whole.

    Erik cheered, giving both Leaf and Splash a hug before returning his team to their Pokeballs. A glance over to Archie saw the Aqua leader struggling in his own battle, but before Erik could sprint over to support his friend, he was rebuked.

    "Carry on without me, we need to stop Magma no matter what!"

    Without a word of argument Erik obliged, he knew Archie was right.

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    Erik strolled through the corridor, clutching Leaf's Pokeball in his hand just incase she was needed. He passed by glass window after glass window, each showing him a room conducting a different experiment. From testing an all purpose robotic battlesuit, with Pokeball launchers attached to each arm, to machines experimenting on meteorite fragments; Team Magma had it all. The final two windows before a sharp turn as the corridor latched onto another saw megastones being poked and prodded by lab equipment as the scientists attempted to unravel the mysteries within.

    Archie had said the facility needed to be destroyed at all costs. He was right. Team Magma were experimenting with forces they both couldn't understand nor control.

    The new corridor contrasted the last. From the white stone walls featuring thick glass windows of the experimental sector of the facility to the grey metallic plates of the hideout's lowest levels. It also surprisingly seemed to slope upwards. Each step resonated in a sharp clunk as he walked along the metal grates towards two Magma grunts who loitered before a staircase which looked to descend into the facility's final area.

    "Halt!" the first grunt shouted across the corridor to Erik as he approached, his frail voice echoing softly around the walls.

    "Out of my way, I'm here to see Maxie!" Erik demanded, refusing to stop in his tracks.

    "Get the switch," the grunt said to his comrade, who immediately proceeded to a circular scarlet-red button lurking before the staircase.

    The grunt thumped his palm onto the button.

    Neon yellow lights descended from the ceiling, swirling colours around the room and emitting a buzzing siren-like sound. Erik heard movement behind him, turning his head to see an impenetrable looking metal door rising out of the floor where the corridor began.

    The lights and sounds blared relentlessly, as a metal grate opened in the wall near the grunts. Five Electrodes rolled out, malicious smirks menacingly washed across their faces as they spun their way down the sloped surface towards Erik.

    He launched Leaf's Pokeball into the air. Blaze was too weak, Soar and Splash too large for the corridor, so he kept both Dancer's Pokeball in reserve whilst sending Warrior in to help Leaf.

    His newly evolved Vileplume launched a deluge of powder into the corridor, shooting the sleeping spores towards the Electrodes. The quintet reacted instantly, each generating waves of electricity and conducting the voltage through one another which created an electrical barrier that absorbed the spores within.

    Erik was trapped, with five Electrodes and a huge wall of electricity rolling towards him and the metal door slammed shut behind him. He was at a loss as to how to save himself.

    He was so close, he knew Maxie awaited him down the staircase. Archie and his grunts would have been defeated by now, or if not, searching for a way to destroy the facility. As raging sparks flew off the barrier as the Electrodes closed in, an idea flicked into Erik's mind.

    At lightning speed he grabbed Splash's Pokeball and released the gigantic sea creature into the tight hallway. As soon as his Gyarados entered the fray, the metal plating underneath them collapsed, the beast far too heavy for the floor to maintain its weight.

    They fell, crashing into the mini-harbour below the tunnel. Erik had landed on top of Warrior, the Pinsir cushioning his fall. He quickly rolled out of the way in the nick of time to avoid the Electrodes smashing into the ground beside him, their electrical energy zapped out of them by the impact. Cracks appeared in their hard skin, as their eyes turned from dots to crosses.

    One such Electrode survived the fall, attempting to weakly roll away from him, but Erik felt remorseless. He grabbed a Pokeball and launched it at the electric-type, capturing the creature within and naming it "Zap".

    "Stop right there!" the grunts shouted in unison as they descended the staircase after Erik, launching five Pokeballs into the air, a Poochyena emerging from within each. Splash roared at his new foes, the Gyarados seemingly unharmed by the fall. Leaf and Warrior, however, had fared much worse.

    His Pinsir lay lifeless on the ground. He had landed awkwardly and with his trainer also landing on top of him, the fall had proved too much. Leaf was also motionless as Erik held his breath, hoping for any sign of life. He exhaled, relieved to see his Vileplume struggling to climb to her feet after a short while as he recalled the grass type into her Pokeball.

    "So nice of you to join us," a calm rose hovered towards Erik, as he pushed himself back to his feet. A bay opened up before him, the stolen submarine cooly floating within, a drill newly attached to its face. Maxie stood over by a control panel, flanked by two assistants who wore their customary labcoats.

    "Nice place you got here," Erik remarked as he coughed whilst brushing dust off himself. Sweat trickled down his face as he huffed a sigh of relief that his risky plan had worked.

    "Unfortunately," Maxie followed as he strolled over to Erik. Roars of battle echoed behind him as Splash had already defeated two of the five Poochyenas. "You weren't meant to see any of this. Which gives me a dilemma."

    "And what is that?" Erik followed, moving his hand to his belt as he prepared for battle.

    "How can I let you live when you have seen all that you have," Maxie commented whilst he lifted the palm of his hand into the air, shortly followed by the other. "On the other hand, Giovanni says he needs you alive."

    "Let's just battle," Erik snapped, wrapping his fingers around Dancer's Pokeball as Splash tore apart another Poochyena.

    "Not this time. The way I see it the choice is in your hands." Maxie raised a finger of a still-raised hand. "Option one: You back down and I trap you down here and keep you as my prisoner until the time is right to release you." The Magma boss then raised a second finger. "Two: You proceed to attack me and I'm forced to destroy you. I only need a little more time then we can release Groudon and control the land, before taking the fight to Team Rocket. If Giovanni believes you still live until that time then no harm done."

    Erik clenched his jaw as Maxie raised a third finger, but he wished to hear no more. "I take my own option," he growled, stepping forward and moving to release Dancer's Pokeball. "I defeat you in battle and take you down myself."

    "Hold on. Hold on," Maxie calmly replied. "Option three is the good one. Now you have seen I will be true to my word, once Hoenn is under our control we will take the fight to Rocket with an army, you can join us, even if only in secret for the time being. I will allow you to leave, whisper none of this to anyone and I will call on you when the time is right."

    Erik moved Dancer's Pokeball back to its place on his belt, the device clicked into place once it had reached its destination.

    "Very good," Maxie said in a rasp of a voice, his tone barely above a whisper as a large smile spread across his aging features.

    "Oh," Erik said in response, a smile lighting up his own face. "You thought I'd taken up your offer?" he finished, as Splash roared behind him. The Gyarados had defeated all five Poochyenas and was now ready to take down the Magma boss. "Let's do this Splash!" Erik roared, before a loud siren cut him off.

    "Self destruct sequence initiated."

    "What?!" Maxie roared, his calm demeanour disappearing. "Who authorised this?! Turn it off immediately!" He commanded the assistants, who frantically activated their communication devices; to receive only silence.

    "They're not working, sir!" the assistant said, his voice only narrowly making it to Erik over the loud buzzing and constant repetition of the perilous message.

    "Fire up the submarine!" Maxie ordered. "We're getting out of here," he followed, before turning to Erik. "I recommend you evacuate. Here's your last chance to join us. Accept and you can join my in the submarine. Refuse and you perish here."

    "I'll never join you," Erik hissed.

    "Then die!" Maxie passionately snapped, Erik had never seen the Magma leader show so much emotion. As the submarine plunged underwater, Splash leapt in after it, but was unable to dive under the water's surface himself. Erik was unsure what was holding the Gyarados back.

    An explosion boomed overhead, some floors above where he now stood. Maxie was right, there was no escape. The way into the harbour had been destroyed by Splash as he escaped the Electrodes and the only way out was through the bay, but they were deep within the ocean's depths. It would be impossible for him to hold his breath for that long, even riding on Splash's back.

    "Is this really the end?" he whispered, to both his team and himself. "I guess I have to hope Archie got out okay. Then he, Cecilia and May can continue this fight." He grabbed hold of Blaze's Pokeball. If he was going to die here today, he wanted to do it alongside his eldest friend. "Was everything we've been through for nothing. Honestly, what have I achieved? Magma and Rocket, Giovanni and Maxie. I've not even made a dent in their plans."

    As his tears flowed freely down his face, the drops landing softly on Blaze's Pokeball, an enormous explosion devastated the area.
     

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  • "My friend, Cecilia, is in Sootopolis doing some investigating on Magma and their goals," he began, sure he saw a spark of either anger or jealousy in May's eyes at the mentioning of Cecilia, but like her smile, the emotion had disappeared in an instant.

    I admit to worrying about this part, but glad May only got slightly jealous for a second.

    I do like your different version of the Team Magma hideout there. At first I got amused once more with Magikarp not being very effective in battle once more, but luckily that Pokemon evolved just in time. As for Leaf's evolution, I admit to forgetting he had a leaf stone, woops. Reading that part back, I do think you could have added something like, "this was the leaf stone he got from x" or something similar. (my fault for forgetting to mention as I was looking over this chapter). I do feel bad for Erik's Pinsir not making it near the end of the chapter. D=

    The way the chapter doesn't sound too good, so I'm curious as to what happens next. Looking forward to more!
     
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    Chapter Twenty-Two - Too Much Water


    "Why won't he let me help," spoke the irritable thoughts within May's head, as her Swellow cut through afternoon skies strewn with ominous grey clouds. The ocean below her lay darkened by the fading daylight as roaring waves crashed into one another. The sea was unsettled, and it wasn't difficult for May to see what was causing it.

    May peered through the thick clouds she had concealed herself within to spot rock particles sent flying in all directions as a multitude of explosions shook the skies. Focusing her vision on the source, she managed to sight a partly submerged cave reacting as if one thousand Koffings had made their way inside and self-destructed in unison.

    She had reached Sootopolis a few hours previously with a bittersweet taste on her tongue. On one hand, Erik had finally requested her help and let her in on his life, but on the other, she wasn't allowed to go with him. As her Swellow touched down into the midst of the open crater, buildings sprouting out from the clear white rocks around her, she had changed her mind.

    Torturous thoughts had spent the flight from Lilycove to Sootopolis bubbling up inside her, culminating in an explosive reaction. Even if Erik wasn't going to let her come along, she would join the stubborn bozo in his adventure anyway, whether he liked it or not.

    As her thoughts flicked and fluttered to how she had reached this point, three figures hovering from the cave's entrance caught her eye. They all appeared to be riding aback a flying Pokemon, rising from the exploding cavern towards where she lay in wait, hidden behind the clouds.

    "Quiet," May whispered to her Swellow, making sure they remained unseen until she could identify the trio.

    As the three loomed ever closer, she spotted a Fearow and two Golbats, what looked like a man in a suit riding atop the former, and both a Magma grunt and a female scientist on the latter. They soared to just below where May silently hovered, leaning over the edge of her Swellow to get a better look she spotted the scientist holding papers in his hand, turning them over to the man in the suit. She reached into her backpack and pulled out a spare pair of "Go-Goggles", strapping the device on and adjusting the zoom on the lenses so she could get a better picture.

    The man had coal black hair atop an aging face with dark eyes. His attire consisted of a black suit with purple shirt and tie, a large letter "R" above his left breast. When the trio began speaking, May ordered her Swellow to lower itself so she could listen. She hoped that they would be too engrossed in their conversation to notice her presence above them.

    "These are all the advanced technical designs from the base?" the man spoke, his voice ice-cold.

    "Yes sir!" the scientist replied.

    "Erm, boss, err.." the grunt began, stumbling over his words through pure fear. "Why did you blow up our base?"

    "Do I pay you to ask questions? One more and you'll sink with it," he replied, no hint of emotion in his words.

    "What do you need us to do now, Giovanni?" the scientist changed the subject. May could tell the woman was trying to keep her cool, but was just as afraid of the man as the grunt appeared to be.

    "Now that any plans Magma have of turning against Team Rocket have been, shall we say, sunken, Maxie will have escaped in that submarine of his and be looking to release Groudon in a last desperate attempt to wrestle control of Hoenn from me. He will be walking into a trap, however, and I have people in place to ensure that he doesn't make it out of there alive. Any resistance to us will be too busy trying to take down Groudon, and fail, whilst we begin 'Operation: New Age'."

    "I thought New Age was releasing Groudon?" the grunt blurted.

    The man they called Giovanni mercilessly commanded his Fearow to ram its long beak through the grunt's Golbat, annihilating it in one hit and sending the Magma grunt plummeting into the ocean's depths.

    "Any more questions?" Giovanni announced afterwards, to which the scientist shook her head. "Good, then take care of our new friend," he ordered, pointing towards May.

    "Oh no," she whispered to her Swellow. "When did he realise we were here?" she followed as they took off into the skies, the Magma scientist in hot pursuit.

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    Another explosion rocked the building, as pieces of the harbour's roof fell from the ceiling and crashed into the surface next to Erik, who struggled desperately to think up an escape plan.

    He had released Soar from his Pokeball, climbing onto the Latios's back and had attempted to fly back to the tunnel he had collapsed with Splash. To no avail. The metal door had remained slammed shut and no amount of energy blasts from Soar could change that.

    His next move was to combine attacks from Splash, who had remained in the water's surface, and Soar against the roof, escaping through a hole. But again, their attacks weren't powerful enough to penetrate the mix of solid metals and concrete.

    A further explosion boomed overhead, causing the walls around Erik to shake violently once more. More chunks of the ceiling fell, narrowly missing him as they smashed into one of the many crates which littered the bay. He had one final plan, one he was beyond terrified of attempting. There was only one attack he could think of which would be powerful enough to drill through the roof and give him a way of escape. But he had no choice, he was left to his last resort.

    "I'm sorry," he shouted up to Soar, as he reached into his bag and pulled out a Megastone. "I can only hope that now we've bonded some more, we can control the effects."

    An ear piercing screech echoed around the room, the sound as horrifying as all the explosions thus far combined into one. A dark shroud engulfed Soar once more, with menacing red orbs protruding out of the darkness after a few moments. As the black cloud cleared, Mega-Soar emerged, a face full of fury and hatred.

    "Soar," Erik shouted up to his Pokemon. "Let's get out of here," he cautiously followed, attempting to sound hopeful.

    Mega-Soar peered through crimson eyes at his trainer, but Erik saw no sign of his Pokemon within its gaze. The creature roared fiercely, the resulting tremors caused by the sound appeared to shake the very foundations of the planet.

    "Soar!" Erik yelled, in a vain attempt to snap his Pokemon's soul back into the creature that now hovered above him. The Mega-Latios launched a stream of pure darkness from its gaping mouth, targeting Erik. He dived behind a crate, hoping the flimsy wooden box would save him from the devastating attack. Somehow, it did.

    Shards of wood and stone flew in all directions as the dark attack collided with the contents within. Dozens of megastones that had resided within the box now exploded upon reaction with Mega-Soar's attack, protecting other stones which now rolled across the stone surface, free from the wooden cage they were trapped within.

    Erik heard a roar from his left, turning his gaze to spot Splash bravely attempting to defend him. His Gyarados blasted a wave of aqua at the flying beast, but the attack ricocheted off of Mega-Soar as if the creature's skin was formed of titanium. The Mega-Latios spun deftly in the air, and prepared to launch an attack at its new target.

    As Erik saw Splash's impending demise flash in his mind, he had to react rapidly.

    He grabbed one of the megastones and launched it across the room. As soon as the stone impacted upon Splash's scaly surface, the Gyarados leapt out of the water and into the air in agony, Mega-Soar's dark attack colliding with a shroud of darkness which now engulfed the water-type.

    Iconic crimson eyes were the first thing to emerge from the black cloud, shortly followed by a terrifying beast. Where Gyarados's skin was a blend of creamy yellow and aqua blue, the former colour had now been replaced by blood red pores and a black underbelly. The creature itself had doubled in size, and its fins almost quadrupled as a giant black crest placed itself atop the Gyarados's bulging head.

    The two mega-evolutions locked themselves in a titanic battle, dark blasts of energy smashing into the cavern walls and roof, slicing whole through the rock. Erik released Blaze from his Pokeball for his own protection, as the two began to look for another way out.

    Erik desperately clawed his way through shards of wood, stone and rock, as Blaze remained unaffected by contact with the megastones lying prone on the floor, having already been linked to one previously. Erik's attention was caught by his Blaziken suddenly pointing a finger upwards. Blaze had spotted a newly created hole in the roof from one of Mega-Splash's dark attacks. The chasm seemed to penetrate the cavern almost to the surface. It was a way of escape, if only Erik had a Pokemon he could fly out on.


    A piercing scream erupted from Mega-Splash, the creature de-evolving after a vicious blow from Mega-Soar. Erik presumed that since the megastone had only just been linked to his Gyarados, either the effects didn't last as long, or he had been defeated in battle. Splash heaved and panted as he resumed his usual form, slowly sinking into the water's depths through exhaustion as Erik recalled him into his Pokeball.

    Blaze released a fierce growl, and it didn't take Erik long to realise why. Mega-Soar had turned its attention back to Erik and his Blaziken.

    A lone tear crept down Erik's face as he battled the inevitable within his mind, clutching Blaze's megastone. If he didn't use it, Mega-Soar would annihilate them both, but he struggled to bring himself to see his beloved friend within the dark form that would emerge from the resulting black cloud.

    Blaze looked Erik in the eye, giving him a nod as if to say "it will be okay". Erik slowly pulled the stone from his pocket, and aimed it in Blaze's direction as the Mega-Latios launched an attack. Black energy collided with darkness as a cloud swallowed Blaze whole.

    A creature flung itself at Mega-Soar from within the shadows, grappling onto the dragon and attempting to haul it back to the ground. The weakened Mega-Latios responded by attempting to crash into the roof with Mega-Blaze on its back, unsuccessfully. The fire type grabbed onto its foe's back with one hand and launched black flames seemingly from the palm of the other at Mega-Soar's head.

    While a Blaziken mixed shades of lemon-yellow and rose-red, its mega-evolved form sported hues of scarlet-red and midnight-black. It again had bulged to twice its usual size, also, Erik noted, Mega-Blaze was surrounded by black fire, as if its own skin emitted dark flames.

    Mega-Soar shook his flame-covered opponent from his back. As the Mega-Blaziken crashed to the surface, the impact forming a small crater in the stone surface. The weakened Mega-Latios attempted to escape, defeated in battle his only choice was to flee through the newly formed hole in the roof, travelling through at epic speeds, but Erik realised Mega-Blaze wasn't about to allow him to escape.


    Mega-Blaze crouched down, preparing to leap into the air and through the hole after his opponent. Erik sprinted over to his Pokemon, latching onto his leg as soon as he jumped causing the two to soar through the hole together. He had never seen a Pokemon be able to leap higher than a human could, nevermind what Erik tentatively guessed was over thirty feet.

    Soar had de-evolved, the Latios sprawled on the stone-tiled flooring of a corridor. Mega-Blaze landed neatly on the floor, sweeping his leg to the side and flinging his trainer into a wall. Erik crashed into the corridors side, spotting a Magma scientist further down the hallway who began fumbling around his pockets in horror at the sight of the Mega Pokemon before him.

    Mega-Blaze glanced from side to side, deciding who was the biggest threat to his domination. With Soar too weak to move on the ground, Erik's oldest Pokemon targeted him, the black flames protruding from his skin flaring up as if someone had added fuel to the fire.

    Suddenly a Pokeball flew through the air, honing in on Mega-Blaze. Erik noticed this one was different to usual, instead of the crimson and white casing, this Pokeball featured a violet-coloured upper half, with two red circles bulging out of the purple top. The capsule opened, sucking Mega-Blaze inside, then closing. As the lock on it sealed with a click, the circles turned to yellow, flashing once each second like a warning beacon.

    "What was.." Erik began, before he noticed the scientist strolling over to him, quivering as he moved.

    "M-Master Ball," the Magma member replied, pushing up his glasses which had fallen slightly with a finger. "Mark II."

    "Mark what?" Erik replied as he recalled Soar into his own Pokeball, then climbed to his feet, arching out his back in an attempt to relieve the pain.

    "Maxie told us to think of ways to control and contain Mega-Pokemon. The Master Ball was our plan to do so. Mark I was a failure, it captured normal Pokemon with a one-hundred percent success rate, but had no effect on Megas. Mark II worked, but not as planned. It acts the same way Mark I did but with the added effect of capturing Megas, only it just contains them like a prison until they de-evolve. We were working on Mark III, which would have caught a Mega and put it under the user's control, but with the added bonus that the Pokemon inside would never de-evolve, but the plans were stolen when the facility self-dest-"

    "Alright, alright," Erik interrupted, as the two circles on the Master Ball changed from yellow to green.

    "Oh, that means your Pokemon has de-evolved within," the scientist responded excitedly, as if he had finally been able to successfully test his invention.

    "If you stop talking for a second you'll see the place is blowing up around us!" Erik barked whilst releasing Blaze from within the Master Ball, before recalling his Blaziken into its actual Pokeball.

    "Oh, sorry, I-"

    "Which way out?!"

    "This way, not far now. Actually, I was on my way out when-"

    "Enough. Go. Move!" Erik responded, following the scientist who broke into a sprint.

    It wasn't far to the exit, which had been blown to smithereens, making it easy for Erik and the scientist to depart. As they floated off on the back of the scientist's Wailmer, Erik spun around to view the facility. Mega-Splash's attack had carved through the stone almost all the way to the surface. He could see how lucky he had been, as lava spewed throughout the hideout from burst pipes. Archie and any Aqua members were nowhere to be seen, presumably buried in the rubble that was still exploding every few seconds.

    "Interestingly," the scientist began. "We used some of the rock that came from space to design the Master Ball. The combined effects of the material and the Pokeball design allowed us to-"

    "Do you have a Golbat?" Erik interrupted.

    "Why, yes, right here in fact," the scientist grabbed the second Pokeball on his belt. "Interesting story how I caught this, I-" he began, before Erik snatched the Golbat from his hands, releasing it and flying off on the back of the creature, back towards Lilycove where he could heal his team.

    "Oh dear, excuse me, you forgot to return my Master Ball," the scientist's trailing voice followed Erik as he escaped the neverending chatter. Maxie and Magma could wait, he had no clue as to where they would be right now, and his seventh badge beckoned from the shores of Mossdeep City, across the ocean.

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    The island rose out of the ocean before him. From atop Soar he could see it all, from the gym in the north of the town, a huge space station at the island's highest point, and a Pokemon centre directly in the middle, which he now aimed to bring his weary team to. The city's peaceful isolation also neglected it of Magma members, meaning he could truly focus on the one thing he had traveled to Mossdeep City for.

    It had been a tough five days of training, battling surfers and swimmers throughout the vast bodies of water which lay between Lilycove to Mossdeep, down to Ever Grande City and across to Slateport. The oceanic square was alive with trainers and wild Pokemon, with the gigantic white crater of Sootopolis sitting at the mid-point.


    Erik decided that he would stay the night at the Pokemon centre, then proceed to win his seventh badge in the morning. With Soar and Splash becoming powerful members of his team, Leaf, Dancer and Blaze stronger than ever and the new addition, Ghost, chosen for its advantage of the local psychic types, he was full of confidence.

    He smiled at the thought of the new addition to his team. Erik and his Shuppet had formed a strong bond during their training, Ghost's duality reminded him of his own, friendly and kind on the surface, but they both had a darkness residing within.

    Erik's mind trawled to some of the other new captures the last couple of days. Ghost had weakened a Sealeo within the ice-cold Shoal Cave and Erik had named it Seal. He had also returned to Rustboro City, visiting his friend Mr. Stone to gather information on what Magma planned next. Unfortunately, the president knew nothing worth while. However, Steven's father was able to resurrect the fossil gifted to him by Cecilia, the scientists within the Devon Corporation reviving an Anorith, which he named Claw.

    Sandy beaches morphed into patches of grass which then turned to cobbled streets and hillsides that climbed the island to the station at the peak. Erik's thoughts snapped back to the present as Soar landed upon the grassy knoll leading up to the city. A good night's sleep was much needed for his team, the psychic-type gym beckoned.

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    Enormous metal doors slid open with a sharp creak as Erik and his team strolled up to the gym. A gaping blackness filled the doorway, as if all the light had been sucked out of the building's interior.

    Blaze stood by his side, his secondary type was fighting, leaving him at risk to psychic attacks favoured by the Pokemon awaiting them. The rest of his team walked behind them, Leaf was also at a disadvantage in this gym, Splash and Dancer remained neutral, their typings unaffected either way. Erik's trump cards hovered behind the group. Soar was a dual psychic and dragon type, which made any mind attacks ineffective against him, whereas Ghost's typings put her at a succinct advantage.

    Erik stepped inside, his six Pokemon remaining in close proximity as they entered the darkness. He spotted two figures looming in the distance, edging closer towards him, his Pokemon tensing in unison as a wave of apprehension flowed through him. They froze in their tracks.

    Thick white gas poured from the walls surrounding them, brightening up where they stood before engulfing them in a thin cloud with a mould-like smell. The smoke swirled around Erik and his Pokemon, before dissipating suddenly into miniscule vents on the floors.

    "You're in our world now," a frail voice called over to Erik as haze formed inside his mind, his vision blurring.

    "What is your name," a female joined in. "I am Patricia, and my friend is Joshua." Both voices sounded emotionless, like husks or robots attempting to communicate.

    "E-Erik.." he managed to reply, before his vision slowly came back to him. He was in a bright room, with four walls all painted in white. He couldn't decide what the floor was made of, but it was a sickly-green in colour, as the two gym trainers loitered ahead of him.

    "We can manipulate our world however we want, just by speaking," Josh followed, the young boys eye's were pupil-less. His pale skin matched the white walls and his thick purple hair looked as if it hadn't been brushed in years. Erik looked to the girl, Patricia, noticing that she was his twin. Erik felt uncomfortable in the twins' glare, their matching soulless eyes penetrating right through him.

    "Let us show you," Patricia followed, a mischievous grin lighting up her otherwise emotionless features. "Time to expand the room!" she bellowed, as the room stretched out before Erik's eyes, distance growing between himself and the two trainers before him.

    "And let's turn these lights out!" Joshua followed, as the lights around the room shut off one by one until they reached Erik. The small bulb above his head remained on, the only light in the room centred on himself.

    "Go Kadabra!" Joshua shouted once more from across the room, Erik nodding to Ghost in response, his Shuppet cautiously floating through the light and into the darkness. Both Erik and Ghost were wary of Joshua's Kadabra concealing itself within the dark corridor, threatening to ambush the Shuppet at any given moment.

    "Light that Shuppet!" Joshua continued ordering, and the room obliged. A blindingly bright spotlight shone on Ghost from the other side of the room, following the Shuppet wherever it dared move.

    Erik peered into the darkness, seeing it distort. The plain blackness cut strange shapes as a psychic pulse plowed its way through, entering the light and smashing into Ghost. He recoiled at the blow, he and his Shuppet had bonded well during their ocean training, and the pain of the attack transcended from Pokemon to trainer.

    Another pulse distorted the darkness, but this time Ghost saw it coming. Erik's Shuppet faded slightly, allowing the attack to phase through her as Erik ducked to avoid the attack furrowing its way down the narrow corridor. Ghost launched herself down the room, the spotlight following her as if it were attached to the Shuppet.

    Ghost collided with Joshua's Kadabra, both Pokemon stumbling backwards before resuming their conflict. Psychic pulses collided with spectral blasts in an even clash, a mind blast from the Kadabra had no effect against the ghost-type, but a telekinetic attack, using objects Joshua shouted and summoned into the area, were crashing into Ghost before she had time to react.

    "A television!" Joshua screamed, his Kadabra launching the plasma screen at Erik's Pokemon, controlling it with his mind. "A chair!" he followed, with the bellowed object materialising into the spotlight's glare, before slamming itself forcefully into Ghost and disappearing into the darkness.

    "Now finish her, Kadabra!" the gym trainer ordered his psychic type, who obliged without question. The Kadabra strolled over to the Shuppet's weakened form, and appeared to gloat as it lifted both arms above its head and made a sound which resembled laughter.

    "Come on Ghost!" Erik shouted down the corridor, the exertion causing him to feel dizzy. Whatever was in the gas he was sprayed with had weakened him.

    Another light joined the blinding spotlight, causing Erik to shield his eyes. He waited a few seconds before removing his arm from across his face, to reveal the new light had vanished and in its place floated a Banette. Ghost had evolved.

    The Banette vanished despite the spotlight thrusting its gleam upon it. Kadabra hopelessly launched pulses in all directions, in a desperate attempt to save itself. It failed. Ghost appeared suddenly behind it, smothering it with spectral acid and watching her foe disintegrate in front of her, the Banette's cold blood-red eyes lighting up with glee.

    "How?!" Joshua screamed. "The gas is supposed to make you and your Pokemon delusional!"

    "You're giving away the secret!" Patricia followed, strands of stress in her tone. "Send out your Medicham and trick them some more!"

    "Okay, time for a room full of lights so your Banette cannot vanish!" he said, the room immediately responding around them. The dark narrow corridor morphed into a square-shaped area completely lit up by candles attached to the walls. A warmth filled the room from the small fires, and Ghost found herself unable to vanish in their glow.

    The Medicham launched itself into the air, slamming a foot into the Banette. Erik was taken aback, fighting type moves usually couldn't hit ghost-typed Pokemon, the room must've been having this effect.

    "Ghost," Erik shouted to his Pokemon from across the room. "Blow out the candles, use the darkness to your advantage!"

    The Banette complied, speedily floating to each and every lit candle and blowing it out as if they were atop a birthday cake. Medicham's attempts to stop her were in vain, the dual fighting and psychic type creature tried to follow the Banette into the newly formed darkness of each corner of the room, but the ghost-type vanished in the black.

    The room lay in a shroud of darkness as the final flame was blown out, and now Ghost was completely invisible, able to use the dark as a cloak to silently attack the vulnerable Medicham.

    "Light! Light!" Joshua bellowed in a tone full of panic and fear. Bright lights appeared on both the ceiling and the walls, revealing Medicham's lifeless form and Ghost hovering over her defeated foe.

    "I know!" Joshua roared, Patricia jumping slightly at the sudden sound next to her. "I will use your own trick against you!" he followed, holding up his final Pokeball. He threw the capsule into the air, a Claydol appearing from within. "I will now hide my Pokemon in a box!" he bellowed, a large cardboard box covering his Pokemon at his words, the room however, remained unchanged. "And here are many other boxes!" he followed, with several cardboard boxes forming inside the room, before all of them switched places with each other as if they were being teleported into different locations around the room. "One of these ten boxes contains my Claydol, the other nine have traps in them. Good luck!" he finished, a menacing laugh echoing around the room.

    Ghost flew over to the first box in her vision and rammed into it.

    The empty box fell over and vanished, but a trap did indeed await her. The Claydol sprung out of its box, attacking the distracted Banette and rapidly going back into its hiding place. As soon as the Claydol entered its box, the cardboard objects began switching locations once more. With nine left, and all in newly randomised locations, the weakened Ghost would have to make a lucky guess, and she would only survive one or two more ambushes.

    Again Ghost rammed into a box, and again she was caught in the Claydol's trap. She tried a different tactic the third time, blasting away a box with a ball of spectral energy, but again the cardboard container was empty. She spun around expecting an attack from the Claydol which never came, until a pulse of psychic energy smashed into her back, shattering the life from inside her as she crashed into the ground.

    "Ghost!" Erik wailed, as his new friend crumbled into dust, her spirit returning to the graveyard he had found her within. He considered his next move carefully, seven boxes remained and the Claydol could be hiding in the midst of any of them. An idea sprung to life inside his mind, as he threw Splash's Pokeball into the air.

    "You can read my thoughts, can't you Splash. Unlike these fake psychics," Erik growled to his Gyarados.

    "Hey!" Patricia screeched. "Who you calling fake?!"

    Splash roared, and prepared to unleash a huge wave of water. Channelling his energy and harnessing the water that housed itself within his huge frame, he summoned the large wave which washed away all of the cardboard boxes at once, trapping the Claydol within one and drowning it within. Joshua had been beaten, but as Erik knew, the gym rookies usually saved the best trainer until last.

    "Joshua is weak," Patricia began, her voice returning to the toneless husk it once was. "I will defeat you so our leaders don't have to."

    "Leaders? Plural?" Erik asked, he didn't realise he would have to fight more than one gym leader here.

    "Tate and Liza are our leaders." Patricia followed, with no hint of a tone. "But I will destroy you. Starmie, go." The girl threw a Pokemon into the air, the water type flopping helplessly on the ground.

    Erik was stunned, how could she hope to win with a creature who didn't seem to be able to function outside of water. He recalled his Gyarados into its Pokeball and sent out Dancer in his place, the electric type advantage would score him an easy victory against the first of Patricia's Pokemon.

    "Ha!" Patricia said, however, there was no hint of humour within her voice. "You have fallen into my trap. Fill this room with water like a fish tank!" she ordered, as the room responded to her words. Water began rapidly pouring into the room from the walls, so quickly that Dancer didn't have time to react as the Pikachu was swept under the water.

    "Have a snorkel," Patricia smirked, the breathing device appearing in front of Erik who attached it to his face. The duo of gym trainers doing the same as a piece spawned in front of each of the two.

    Erik quickly clipped the sides of the snorkel into place, he inhaled deeply as an oxygen tank formed on his back, relaxing himself as air once again filled his lungs. He suddenly gasped in horror as the Starmie floated around Dancer, spinning circles around Erik's Pokemon who was drowning.

    Erik attempted to scream out to his Pokemon, but all that came out of his breathing device were streams of bubbles as Dancer began sinking further and further towards the ground. He had realised that the room was a trick, the two gym trainers were able to manipulate the room as Erik and his Pokemons' minds were weakened by the gas they had inhaled. They were actually in the same plain dark room as they had been when they entered the gym, but Dancer believed she was drowning. It was true psychological warfare.

    "Dancer," Erik thought to himself. "This is a trick, you are not in water, you are not drowning. We have constantly proven ourselves to each other throughout our journey, now I need you to trust me with your life. Can you do that for me, my friend?"

    Dancer heard his thoughts, the bond between the two of them proved strong enough to save her life. The Pikachu's eyes shot open, full of fury that she had been tricked so easily. The Starmie hovered above her, before being blasted out of the air by an electrical charge, the room's illusions disappearing around them as Erik and his team finally truly believed that it did not exist.

    Patricia sent out a Grumpig as her final Pokemon, Erik recalling Dancer and letting out Soar. The Latios was a psychic type, so he would be able to see through any more deceptions the two fake psychics pulled. The room was completely dark now, and entirely featureless.

    "You have a Latios?!" Patricia gasped. "But that's a legendary psychic Pokemon, how did someone like you get a Latios?!"

    Erik ignored her, he had her teetering over the edge and he knew it. Now he just had to apply the final blow and send the strange girl tumbling down.

    Soar let out a blast of pure energy, combining both the power of a dragon and master psychic, frying the Grumpig within.

    It hit Erik then. The Pokemon he had faced in this gym were weak, but the trickery had made them appear strong. In fact, it was the psychological attacks that had done all the damage to his team.

    "You may have defeated us," Patricia began, her face a scowl of anger. "But Tate and Liza are much better psychics than we'll ever be. Even your Latios won't be able to see through their powers."

    He had defeated the two trainers, but what awaited him now was a double battle with gym leaders far more powerful than Patricia and Joshua. He was also certain that they would have true psychic powers, and although he had seen through the initial deceptions, his mind was still weak from the gas. He had already lost Ghost, and felt within his heart that another one of his close friends would be lost before the day was done, as both Tate and Liza strolled into view. They were not even giving him an opportunity to heal his weakened team at the Pokemon Centre.

    For the first time in a while, Erik felt genuine doubt, he may not be able to win this battle.
     

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  • While a Blaziken mixed shades of lemon-yellow and rose-red, its mega-evolved form sported hues of scarlet-red and midnight-black.

    Mentioned this in my beta notes, but I still feel "While a Balziken ("had" or "would have") mixed shades of lemon-yellow and rose-red..." would sound better.

    The beginning scene with May was an interesting start to the chapter with her catching Giovanni. Him already spotting her doesn't sound too good, though.

    Quite a bit happened this chapter, both with Erik having to mega evolve some of his pokemon and the battle between Patricia and Joshua. I do like the take you have with the gym's puzzle and the battle itself was pretty enjoyable. A part of me feels it would be nice to see Ghost and Erik's bond more, but I guess not too much happened plot wise and there wasn't a good spot to have that showcased. Still looking forward what happens in Erik's battle with Liza and Tate, though!
     
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    Chapter Twenty-Three - Goodbye


    The twins' looks were identical. Both brother and sister sported deep navy blue hair tied up in a bun as they judged Erik with two pairs of piercing blue eyes. They wore robes dyed a royal purple that hung from their small figures, the clothing far too large for the siblings as their hands disappeared within the sleeves.

    "Hello challenger," a soulless high pitched voice called from across the room. It was the female, Liza, who spoke first.

    "You have defeated our minions," Tate followed, his voice a much deeper pitch, but still featured the same monotone.

    "Now you must vanquish us!" The twins bellowed in unison, before they relaxed and quietened their voices once more. "This room is actually a cave," they spoke, as if they were one and the same. As soon as the words exited their mouths, the gym's interior lit up ever so slightly. Dozens of glowing crystals of purple and blue emitted both a faint glow which illuminated the room, and slight humming noise which filled with with an atmosphere. As the mysterious gems floated cooly around the room, Erik noticed they were at a height with himself.

    A single Pokeball rested upon each of the twins' belts. The capsules levitated into the air as soon as Erik had laid eyes on them, hovering slowly across the cave's rocky surface and releasing their inhabitants onto the battlefield. A Solrock emerged alongside a Lunatone.

    Tate's Solrock floated to the left, and Liza's Lunatone to the right, the rock and psychic dual typed Pokemon hovering to the wall, which changed colour according to the corresponding Pokemon's skin. The gym leaders' Pokemon carefully sank into the cave walls, camouflaging themselves.

    Erik knew Splash would have an easy time against the rock types, his Gyarados could aim water blasts at the walls and flush them out. He also knew that Soar could see through psychic tricks, this would be easier than he first thought.

    "Splash!" Erik roared, confidence flowing through his veins. "Wash-" he started, before suddenly stopping mid-sentence. A few of the crystals lit up, burning so brightly that he almost had to shield his eyes to avoid their glare. The gems suddenly spurred into life, crashing down towards the surface as they targeted his Pokemon.

    A crystal crashed into Splash. The Gyarados roared in pain at the impact as the gem firmly lodged itself in his back, the top half jutting out of his scaly skin. Soar's troubles were reminiscent of his partner, the Latios deftly dodged some of the crystals aimed at him, the ones that missed smashing into a plethora shards on the solid ground below as a persistent few implanted themselves into Soar's back.

    "The crystals of truth," Tate and Liza echoed one another in tones devoid of emotion. "The crystals will reveal the truth of your life." The duo pointed towards Erik's Pokemon, Tate towards Splash and Liza towards Soar. "The truth," they repeated.

    Erik remained clueless as to the duos words and intentions, until he turned his gaze back to his Pokemon, nearly tripping over himself in both shock and horror. Soar and Splash had both turned into their mega-evolved forms, spun around with the crystals still jutting out of their backs, and were now staring through crimson eyes at their trainer. Erik began to back away slowly, before walking into something behind him. Mega-Blaze.

    Leaf and Dancer clung to Erik's side as he grabbed the Masterball. He launched it through the air, the capsule homing in towards its target, but the device was swatted away by another Pokemon. Ice.

    "You now see the truth," Tate and Liza spoke, their voices echoing around the cave. "We see you for who you really are, Erik. You bring only death and pain. And in the future, you will be the harbinger of untold destruction and suffering."

    "Stop this!" Erik yelled. He felt himself shaking as fear flowed through his body, freezing him in place.

    Ice barred frosty fangs at Erik, growling viciously as he was joined by the others. String and Speedy desperately held onto each other as they dangled over the edge of a large hole in front of him, the gaping darkness seemingly never ending. Gully and Ziggy attempted to save the two bug-types, until a human figure kicked the Silcoon and Cascoon over the edge, then threw both Gully and Ziggy to their demise. It took Erik only a few moments to recognise the human as himself.

    Roller appeared next, rolling desperately away from his human pursuer, but the Gulpin wasn't fast enough. The ghostly apparition of Erik picked Roller up by his tail and flung him into the abyss, Ali and Gu throwing themselves after Roller in a hopeless attempt to save their friend.

    "Stop!" Erik roared as loud as he could. He could feel his heart breaking at the scenes, but his desperate pleas for mercy were in vain. Ninja was next to fall, the Nincada flashing the real Erik a look of panic and despair before the apparition threw him into the pit, wordless and emotionless. It was as if all the figure lived for was destroying the lives of those around him, just as Tate and Liza had alluded to.

    Erik had seen enough. He grabbed his doppelganger and threw the ghost into the pit, hoping it would stop the visions. As his apparition tumbled into the darkness, shadowy figures became apparent within the abyss. Erik saw many familiar faces. Bunny, Lady, Glutton, Steel and Bounce all disappeared, their faces the embodiment of fear. They were replaced by looks of sadness and pain, Sunny, Snappy, Cotton, Pip and Dive all bidding their trainer a final farewell. Finally, anger flashed in the eyes of the remaining friends he had lost, full of spite for the trainer that had cost them their lives. Horde, Fury, Warrior and Ghost had all lived peaceful lives before Erik had forced himself to be their trainer.

    Ice strutted up alongside Erik. He moved to stroke his Mightyena's fur, but his old friend only flashed him a face of regret. Instead of saying goodbye or showing his old trainer any further sign of acknowledgement, Ice leapt into the pit. A weak howl was the last thing Erik heard from his old friend, as if the Mightyena was begging for mercy himself.

    Hearing cries of pain behind him, Erik turned to see the three mega-evolved Pokemon screeching in agony, as the power of the megastones ripped them apart internally. Next to them he saw a vision of Dancer on a stage, performing elegant pirouettes and other spectacular moves in front of legions of adoring fans.

    Behind them, just in front of the two gym leaders, Erik saw three further figures. These, however, were mere shadows rather than visions. Two human shapes formed, a man and a woman, and beside them was a small figure which looked to be a Pokemon about half their size. They all felt very familiar, like he was looking at three close friends. These visions didn't just look different to the others, they felt different too, as if he were no longer looking at hauntings from his past.

    "What you see is your very soul," Tate and Liza spoke again. "And it has defeated you."

    Erik broke down on the floor, torturous thoughts and memories flooding his mind. Friends lost and others in horrific pain, all because of him.

    He felt a soft hand placed on his shoulder. He lifted his tear-strewn face to find himself locking eyes with Leaf. The Vileplume smiled, and Erik read her expression. It was as if Leaf was saying to him, "I'm glad you found me."

    Before him everything changed, Blaze and Dancer were collapsed on the floor with a crystal protruding out of each. Soar barely held himself aloft as multiple shards of smashed crystal planting themselves within his skin and Splash was on the verge of defeat.

    Erik reacted quickly, he couldn't lose anyone else. He withdrew Splash into his Pokeball and entered Leaf into battle, the Vileplume springing into action.

    Leaf shot out leaves as sharp as blades which cut into the rocky walls, in an attempt to unearth the leaders' Pokemon within. One of the leaves cut into something living, as the Lunatone emerged from the wall, Soar following up with a blast of energy which Liza's Pokemon narrowly avoided, returning fire by firing large rocks at its aggressors. The Latios dodged the stones aimed at him, flying high up to the cave's roof almost out of reach. Soar's escape left Leaf vulnerable, with only one Pokemon to aim at a group of boulders crashed into her. She struggled back to her feet, but knowing she was Erik's last hope the Vileplume managed to haul her body upwards, until she was blasted by a wave of fire. The Solrock had emerged.

    Soar saw his partner in trouble and cut through the air, swivelling out of the way of more rocks headed in his direction to save Leaf, but it was too late.

    A further rock hit the Vileplume, followed by another blast of flames. Leaf slouched to her feet, and looked at her trainer, then smiled. The look on her face was genuine as her friendly eyes lit up and matched her warm smile. Erik attempted to read her expression once more, trying to uncover the thoughts underneath. He didn't have to read Leaf's mind, his friend's smiling eyes said the words to him. "Thank you. You've made my life worth living."

    "No!" Erik screamed as the Solrock landed the finishing blow on Leaf, her lifeless body slumping to the ground as Soar scolded both Tate and Lizas' weakened Pokemon with a final blast of energy.

    Tears flowed freely down Erik's young face, he had lost yet another friend after seeing all his others perish before him for a second time.

    "Strange," Tate and Liza spoke in unison. "You have beaten us."

    "I don't care!" Erik roared.

    "Your reaction is natural. Every other gym is just a battle between trainers and their Pokemon. Our gym is different, we test your mind. We show you your soul and let you battle yourself instead. Somehow, you and your Vileplume overcame it."


    Erik had heard enough, he stormed out of the gym without grabbing the seventh badge. What did fighting mean if all it resulted in was the death of his friends, just for a small piece of metal.

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    Ocean waves crashed against the sand-strewn shore as water splashed up and wet Erik's feet. He twirled the metallic symbol in between his fingers, a purple loveheart with a hole in middle.

    Liza had sprinted after him as he exited the gym, apologising to him for the loss of Leaf and had handed him the badge personally. Erik headed to the beach thereafter, resting on the shore as the sun rose to the highest point in the sky, as memories of all the good times he had spent with Leaf flowed through his mind.

    The Oddish he had collided with alongside Wally was unable to take the offensive in a battle, only able to defend herself using a variety of spores in order to confuse her opponent or force them into a deep slumber. Leaf had evolved into a Gloom, and there she had learnt to attack Pokemon by targeting them with more aggressive spores which latched onto a foe, sapping their health. Then finally she evolved once more into a Vileplume with the help of one of the alien rocks. Erik had spent many a day by her side, the two inseparable at times along with Blaze, Dancer and Ice. Her loss felt to him as painful as his Mightyena's had.

    Suddenly, a beam of light shot out of the ocean like a beacon, its lime green hue shooting into the clear midday sky. The bright light was quickly followed by a huge roar, the sound echoing across the ocean, rolling off the waves until it hit Mossdeep Island.

    "Groudon…" Erik whispered, noting the beam emanated from Route 128. Magma must have found the ancient Pokemon's resting place and be in the attempt of awakening the creature. He had to stop Maxie before they unleashed a devastating power upon Hoenn that they couldn't control nor hold their own against.

    He climbed to his feet and sprinted towards the Pokemon Centre. He hastily healed his team and withdrew both Seal and Happy from storage. He would need another water Pokemon if he were to dive into the ocean's depths and find the ancient cave, a Sealeo would know how. Happy was a sentimental choice, he wanted a Gloom on his team.

    Erik stormed out of the Pokemon Centre, pushing aside the sliding door and stepped onto the soft grass outside. A Swellow slammed down on the ground before him, the large bird proceeding to lower its back and allow the two women on top to jump off.

    "Did you see that beam of light?!" May said whilst disembarking. Once she had climbed off her Swellow she ran to Erik and threw both arms around his neck, softly planting a kiss on his lips.

    "We located Groudon not long before it happened," Cecilia forced her way into the reunion, pushing the conversation straight to the business at hand.

    "Where abouts on Route 128 is he?" Erik asked, as May rested her head on his chest, listening to his heart race back and forth.

    "Under a network of caves, in an underground cavern. Tremors over hundreds of years should've caused the tunnels to collapse in on themselves, the place should be inaccessible" Cecilia replied, a flicker of indomitable determination flashing in her eyes with each word.

    "Which is why Maxie stole the submarine and attached a drill," Erik realised.

    "We met a man named Wallace in Sootopolis," Cecilia continued. "He gave us two sets of scuba gear and advised we ride aback a Pokemon as we make our way through."

    "We?" Erik questioned. "No, I go in alone, it's far too dangerous."

    "I can handle myself," Cecilia snapped.

    "I know you can, which is why I need you to remain outside. You can cut off Magma if they attempt to escape, monitor the situation and only if I really need the backup, then you come down with me."

    "Okay, sounds like a plan," Cecilia agreed, her tense body language relaxing slightly. "And May?" she asked Erik, as the woman in question pushed herself back from him.

    "There's two sets of scuba gear, so I'm going with him," May answered, in a tone that brooked no argument.

    "May, no-" Erik attempted to convince her.

    "You listen here, Erik. You always leave me out. Well this time I'm coming with you. You will need a guide through the caves and I have spent hours memorising the location by looking at the maps. I'm coming, and that's final."

    "Fine, but only if you leave as soon as we reach the cave."

    "We'll see," May said, her arms folded as she pierced Erik's stubborn stance with eyes like daggers.

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    The trio flew atop Soar until they reached a small island of sand, in the shape of a ring. Erik and May left Cecilia atop the sand, equipped their scuba gear, and dived into the ocean, the former clinging onto Splash and the latter onto Seal.

    Plunging into the depths, fierce currents threatened to sweep both Erik and May into rocks sharply pointed like blades all around them, but both Splash and Seal remained strong enough to emerge victorious from the battle with the sea. The two water Pokemon swept through the water like a hot knife through butter, aiming towards a gaping hole in the wall that had been carved out by Maxie's submarine.

    Erik was shocked by the damage the vehicle had caused. Where once was a clear network of caves and strong rock walls which survived the batterings of strong currents, now remained a series of holes which lead in a straight line through. Seal and Splash glided through Maxie's carved trail, before swimming sharply upwards, exiting the series of caves and emerging in a cavern. The Magma submarine lay beside them, as a large cave entrance hung in front of the duo. Water became sand before sand became rock as both Erik and May dismounted their Pokemon and now pondered whether to head inside or not.

    "Time for you to go back," Erik ordered May, who stoutly refused.

    "I'm coming with you!" she insisted, stamping a foot on the ground. "And that's final mister!"

    "It's dangerous inside, when Groudon is released the whole cave could come crashing down on us, I'm afraid to even go in myself."

    "I don't care. If you go in, I'm coming with you."

    "Then I'm staying out here," Erik finished, folding his arms in steadfast refusal.

    "Hello, Erik," called a man from inside the cavern. He slowly approached them as Erik tried to make out his features. He wore the clothing of a Magma grunt, but his crimson robe concealed a more menacing shirt underneath. A heavy hood masked his face, making it hard for Erik to distinguish who hid underneath.

    "You Magma or Rocket?" Erik replied, sighting the black and purple undershirt with a large letter 'R' sewn in above the man's left breast.

    "Rocket," he replied, a smile lighting up the dark shroud of his face. "So you came after all."

    "I'm not going inside, I know you plan to make sure no one inside gets out."

    "Oh that's not my job," the man smirked. "That's Wally's." The man noticed Erik's expression change from stubbornness to shock, and immediately continued. "You heard me. When you refused the great Giovanni, he devised a new plan. To kill Wally's Ralts and harden the child's spirit, he would be the new protege, and it would be his job to make sure Groudon is released and trap Magma inside once he is."

    "What have you done..." Erik growled.

    "Nothing. This is your fault, Erik. And everything that happens from now on. Is." The man strutted away once he had finished, entering the submarine and preparing his escape.

    "What now?" May asked, noting Erik's silence.

    "We have no choice. We stop Magma and save Wally."

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    Traversing the ancient cavern had proved treacherous, the further Erik and May trawled, the more the intense heat heightened. Beads of sweat trickled down Erik's face as his nostrils were filled with smells of lava and brimstone. Bubbling lava, screeches and roars could be heard ahead, as he clasped Blaze's Pokeball in his hand.

    They had been swarmed by a horde of Golbats as they entered the cave, Erik had captured one and named it "Bat" before Dancer and Swampert partnered together to fight them off. A number of Magma grunts had attacked them mercilessly, mustering all their might as the duo edged closer and closer to Groudon. The implosion of Magma's hideout had left dwindled their numbers. Erik had heard whisperings that almost a quarter of their remaining force was in this cavern, and although there appeared to be various passages and pathways through that Magma forces could be hidden within, he had only seen a few of the grunts.

    The sweltering heat reached its climax as Erik and May rounded a corner. Cracks ran down the ancient stone walls as steam rose up from similar scars in the cobbled ground. At the end of the corridor awaited a Magma grunt, his thick red robe boiling him within; Grant looked like he was roasting inside an oven.

    "You..." Grant growled, taking the hood off of his drenched head. "I'm under orders to not allow anyone passed!"

    Erik reached for Dancer's Pokeball as Grant's Golbat emerged to oppose him, but May laid her hand upon his wrist to stop him.

    "It's okay," she said, flashing him a sweet smile. "Save your Pokemon for their leader, I'll beat him for you."

    "Catch me up when you're finished with him," Erik replied, flashing Grant a scowl before strolling by him, the grunt too distracted by the battle now raging beyond him to stop Erik.

    Scorching heat blasted Erik as he took the next step, it was as if he had just walked into a furnace. The cave's lowest level was a huge circular room, with walls of brimstone covered by steam which rose fiercely from cracks in the cobbled floors. A menacing pit of lava bubbled and spat molten flakes at the far end of the open room, housing the largest Pokemon Erik had ever seen. Groudon.

    The titan was encased in stone, as it had been for hundreds or maybe even thousands of years. A demonic smile painted its cloud-white lower jaw, but the rest of the beast's gigantic frame was ruby-red, covered by coal-black stripes. Groudon's huge claws were the size of Erik himself as large, sharp spikes lined its skin.

    "Don't worry, I haven't awoken him yet," Maxie said, the Magma leader loitered by the side of the pool, the ruby red orb he had stolen remained firmly grasped in his right hand. Mylos stood stoically beside his superior.

    "Where's Wally?!" Erik demanded, feeling himself shaking as he spoke. Mylos laughed harshly.

    "My boy, I'm afraid you have been tricked," Maxie replied cooly, a smirk belying his otherwise calm features.

    "What do you mean?!"

    "Oh not by us," Maxie replied, holding a hand up in hope it would quell Erik's rage. "It was Team Rocket's ploy to lure you in, they couldn't find Wally anywhere. They knew that you cared for the child, and if they made you believe that he was helping us, then you'd galavant in here without a thought for the risks involved. It seems they were correct in their assumption."

    "Why do they want me in here so badly?" Erik said, calming slightly.

    "They think that Groudon will kill us all!" Mylos roared. "But I know Maxie can control him."

    "He's right," Maxie added. "The writings say that whoever awakens Groudon using the red orb will gain control over the Pokemon. With the power of Groudon I can take the fight to Team Rocket and stop 'New Age'."

    "You're crazy," Erik replied. "No, wait, just desperate," he corrected himself.

    "Now I can't be interrupted whilst I do this, otherwise I won't be able to control Groudon. Mylos, keep Erik occupied."

    "Yes boss," the admin replied in his gruff voice, marching forward at his leader's command.

    "Stop!" a voice called from behind them, May had entered the room. Grant sped out in front of her, running to his superiors and cowering behind them.

    "May," Erik shouted up to her, as she gleefully skipped down towards him. "Your Pokemon still able to fight?"

    "Yep."

    "Then Mylos is all yours. He's a lot stronger than Grant but you only need to hold him off whilst I take down Maxie and get that red orb off him."

    "Okay. But what do you plan to do with that red orb."

    "Use it ourselves."

    "Wha-" May screamed.

    "You don't even know how-" Mylos echoed, but both were silenced when Maxie raised a hand once more.

    "Battle me for that right, Erik," the Magma leader demanded, before taking off his glasses and using his fingernail to remove some of the casing on the side. Revealing a miniature megastone underneath. "And this time I won't hold back!" he roared, his composure vanishing as Maxie became as furious as the lava behind him.


    A Mightyena was his first Pokemon, but Erik knew his opponent was saving the megastone infused Pokemon until last. He sent Happy into the fray.

    Maxie's Mightyena mercilessly leapt at the Gloom, wrapping fangs around her which suddenly became encased in flames. Like Ice's ice fangs, this Mightyena could summon fire into his teeth. Happy was defeated with ease, her frail body tossed into the lava like an offering to the ancient Pokemon.

    "Blaze," Erik shouted, his Pokemon strolling onto the battlefield shortly after. The Blaziken sprang into life, launching two powerful kicks in quick succession at the Mightyena, who retaliated once more with fangs of flame, sinking strong fangs into Blaze's fur.

    A screech of pain erupted from Blaze's mouth, but as the fire around Mightyena's teeth surfaced, the Blaziken absorbed the flames, to his opponent's dismay.

    Maxie's Pokemon shrank back, and Blaze grabbed the opportunity. He smacked a foot into the Mightyena, forcing it backwards as the Blaziken launched a blast of fire at his foe then finally another kick. Maxie's Pokemon collapsed to its knees, but Blaze wasn't finished. Erik's Pokemon hoisted the dark-type into the air, and launched his foe into the pit of lava below, joining Happy in a mutual demise.

    Erik was confused by Blaze's actions. His Blaziken had acted relentlessly and without remorse, it seemed to him as if his previous mega-evolution had allowed a darkness to enter him, leaving a permanent black mark on his soul. Maxie's next Pokemon, a Weezing, was engulfed by flames which seared through its shell, igniting the poison underneath, causing the Pokemon to self-combust and explode. Blaziken was swept backwards by the detonation, smashing into the cobbled floor behind him.

    "Come home, Blaze," Erik whispered to his friend, withdrawing his Blaziken into his Pokeball and releasing Soar in his place. Maxie countered with a Crobat.

    "Ahh," Maxie remarked, stroking his chin as he eyed Erik's Pokemon. "A legendary Pokemon. The one you stole away from Mylos and Grant. No matter, it's not the only legendary in this room," he finished, switching his gaze from Latios to Groudon.

    Maxie's Crobat cut through the air at speed, the evolved form of Golbat latching its poisonous fangs into Soar who screeched in agony. The Latios swiped at the creature, missing each time as the Crobat moved agilely to the side but remained hovering too close to Soar for him to attack with a blast of energy.

    Soar attempted to fly away, but the cavern was too confined for him to properly maneuver, leaving him vulnerable to the small but agile Crobat, who launched an attack with vicious fangs once more.

    Erik's Latios launched a desperate energy blast at his opponent, the attack missing entirely and crashing into the Groudon's rock shell. Erik stopped breathing for a moment, expecting the blast to awaken the creature within. Luckily, it didn't.

    Maxie's Crobat stopped in midair, anticipating the same thing Erik did, Groudon's awakening. Soar didn't hesitate, the legendary Pokemon grasped the poison-type in his jaws and crushed it, leaving Crobat's limp body to tumble into the pit of lava. Soar wasn't finished, the Latios opened his large mouth and unleashed a stream of energy at his foe, incinerating the Crobat within.

    "Soar, it was already defeated!" Erik gasped, before withdrawing Soar back into his Pokeball. He wasn't sure what had happened to his Pokemon, with first Blaze and now Soar acting as if they homed an ancient evil within themselves. He wondered if the Groudon he now stared at had that same presence residing in him, and if so, Maxie wouldn't be able to control it.

    "Splash," Erik whispered to his Gyarados's Pokeball. "I hope it's not the same case with you." He threw Splash's Pokeball into the centre of the room, awaiting Maxie's next fighter.

    "It's time," the Magma leader said, throwing a Pokeball into play. His favourite Pokemon, a Camerupt, had been housed within.

    Maxie pointed his glasses in the direction of his Pokemon, who immediately began to react to the megastone's influence. A dark shroud encased the Camerupt within, and what emerged was no longer a Pokemon, but a monster.

    "None of my Pokemon have a chance against a Mega," Erik thought to himself. "The only way I've found to take down a Mega is using multiple powerful Pokemon, but this is now an official trainer battle, my device will know if I've cheated and give Rocket the excuse they need to destroy my licence, and May's still fighting Mylos so can't help me out with her Swampert. Wait," Erik thought, as an idea sprung into his mind.

    He grabbed the Masterball in his pocket and flung it towards the Mega-Camerupt.

    "You fool," Maxie smirked. "A Masterball works the same way as a normal Pokeball. The gravitational field around it decomposes if it detects the Pokemon already belongs to another trainer. And I'm not even going to ask where you got a Masterball from." The Masterball dropped to the floor, Splash instantly using his tail to whip it back to Erik, who threw it back into his backpack.

    "But this Masterball was used on one of my mega-evolved Pokemon," Erik roared.

    "Because you weren't in control of it," Maxie said, before uncontrollably breaking into manic laughing.

    "Wait. How are you in control-"

    "Camerupt," Maxie ordered, "turn 360 degrees on the spot."

    His mega-evolved Pokemon complied, turning slowly in place, each stomp of his foot causing the earth beneath its feet to shake. Maxie's demonic laughter echoed around the room once more.

    "Don't worry, I can only control this one."

    "But how?!"

    "That, I'm afraid, is Magma's closely guarded secret. Even Rocket do not yet know."

    Erik felt fear coursing through his veins. "The only other way I've ever seen a Mega taken down," he thought to himself. "Is by another Mega."

    He reached into his bag and pulled out a megastone, before unleashing the power within on Splash. A deathly screech from his Gyarados was followed by the creature entering then emerging from a dark cloud at twice its usual size, with darkened and enlarged features.

    The two entered a titanic battle with the advantage constantly switching sides. Maxie's control over the megaevolution had seemingly weakened it, but only slightly. Instead of it using its primal instincts and unleashing all its fury, it now waited for its trainers command. However, whilst weaker now, Erik thought that under the tutelage of a master trainer, a controlled Mega would be unstoppable.

    Mega-Splash curled its way around Mega-Camerupt's body like a snake strangling its prey and began tightening its coils before unleashing a blast of dark energy. The fire-type's retaliation efforts consisted of dark flame blasts, which seared into the Mega-Gyarados's skin, a howl of pain echoing around the room with each one. Erik noticed that Maxie had stopped barking orders a few minutes ago, instead leaving his Pokemon to revert to its instincts.

    The Mega-Camerupt escaped its prison, stomping on the ground and flipping onto its side, Mega-Splash writhing in agony and releasing its grasp. Maxie's Pokemon moved to leap into the lava pit. Erik realised that if he were allowed to, the molten substance would flood the room and scorch anyone inside.


    Mega-Splash sensed the danger to himself and shot out its head, attacking like a viper, and grabbed onto the Mega-Camerupt, enclosing his strong jaws around his foe's rear.

    Maxie's Pokemon pulled strongly, slowly but surely edging away from Mega-Splash, and managed to escape the Mega-Gyarados's vice-like grip. The Mega-Camerupt moved with as much speed as it could muster, the slow moving Pokemon breaking into its own version of a sprint towards the pool of lava.

    Mega-Splash recoiled its long neck, inhaling air from around itself and exhaling a blast of dark energy. A black stream of death shot its way towards the Mega-Camerupt, and engulfed the Pokemon whole. Seconds passed before the smoke from the impact cleared. Maxie's Pokemon emerged, somehow still alive.

    Maxie's beast was slowed almost to a stop, and began a weak crawl towards the pool. The lava within would both slightly heal and fully conceal the beast, as well as enabling it to be able to shoot molten streams from within. Erik hoped that his Mega-Gyarados could stop his opponent in time, but Mega-Splash didn't appear to be paying attention to Maxie's Pokemon. Instead, he had swiveled his head towards May's Swampert, who had just defeated Mylos. The water-type Pokemon was now the biggest threat in the room.

    "Oh no…" Erik whispered, as Mega-Splash prepared to unleash another attack. He had to act quickly, throwing his bag to the ground and fumbling around inside it until he found what he had been searching for.

    Mega-Splash unleashed his attack as Erik threw two objects in quick succession.

    Splash's megastone collided with the attack of dark energy, absorbing the power and expanding slightly in size. Erik wondered what this meant. Usually when a Mega attack hit a megastone the result would be an explosion, both powers cancelling each other out, but this time an attack had hit its own megastone.

    He would have to discover the answer at a later time, as the Masterball trapped the Mega Pokemon within itself. The capsule shook violently, bobbing up and down on the floor as the beast thrashed around inside trying to escape, until the buttons on top turned from red to yellow as Erik breathed a sigh of relief.

    The next problem was the Mega-Camerupt.

    Erik's fears were rapidly allayed, as he saw the beast had collapsed on the ground and had de-evolved. It had attempted to muster up all its remaining energy in order to crawl into the molten pond, but Mega-Splash's attacks had sapped all of its strength.

    "Maxie no!" Mylos roared. Erik looked to the Magma leader, who had just flung the red orb into the pit of lava. Molten fire licked up and claimed the orb within its grasp, smothering the ancient stone in its fiery embrace.

    "What have you done," the admin gasped.

    "I had no choice, I promised myself that I would do whatever it takes to save Courtney," the leader spoke solemnly. He had always held his head highly and appeared to be in control, but Maxie now just faced the ground, a look resembling that of a defeated and desperate man.

    "You've just doomed us all!" Mylos screeched. "Come on, let's get out of here!"

    "No!" Maxie roared, as the lava pool behind him began bubbling furiously. "Whatever. It. Takes."

    "Even your life?!" Mylos shouted back, before realising that saving his friend was a lost cause. "Forget it!" The Magma admin grabbed Grant and ran from the cavern as fast as he could manage.

    "May, get out of here," Erik ordered, but his friend remained stubborn.

    "No, I'm staying with you until the end."

    A huge roar shook the very foundations of the planet. Rocks tumbled from the roof and lava spat from the pit it had resided within. Groudon had awakened.

    "Groudon!" Maxie roared as the beast's yellow eyes fixed on the Magma leader. "Hear me-"

    Maxie's words were cut short as fire spewed from its enormous mouth. The beast's first act upon its reawakening was to give the leader of Team Magma a bath of flames. Maxie perished within.

    "Maxie…" Erik whispered, seeing the Magma leader evaporate into ash as the fire smothered him. He had never empathized with Maxie and his actions or goals, but he definitely understood why the Magma boss would go to such lengths to rescue Courtney from Team Rocket's vice-like grip. Now, Maxie had been turned to ash by the very Pokemon he thought would save him.

    Groudon released a huge roar, which again violently shook the cave as it began collapsing around them.

    "Get out!" Erik roared at May.

    "What about you?!" May screamed back at him.

    "I'm not going to allow it to the surf-" he began, before being interrupted by a further roar. Groudon harnessed all the power he could muster, summoning a rising fountain of lava which he sat atop of. He smashed through the roof, tunnelling his way up to the surface and emerging into the ocean. The water collided with the lava which immediately turned to molten rock, carving a solid pathway through the ocean.

    "Let's go!" Erik shouted, releasing Soar as both he and May clambered onto his Pokemon's back. "Follow Groudon upwards!" he ordered his Latios, who immediately obliged as the cavern collapsed around them.

    The cave ascended for miles, they had been deep underground. Soar battled his way through treacherous hazards. Spewing lava scorched his underbelly as rocks fell from above and crashed into him, both Erik and May having to constantly shift themselves to avoid boulders as large as their heads flying past them.

    As they neared the surface, Erik could see that Groudon was now headed towards Sootopolis upon a wave of lava which acted almost as a surfboard for the beast. Sun scorched the earth as intense heat flowed into the planet's surface. The ancient Pokemon seemingly controlled the sun itself.

    "Erik!" May screamed, as she narrowly avoided a rock. "It's headed towards the cave of origin deep inside Sootopolis. Once it gets there it can reverse to its primal form. That's what the books said anyway. See, I told you I could help!" she said, flashing him a sweet smile despite the world collapsing around Soar.

    "If it's this strong now, how much stronger can it get once it reaches its final form," Erik thought to himself. "Cecilia!" his head suddenly screamed with glee as he sighted his friend.

    Cecilia awaited at the top of the ocean, sitting on a small island and peeking down into the newly-formed chasm below.

    They were almost there, Soar had almost reached the surface.

    Groudon roared once more, but now with what seemed like a thousand times more verocity.

    The planet shook once more, and small cracks began to form within the chasm, but the majority of the rock wall stood strong as small amounts of ocean leaked into it, pouring down into the cave below. All until a wave of lava summoned by the roar shot through it. Soar was almost at the surface, he mustered the remainder of his strength, desperately attempting to reach the top before the lava did.

    He succeeded. Just. The lava spewed up and scorched Erik's Latios as he exited the chasm, sending searing pain through his body. Erik and May were thrown off back towards the pit as Soar thrashed out at the scorching impact and crashed into the ocean. The wave of lava shooting up into the sky and leaving the damaged chasm empty once more.

    May plunged towards the empty chasm as beads of sweat poured from her body, until Erik grabbed her hand. Her body dangled perilously over the edge, all that stopped her from falling to certain death was the hand she now held. Half of Erik's body slumped over the chasm, his legs on the surface being held in a firm grip by Cecilia.

    "Erik!" May screamed, as their sweat covered hands slowly lost their hold on another. "Save me! Please!"

    "Hold on!" he replied, feeling his grasp on her hand slowly slip.

    "I only wanted to help you! I'm always left out I just wanted to be a part of it all!" May wailed, as Erik held her now only by her fingers.

    "Please, don't leave me too," Erik cried.

    He couldn't hold her any longer, she slipped from his grasp.

    "Erik!" May squealed as she tumbled perilously into the chasm below. Erik rapidly turned his head from side to side, looking around for Soar, but his Latios was nowhere to be seen.

    "No!" Erik shouted. "May!"

    He watched as she screamed his name, her body tumbling into the chasm below which bellowed creaks and cracks as the ocean began to overpower the rock. His mind briefly harked back to the three shadowed figures in the gym, two humans and a Pokemon. If the Pokemon was Leaf, then the female human must be May. His eyes widened and his heart dropped in realisation. He was really going to lose her.

    Her body fell from sight as the ocean broke down the barriers, powerful waves smashing into another, filling the chasm and pouring into the cavern below.

    Groudon roared once more.

    Another stream of lava shot into the sky, ploughing through the ocean and briefly revealing the cavern below. May was gone.

    With a forceful tug, Cecilia pulled Erik up onto the surface as the molten substance screamed passed him and singed his hair.

    It had finally sunk in. He would never see May again. Even if she had managed the impossible and survived the fall, then the ocean had swallowed her whole.
     

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  • I'll admit I was a bit confused when Erik's megas were sent back, so I had to reread this first scene again. Otherwise, very sad Leaf didn't make it. =< Erik seeing his late Pokemon is an interesting twist, though, and I quite like the last few lines of that scene. (Already said some of this in my beta notes, still same thoughts here though, heh).

    The scene with Erik and the girls, I like that May won't let him go alone and wants to help him navigate through the caves. Shows she wants to take some inititative.

    "None of my Pokemon have a chance against a Mega," Erik thought to himself. "The only way I've found to take down a Mega is using multiple powerful Pokemon, but this is now an official trainer battle, my device will know if I've cheated and give Rocket the excuse they need to destroy my licence, and May's still fighting Mylos so can't help me out with her Swampert. Wait," Erik thought, as an idea sprung into his mind.

    Forgot to mention this in my beta notes, but the bolded parts with "Erik thought" seems a bit repetitive in one paragraph, like using the dialogue tag "he said" twice. Maybe you can get rid one of those.

    Anyways, Maxie and Erik's battle went on a few unexpected turns. Blaze and Soar being more reckless I should probably expected already due to them having experienced Mega Evolution. As for Maxie's sudden perhish, I already mentioned my thoughts to you on that front though the additon of Erik's reaction there gives it more of an impact there.

    The chapter's last scene it's pretty tragic that May most likely didn't make it. =< Since Soar dropped in the ocean, wonder if he's gone too. Overall a very enjoyable chapter, looking forward to more!
     
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    Dang, I plan on reading this over the break. But one question, what's a nuzlocke fic? Is it like the writer plays the game then writes about it or what?
     

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  • Dang, I plan on reading this over the break. But one question, what's a nuzlocke fic? Is it like the writer plays the game then writes about it or what?

    Yeah, pretty much. Many fic writers would do a nuzlocke run and then based their story on what happened during their challenge (like if a Pokemon "dies" in their nuzlocke run then the writer will have that featured in their story). I've been helping abstories with this story and I think you'll enjoy it! =) When you do manage to read it do leave a reply on your thoughts!
     
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    That's a cool concept! Yeah, will do; my last final is tomorrow so I'll probably read this and some other stories by the the weekend.
     
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    Sorry about the lateless of this chapter, after the festive period (spending time with family and what not) I moved house, and have only just got the internet back! The remaining chapters from now on will come out every week or two, hope you enjoy this one!

    Chapter Twenty-Four - Those Who Remain​


    Soar gasped for air as he emerged from the ocean, flailing around hopelessly as the currents swept him towards the small ring-shaped island where Erik and Cecilia sat, the duo peering into the ocean, which now bubbled in the place where the chasm had once divided the ocean's once calm surface. The water hissed as smoke rose from within and reached into the sky. Pokemon inside slowly boiled within the now furnace-like sea as the baking sun threatened all life within.

    Hordes of ocean-dwelling creatures floated to the surface, some desperately gulping in oxygen, others not breathing at all. Shoals of Magikarp lay on their sides, the currents pushing and pulling them with the Pokemon too weak to resist the angry sea. Tentacools joined them, the weakest were always the first to fall, as many washed up on the island's soft sands, their liquid skin steaming in the glaring sun.

    "Erik…" Cecilia whispered, her voice frail from a mixture of exhaustion, shock and anguish. Beads of sweat dripped down her face as she too struggled in the intense heat. "Please, speak to me."

    Erik felt as if he was melting, both on the inside and outside. His skin felt rough and torn, and was surely as pink as a Jigglypuff's by now. It had only been five minutes since the chasm closed, but it had felt like a lifetime. The sight of May falling back into the cavern replayed itself over and over again in his mind, as he repeatedly thought of far fetched ways he could've saved her. If he hadn't been so caught up in the moment, then he maybe he would've released Bat, who could've flown down and caught her. Or his grip could had been stronger, or had sweat not been trickling down his hands then it definitely would have. The next time he visualised it all happening again, he threw himself in after May, perishing with her.

    "That's what I should've done, at least that way, he would have left this life together," he thought out loud.

    Cecilia slapped him. "Don't you dare speak like that!" she bellowed. "You're not the only one who lost a friend today!"

    The strike snapped Erik back to reality, although the emotional conflict of sorrow, grief and fury continued warring within himself. "A friend?!" he roared, his voice laced with animosity. "She was so much more to me than just a friend!"

    "We'll both die if we stay here!" she screamed.

    "I don't care!" he shouted, turning his back on her.

    "And what about the oceans boiling and Pokemon dying all around us?!"

    "I don't care," he whispered. He was shaking violently, but couldn't tell if it was out of sadness or anger. He turned to face Cecilia once more, but this time the rage from her eyes had disappeared, to be replaced by something else. Fear. She was terrified.

    "Erik, please," she spoke whilst shaking just as violently as he was. "If we die here, so many Pokemon will too. And all the people that will die in the heat too. Please don't let Team Magma win."

    "Maxie is gone," he growled. "Which means Magma are, too." He remembered the image of Maxie disappearing within Groudon's flames, Giovanni and Team Rocket were behind all of it, like they always had been. They had taken his father from him, they had taken his childhood from him, and now they had taken May. "Cecilia," he said, his voice cold. "We're leaving."

    "Where are we going?"

    "Sootopolis."

    "Good idea, if Groudon reaches the centre of the Cave of Origin he will be unstoppable."

    "No, we take down Groudon to stop Team Rocket and whatever this 'New Age' is."

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    The city of Sootopolis nestled itself within an ancient crater. White runestone surrounded Erik and Cecilia as they traversed the carved streets and many buildings constructed from wood intertwined with stone which sprawled around the entire perimeter.

    Erik healed his team at the Pokemon Centre before continuing along the street, following the claw and scorch marks which lined the walls towards the Cave of Origin. Whisperings of wounded and exasperated citizens informed Erik that Groudon had stormed the city, summoning lava in an attempt to use it as a launchpad to throw him over the crater walls, before eliminating any resistance to himself from the townspeople. Groudon scorched Pokemon and person alike as he tore his way towards the Cave of Origin.

    A crowd of trainers loitered around the entrance of the cave, awaiting the ancient creature as they anticipated Groudon's return to the surface. Each trainer clasped their hands to Pokeballs on their belts or hid behind their strongest Pokemon. All apart from the two heading the group.

    "Erik!" Steven exclaimed, a blue orb in his grasp. "I'm glad you're here. Wallace and I need all the help we can get." He nodded to the man beside him. Wallace looked to be in his early thirties with turquoise eyes with hair which curled gracefully around his head, covered by a white sailors hat. He bore a long white cape with a teal interior. The man's every action was considered and graceful as he frollocked around like a dancer, elegantly moving along the pavement as he attempted to calm down the exasperated citizens.

    "Out of my way!" Erik demanded, barging his way through the crowd before the two men at the head of the group barred his path. Cecilia struggled to keep pace as she politely pushed her way through.

    "It's too dangerous to go inside, even as the champion and eighth gym leader we aren't strong enough to confront the beast within," Steven spoke, a hint of fear clear in his voice.

    "If Groudon reverts to its primal form we have lost!" Erik bellowed. "I won't ask again. Move!"

    The two looked at each other nervously. "Wait," Wallace spoke, his high pitched voice singing like a melody. "We believe that this blue orb is the counter to the red one. Both came crashing down with the meteor upon its arrival to Hoenn."

    "Let him pass," Cecilia ordered as she caught up to them. "I'll look out for him."

    "No, I've already lost May because she insisted on coming with me to a place too dangerous."

    "But-" Cecilia whined, before Erik instantly cut her off with a powerful glare. "Oh," she squeaked. "I'll wait outside."

    Steven and Wallace jumped out of the way as Erik barged through, grabbing the orb as he pushed his way passed the duo. "We'll wait outside with Cecilia, err, incase you fail," one of them shouted after him, he wasn't sure which.

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    Flames roared ferociously atop torches, somehow remaining lit along the smooth white stone walls of the ancient cavern. Symbols and drawings lined the interior, scrawled in a language Erik could not understand. He was unsure whether they were drawn by early humans or were here when the meteor crashed into Hoenn.

    A trail of destruction created a pathway for Erik to travel down, to the very core of the cavern. Groudon had somehow carved through the runestone and ventured deep underground, to the very pits of the planet. The further he travelled, the more treacherous the path became. Molten lava seeped from scratch marks in the walls, melting the rock straight through underneath as magma dripped onto it. Sweltering heat escalated the further he walked, almost searing through his flesh, making Erik feel as if he were melting.

    Erik's vision blurred as haze smouldered around him, before it was replaced by a wall of blue. The orb in his hand emitted a shield around him, circling him like a bubble and pushing away the heat like a powerful gust of wind. As he descended through the newly created tunnels, flames licked up at him from the walls as lava dripped through crevices on the roof. The molten liquid steamed and evaporated as it hit the bubble, with the vicious fires recoiling like a stricken animal upon contact with the shield. Despite being within the hottest oven on the planet, Erik felt cooled by the internal temperatures of the blue orb's protective shield.

    The tunnel reached an abrupt climax, as large lumps of stone tumbled into a fierce ocean of lava below, plumes of flame ascending from the molten sea. Erik released Soar from his Pokeball, clambering on top of the Latios as the shield expanded and covered both trainer and Pokemon. They flew into the pit.

    The ocean parted before the blue orb's energy, as Soar plunged into the depths. Lava screamed at the impact, hissing and roaring violently as it evaporated at the shield's touch. The extinguish liquid was rapidly replaced by more as Soar funneled through, hunting down Groudon before it could reach the cavern's core.

    The magma thinned as the brimstone walls around the ocean narrowed, somehow containing the liquid beast within its stony embrace. Soar smashed through a wall , the shield crushing layers of rock in its wake as lava followed through after him. Soar and Erik emerged in an enormous room.

    Ancient markings lined the walls, glowing white in the Groudon's presence as magma poured from the newly formed hole in the wall. The molten waterfall crashed into a small bed of lava which lined the surface, a large rock jutting from it. Purple crystals spun slowly, circling the rock menacingly as cracks swiftly carved their way through the stone and shone a bright white. Groudon perched atop the towering boulder.

    As Soar began to land, another section of stone rose from out of the ground, reacting to the blue orb's presence as it pushed through the pool of lava and created a landing bay. Erik wrenched Blaze and Splash's Pokeballs from his belt, launched them and quickly grabbed the trio of megastones from within his backpack.

    A flicker of doubt flashed across his thoughts. He had seen how a darkness had entered the souls of the three Pokemon who stood before him, and now with even more excessive use of the stones he clutched within his hands, would they reach a point of no return? He shook the negativity from his mind and pointed the rocks at his Pokemon. He would destroy Groudon and Team Rocket by whatever means necessary, they had taken May from him, and now nothing else mattered but vengeance.

    Groudon joined Erik's Pokemon in a painful screech, the ear piercing sounds so violent they caused the entire room to shake as lava spurted both from the waterfall and the pool below, striking up and hitting the bubble shield which surrounded Erik and clashing with the three clouds of darkness that shrouded his Pokemon.

    The shining white cracks upon the rock, which the ancient creature used as a podium, had reached the giant boulder's pinnacle, and had began carving into Groudon. Essence-like particles of energy floated towards the creature from the crystals, changing the gems from purple to black as they were drained. The essence glided towards Groudon who absorbed the particles into his skin. It reminded Erik of how Leaf used pollen to affect her foes.

    The white energy from the rock slithered up Groudon like many snakes, making it look as if the creature's veins were lighting up. The gigantic creature writhed and screamed in pain as the three megas emerged from the dark clouds to face him. Erik's three Pokemon launched their attacks at the Groudon simultaneously, to be swallowed by an evolution-like bright light.

    Moments later, Primal Groudon emerged. Twice the size he was before, the creature now stood at around forty feet high, with bright white cracks in his skin and his vulnerable underbelly turned from a soft white to an impenetrable-looking black.

    Erik held his breath in awe, he had never seen a more formidable looking Pokemon. Awe was mercilessly replaced by fury as his whole body shook from rage, the wounds from losing May were still fresh, and cut very deep.

    Mega-Splash attempted another attack, but his dark water blast fizzled out and evaporated within the heat of the cave as the Primal Groudon ruthlessly and effortlessly swatted the Mega-Gyarados aside. Dark flame blasts intertwined with black energy beams as Mega-Blaze combined his efforts with Mega-Soar. The two attacks struck the Groudon who recoiled only slightly, before unleashing a vigorous roar. The entire cavern trembled as lava hissed and flared, shooting up and scolding Mega-Soar. Erik released Dancer from her Pokeball for his own protection, as Mega-Blaze stood alone against the Primal Groudon.

    Erik's eldest friend rolled to the side as his foe smashed a hammer-like fist into the ground, the Primal Groudon's long claws scraping against the rock. Mega-Blaze launched a blast of black fire, dodged a retaliative swipe and attacked again, the colourless flames expanding and wrapping upon contact with the beast. Mega-Splash recovered to launch a furious assault on the Groudon, smashing his tail against his foe like a gigantic whip, following the blow with a series of water blasts.

    Erik watched on in horror as the Primal Groudon grasped Mega-Splash and held him in the air, his tail dangling over the pool of lava below as the molten liquid flared up greedily at its next meal. Mega-Blaze hopped up the boulder where Groudon perched, rapidly climbing the rock until he reached the summit. Once there, his flame-covered hands enclosed into fists as the Mega-Blaziken began a barrage of fiery strikes against the ancient Pokemon's chest.

    Groudon recoiled as painful rapid blows struck his stomach, again and again. Mega-Splash thrashed around within the creature's grasp, managing to writhe free, throwing himself to the solid ground below and de-evolving. Erik grabbed Splash's Pokeball and recalled the Gyarados as Mega-Soar slowly climbed back to his feet.

    Primal Groudon's nails were knives as they cut into Mega-Blaze, before the fire type was launched across the room by a wild swing of the Pokemon's huge foot. The Mega-Blaziken's flames hissed and evaporated upon contact with the blue orb's protective bubble, as Mega-Blaze bounced off the shield and crashed to the ground below.

    Mega-Soar screeched as it took to the air once more, the weakened Primal Groudon stumbling atop the boulder before falling off into the lava below.

    "Finish it!" Erik roared, his fists clenched and blood pumping furiously.

    His Mega-Latios obliged, a dark blast of energy devouring the ancient creature who smouldered within. A deathly roar filled the room, entering the walls and tearing down the roof as the cavern began to crash down around them. The protective shield around Erik flickered and faded perilously as soon as the Groudon was defeated, as if its life relied upon the creature's own.

    Another screech consumed the room. Erik switched his attention from the shield around him to his two Pokemon outside. Mega-Blaze had de-evolved as wounds infested the Blaziken's weakened body, and as Blaze lay prone and unmoving on the cavern floor, Mega-Soar honed in on his next victim.

    Erik threw his bag to the ground, fumbling around desperately for the Masterball within. He found Blaze's megastone, then Soar's, then near the bottom of his backpack, the device he needed to save his friend's life. A final howl of pain flowed through the cave, penetrating Erik's skin and piercing his heart. He slowly tilted his gaze upwards to find his Blaziken's body devastated within a blast of dark energy.

    The Masterball dropped out of Erik's clutches and to the floor. Dancer reacted instantly as Mega-Soar stared at his trainer through cold, red eyes. She grabbed the Masterball and threw it, before ripping Bat's Pokeball off of Erik's belt and launching it into the air.

    While Dancer shoved the stones back in her trainer's backpack, Bat swooped over to the Masterball as the lights on top turned from yellow to green. The shield had almost faded completely as sharp rocks rained down upon them and lava spewed violently from the walls and floor. Bat released Soar from the Masterball, allowing the Latios to pick Erik up as Dancer recalled the Golbat before withdrawing into her own capsule.

    Erik couldn't remember what happened next, his vision blurred as his thoughts filled with Blaze joining May in the afterlife, now all he wanted to do was join them, there was nothing left for him out here.

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    Torrential rain had replaced remorseless heat over the last couple of weeks, as large raindrops battered the mud and dirt. Professor Birch rested one hand on the coffin and the other on his heart as he passionately recited stories of his daughter. Alongside him was Norman, his oldest friend, who dipped his head in deep regret. After a harrowing tale of the time May first helped him on a field trip, the professor could take no more. The man sprinted from the field in tears, unable to comprehend the fact his daughter was now lost to him. Norman completed the speech in his stead.

    Erik peered through his thick hood as he loitered behind the treeline, staring out into the small forest clearing. He was too racked with guilt and shame to show his face, but he couldn't miss May's funeral. His heart ached mercilessly and he couldn't tell whether his face was soaked due to the rain or his tears. He sighted Cecilia alongside his mother in the crowd, who constantly checked around her to see if her son was to join them. Wally was alongside her, and Archie a row behind. The two had finally resurfaced after weeks, or in Wally's case, months, of almost ceasing to exist.

    After Norman had finished speaking, the coffin was buried underground by a funeral attendant and his group of Machokes. The crowd slowly receded as stunned citizens of Hoenn said their last words to May and retreated to their homes. After a few minutes, everyone had departed. Everyone apart from Norman, Wally, Cecilia and Archie, who had all gathered in the centre of the clearing.

    "We know you're here, son," Norman called out, scanning the trees with heavy set eyes. The trio around him betrayed Erik's father's words, gasping before frantically glancing around the clearing for any sign of their friend.

    Erik marched out from the trees, hearing his father beckon him released a surge of anger into his system, gushing from the deepest pits of his soul where he had buried it. Norman was part of Team Rocket, and it was their plan that had caused him to lose May, Blaze and countless others. He approached his father, fists enclosed and ready to swing, but when he was only inches away he collapsed into Norman's outstretched arms, tears flowing freely as all of his grief struck him at once. He was a child again, in his father's caring arms.

    "I'm so sorry Erik," Norman whispered.

    "Why Dad, why?!" Erik shrilly cried out.

    "I only wanted what was best for you." His father's hands clench around him, and he heard a fierceness in Norman's tone that he thought he been swallowed up by his Rocket indoctrination. "But look what Giovanni has reduced you to, my own son."

    "Would you like some space, Norm?" Archie asked, attempting to keep his gruff voice as friendly as possible.

    "No, I asked the three of you to stay behind for a reason," the Petalburg gym leader replied, his barely controlled voice raw with anger. "I know all about Team Rocket's next step, 'New Age'."

    "Yeah, to release Groudon. But that thing went as quick as it came," the Team Aqua leader replied.

    "Erik destroyed it," Cecilia added, a hint of pride wrapped within her sweet tone of voice.

    "No," Norman responded. "Groudon was meant to distract and eliminate any remaining resistance Hoenn had to offer. New Age is happening this afternoon."

    "They did eliminate any resistance," Erik retorted, his voice squeaky and unclear as he forced words through his ceaseless sobs. "May, Blaze, Aqua, everyone."

    "Aqua lives on through me!" Archie growled, thumping a fist to his chest. "There's still a couple of my grunts left too! Loyal to the end!"

    "I'm still here," Cecilia chirped.

    "Me too," Wally added. The once-fragile trainer seemed to suddenly have an air of confidence about him. "You taught me to be strong. I was weak and useless before, but I've been training for months on my own, inside dangerous caves and on big mountains and deserts. I now have six badges, all because of you, Erik."

    "You see, son," Norman spoke softly. "You have inspired all those around you to keep fighting, no matter what the odds are."


    "I've inspired my close friends to die," Erik snapped back, pushing his father away.

    "Both Blaze and May wouldn't want you to give up now. They fought to keep Team Rocket out, not to let them win. Every strategy Giovanni has created so far has worked, he has manipulated everything and everyone until it has all fallen neatly into place for him. Are you really going to let his final plan succeed?"

    At his father's words, Erik felt something stir within him. A fire from within. It was as if Blaze lived in inside him as he pictured a Torchic chirping happy, quickly turning into a Combusken smiling at him, and finally, a Blaziken by his side, breathing life into his broken body.

    "Blaze was always by my side," he muttered. "And May always wanted to be by it."

    "I will be by your side," Norman said firmly. "I've let you down, Erik, and for that I am sorry. But seeing you like this, what Giovanni has done to you, has made me realise what I was doing. I know I was wrong to blindly follow them thinking I was doing what was right by you. I promise you, I am with you now until the end."

    "We all are too!" Cecilia added, to murmurs of agreement from both Archie and Wally.

    "Then I will stop Giovanni, for Blaze and May, even if it's the last thing I ever do," Erik growled, climbing steadily to his feet.

    "So what's this New Age thing?" Archie growled, his voice turning from a calm ocean to a stormy sea.

    "A ship, led by Giovanni, is coming. Full of grunts to do his bidding. He plans to land on the beach of Route 104 and install an overseer of Hoenn, a puppet that he can use to control the entire region from his office in Kanto."

    "How many?" Archie asked, stroking his beard as he considered the odds of an unlikely victory.

    "I'm not sure, at least five times our number, maybe more. A man named Tabitha leads their strike team, a group of elite grunts bred purposefully to take out any resistance, before a second team led by Giovanni himself will move in."

    "How do we stop them?" Cecilia enquired, her voice wavering slightly.

    "We set up along the cliffs of Route 104, hitting them from range as they approach the beach, if any make it up the hillside them we fight them on the grass. We can't let them push us back to Petalburg as that opens up the way north and south. Wally, you won't be with us I'm afraid, I have another task for you."

    "That's a tough ask for the four of us, even with my two grunts added, we can't take on that many," Archie spoke before Wally could reply.

    "We have allies. Giovanni was using Magma to bribe the authorities, and most people I've asked are too afraid to incur Rocket's wrath to enter the battle. Steven Stone and his father won't be helping us after a nice little pay-off. As for the gym leaders, Brawley said he doesn't care, Wattson has been bribed, Tate and Liza refused to respond to me. But Roxanne and Flannery will help, Winona has sworn vengeance after what happened to May, and Wallace has promised a 'helping hand', whatever that means."

    The next words were lost to Erik as he remained in his own thoughts, Rocky had joined the team now making up the magic number of six. He hoped that they could win this impossible fight, but he would give everything he still had left to give. For Blaze, May, and everyone else that had been lost along the way.

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    Dark clouds cast a foreboding gloom over the defenders of Hoenn as a cold chill encircled the southern reaches of Route 104. A large cruiseliner ploughed towards them, cutting through the ocean like a hot knife through butter. The ship was painted in the infamous black and purple of Team Rocket, with a large red letter "R" visible on either side.

    "You ready?" Norman asked his son as the two stood side by side atop the hillside.

    "I've never been more ready," Erik spoke through gritted teeth as he clenched his fists tighter with each wave that smashed against the sands.

    Norman nodded to Flannery. The fire type gym leader guarded the beach's northern hills where Mr. Briney's house lay, the land sharply descending into a small pier where neither the old sailor, nor his small boat could be seen. Her Camerupt loitered above the wooden stairway which connected the beach to the hills.

    Erik's gaze fixated on the ship, which had stopped just short of firing range. He could see small specks hastily running around the deck, clambering onto the small speedboats before they began a slow descent into the ocean.

    "Here come the strike team," Norman spoke, his tone calm and considered. "Good."

    "Good?" Erik asked.

    "They have underestimated us," Norman replied. "They see just you and I, Flannery and Roxanne. They think it's just the four of us." The Petalburg gym leader looked to where Roxanne and her rock types lay in wait, guarding the southern descent. "If they thought we were anything of a threat they would have lined the edges of their ship with Pokemon and began bombarding us from afar."

    The speedboats moved in unison as they hit the ocean, a total of eight black dinghies all mounted by a small squad of elite Rocket grunts. A swarm of Golbats, Crobats and Fearows darkened the skies above the ship as the strike team began their assault on the shores.

    Erik nodded to Soar and Bat who both flapped their wings and rose from the ground, but were quickly stopped by a halting raised hand from Norman.

    "We need our Pokemon to attack anything that makes it to the beach," Erik's father said.

    The two landed to either side of Dancer, and Rocky. Erik needed a new fire type in his team so chose the Numel he had caught on the climb of Mt. Pyre. Rocky had been raised in the daycare up until now, awaiting the day his trainer would come back and take him by his side.

    Norman kept two Slakings, a Vigoroth, a Zangoose, and two Linoones with him. The two Slakings awaited alongside a large pile of rocks and boulders, which they were instructed to throw at anyone or anything that set foot on the beach. The other four Pokemon were to charge down the hillside and stop anything that made it passed their initial defences.

    "I believe in you, my son." Norman placed a hand on Erik's shoulder as he spoke. "But before this battle begins I need you to know this. If we fail today, that will be it, Rocket will control Hoenn and we will all be locked up." He stared his son directly in the eyes, as if he struggled to comprehend what he was saying. "But even if we succeed, the fight won't be over today. Hoenn is on its knees and everyone in power has already given in to Rocket, the only way we can force Hoenn to fight back is-"

    Norman was cut short by an earth shaking sound. The cruiseliner let out its own battlecry, a thunderous roar shouted by a huge horn, the powerful noise enough to strike fear in the heart of anyone, human or Pokemon. Erik counted around twenty fliers heading towards them, and each of the eight speedboats contained three or four grunts. They had larger numbers just in their initial assault force than Erik had ever considered on the entire cruiseliner.

    The horn fell silent, and for only a moment, a small wave of calm washed over the shoreline, a breeze of peace which swept through Erik's hair and sank into his skin. A dinghy was suddenly launched into the air as Splash emerged from the depths. Seal leapt from the Gyarados's back, shooting ice shards which pierced the sides of the airbourne boat. Panic swept through the ranks as another boat was dragged under, then another, as Archie and his grunts in full clad diving costumes flew out of the depths a few moments later on the backs of Sharpedos.

    One of the dinghys turned around to help their fallen allies, taking the fight to the shattered remnants of Team Aqua. The other four speedboats remained on course for the beach, where Erik awaited, a fire burning brightly inside him, his Blaziken living on within himself.

    "For May!" a shrill scream swept across the beach like a gust of wind, as Winona burst out of Petalburg Woods atop a Swellow. Five more Pokemon followed, and alongside them, Will. The gym trainer that had reminded Erik so much of himself flew on the back of a Xatu, the seven flying types crashing into the Rocket fliers.

    Chaos ensued above as Erik struggled to distinguish friend from foe. The ocean was awash with fighting as carnage swept across the waves, Splash battled against a duo of Team Rocket Gyarados and Archie against a group of Tentacruel. Erik closed his eyes.

    "Blaze, May, Ice, Ziggy, Gully…" Erik began, repeating the names of his lost friends within his mind, over and over, using his pain to fuel his spirit. "...Roller, String, Speedy, Leaf. This is for you, all of you," he opened his eyes. "For all of you!" He roared.

    "For Hoenn!" Flannery and Roxanne cried out.

    "For you, my son," Norman whispered. Erik turned to face his father, but realised the Gym Leader was speaking to himself.

    A half dozen Rocket grunts passed the shoreline atop flying types, two Crobats, three Golbats and a Fearow. Soar and Bat sprung into motion, taking to the skies and confronting their opponents as the four speedboats crashed into the beach.

    Rocks were hurled from Roxanne's Pokemon, a Nosepass, two Golems, two Gravellers and a Lairon, as well as from one of Norman's Slakings, all aimed at the flying types in the sky. Rocky's fire blasts joined bolts of electricity from Dancer and flamethrowers from Flannery's Torkoals, Camerupts and Macargo's, the attacks smashing into the initial wave of grunt-released Pokemon.

    Koffings and their evolved form, Weezing joined many Grimers, Muks, Golbats and Crobats released onto the beach by the strikeforce. The fire strikes were soaked up by a trio of Houndooms, released by the leader of the squad, Tabitha. The ex-Magma member wore all black, a hooded robe like a Magma member would, but instead of crimson this was dyed the colour of night. A cape swung from his shoulders to his heels. The grunts surrounding him wore typical Rocket outfits, tight fitting suits or other forms of expensive black or purple clothing.

    A Fearow fell from the sky, tumbling to the ground accompanied by a large boulder hurled by one of Norman's Slakings. Soar's energy blasts devoured a couple of the Golbats as Bat fought a closely matched battle with a Crobat. Norman signalled to his Zangoose, Vigoroth and pair of Linoones, the quartet immediately responding, descending rapidly down the cliff face and leaping onto a group of Pokemon that had advanced passed the bolts of fire and electricity.

    A couple of grunts had made their way to the southern ramp, their Pokemon engaged in battle with Roxanne's finest rock-types. On the other side, Flannery's Camerupt had destroyed the stairway, waiting for a grunt to climb up before igniting the support beams, the Rocket member leaping off as his Pokemon perished within the flames. Another grunt had climbed the pier, and was locked in a fight with Flannery's other Pokemon.

    Tabitha screamed an order at one of his Houndooms, who to Erik's horror, shot flames at one of the grunts mounted on a Crobat. The strikeforce leader withdrew all three of his Pokemon, ordering the flier to land and climbed on the Crobat himself.

    "Slakings," Norman bellowed, "take down that Crobat!" The two responded instantly, grabbing stones and launching them at the poison type who arrowed towards them. Erik spotted Archie's Aqua squad and Winona's flying Pokemon slowly turning the tide of battle to their advantage, as Team Rocket's numbers slowly dwindled.

    The smile across his face vanished as quickly as it had appeared as Tabitha leaped off the back of his Crobat just as a rock smashed into the creature. The ex-Magma admin landed softly on the hillside with Norman and Erik as he released his three Houndooms.

    "Norman," Tabitha croaked, his face remained in darkness underneath a thick cowl, but his voice was both crispy and dry, as if his voicebox had been severely scorched. "You've betrayed us, but how can you be stupid enough to oppose us?" It was as if each word he croaked left his throat in agony. The man twitched a gloved hand each time he spoke.

    "You're one to speak about betrayal!" Erik roared. "Maxie was your friend, and you helped them steal his wife!"

    "Steal his wife?" The man's laughter was as harsh and broken as his voice. "Courtney joined Rocket of her own free will! She never loved that man, in fact, she pitied him, he-."

    "Enough of this!" Norman barked.

    "Your wish is my command. Houndoom, burn them alive."

    "Wait, you can't order Pokemon to attack trainers!" Erik growled.

    "This isn't a trainer battle you fool, this is war!" Tabitha responded, before breaking into crackling laughter as his three dark types attacked with waves of fire.

    Norman's two Slakings leapt in the way, shielding their trainer and his son with their lumbering frames as their fur soaked up the flames.

    "Remember that trick?" Norman said to his son, flashing Erik a quick smile as he recalled their gym battle. Both Slakings slouched to the floor before they were leapt upon by two of the vicious Houndooms. The third eyed up Erik, charging at the trainer, its snarling fangs dripping with saliva.

    Dancer tackled the Pokemon, as Rocky faced up to the other two, who had just finished with the now defeated Slakings. Dancer deftly danced out of the way of a wild lunge by the her foe, hurling a bolt of electricity at the fire type then leaping out of the way of a vicious flamethrower.

    Rocky was faring a lot worse. He had taken a few blows from one of the Houndooms as the other circled around him then rammed into him from behind. The Numel struggled to his feet before being consumed by flames.

    "Blaze would've been able to take down both," Erik sighed, seeing his Numel gasping for air as the flames around him dissipated. The two Houndoom strutted up to Rocky to apply the finishing blow.

    The first Houndoom was swept aside by Bat, before Soar engulfed both within an energy blast. Dancer lit up the weakened duo in a cascade of thunderbolts summoned from the sky.

    Erik glared at Tabitha, before moving to check on his Numel's health. A flash of movement caught his eye, as Tabitha reached into his pocket for a device. A small black box with a red button. The strikeforce leader pressed the button, and for a few seconds, nothing happened. Then the horn sounded once more.

    "Goodbye," Tabitha croaked, before opening his arms and stretching them as wide as he could. "I regret nothing."

    Erik's confusion was only added to as the Rocket grunts dived into the sea, clambered onto their boats, or flew back to the ship, which had moved forward slightly and was now turning to face them side-on.

    Winona and Archie moved to halt the retreat, Erik eyeing the group of Swellow as Will flashed him a smile and waved to him from above. Suddenly, the Fortree gym trainer was falling towards the surface, his Xatu shot out of the sky by a rain of fire.

    Archie ordered his grunts and Erik's waterbourne Pokemon to seek cover underwater as the ocean was lit up in flames. A barrage of fireballs, streams of poison and powerful jets of water had erupted from the ship's decks. The bombardment had commenced.

    Erik began recalling his Pokemon into their Pokeballs, Dancer withdrawn, then Soar, then Bat.

    Norman let out a cry of pain. A blast of poison had hit him directly. Something then caught Erik's eye. A huge wall of flame aimed at him.

    "Rocky," he cried, "I'm sorry for doubting you, I'm sorry for wanting you to be like Blaze. I just really miss him. Help me."

    His Numel turned his head, staring at Erik with soft, sad eyes as the wall of flame hit them. A bright light engulfed them both. Rocky was evolving.

    "Erik…" Norman gasped. The light had protected him too, but not from the poison which clawed at him from within, suffocating his veins and strangling the life out of him. "I'm...so...sorry."

    "Dad!" Erik screamed, grabbing hold of his father as the newly evolved Camerupt emerged from the light.

    The bombardment had stopped as suddenly as it had started. Team Rocket's cruiseliner released its remaining speedboats, Giovanni was coming with the rest of his army.

    "Don't leave me too, please, I can't. I won't. Dad!" Erik sobbed, holding his dying father within his arms.

    "You...Must...Stop...Rocket," Norman spoke, his voice barely above a whisper.

    "I can't do it without you, you're all I have left!"

    "You've done...All this without…Me...But to stop Rocket...And rally Hoenn...You must become...Champion," Norman spluttered, before he lay back his head and closed his eyes. "And Erik," he finally managed.

    "Yes, Dad?" Erik replied. He moved his hand to his motionless father's wrist, feeling his life slowly fade away.

    "You couldn't have made me more proud…I love you...My son."
     

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  • I already mention some stuff that I suggested needed, so I'll talk about the changes you made along with a few other thougths.

    The fight with Primal Groudon feels a smudge short, though it's probably because I was used to some of your gym leader fights being pretty long. Then again, the gym leaders usually use more than one Pokemon and Primal Groudon did well by itself already. With that said, it was still an enjoyable battle to read.

    Concerning Blaze's death, at first I was considering mentioning more of Erik's thoughts when seeing that tragic moment, but the more I think about it what you have is fine. His Pokemon getting his things and trying to save him (and Latios) already shows Erik shocked and feeling numb. But yeah, pretty tragic Blaze was gone.

    During the funeral scene, a part of me feels Erik forgave his father a bit soon after he held a grudge against him for a while and it would be nice if there was more gradual development with the two trying to repair their relationship. On the other hand, it's better that grudge didn't last forever. Either way, Erik also losing his father so soon after the loss of both May and Blaze must be a heavy blow for him.

    "Me too," Wally added. The once-fragile trainer seemed to suddenly have an air of confidence about him. "You taught me to be strong. I was weak and useless before, but I've been training for months on my own, inside dangerous caves and on big mountains and deserts. I now have six badges, all because of you, Erik."

    "You see, son," Norman spoke softly. "You have inspired all those around you to keep fighting, no matter what the odds are."

    "I've inspired my close friends to die," Erik snapped back, pushing his father away.

    While I like the addition you did with what Wally had been up to and him being supportive, I still feel the mention of Wally appearing in the funeral is a bit sudden. Maybe mention somewhere Erik's reaction of hearing/seeing Wally before the funeral or even have them interact before the big showdown, have them catch up a bit more.

    I know I said this a few times, but with the story now going a different territory from the games I do wonder how you'll incorporate your Nuzlocke run into the last few chapters. Looking forward to the final few chapters!
     
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    Chapter Twenty-Five - Hoenn's Last Stand


    A sudden silence surrounded the battered and scorched beach, loose flames tearing havoc across shards of rock and splinters of wood.

    The wind was as cold as snow as it howled around Cecilia, the trainer peering through borrowed binoculars at the battleground from aboard her own transport. Team Rocket's bombardment had torn through all but the beach's last defences, as she spotted Flannery clambering to her feet from behind the shattered remains of Mr. Briney's hut. The Lavaridge Gym Leader she had used the small building to shield herself from the rain of fire, water and poison emanating from Giovanni's battleship.

    Roxanne picked herself up from the beach's southern rise, crawling out from underneath her own protection, a Graveller, who had sacrificed himself to protect his trainer. Both gym leaders' Pokemon sprawled lifelessly across the ground, as the duo beat a hasty retreat towards Petalburg City.

    Her gaze turned to Archie, the Aqua leader hoisting Winona from the ocean. Her Pokemon had plunged into the depths, unable to withstand the barrage of attacks. Splash and Seal joined them, as they too all began their retreat to the city. A legion of speedboats chased them towards the shoreline, as Erik clutched his father in his arms, oblivious to the scenes unfolding around him. Cecilia knew that she had arrived too late.

    "Tally ho!" a shout from behind her called. The small white yacht she stood on swayed calmly on the waves, belying the violence encompassing the battlefield. She had been sent to gather any support she could find to reinforce Hoenn's defenders, but the only volunteers were an aging man and his Wingull, along with a further two people she had once considered enemies.

    "My house…" Mr Briney gasped as he steered his boat into the fray. "Come on Peeko, let's help our friends!" he barked to his Wingull, who chirped happily in response.

    The speedboats were in range for her to count them. Twelve. With a larger boat reinforced with a certain metal she couldn't identify leading from the front. As the two other volunteers marched onto the deck, four of the speedboats altered their course and sped towards them.

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    Erik lifted his head and strained his vision through tear-soaked eyes. A large speedboat lined with specially tempered steel armour crashed into the beach, sand parting upon contact as Giovanni's vessel reached its landing point. Archie rushed past him, heading towards Petalburg with Winona clenched in his arms, the Fortree gym leader rendered unconscious by a strike from a water blast.

    Splash and Seal joined Rocky upon the cliffside, poised to attack but awaiting their trainer's order which never came. Flashes of battle caught Erik's eye to his left, as Mr. Briney's yacht shot out of Route 105 and collided with a speedboat, carving through the rubber dinghy like a knife as Rocket members leapt off the sides. Fire, grass and water intertwined as Pokemon attacked from the yacht, launching strikes at three other speedboats.

    "Norman!" Courtney called, giggling slightly as both her and Giovanni headed an army of grunts. Her every action was filled with energy and vigour, the perfect contrast to the calm but menacing man beside her. "Oh, Mr. Traitor!" her high pitched voice rang once more after no response. She almost carried herself like a younger woman, skipping as she walked and hastily attempting to keep pace with Giovanni's long strides. The woman wore a mix of purple and black, with knee high boots and a frilled skirt underneath a tight-fitting top. A loose black cowl only partly-covered her purple curled hair. Despite being middle-aged, her face showed no signs of the fact.

    Giovanni strode towards him, saying nothing. He appeared to be in full control, as if the fight had already been won. An explosion roared behind them, as the gas lined inner tubes of a speedboat exploded on contact with a blast of fire from the yacht. The Rocket grunts turned to look, but their two leaders kept their gaze solely on Erik and Norman.

    "Oh no," Courtney squealed mockingly. "Did the traitor perish in my flames? Oh deary me!" she shrieked like a child.

    Giovanni raised a halting hand to his grunts, as they lined out on the beach. He ascended the rise towards Erik with Courtney in tow.

    "Oh deary deary me," Courtney mocked as she skipped towards Erik, "Norman's gone, gone... gone!"

    Erik dropped his head in silence, holding his father tight within his arms.

    "Enough of this," Giovanni finally spoke, to which Courtney stopped in her step and performed a slight curtsy. "Norman was a good man who believed in a better future. Our future. It must have taken a lot to turn him against us. I am most impressed with you once more, Erik. You surpass my expectations time and time again."

    Erik said nothing as he cradled Norman in his arms, his thoughts remained predominantly with his father, May and Blaze as Giovanni's words passed by him like wind.

    "You have fought well. Very well. But you must now realise that you are defeated. All of your allies have retreated and that boat out there will soon vanish under the waves."

    "No…" Erik whispered.

    "No? Perhaps another demonstration is in order then." Giovanni clicked his fingers, to which Courtney pulled a headpiece out from under her cowl to her mouth and barked the words "Wallace, you're up."

    Erik looked to the yacht, noting that another one of the speedboats had been destroyed and the other now lay unmanned, as Briney had began turning his vessel towards the beach in an attempt to assist Erik. An enormous wave rose from the ocean. Wallace emerged from the depths sat atop a large serpant-like creature, its yellow coils sprayed out across the wave as the Milotic rode the rising sea like a ship of its own.

    The wave crashed into the yacht, claiming the boat within its grasp and overturning the vessel. Wallace's surprise attack then crashed down on the remains before the sea began to swallow the yacht's remnants.

    "It's done. And my reward?" Wallace's voice sang out of the speaker for Erik to hear.

    "Will be signed and sealed when we're finished here," Giovanni replied, after which Courtney flicked the headset off.

    "No…" Erik whispered once more, he dropped his head and held his father's body ever tighter. All he ever wanted was Norman's love and approval, but when he had finally received it, his father was lost to him.

    "I leave you with a choice," Giovanni spoke to him, his commanding voice booming across the hillside like a strong gust of wind through the grass. "Join us now and take Norman's old place by my side, or fall with him."

    "No…" Erik said for a third time, unable to muster up the willpower for anything else.

    "Then regretfully, you will be buried alongside your father," Giovanni replied coldly.

    "You must stop Rocket," Norman's voice echoed around Erik's mind. "You must become champion."

    "I want to be the greatest trainer who ever lived!" a child's voice joined Norman's within, Erik quickly realising that it was his own.

    "You taught me to be strong, I now have six badges, all because of you, Erik," Wally's voice added to the mix.

    "I'm staying with you until the end," May's voice followed, as Erik moved his hand to his heart which was aching mercilessly.

    He thought of Cecilia, of Archie and all the other's that depended on him. The fire's began stoking within himself once more. He thought of Ice, of Leaf, of all the Pokemon and people he had lost as Blaze's spirit roared fire back into his heart.

    "All I ever wanted," he whispered aloud, as Giovanni strained to hear his voice. "Was to be loved."

    "You couldn't have made me more proud, I love you, my son," the final voice reverberated in his mind.

    He lay his father's body on the ground. Erik sprang to his feet, then he grabbed the Pokeballs from his belt and launched them. As fury surged through his veins and boiled his blood, Erik's thoughts settled on one thing. That the man in front of him had taken it all from him. All his Pokemon roared at once, with so much ferocity that even Giovanni took a step backwards.

    "And you took that from me!" Erik bellowed, pointing an accusing finger at the Team Rocket leader. "Blaze, May, Dad. They all loved me, and you took them from me. You!"

    "You may direct your anger and blame towards me," Giovanni retorted. "But we both know that the one you blame is yourself, and we both know that you're right too."

    A half-dozen Rocket grunts had ascended the hillside at the sight of their boss being threatened by Erik's furious Pokemon, all squeezing their Pokeballs tightly. Erik saw Courtney glance to the side, and was surprised to see what at.

    "Didn't think I'd leave ya, did ya?" Archie grinned as he strolled out into the clearing. "And who's this little lady?" he spoke to Courtney, unsuccessfully attempting to sound charming.

    A ruckus on the beach was next to divert the group's attention, as the sunken yacht's passengers were engaged in battle with Rocket grunts. A new speedboat had arrived, Erik guessing that the passengers had clambered onto the unmanned dinghy and proceeded to the beach despite their setback. He spotted Briney and Peeko fighting a duo of Koffings, Cecilia locked in a fight with three grunts at the same time, and a couple of people he had to squint to recognise charging through the sands towards the small rise leading to him.

    They were cloaked in full crimson robes, with thick hoods and heavily concealed faces, but Erik had seen enough of the duo to identify them as Grant and Mylos. The Magma duo had joined their cause.

    "Still you fight," Giovanni said, no hint of emotion in his controlled tones. "Courtney, see them off, I have other things to sort out. Contingencies." And with those words, the Team Rocket leader released a Fearow from its Pokeball, climbed on top, and flew back to his cruiseship.

    "Coward!" Archie shouted after him, before sending his Sharpedo to battle against the six grunts on the hillside. "Think I might need a hand here!" he followed, as Erik sighted more grunts advancing up the rise.

    "We've got you covered!" Flannery and Roxanne cried, as the two gym leaders rejoined the battle. "Just a quick stop to withdraw some more Pokemon from storage, we're back now though!" Flannery spoke, as the two engaged more of the grunts.

    "Looks like it's just the two of us," Courtney giggled, almost bouncing as she spoke. "Wanna take this someplace more private?" she said with a wink.

    "It's her!" Mylos bellowed, the bulky man panting as he reached them.

    "Who?" Grant replied, only a step behind.

    "Her you idiot!" Mylos followed, pointing a finger at Courtney.

    "I know but who's 'her'?" Grant's expression had only grown more puzzled.

    "Courtney! Maxie's girl! Tabitha kidnapped her!"

    "Nope. Wrong," Courtney retorted, a sly smile snaking across her face.

    "What? But you were one of us!" Mylos's expression now matched Grant's

    "Was. Was. Was. Should I say that again?" she giggled once more. "Maxie was a pathetic man, not like my 'Vanni."

    "But you loved Maxie! Everything he did was for you!" Mylos cried, Erik could sense the strain in the man's voice at the memory of his friend.

    "I never loved him I'm sorry to say," she started. "Oh wait...No I'm not sorry. I could see he was destined for greatness so I went along for the ride."

    Mylos's expression noticeably dropped at her words.

    "And he did everything for me?!" she squealed, her voice reaching an incredibly high pitch. "That's so cute! I'm once again not sorry to say that when I had heard he died I laughed, the thought of that pathetic man being burnt alive by the one thing he thought could save him! Poetic!" she giggled frantically.

    "What has happened to you!" Mylos roared, clenching his fists, it was extremely visible to Erik how much the man was having to restrain himself. "You were always sweet and innocent, and now you're this! What have they done to you?!"

    "Wait a second," Erik interrupted. "How did you know about how Maxie died?"

    "Yes, how did I know, Grant?" she thrust her hips onto her hips and smiled at the man, who was shaking.

    "I...Erm...Dont know?" Grant replied, his voice quivering violently.

    "Because you were our inside man!" she squealed with delight, clapping her hands at each word.

    "What?!" Mylos roared as he grabbed his comrade.

    "Not anymore!" Grant squealed. "I promise. I swear. It was only because Rocket kept threatening me. Please don't hate me. Or hurt me."

    "Oh no, Granty boy went all quiet after our old pal Maxie bit the dust," Courtney said in a slightly more serious tone, thrusting her hands firmly back on her hips.

    "How do we know that you're not going to stab us in the back the moment we give you a chance to?" Erik asked the man who Mylos had a strong hold of.

    "I promise. I won't. Magma and Maxie and Mylos are...err...were all I have. I was just scared. I'm sorry."

    "Mylos let him go," Archie growled, turning from a battle between his Sharpedo and a trio of Golbats.

    "And why should I listen to the leader of Aqua?!" Mylos retorted, releasing Grant from his vicelike grasp and storming over to Archie.

    "Ooh, I sense discord in the ranks!" Courtney jibed.

    "Mylos that's enough!" Erik roared, to which the Ex-Magma Admin visibly backed down. "More grunts are coming, we need you three to take them on. I'll handle Courtney."

    "Oh no you won't!" Courtney giggled, seeing the tide turn as the defenders of Hoenn slowly overpowered the Rocket grunts. Cecilia and Mr. Briney had carved their way through the thinning resistance on the beach as more and more grunts climbed the hillside, some through choice, and others through necessity. Archie, Roxanne and Flannery were struggling to stem the flow. "I'm outta here!" the woman followed, throwing a Crobat into the air and retreating to the ship on the back of the poison-typed Pokemon.

    "You won't get away with what you've done!" Mylos roared after her.

    "I will! And we've still got all your plans we stole from your base to ponder over!" Courtney called after them as she rode off.

    "Erik," Archie growled. "What now?"

    "Can you guys handle this?" Erik questioned, seeing any defeated Rocket grunts hastily retreat back to their ship, either swimming through the beckoning seas or clambering onto speedboats and surfing through the waves towards safety.

    "Course we can! Why, where you going? And where's that kid Wally?"

    "I don't know, Dad said he had other plans for him. I've got to go to Sootopolis and defeat Wallace-"

    "Yeah! Take that traitor scum down!" Archie interrupted.

    "No," Erik countered. "I need his badge. The only way to rally the region and stop Rocket is for me to become Champion."

    "Then go!" Archie roared as his Sharpedo took a fierce blow from a Weezing's smog attack.

    "Yeah we got this!" Mylos added as he turned his attention from Grant to the oncoming black and purple horde.

    "I'm with you guys 'til the end!" Grant said weakly, fumbling around his belt for a Pokeball.

    "Good luck," Erik responded as he mounted Soar and recalled his other Pokemon into their capsules.

    "You too," Mylos replied after him. Archie had already switched his focus to his battle as Erik took to the skies heading straight towards the white crater once more.

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    Sceptile blew away a Koffing with a powerful gust of sharp leaves, as Mightyena combined furious bites with strong headbutts in rapid succession against a pair of Rocket-owned Poochyena. Tropius and Lairon teamed up against a collection of Zubats as Milotic and Xatu combined their efforts against another grunt's Pokemon.

    "Where's Erik going?" Cecilia shouted to Briney, taking her attentions away from her Pokemon for a moment. The two had forced their way further and further up the beach, many grunt's falling to her fatigued party as Peeko swung towards Petalburg Woods time and time again, dropping scores of berries at her team's feet.

    "I don't know, but wherever it is, it must be important," the old man responded, tracking the Latios with a hint of admiration within his jaded eyes.

    "Must be," Cecilia whispered to herself. She shared Briney's tiredness, her eyelids weighed heavily upon her face and her muscles screamed in agony after diving deep into the ocean to save the old sailor after Wallace's wave had launched them into the depths. Her usually fluffy and free flowing hair had turned irritatingly straw-like as it clung to her skin as if it had been soaked in glue.

    Peeko airdropped another supply package of berries for her weary team, who shielded one another as each of her Pokemon took it in turns to gobble up their share. Defeated grunts scampered past them, flicking sand and dirt into the air as they raced towards safety. Combining their efforts with those on the ridge, Cecilia and Mr. Briney had cut down half of the landing party, but their shattered Pokemon were now relying on nothing but sheer willpower to push them through the pain barrier.

    "Tropius! No!" Cecilia screamed in agony as her grass-typed Pokemon fell to an savage aerial sweep by a school of Golbats. She remembered catching the huge beast as she left the Weather Institute after the battle with Magma. Her and Tropius had always flown together across the land, cutting through the skies with smiles on their faces and laughter warming their hearts. It felt almost as if part of her had been ripped out, she had never lost a Pokemon in battle before, but the soul-connecting bond between her and her friend had been mercilessly severed. The Golbats fell in quick succession as powerful jets of water shot them down, before her Milotic too, was taken from her. The evolved form of Feebas she had spent hours nurturing was so fixated on vengeance that she failed to realise that a Muk had crawled over to her, smothering her snake-like frame with a suffocating liquid ooze.

    Her remaining Pokemon fought valiantly. She was a formidable trainer, she knew that, but a daunting sensation of fear steadily swam through her. The loss of a Pokemon was a pain she never wished to experience again.

    Her Lairon cut his way through a Koffing, the solid steel armour encasing his body used as a tenacious battering ram to force his way through the army of Grunt Pokemon. She looked then to her Xatu, who had destroyed the villainous Muk, frying its mind with psychic waves so the poison type's brain resembled its outer form, and now the flying type commenced an aerial bombardment of its own. Cecilia saw Sceptile surround a Weezing in a whirlwind of leaves, before calling the razor-sharp objects inwards. Mightyena continued his mixed assault of bites and headbutts to a group of Grimers with the Xatu frazzling the minds of all that lay below her, until a furious blow struck her in the face.

    Xatu was pummelled by a Machoke, who, along with three others of his species, began an unrelenting assault on the downed Pokemon deep behind enemy lines. She had been gifted a the Pokemon as a present for her twenty-second birthday from her father, and treasured it ever since.

    "Save-" Cecilia started roaring the order to her Pokemon, but a sharp pain in her heart caused her to realise it was already too late. "Her…" she whispered as tears suddenly pricked her dark eyes.

    The despondency swept through her Pokemon, her belief crushed as another of her friends fell. Her three remaining Pokemon began a steady withdrawal towards her, Sceptile and Mightyena moving agilely to avoid a series of blows from rival Pokemon, but her Lairon lacked the speed. A herd of Rocket-owned Pokemon swarmed the steel-type, who was lost within the crowd. She so desperately had wanted an Aggron.

    "Is this it for us, Peeko?" Mr. Briney asked his Wingull, who had perched herself on his shoulder. Sceptile and Mightyena stood firmly in front of them, protecting their trainer and the old sailor from the army of Pokemon that approached. Cecilia counted four Machokes, two Weezings, two Muks, a Golbat, a Crobat and alongside them, a score of Grimers, Koffings and Zubats.

    "I'm sorry, everyone, I've failed," Cecilia whimpered, as the army began its assault. Mightyena and Sceptile charged to meet them as defeated Koffings and Grimers were launched into the air. Cecilia watched on as her Mightyena battled against all four Machoke, dodging wild swings and countering with vicious bites. One went down, then another, before a crushing blow struck him in the jaw. Mightyena rolled out of the way of a finishing strike, slamming his skull into the aggressor's stomach and wrapping his ferocious jaws around its frame, before a karate chop from the final Machoke struck her in her abdomen.

    "I came out here to prove to everyone I could do it by myself," Cecilia said grimly. "And now I've not only lost all my friends, I've lost my Pokemon licence too," she finished, as her Mightyena slouched the the floor, too weak to see the finishing blow coming. She loved all canine-like Pokemon, and ever since capturing a Poochyena, she had cherished him until he had grown into a fully fledged Mightyena, he was her second favourite Pokemon. Her closest friend, her Sceptile, was flagging too against constant poisonous strikes which sapped the last drops of his energy.

    Her eldest Pokemon and friend mustered the remainders of his strength and launched a flurry of blows against the surviving Machoke. Once the fighting type was defeated he harnessed power from the sun and launched a beam of solar energy against the Crobat, who flopped lifelessly to the ground alongside the two Weezing and Golbat that he had defeated earlier. Waves of poison and streams of liquid ooze smashed against the failing Sceptile's staggering frame, as the toxins ate at his insides, the grass type Pokemon looked back at its trainer and smiled, before closing his eyes and falling to his final rest.

    Cecilia's vision was blurred through her tears as the surviving Rocket Pokemon approached both her and Briney. Peeko was no fighter, so she had flown down into Mr. Briney's clutched arms. If the two were to fall, they would do so together. He had already closed his eyes and accepted his fate.

    The dozen or so poison types who arched their bodies before Cecilia inhaled breath, preparing for a final assault.

    A large boulder smashed into a Muk, followed by a flamethrower incinerating the other. More fires engulfed the army ahead, the flames encompassing the Team Rocket army and smothering them in their fiery embrace.

    "Yeah you run away boys!" a gruff shout called from behind the fleeing grunts, the remaining Rocket members had been defeated. Archie, Mylos, Grant, Flannery and Roxanne stepped out from beside the burning flames.

    "What's wrong with you?" Archie asked Cecilia, seeing the girl in tears.

    "She's lost all her Pokemon, and her licence I presume," Briney replied for her, seeing that she was too despondent to speak.

    "So? I've just lost my last Sharpedo, and my licence too!" Archie chuckled. "Don't matter though, we've won here and Hoenn is safe...ish."

    "So what now?" Mylos asked, as hundreds of fallen Pokemon lay scattered across the beach, scared with flames, poison and pools of foamy water.

    "Now? It's all down to Erik," Archie responded as he looked up to the sky. "All our hopes lay with him."

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    The dimming sun cast its fading rays over Soar as the Latios carried his trainer towards the giant mound of white stone, which sprung from the sea like a mole upon his skin. A bitterly cold wind nipped at Erik's sides as he rode, carrying with it the distinctive essences of a sea still healing from the severe scorching of Groudon's heatwave.

    Every second of the ride over the sea back towards Sootopolis was a further memory of regret, pain or intense sadness. The thoughts circled around Erik's mind in a never ending spin. Starting at the caves under Route 128 which saw Maxie perish within Groudon's fiery awakening, he felt no remorse at the time, but after meeting Courtney and hearing her words, he felt a tinge of sorrow for Magma's former leader. The next spoke of the wheel of memories led him to May, screaming for him to save her as she plunged to her doom, but he had failed to do so. Then it turned to Blaze, where once more he was too slow, his own Pokemon vanquishing his closest friend with a dark energy blast right before his eyes. Finally, it landed on his father choking on the poisonous blast as they stood together on the crest of the hill. Memories fluttered back and forth of his childhood, to his teenage years, then to his journey through Hoenn. Each thought showed him what he had wanted all along. He had wanted his dad back.

    "I must become Champion," Erik spoke out loud, wiping the memories from his mind as he focused on the one thing he used to push himself through this.

    Soar crashed down onto the stone streets of Sootopolis where Erik dismounted and rushed into the Pokemon Centre. After healing his team, he considered the eighth gym. Naturally, as a region so full of rivers, lakes and seas abundant with water type Pokemon, Hoenn would have many powerful water trainers, and therefore the final gym was home to aquatic Pokemon users. And the leader happened to be Wallace, the man who had stabbed them in the back during Team Rocket's assault on Hoenn.

    Erik sent Rocky back into storage specifically for the gym fight. He couldn't risk his Camerupt against water Pokemon due to his dual fire and ground typing being doubly susceptible. Instead, he withdrew Zap. The Electrode he had caught within the Team Magma hideout would have the type advantage, and also allow him to rest Dancer during the battle against the gym trainers, saving her for Wallace.

    Exiting the Pokemon Centre, Erik once again clambered onto his Latios, before the legendary Pokemon rose up and hovered above the stone city. It wasn't difficult to locate the Pokemon Gym. The centre of the crater was filled with seawater, where over the hundreds of years since it had crashed onto the planet the ocean had eroded away chunks of stone and filled in the gaps. Erik couldn't fathom how deep the enormous pool of water went, but located directly at the midway point lay the building where he would challenge for the final badge.

    The Gym was a strangely rectangular building seemed to be composed of some odd material. A navy blue block of rough stone with a heavy set metal door guarding the entrance, and no windows. Soar landed softly on the small patch of grass, which floated on the small island, as Erik descended before slamming the palm of his hand on the door.

    A metallic thud echoed time after time as he thumped the door repeatedly, and each time he was met with no response from within.

    Erik tried to force open the door, pulling at the edges with his hands, but once more it was no use. He moved his hand over the strange material that lined the walls, hoping to find a secret switch or telecommunications device, to no avail.

    "Enough of this!" he shouted to anyone that was listening. "Soar, blast open this door!"

    His Latios didn't need to be told twice, waiting a moment for his trainer to get to a safe distance. Soar shot an energy blast at the door which melted on impact, the thin metallic sheets that made up the door frying within the sweltering heat of the Latios's attack.

    Erik stepped inside to see a huge room full of pools of water, some laying still and others bubbling calmly. Sprinklers lined the roof, ready to turn on at a moment's notice as a gym trainer loitered by a switch. The most eye catching feature of the room, however, was that all three walls in front of him remained hidden behind waterfalls. Cascades of water repeatedly crashed down into small bodies of water at the bottom, another gym trainer standing in swimwear underneath the waterfall furthest away from Erik.

    "Hello, challenger," a third gym trainer called to Erik. She was in a full body swimsuit which clung tightly to her body as she hovered next to a small square section of glass flooring in the centre of the room. Drops of water flowed off of her short, blonde hair as she pierced Erik with steely blue eyes. "I'm Tiffany, and-"

    "I don't care who you are!" Erik interrupted. "I'm here to take down Wallace."

    "Oh, you don't know the rules," Tiffany responded proudly, although confusion drew itself across her features. "You have to defeat us to-"

    "I know the rules, I have seven badges already," Erik retorted, he had already withdrawn Soar to his Pokeball and was scanning the room for signs of the leader. "Wallace knows who I am, he knows I don't need to defeat his lackies."

    "Erm...Okay...One second," the confused woman replied, picking up a waterproof walkie-talkie from her pocket and speaking into it. "Wallace, sir, there's a guy here who wishes to challenge you without defeating us first. Says you know who he is."

    "Is it that green haired kid again? He already got his badge, what more does he want? Directions to the Pokemon League?!" Wallace snapped back down the communication device, his usually calm melody of a voice in a frustrated strain.

    "Wallace!" Erik roared. I'm here for you."

    "Uh oh...Erik? I'll be up in a mo!" the device replied before cutting out. The sound of machinery blared into action as the glass square in the centre of the room ascended. It screeched and groaned until it reached a certain height, then one side of the cube slid open. Moments later, the slender figure of Wallace rose into the glass cube from below, extending a hand. "Come with me," the Sootopolis Gym Leader requested.

    Erik showed no hesitation and half-ran towards the cube, entering into it with Wallace and descending into the floor with him.

    "Our battle arena is right at the bottom of the crater," Wallace said, placing one hand on his hip and the stroking his clean-shaven chin with the other. Erik noted that the leader refused to make eye contact with him. "This glass elevator was constructed by-"

    "Wallace I don't care," Erik snapped, staring at the Sootopolis Gym Leader with icy cold eyes. "Why did you betray us?" he followed, before his attention was diverted by the sights outside the glass container. He could see a vast ocean of creatures within the deep depths of the crater, Gyarados swam side by side with Tentacruel and Sharpedos as food floated within edible baskets for the Pokemon who played together joyfully.

    "Because, Erik," Wallace wept, his voice changing from a strained tone to a whiny, high pitched noise. "Giovanni promised that if I helped, he would allow me to remain in charge of my Gym. I can't abandon my aquarium, it was my father's work and now mine! Please don't be mad at me for that! I don't know how you survived, you were doomed, I only thought that-"

    "Oh stop whining!" Erik shouted so loudly that Wallace jumped slightly backwards. "I don't even know if we won or lost, I left the beach so I could defeat you. And that's what I'm going to do."

    "But I-"

    "Are you a gym leader or not?! Do your job!"

    Wallace remained in a stunned silence as Erik admired a new object, the glass dome which the elevator was entering into. After descending into the dome, the glass cube stopped in place, with a side of glass opening on both Erik's left and right.

    "You go to the left, I go right," Wallace said before racing out of the elevator and descending a white staircase. There was a line of stairs reaching downwards from Erik's side too, as the glass cube they rode on hovered over a giant fish tank.

    Erik almost ran down the stairs, before realising at the bottom there was barely enough room for him to fit, although he could see almost the entirety of the fish tank from here. The water inside was so clear that he sighted Wallace on the other side, who also had little room to manoeuvre. The battle arena was to be the giant square container of water in front of him, which housed rock formations and beautiful corals. Scanning the tank, he noticed a rack containing six sets of underwater breathing apparatus bolted onto the bottom. Each of his Pokemon apart from Seal and Splash would have to withstand a barrage of attacks from Wallace's Pokemon, reach the bottom then equip the breathing equipment without running out of oxygen first.

    "To make it interesting I always tell my challengers this," Wallace quivered. "The gear at the bottom absorbs electricity, so any electrical based attacks won't work unless you want your Pokemon to suffocate! Good luck!"

    Erik shot him a warning glance, but the strange man was right. Dancer and Zap's type advantage was nullified. He grabbed Zap's Pokeball as Wallace threw a Luvdisc's capsule into the water, the small Pokemon appearing into the container.

    "I don't believe a word this guy says," he spoke to Zap's Pokeball, before launching it upwards into the air, the capsule spinning round and round until it released the Electrode into the water.

    "So you send out an electric Pokemon anyway," Wallace laughed, his usual graceful body language returning. "I know you were a fool, Erik."

    Erik ignored the jibe whilst watching the battle unfold. Zap swam by rolling rapidly, using the motion to move towards the breathing gear. Wallace's Luvdisc calmly followed, reserving his energy and mockingly restraining himself from launching an attack.

    "Oh, and the force of any non-water moves are slowed by the water pressure in the tank. So nullify any grass type attacks too!" Wallace giggled. Erik felt his blood boiling as beads of sweat began forming on his forehead.

    "Get him, Zap!" Erik commanded his Electrode, who replied by charging up an electrical attack and attempting to fire it, but the breathing equipment attached to him soaked up the voltage.

    "Perfect!" Wallace giggled again, as his Luvdisc launched a pulse through the water, throwing the Electrode backwards.

    Zap tried a different method of attack, rolling into the sea-dwelling creature. The Luvdisc calmly moved aside and mocked Erik's Pokemon once more by remaining completely still and allowing Zap to charge again. The Electrode attempted to surround himself with electrical energy, but once more the breathing apparatus absorbed his efforts.

    Erik threw Zap's Pokeball into the air and recalled his Electrode. He would have to think of another plan, and fast. Hoenn depended on his success.

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    The setting sun signalled dusk on the day of the battle for Hoenn as Wally waited patiently for the gentleman who stood atop the podium to speak. After obtaining eight badges and braving Victory Road, he was invited, along with many others, to enter a new "Pokemon League Tournament", the details of which were about to be explained. The podium rested against a backdrop of one single large building, constructed from stone, glass and metal in a chaotic mix. The building would contain many different arenas and battlegrounds within, all awaiting the finest trainers in Hoenn to pit their wits against one another.

    "Thank you all for attending!" Steven Stone's voice boomed through the microphone as the last of the invited trainers arrived. The Champion of Hoenn scanned the thirty or so eager faces in front of him, with the former Elite Four by his side. Sidney, "Master of Dark Types", loitered to his left alongside Phoebe, the "Ghost Whisperer". To his right stood Glacia, the "Ice Queen", and Drake, "Lord of Dragons".

    "I am delighted to announce the grand opening of the Pokemon League Tournament," Steven roared, to howls of approval from the trainers he overlooked. "Approved by the authorities of Hoenn, and following in the footsteps of Kanto's new-look tournament, the Elite Four are now no more than mere challengers to my crown! All twenty-seven of you are, by the time of this official announcement, the strongest trainers in Hoenn with all eight badges, so together with the old Elite Four shall enter a knockout tournament. The winner of this shall face me in a match to determine who shall become Hoenn's new Pokemon Champion!"

    "Who will face who?" a woman from beside the young man spoke.

    "There will be fives rounds of battles!" Steven declared. "All randomly drawn. Whoever wins all five matches shall be granted the privilege to face me in battle!"

    "And when does the tournament start?" a man who had pushed his way to the front questioned. "And how often will the winner hold the title?"

    "That's the most exciting part! The Authorities of Hoenn want the issue decided as soon as possible. So the tournament will start right now! The winner will be declared Champion until the next tournament in five years time!" Steven declared, to gasps from his expectant audience. "If you will all follow me inside this grand building, you will be matched up with one another and the first round of battles shall commence in twenty minutes time!"

    "Wait!" Drake roared, The Lord of Dragons's voice was both commanding and fierce. "Where's our say in this?!"

    "Drake," Steven responded, locking eyes with the furious man. "You and your friends have agreed to this already, you've all signed contracts."

    "Forced to sign contracts you mean!" the man shouted in response for all to hear.

    "Any more from you and you know the consequences," Steven barked back, to which the man dropped his head and murmured something unintelligible in response. "Now if you'd all like to follow me," the Champion spoke back to the audience.

    Steven led the way inside the towering building, with the former Elite Four all following him inside. The four elite trainers looked despondent, almost as if they had been forced into resigning their positions. Usually a trainer who had acquired all eight badges would have to first defeat the Elite Four in a row, before challenging the Champion to a one-on-one fight. Almost like defeating a gym leader after beating his trainers first. The young man didn't know why it had been changed, but he suspected something more sinister was happening.

    After all the other trainers had followed Steven inside, Wally waited so he could individually look at each one, searching for one person in particular.

    "Erik," he whispered to himself. "You didn't make it. I'm so sorry."
     

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  • Courtney's appearance is something I wasn't expecting. I know lately you've been going with the "someone deceives another" theme, it's weird of her to not feel remorse over Maxie's death since in the games she's fiercely loyal to him. Courtney's dialogue is something we talked about already, and while I understand you want to contrast Courtney's and Giovanni's personalities, her speech here seems she went on a full 180 degree change. I think you can still have their personalities contrast and keep Courtney's speech more or less the same. I do admit, though, some of the speech changes I suggested isn't perfect, but I at least tried, lol.

    (Thinking about it, the only time where Courtney didn't stutter too much/use ellipsis often was in the Space Center scene in the Delta episode because it was like her final stand. Okay, will stop rambling over Courtney now, lol).

    I do feel bad for Cecilia for losing all her Pokemon. It's lucky, though, that she and Mr. Briney had been saved last minute.

    Interesting Wallace is on Giovanni's side too and also how you have him already prepared in making electric and grass attacks nullified. Wonder how the rest of the battle will play out.

    The last scene with Wally, Steven, and the Elite 4 was another interesting twist. Like that you added Drake against the change from the original draft. I wonder what purpose this new tournament will serve (I think Wally is a part of this plan? I apologize as some stuff are already slipping from me).

    Despite my ramblings on Courtney, everything else is still shaping to be a wild wide from here. Looking forward to more!
     
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