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[Other FULL] ~Cursed Books: OOC~ [PG-13]

Nate

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I don't think so apart from maybe some details of the towns and areas that we will be gathering in? Maybe not even that as you could just include that in your posts. I'm looking forward to this one :3 Got Nate's plot in my head now!
 
Quto

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Spoiler:


This is what I submitted; Anyone know what I should add/subtract or change instead of waiting for the one week to see why it was rejected.
 

Nate

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I doubt it will be a whole week to wait to be honest, but that should be fine? I think. I'll check the accepted roleplays whenever theres a new post :)
 
Quto

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Alright, just checking. I submitted this and didn't know if it was accepted or not.
I had to wait a whole week for my first draft to the OOC to know what they were expecting.

They may want what you said, some towns and whatnot, key captials and so on.
 
Lokiepie

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Ok here's my SU, hope it's ok!
Name: Skye Miller

Description: Skype had rose blonde hair, which is pin straight and usually tied back into a neat pony tail with a purple ribbon. She is short and curvy but carries that little bit of extra weight well. Her skin is lightly tanned with pink lips and rosy cheeks to match. Her eyes are a simple grey but despite the cold colour, they are always creased with a smile.

She has a pointed small nose and chin and sports a feather earing cuff which circles around the back of her left ear in hues of dyed purples and blues. Her clothes are relatively plain for her status. A simple long sleeved baggy top, a thick brown leather belt wrapping about her hips and a pair of black tights hides pale knees while a ruffled red skirt covers the first 3 quarters of her thighs. The skirt becomes longer at the back and is finished with a black lace trimming.

A pair of brown lace up, small heel boots covers her feet in the classic steam-punk girl style. Her hands are covered with lace fingerless gloves too.

Age: 19

Class/Job: Skye never had a job really. She was her daddy's little prince and therefore she never had to lift a finger. This of course has made her a little spoilt but she likes to think that she's not nearly as bad as some of the other girls in the higher circles of socity. She spends most of her days in the library with her nose in a book or playing the piano.

Book: Cursed with the blind oath book.

Likes, Dislikes: Skye loves books, chocolate and music. She reveals in sound whether it is music, the sound of the street or a party or just listening to someone speak. Her fondest memories from when she was a child being when her mother read to her. She loves machinery too and is always eager to learn how things work and piece together.

She hates people whom look down on her, she's spoilt yes but not completely helpless. She does however hate dirt and bugs. She finds both repulsive. She also hates the heat of summer, preferring the cooler seasons.

Combat Technique/Weapon: Small blade contained in walking staff decorated with silver. Though her mother disapproved of her daughter being taught how to fight, her father persisted. To him a woman should know how to handle herself in a fight incase she came across unsavoury characters in the street. He would not have his daughter being a helpless victim in fights.

Because of the weapon's small length Skye has learned to lure her enemies into a false sense of security, playing to poor helpless rich girl persona she presents. However, when they get in close, this is when she strikes.

History/Biography: Skye lives in a large town house where Rosebushes line either side of the blue painted front door. Inside, marble floors shine in gas light lamps which line long wooden panelled corridors where plush carpets of rich colours run across the floor. She was born in this house, in the room where her mother almost died giving birth to her.

She is friends with many of the serving staff, practically a boy a year younger than her called Bill. She often reads with in in the library section of her father's office, debating science and politics with the young boy for hours.

The majority of her life was spent in education, learning how the higher circles of the society moved. How to behave and what/who to avoid in public. She was also taught how to carry herself with a commanding air and spent most of her free time learning how to play the piano, revelling in the sound of each note.

She has never meet a guy whom she fell for, but then the majority of time her father activity stopped her socialising with men unless it gained the family some particular advantage. She knew from an early age that if she were to ever marry, it would not be for love but convenience. Since first acknowledging this fact, Skye tried to escape trying in vein to meet the one guy whom would swept her off her feet, but that has never happened.

Her existence is a lonely one, her only social group being a trio of air headed youths from higher up families who have nothing better to do than shop and spy on boys. They all look down on her of course, as her father only made it to higher end of society through running mills and not through 'old money'.

Things only became interesting when the cursed book 'Blind Oath' was handed to her a couple of days ago.
 
Quto

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I'll approve if you can give me an idea which country she's in.

Reading the history, she sounds like she's in Diligent or somewhere higher up in Twan.

Other than that, I approve.
 
Quto

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I'm re-submitting the IC with a few changes and a map.
This time, lets pray it doesn't get shot down.

After a long few hours of editing and adding, I submitted a new IC topic.

Spoiler:


I hope this time, it sticks.
 
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Nate

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It never got denied in the first place :/ Either way I also posted a roleplay ooc thread wich I hope will be accepted. Its about life after death, and that hasnt been accepted or denied yet. But yay cool.

The second one is far better than the first for sure btw. It has to be accepted.
 
Quto

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@ Crimson: Really? 0_o

Guess I'm a little bit too impatient....
Either case, Swift sign approved it and gave me tips for organizing the IC topic.
Good luck with your OC Crimson

@Here2Stay: Alright, I see no issue with that as long as your character can stand Twan.
 
Quto

Quto

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So should I post first that Ura is expecting him or do you want to post him, noting all of his hatred as he makes his way to the outskirts of Jivet?
 
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