Cynthia/Shirona Fanclub

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I correct myself, after what you wrote in the last chapter ( I skimmed over it, no real reading yet, as I'm too tired), I think my idea was not right. >> I thought Cynthia would create her own new world with Dialga's power (or, alternatigvely, make a new world by messing with the timeline), yet, now, this seems to be kind wrong to assume, I just don't know why...>>
 
Well, I will tell you this then: your original idea was wrong. Otherwise Cynthia would have created a brand new world and wiped out everyone in it, including Sabrina, Will, Liza, Giselle and pretty much every important character. She could do that if she wanted to, but she doesn't, because she wants something else, something she feels is better.
 
...if you mean creating a world where everyone bows to her...well, that was one of my ideas, too. XD Yet, you said original idea...does that say something about my other idea with the time line messing? Now, this would really get interesting, as someone as wicked as Cynthia can come up with a lot of ideas to make a new time line, one with a lot of torture for certain characters...sadly. >>
 
Ooh, all the possibilities. Yet I guess the best thing is just to find out what happens by reading it, because you know that my own ideas change as well. I mean, I don't think you caught what was a very important plot point in Chapter 24, which is awesome for my sake, because it may surprise you later. Just you wait and see the "new" Cynthia... and be scared...
 
Maybe I didn't catch it yet, but now that you told me about it, I might just search a bit harder. XD
Be afraid...be very afraid...*coughs* Hehe, couldn't help it. XD
Anyway, up to review!
Title: Ehm, who was the chess obsessed again? Right, Karen! XD (Goodness, I'm writing about her in my fic as well right now and...nevermind.)
I think this situation absolutely requires a really desperate and fierce attack on Cynthia's palace in Sinnoh.
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You are kinda desperate, I noticed...
I am about to stir up the entire land of Sinnoh to storm the castle.
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You? Really? You aren't going to lean back and watch? >>
This may cost hundreds of Pokémon's lives,
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WTF?!?!
"Do the rest of you want to live in a world where your city could be destroyed any second, where a so-called queen chooses whether you live or die? Or do you wish to live in freedom?"

"Freedom!" the trainers shouted.
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*mumbles* Idiots.
"And just in case you were worried, I have a secret weapon that I'm willing to use against Cynthia," Karen added.
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...I wonder what that could be...
"Yes, my dear Lucian, as it stands, we are in great danger," she replied.

Lucian gasped in fear. Surely he thought Cynthia was going to give him a word of encouragement, but she shocked him by stating just the opposite.
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It shocks me more that she's so calm, yet again, this is Cynthia we're talking about.
You must be willing to do something only Cyrus would be willing to attempt in order for everything to go as planned.
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Hm...what could that be? XD
surely she did not mean that she was going to allow her palace to be destroyed.
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She is insane enough not to care about her palace...
She no longer cares about the land of Sinnoh, but her own power!
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D'oh, what a surprise...
I may not give it away, or else our plan will be foiled.
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Aka the author wants to torture me us.
I promise you, not a single human will die! Pokémon may be sacrificed,
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No humans, but Pokemon? Now, what could this be about?
"You scared her into it, I bet!" Lucian protested. "You threatened her!"

Cynthia smiled. "Oh, sometimes I wish you weren't psychic," she said.
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A single moment of funniness in this fic and even then with a dark content...yay.
"Do you know the game of chess?" Cynthia asked.

"Yes," Lucian answered.
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If not, you could have asked Karen...
Sometimes, I wish I knew how to play chess. >.<
"She realizes that she is just a piece on the board which must sacrifice itself for us to achieve checkmate,"
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Is Lucian just one piece, too? And Roy?
"All right, Lucian, you want me to tell you everything, fine, here, I will," she said with a touch of anger in her voice.
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The reader(s) thank you, Lucian. XD
We need an entire day for the process to take place,
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What process? Surely not going there, both know Teleport....
she will create a gigantic black hole, sucking up everything and everyone inside, including herself.
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I see another flaw there...will they really believe that Cynthia kinda committed suicide? >> I wouldn't.
It will take a sacrifice of someone's life. That person's life is my sister's."
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I hope you don't really kill Diane...I kinda need her, you know. >>;;;;
That piece I have given to Diane. When she sacrifices herself, she will swallow it whole, creating a barrier around the Spear Pillar. That means we must be inside the area of the Spear Pillar before it is swallowed whole. It must take a large black hole in order to swallow up even just a small piece of that orb and create the barrier. In addition, according to the legends in order for a barrier to be created around the Spear Pillar, the owner of the Adamant Orb must be swallowed up with it. So she creates that black hole, swallows it up, and the barrier is created, since she is the owner of that piece of the Adamant Orb.
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o,o *confused* *simply very confused*
"Sorry, Queen Sister, I'm afraid we go our separate ways today," Diane stated.

"Very well, Diane," Cynthia replied.
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You know, this kinda doesn't work with my plot and on the other hand, it does in a complete new way. In one where I can use Diane and make Cynthia look even more evil/insane at the same time. You like that? 0=)
"It's your choice, girl, die here as pathetic as you are right now, or die with honor," Cynthia said. "Either way, you will die."
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Hopefully, she won't die now. >.<
 
This chapter was really fun to write, because of all the planning going on up to Cynthia's big plan. Basically she and Lucian are going to Spear Pillar, and they need a day to do whatever this thing is. If anyone distracts them, it ruins the process, so they need protection, and that would be the barrier created by Diane swallowing up a piece of the Adamant Orb along with herself. Of course none of this happens if Diane refuses to go along with the plan.

... or does it? Because if Cynthia just kills her sister right now, then how is she going to go about her plan? That either means Cynthia's plan will fail, or it will succeed in a different way than she planned.

And what is this plan? It's the best one "of all time" for Cynthia.
 
Well, I got a pretty faint idea about what might be Cynthia's plan. Or maybe not. It's all too nebulous, besides, you said my idea was wrong, so it can't be what I thought...
Argh, can't she just try to catch Arceus and then be happy with that? Arceus is the most 'powerful' Pokemon in that sense...sorry if I offend you with that. ^^^;;;

Well, obviously, Cynthia has a second plan back if she threatens to kill her sister. She doesn't seem to need her as much as she says she does...
Either fail or succeed in another way...not the way she planned it? Lol, poo Cynthia? Or not poor Cynthia? Hm

Epic final, I'm seeing it coming.
I need to spped up my re-reading, otherwise, that sequel can't be started. (And I actually hoped I could try another fic inbetween...x.x)
 
Psychic*Absol said:
Arceus is the most 'powerful' Pokemon in that sense...sorry if I offend you with that. ^^^;;;
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Ha ha... why would I be offended by that?

P*A said:
Well, obviously, Cynthia has a second plan back if she threatens to kill her sister. She doesn't seem to need her as much as she says she does...
Either fail or succeed in another way...not the way she planned it? Lol, poo Cynthia? Or not poor Cynthia? Hm
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Oh, how bad do you need Diane in your story? Not like I care or anything, just wondering...

Epic final, I'm seeing it coming.
I need to spped up my re-reading, otherwise, that sequel can't be started. (And I actually hoped I could try another fic inbetween...x.x)
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I hope I can make it epic enough, in fact I wonder if I can squeeze enough into the next 20 chapters, I don't know if I'll be able to. 20 chapters seems like too long, I don't know if I have enough ideas...
 
Crazy Packers Fan said:
Oh, how bad do you need Diane in your story? Not like I care or anything, just wondering...
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Crazy Packers Fan said:
I hope I can make it epic enough, in fact I wonder if I can squeeze enough into the next 20 chapters, I don't know if I'll be able to. 20 chapters seems like too long, I don't know if I have enough ideas...
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Well, you can either make less chapters or more, I don't care. I have enough trouble just squeezing my plot into 23 chapters *hint, hint*, but more because I have more chapter title ideas than ideas for the plot of said chapters...*sweatdrops*
 
No, it must be 46 chapters! No more, no less! I'm very strict about that!

Interesting plot point... may I ask what type of accident? And wouldn't Diane be like 30+ as compared to Roxette's 18?
 
XD Well, in that case, make the chapters longer or shorter, just as you wish to make just 46 chapters.
Or use parts...*hides*.

No and yes. XD No, you may not know what kind of accident, and yes, she will be 30+.
 
Okay, time for some teasing over what's going to happen... in the anime!

Cyrus bows to Queen Cynthia
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And he does in your fanfic, too.
Argh, CPF, stop, just two days until the first Galactic two parter airs here! I don't wanna be spoilered!
Okay, I have seen it anyway (SHIRONA!!!...*coughs*), so...XD
 
I only saw the first half. Actually I only saw half of the first half, fast-forwarding through any scenes that did not include Cynthia or Cyrus. And I cheered loudly when Brock's Pokemon nearly got killed. I always cheer against the twerps.
 
I 'saw' both episodes, but in such a bad quality that it can hardly be called watching. XD So I'm impatiently waiting for the episodes to air here. =3 Let's hope my recorder hangs in, because I'm at university when they air and I don't want to ditch school for them *hides*...what, I don't like Cynthia as much as I like Sabrina. =3.
>> That scene was violent. I liked it, but not in the sense that I would actually cheer for that Toxicroak (right name, right? XD).
 
You're still allowed to like Cynthia even if you're a Sabrina fan first, just as I'm still allowed to like Sabrina even though I've become a Cynthia fan foremost. Although one must wonder why I would make my favorite character such an evil, cruel villain...
 
I will ALWAYS stay a Sabrina fan. Or I will at least remember her dearly. ^^ I have spend too much being a fan to just forget her.
Because Cynthia IS evil? Well, maybe because it gives her more character, more depth, more...something.
BTW...Cynthia's next episodes are airing tomorrow, did I mention this? B-) I'll probably be freaked out a bit tomorrow, and, if you're lucky, I'll have something for you...0=)
 
I'll be watching it in five...four...three...(and so on) minutes, as soon as my recorder has gone back to the beginning of the episode.
Yes, in German. Sorry, I would have loved to show you Cynthia's German voice, but the channel hasn't uploaded the episode yet and youtube is just as useless as usual regarding German episodes. >>
 
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