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Darkness Rises Again

...I'm quite possibly the worst SU maker in the world. My SU pales compared to any of the three above this post...xD

So far, there are three Ravenclaws, one Slytherin, and one Hufflepuff...We need a bloody Gryffindor. And there's a lot of Ravenclaws. xD
 
Hahaha yeah, I was going to make Oliver a Ravenclaw but after I saw the other sign-ups I was like, "... Hm. Let me reconsider this decision." xDDD
 
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Someone has to be the Gryffindor, might as well be me:

General:

Name: Matthew Holloway

Age: 11 (Birthday February 14,Valentine's day)

Gender: Both Male

Appearance:

Physical: Matthew stands at four feet eleven inches tall, so he somewhat stands out amongst other first-year students. Matthew has a rather athletic build, although due to his age he hasn't developed a muscular build yet. Matthew weighs in at ninety-three pounds, not too big for a kid his age. Matthew has long brown hair, which he keeps neatly groomed and cleaned. Matthew's eyes contain Turquoise Irises, which gleam brightly in the light. Matthew has a light skin complexion, but there is a slight tan, due to the time he spends playing sports outside. Matthew's British Heritage doesn't show on him very much, which is surprising.

Clothing: Matthew will usually stick to wearing his uniform, but when he gets the chance, he has a regular outfit that he likes to wear. For casual occasions, Matthew likes to wear a combo of a blue Cashmere sweater and a pair of blue denim jeans. Also accompanying his casual outfit is a silver watch, a sleek pair of brand-name running shoes and athletic socks. To keep his jeans from falling down, he wears a rare belt, made out of Komodo Dragon skin and a Platinum belt buckle. For more formal occasions, Matthew will wear a custom tailored three-piece suit, made of expensive fabric. This suit, which is black in coloured, is accented with a basic blue tie.

Personality:
Matthew is the classic representation of a Aristocrat. Arrogant and pompous, Matthew thinks of himself as the very best and only cares for himself. Matthew is very egoistic, and is much different than most Gryffindor members, some even saying that the Holloway Family paid for Matthew to be in Gryffindor. But that can't be true, or can it? Anyways, Matthew lives by the Royal Honor and is quite, chivalrous, some considering him a knight. Matthew acts like he is a Knight, even though Knighthood is a long way away for the young Noble. Matthew is always looking for chances to prove himself, being quite intelligent in finding such tasks. Matthew thinks of himself as the next Harry Potter, a revered wizard who was in the Gryffindor house. That is one of the contributing factors in Matthew's arrogance. Matthew marches around with a swagger in his step and is a enormous boaster. Matthew is always up for the biggest challenge, a sort of conquistador, although small-scale. Matthew is quite athletic, which includes his skills at Quidditch. Matthew is quite the romancer, his courting skills are almost as good as he says they are.

History:
Matthew Holloway was born in Manchester, England to a rich family with the title of "Nobility". Matthew grew up with the influence of Nobility, learning the codes of Chivalry and Bravery, two traits that are important in the minds of Gryffindor. It seemed from an early age that Matthew was groomed to be in Gryffindor, his parents knowing early that Matthew has Wizard powers. With constant praise from his servants and relatives, Matthew soon learned the idea that he is the best and that everyone else in inferior to his wrath, and anyone who should oppose him to feel that wrath. Matthew was placed into a regular private Academy, but was ejected for his so-called "ruling" of the recreation areas amongst the school. Matthew controlled the school's recreation area and was a general "bully" in school. After becoming home- schooled once again, Matthew was groomed to be a wizard by various mentors, the best money could buy. When the time came and Matthew turned eleven, he was given his Father's wand, signifying that Matthew was on the path to Hogwarts. After rumours of a business transaction, Matthew received a letter giving him permission to join Hogwarts Academy, for Gryffindor.

Miscellaneous:

House: Gryffindor

Wand type:
Core: Phoenix Tail Feather,Redwood, 11 inches.

Magical abilities or Items: WIZARDS ARE COOL!
 
Alright here it is please tell me if there is anything I need to fix.

Name: Ian Luna Wolfsbane

Age: 11 born October 8th 2035

Gender: Male

Appearance: Ian has strange white short hair that stops and the end of his neck. His bangs sometimes cover his hair and two strands of hair on both sides of his face come down past his cheek a bit. His bangs though as usually swayed to the right but sometimes he doesn't bother with his hair. His eyes are a bright sky blue. He also usually has a smile on his face.

Physical: Ian is about 4'8" and weighs about 88 pounds. He doesn't seem like he's going to get much taller for a while but his family is filled with late bloomers. His skin is a tad pale but has some color to it. His got a muscular body but isn't a muscle head.

Clothing: Outside of wearing his school uniform he will probably be wearing a dark red shirt along with blue slim jeans along with black sneakers.

Personality: Ian is a quite kid and doesn't really make friends that much. He keeps things to himself and is really shy around strangers. When he feels comfortable and opens up he's quite the adventurous type always finding himself either in trouble or somewhere dangerous. Ian prides himself in his intellect and physical abilities but doesn't really show it off. He's a nice polite kid and a loyal friend to those closest to him. Though he can be a bit talkative and likes to provoke people who get on his nerves.

History: Ian comes from a family of wolf Animagi so natural he would be one too. He comes from a large family, or "pack" as his siblings like to call it filled with wizards and withces so he's kind of overshadowed by his siblings.For some strange reason though his parents kept the magical world from Ian and made sure their children didn't use magic around him. They felt that Ian wouldn't have anything to offer to the magical world so he would just live a middle class life as a muggle. Despite his parents struggle to keep the magic away from him he somehow found a way to get his hands on a wand and showed he had great naturally ability.

For the time his was five until he was ten his parents taught him all the basics he needed to know about magic and how to be a Animagus. His great great grandfather was a werewolf and ever since his family was either a werewolf or a Animagus that turned into a wolf. His hobbies growing up were exercising, practicing magic and hunting as a wolf he became quite good at it.

Ian became extremely excited when he heard that he was going to Hogwarts and promised he'd become the best wizard out there.


Miscellaneous: Wizards are Cool

House: Gryffindor

Wand type: Ether's wand is about 11 inches long, holly, Dragon Heartstring

Magical abilities or Items: Animagus, can turn into a white wolf.
 
Now we have two Gryffindors...Well, assuming they will be accepted. =P Now Hufflepuffs and Slytherins are dangerously low...xD I would have thought there would be more Slytherins than now. And I didn't realize that Gryffindors were so unpopular, lol. I mean, I kind of get Hufflepuffs...Since they weren't shown much...Aside from Cedric (Rest in peace).
 
Well, you have all been accepted thus far and we only need mine and Roserade's SUs. On the lack of characters in the other three houses, I am allowing everyone to have a SMALL group of NPCs that they control if they want.(Well they aren't nesseccarily NPCs I guess. (Miss Doronjo gave me the idea))

I'll also have a character for Hufflepuff, Griffindor and Slytherin.(After all, Ravenclaw doesn't need any.

On a side note, no more posting here, the OOC is now up.
 
General:

Name: John "Jack" Vandeleur

Age: 11, Birthday on May 12

Gender: Male

Appearance: John stands at five feet with a slender build. His hair is long dirt-blonde and messy his bangs hang over his forehead to his eyebrows, in the back his hair is more trim and is cut much shorter to the extent where it's still thick but it rarely passes the bottom of his ears. He has a very geometric nose that is long and straight and seems to cut at very defined angles. His lips are very thin and pale. Light freckles span across his nose and to his cheeks. His chin is round and connects to his face without a defined difference. He has round, and vibrant green eyes. His hands are rough and large, like his feet. He has ill-defined muscles despite use from his constant activity. He has skin which has a shade that sits somewhere between tan and pale, so it is not completely lacking in color.

Physical: (He weighs eighty-three pounds, has dirt-blonde hair, is four foot and seven inches, slender, and is Caucasian.) I don't see the difference between this and appearance.

Clothing: Aside from his school uniform, for casual clothing he likes to wear mono colored short sleeve shirts. If the weather is colder he likes to wear a crewneck sweatshirt over it. He will wear jeans or cargo shorts depending on the temperature and weather. Wizards are Cool! His shoes are often times dock shoes because he needs more formal clothing and doesn't have a second pair of shoes. In formal dress he wears a short sleeved collared shirt along with khakis, though he prefers casual wear.

Personality: John prefers to be called Jack, as most people call him, because he thinks it sounds less stuffy and more casual. He has tendencies to get bored often, which have started lately. They've started because he's been more than eager to start at Hogwarts and, having grown up in a magical family he's known that he'd be going there for a while now. He finds humor in many things that most other people might undervalue however. He supports the "good" side in the state of things, being the ministry's side. He loves magical things however he finds interest in muggle items.
He has a short temper, as well as patience, a strange combination. His temper comes out when he's confronted with personal conflicts with someone his age; however he is patient with elders and people younger than him. He also has an eagerness to learn. He doesn't know what he wants his profession to be but he aspires to be a great wizard like his father. He has an eagerness to learn and is passionate about it. He feels sick around dark magic but he doesn't know that's what it's from.

History: John was born in a wizarding village called "Salazar's Hollow" that was made around the same time as Godric's Hollow by his rival and co-founder of Hogwarts. His village was under attack while his mother was pregnant, by a demon who was set upon the village by a dark wizard who attempted to rise to power. His father sealed the demon within her because she would better receive it while there was another person inside of her. His father was handicapped into a wheelchair from this and John was born with the demon sealed inside of him. The seal is strong but grows weaker as he ages. The seal affects his behavior when he is around dark magic, it makes him sick and causes him to act sinister. It also makes him more talented at dark magic. He sees this seal on his chest in the form of a red tattoo reading 17 in gothic font. He doesn't know what it means nor does his mother, but his father does and he withholds his knowledge from his family, he says it's nothing to worry about yet. He's lived a regular life as far as magical families go and eagerly awaits his arrival at Hogwarts.

Miscellaneous:

House: Slytherin

Wand type: Yew, Dragon Heart Srting, Thirteen Inches, Rigid, Smooth Surface.

Magical abilities or Items: See history.
 
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Very good! I'll discuss something with you over PM though. You are accepted yet I'd like you to change the core from the scale to heartstring as there, as far as I know, one thing a wizard ca use as a core from a creature, heartstring being the dragon's.
 
That's what I meant I'll fix that.

also edited his height and weight, and wand
 
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