Defeating A Mirage -[Revised]-

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    Can you trust what lies before your eyes? Is what you believe to be reality, reality? How can one unravel these questions? All lies cover a truth, so what must be done to reveal what's behind those doors?


    Within the world of shinobi, there rests countless numbers of ninja, residing in their villages, supporting them with income and protection. All villages are worth speaking of, but there is one that out shines all others. This village has quite a few names, due to it's "popularity" both positive and negative. One name fairly common is The Hidden Truth Village. This name originated mostly from those who detest the village, believing that the village hide something from all the others; something that was the source of their superiority. The name caught on by most since it sounded some-what appropriate at the time, being that most people trusted the Hidden Truth Village most. The main reason for the villages popularity was because of the ninja they possessed. Even the weakest genin of the Hidden Truth Village could hold it's own against a group of Anbu, which is simply mind blowing. This fact struck fear into the hearts of the fellow Kages. Most believed strict teaching and harsh parenting were the causes of their shinobis' talents, but honestly, the people of this village acted nearly identical to all the other parents and teachers. It was more like being in that village just brought you strength and talent.

    Being the better village and more likely to succeed in missions, the Hidden Truth Village became the most wealthy village while leaving the other in major turmoil. Before things could become worse, the other five Kages consulted each other and decided that the Hidden Truth Village must be destroyed. Obviously, this wasn't something you could simply leap into combat about, so spies were sent to this village to look for anything that could aid in the other five villages' tactics. At first, it seemed as though there was nothing they could use to their advantage, but after some while of searching, one spy was able to locate an abnormal amount of radiation of something thought to be chakra at first. This chakra was radiating from the largest mountain in the village, Tenshu, right behind their Kage's mansion.

    One thing that was to their advantage, however, was that the other Five great nations were paid nearly no attention, which made sneaking into the Hidden Truth Village pretty simple, without being found out; especially since the village was highly populated. As the spies researched the mountain, they were able to discover that within the mountain hid a sealing scroll, which was apparently still active. From what the Five nations learned from this information, and what they began to consider; this scroll must have been the source of the Village's power. With this in mind, the villages tried to think of ways to retrieve this scroll from the Truth Village. That's when it happened. The only choice was to start a war. One that would distract the Hidden Truth Village enough for a group of the most talented ninja to head for the mountain and distract the scroll. To their luck, this plan prevailed, but on the lower side, too many shinobi died in the process.

    With the scroll gone, the Hidden Truth Village simply vanished within a day, to everyone's amazement. It was as if it had never even existed. That aside, the Five villages began to argue over who was to keep the scroll. Astonishingly, they could not disable the scroll's powers, but luckily, things were settled by ripping the scroll into sections. One for each of the villages.

    ~Your Role~

    10 Years have passed since the Hidden Truth Village. Just recently, children have been found, abandoned, at each village's gates. All have no recollection of who they are, or why they appeared in front of those locations. At the moment, the Kage's are placing these kids under the watch of some of their shinobi until they can discover the meaning of this. Your team has been chosen for this simple sounding mission, but don't let your guard down, it may cost you your life. Your mission, given to you by your Kage, is to protect this child with your life, making sure nothing happens to them, and to keep an eye on just about every motion they make, considering them a possible threat.

    ~Sign Up~

    Name: ( This Is So Complex I Can't Even Break It Down D: )

    Age: ( 13 - 16 )

    Gender: ( Male or Female )

    Personality: (How Does Your Character Act? What Do They Like? Are They Likable? Etc.)

    Description: (What Does Your Character Look Like?)

    Rank: (Genin or Chuunin)

    Village: (Based On Which Two Villages Are Chosen The Most, Those Will Be The Villages The Two Teams Reside In, But Pick From The 5 Basic Villages)

    ~Technique Sign Ups~

    Ninjutsu: (Moves Which Use Chakra)

    Genjutsu: (Moves That Include Deceiving The Mind)

    Taijutsu: (Moves Which Include Hand To Hand Combat)

    ~Other~

    Weakness: (What Is Your Character's Weak Spot)

    Weapon(s): (Are There Any Weapons They Carry Around With Them?)

    Element: (What Element Is Your Character?)

    ~Clan Sign Up~

    Name: (Name Of The Clan)

    Description: (Are There Any Fighting Styles They Have Formed? What Do They Believe In? Are They Strict? Etc.)

    Bloodline: (Your Clan's Bloodline, If It Has One)

    History: (The History Of This Clan)

    Other: (Anything Else You Would Like To Be Added)


    ~My Sign Up~

    Name: Takeo Hakujin

    Age: 15

    Gender: Male

    Personality: Takeo can tend to be obnoxious. He can, at times, be quite annoying, as he likes to show off what ever he can. This is usually blamed on how Takeo does not attend his weekly training sessions. If he were to attend more often, his master would probably straighten him out, but he is overly confident in his natural talent. Although annoying, some people find him amusing, so he does find some friends out there. He likes to be the center of attention though, so he is some-what well known around the village as a joker. He does have his moments where he understands when to be serious, however. This tends to occur during battle or when someone has died, and he is honoring them. What's worse about messing around with people is that he teases also. Basically, he has two opposite views. One being a pain in the rump, or a hilarious joker...with the rare side of being serious every once in a while.

    Description: Standing at 5'7, Takeo is generally slim. His hair glistens from the sun in it's jet black color with the left and right side of his hair died neon blue, which hide his ears from sight. Those two sides of his hair are fairly long and reach down to his shoulders. Takeo has small, dark blue eyes which he outlines with 'guy liner'. His skin tone is tan, but some-what on the lighter side. Wearing a black, short-sleeved T-shirt, followed by a long sleeved, neon blue, shirt underneath, Takeo wears a 5ft long black ribbon, which he ties around the top of his arms, near the shoulder. He wears tight, black pants that overlap his black shoes with, what do you know, neon blue stripes along it's base. At his hip, Takeo wears his katana's holster belt, as well as his weapons pouch on the opposite side. Dude loves his black and blue.

    Rank: Chuunin

    Village: Konoha

    ~Technique Sign Ups~

    Ninjutsu:
    -Shadow Clown Jutsu-
    Creates 3 Clones.

    -Substitution Jutsu-
    Replaces himself at the last moment-

    -Speed Swipe-
    Takeo creates 3 clones which use the same movements to appear as if having amazing speed and fooling the opponent. As Takeo follows their movement as well, as the 3 clones disappear when they attempt to attack, Takeo appears from the smoke and swipes the enemy.

    -Fierce Wind-
    Takeo controls his katana with the wind element.

    -Clash-
    As a defense, Takeo quickly uses his sword, combined with a large amount of chakra, to block an attack. Due to this, his chakra pushes the colliding object, or person away. As well, Takeo can charge his chakra into his blade and then force it out to push the colliding object further.

    Genjutsu:

    -Black Blade-
    Takeo draws his blade, fading away as he does so. He then appears behind the opponent and slashes them.


    Taijutsu:

    -Shift Samurai-
    Takeo catches the opponent in a standing position, trips them, and as he turns around, he quickly takes out his sword and slashes the enemy as he turns towards them.

    -Bamboo Beat-
    Takeo uses his flexibility to attack the enemy with punches, dodging attacks towards him. He follows with one blow to force the opponent into the air.

    ~Other~

    Weakness: A downside to Takeo is that he gets too caught up in the heat of battle, losing focus on his reason for the battle. Takeo isn't very well in fighting against genjutsu users, or noticing traps either, which can prove to be a pain for his teammates.

    Weapon(s): Takeo carries with him a black katana on his waist. He is told to name this katana, but he believes that to be foolish.

    Element: Wind

    ~Clan Sign Up~

    Name: Hakujin

    Description: Hakujin clan members are typically known as the speed demons, possessing most of the quickest shinobi. In this family, the members are specifically granted swords, based on the day, month, and year of their birth. Hakujin members form an odd bond with their weapons, however. These bonds are only formed through years of training, and experience. They believe that as a warrior grows, his/her weapon grows just as it's wielder, and for every soul, there is a weapon born with and for them. Most Hakujin are quite hasty and a bit predictable, luckily for most, their speed makes up for these faults just by a little.

    Bloodline: Shadow Movement : A fighting style which can only be used by Hakujin members who have formed a special bond with their sword. The user is granted speed which would appear as if teleporting.

    History: Starting out as a small clan, the Hakujin sprung their way up to being noticed by many of the villagers. It all began some years ago when another village had been fooled into believing that the Hidden Leaf had planted spies within their residence. You see, this village found numbers of ninja who claimed to be part of Konoha. Unfortunately, by the time the notice from the village came to Konoha, the village had already planed to attack. The Hokage tried to write a reply to this fellow Kage as quick as possible, and intended to send it before the sun rose. He remembered hearing of some type of clan with amazing speed, so he looked them up and ordered for their fastest member, who is now known as Elder Kazuko. He was able to successfully send this reply to the opposing village and saved the village from an attack. Once word spread, the Hakujin clan became widely known across the village. However, this popularity didn't last too long. People of the Hakujin clan haven't done much to give themselves credit of recent years, so their popularity is quickly sinking away.

    Other
    : N/A

    ~Teams~
    1- [Kaeos] [Usagi-Chan~] [Open]
    2- [Open] [Open] [Open]


    ~Rules~
    Not Really Anything Specific, Just Typical Forum Rules.
    No Flaming
    No God Playing
    Please Aim For Paragraphs When Writing In This Role Play.
    More May Come....
     
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    Name: Maroichi Kuroi Zema

    Age: 13

    Gender: Male

    Personality: Maroichi is a loud, motor mouth boy who demands what he whats and pouts when he doesn't get it. Though most of the time he is mature and caring, especially for his girlfriend, Anzu. When he is angry he will take it out on his friends and it will result in his abilities declining. Most of his technique's are original and he usually brags during the battles he has yet to lose because of his , as he calls it stylish charm power, but because of his forgetfulness as he enjoys making speach's about friendship and love. He has yet gained the recommendation for the use of the lightning techniques.

    Description: Maroichi stands at about 5'9. He has spiky onyx black hair with a Konoha head band on his forehead. His left ear is pierced with a rose earing. He wears a a long cerulean blue colored shirt, a shining silvery cloak and brown pants with a shuriken and kunai holster. He has a pair of red gloves on one hand and a white glove on the other. There is a necklace with a photo of his girlfriend with an inscription that reads- "We don't need more money, we don't need greater success of fame, we don't need the perfect body or even the perfect mate. Right now, at this very moment, we have a mind, which is all basic equipment we need to achieve complete happiness."

    Rank: Chunin

    Village: Konoha

    ~Technique Sign Ups~

    Ninjutsu:
    (Basic Ninjutsu aswell.)
    Summoning: Katon-Hell Fire Jutsu: A bottle of oil shaped like the head of the Zema Clan dragon emerges from the ground. Maroichi drinks it and preforms Dragon Flame Jutsu and the fire bursts out as black as night and 5x more powerful.

    Fire Style: Flame Field- Summoning to Shadow Clones, Maroichi sends chakra infused striped of oil down the battle field which then burn all who come near it.

    Fire Style: Gates Of Fire- Preparing a summoning scroll, Maroichi then summons a ten story tall wall of pure burning chakra.

    Rose Duration: Fluttering Destruction- Maroichi takes of his earing and petals begin to dance in the air. The petals redirect to the opponent and begin to cut him and drain chakra for Maroichi.

    Genjutsu:
    Fire Petal: Silent Flame Bow- The opponent is stuck in a spinning field of nothingness, unable to see or hear as Maroichi shoots them with an with a chakra infused burning arrow.
    Taijutsu: 34 Kicks Barrage-Hits opponent into the air and hits him 33 more times.

    ~Other~

    Weakness: Water and Earth style techniques.

    Weapon(s): A dagger infused with flame chakra and a (currently unusable) lightning chakra dagger.
    Element: Fire (and later lightning elements.)

    ~Clan Sign Up~

    Name: The Zema Clan.

    Description: A clan of greatness and pride. One of the most wealthy clans in Konoha it is known for its constant feud with the Hyuuga Clan.
    It is a primarily a small clan as 30% of the clan was lost in the battle of the Invasion Of Konoha.
    Bloodline: Keckorangan, the user can control two elements Fire and Electricity. Most users prefer fire as electricity is off-limits to most all users and the jutsu to go with them are locked up in a vault. Keckrogan users are known for the odd eye color when the Keckrogan is not in use.

    History: The clan started out as a large number of bandit ninja with no home but great prowess in fire and lightning technique. As they began to interact with each other and have children they named theirselfs Zema, after the long dead leader of the bandits. With no home and running low on supplies Konoha took them in. For the first decade or so the villagers saw them as outsiders and treated them as such but then began to take them in. As time went on their lightning technique's began to cause extreme exaution causing it to be sealed away from most of the clan except for a few, who still must prove themselves by getting a letter of recommendation by their Sensei. Their is only one living clan member from that time, Maroichi's great-great grandfather, Mamoru Zema, the clans current leader.
     
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    Since You Haven't Finished, I'll Place Your Sign Up As 'Pending'.
    Although, I'd work on the description a little to lengthen it a bit, as well as the clan's history. I was kinda lenient on the sign ups from before, but I'd like to see more than some copy paste xP I'm not telling you to change everything, just to kinda add a little oomph to it, like what I did with the story; I didn't change the plot, I just replaced things that weren't needed to be known and added more description. Anyway, I'll keep a spot open for you until you finish :]
     
    Nice job, that is much better, Accepted :D now we just need some more sign ups.
     
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