Don't Let The Mod Say Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious [DLTMSA V 2.0]

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39. for anyone who cares, me OC's backstory is now in bandana_flames's journal on LJ
 
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donavannj: Spanish has tildes, umlauts (in one case), etc.
 
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>Shroomish + Proud of its power

:D

>Stats Judge: It has relatively superior potential overall

:D

>Stats Judge: the best potential lies in its Attack stat.

:D

>Stats Judge: It's fantastic in that regard.
>NOT FLAWLESS

D:
 
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Spanish is hard! I passed with a C+ for two years. Now I have learned French and speak it well, so I don't have to take Spanish.

@ Jigglypuff8:
Poor Shroomish. *sigh*
 
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...What.

Even with the worst Spanish teacher ever (Señora Chang, you really do suck at it), I found Spanish easy. It's nothing compared to our messed up language.

Now, try taking up Chinese. I've heard that's one of the hardest languages to learn.

Oh, and Letty, you spelled "Johto" wrong in the second paragraph of Eddie's background story (probably a mistake, right?). And in paragraph four, you capitalized "him" even though it comes right after a comma (the only time where you would capitalize it in a place like that is if you were referring to the Christian's "God"). Also, in paragraph five, it should be "PJs" because the apostrophe is only used when showing that the object owns something or is a contraction. The fact that you have "hiding" right after "PJ's" shows that they don't own anything, nor does "the PJ is" work. And "dad" and "mom" aren't to be capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence, because they're regular nouns, not proper ones.

In paragraph six, you put "each" and "other" as one word, though I assume that was just a mistake. And the sentence "Mom blamed Dad for... Whatever they were so afraid of making me upset enough to stop eating." should be one sentence, thus coming out as "Mom blamed Dad for...whatever they were so afraid of making me upset enough to stop eating." because "Whatever they were so afraid of making me upset enough to stop eating." does not make sense as its own sentence. And "bad men" should also not be capitalized for the same reason dad and mom shouldn't be capitalized, even if they symbolize something.

I notice that you later keep "mom" and "dad" uncapitalized too. And as it would be for "PJs" it should also be "Rs" for the glaring red ones you mention in the sixth last paragraph. And then it would be "So, there you have it", as you forgot the comma between "so" and "there" in the fourth last paragraph. And in the third last one, you need to add something like "think" and "that" and an extra "you" where I place them in the sentence "So now that you think you know everything, you think you know why I'm traveling." And if you have ellipses right before the start of a sentence, you put them together, like this: "...Ok".

/editor
 
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no it is boring well im not proud of my origin bad economy people like 5 people killed every day so sad im not proud of my origin
 
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And I'm not proud of your grammar, but you don't hear me complaining o3o

/bad person


In other news...Well I'll have to think of something :C
 
...let me make it easier on all of you that don't know how to count and reset this for you ^^;;

you guys were supposed to be at 49 oi
 
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