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Emily's Pokemon Adventure Sinnoh

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I thought I would point out a small error
It's not "lied". That means "told a lie".
It's "lay".
BTW, it's not "laid" because that's just wrong...
 
srry my teacher said that too. I'll fix it lol. I might as well ask a moderator to close this, everyone finds mistakes everytime i post a new chapter. So that means im no good at it. So can a moderator please close this thread? It's a really bad story, I'm better off not annoying everyone with my bad writings.
 
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pokefan32, don't give up so easily. I've been writing for years and I still get comments and criticism. They help you think about your writing and improve it.

Everyone gets even a little bit annoyed when people find errors and point out problems, but it just helps you get better and is a wonderful learning experience. In fact, I believe forums such as these are the very best way to have people help you. They're putting their free time and effort into offering you advice and helping you evolve (heh) as an author, so don't let that go to waste.

I don't know if anything I'm saying is having an effect, but giving up is certainly not the way to go. If you do decide to give up on this story, I hope it will have been a learning experience and you can apply what you have learned from your commenters to future stories.
 
I am through with this. I made too many mistakes. And I think I have a new idea in mind to be posted soon. So can a moderator please close this? Thanks in advance! Also, if my sig is too big, tell me. Again thanks in advance!
 
TOO MANY MISTAKES!!
WE ALL MAKE MISTAKES DAMMIT!
DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY MISTAKES I HAD IN THE FIRST 3 CHAPTERS OF MY FIC???

Well, it's your loss, my friend.
 
I'm no good at it okay! I can write stories in notebooks, but never type them up and post them for everyone to see! I just can't do it okay! I'm sorry! :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
 
Emily's Sinnoh Journey(revived!)

I am just starting where I left off with my first fic, my PC Bro says I should've never closed it, so here it is again! I hope this doesn't violate any rules.


Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22


Chapter 23


Seth sat on his bed, looking at the carpet below. Everyone else had gotten up and down the hall. Seth jumped off the bed and onto the floor. He grabbed his bag and walked out the door, and slammed it shut behind him.

As he walked down the hall, he was thinking what was going on between everybody. With him, Brendan, and Jared fighting a lot, it is possible for their friendship to break. When Seth entered the lobby, everyone turned to him. Seth raised his eyebrow.

"Looks like you're still alive." Jared said.

Everybody got up and walked out the door.

Seth stalled behind, so did Emily.

Emily looked at him. "What is wrong with you today?"

Seth shook his head. He looked up at the clear blue sky. "Nothing. Nothing is wrong at all."

"Look, I'm not stupid okay? Just tell me." Emily replied.

"I swear it's nothing!" Seth yelled. He stormed off way in front of the others.

Emily slowed her pace. She wiped her eyes.

Brendan looked over his shoulder at her. "You okay?" He mouthed the words, but didn't make a sounds.

Emily walked up with them. She walked between Jared and Brendan.

Brendan looked at her. "Are you okay?" He asked once more, with sound this time.

Emily slightly nodded. "I just don't know why Seth is acting like this. I wanna say he's being a little bastard, but..."

"But what?" Brendan asked.

Emily shrugged. "I can't. I am only able to call Jared a bastard, cause well, that's what he is."

"Hey!" Jared snaped.

"What? It's not like you aren't one." Emily replied with a little smile.

"Hey, you smiled." Brendan laughed.

Emily nodded. "I just want Seth to stop acting like the way he is."

"Want me to go talk to him?" Brendan asked.

"Could you?" Emily asked innocently.

Brendan nodded. He walked up next to Seth and crossed his arms. "What is you damage? I mean seriously, you're acting like a total bastard." Ha! I can call him a bastard!

"Why do you care? I haven't been able to talk to Emily in forever." Seth replied with a sigh.

"What? Like really talk to her?" Brendan asked.

Seth nodded. "Yeah. I mean, she is almost always wrapped around you or Jared, or even Drew if he's around."

Brendan sighed. "Fine then. When we stop in the hotel by Pastoria, you can talk to her all you want." Brendan and Seth both smiled. And they both headed back to the group.

"So, everything straightened out?" Macey asked, looking over and Seth and Brendan.

Seth nodded with a grin. "Yeah."

They walked down the path.

Emily looked around as they entered Pastoria City.

"Oh hey, the Great Marsh. I wanna go there so badly." Jared said.

Emily grabbed his hand,"Then lets go." Emily said with a smile, and ran up to the Great Marsh.

Macey, Brendan, and Seth followed behind.

"See what I mean!" Seth said.

Brendan put his hand on Seth's shoulder. "Patience is the key..."

Seth swirled around. "What the hell is that supposed to mean!"

"It means that you have to wait!" Brendan shouted. "God! You're worse than Shayne!"

Seth was confused. Who the hell is Shayne? He shook his head to clear his mind and ran a head with the others. They were all inside the marsh.

Seth and Brendan heard a scream. They looked at eachother and ran towards the scream.

They approached Jared, Macey, and Emily.

"This place is useless! All these Pokemon suck!" Jared screamed.

Macey slapped him in the face. "Jared!"

Jared looked at the ground, rubbing his cheek. "Sorry Macey."

Emily covered her mouth with her hands to keep from laughing, no use.

Jared turned around, furious. "What the hell are you laughing for!" He was about to hit Emily. Emily backed into a tree. She slid to the ground, looking up at Jared with terrified eyes.

Seth stood in front of Emily, looking up at Jared. "I'm not letting you hurt her!"

Jared stepped back. He looked at Emily, quivering behind Seth. He dusted his hands off and walked the other way.

Seth turned to Emily. "Are you okay? Did he hurt you in any way?"

Emily wiped her eyes. She fell into Seth, wrapping her arms around him. She was crying.

Seth gently picked her up off the ground, and onto his chest. "It's okay. Jared's gone."

Emily nodded. Her head was rested gently on Seth's chest, her arms wrapped around his. She closed her eyes. "Seth,"

"Yeah?" Seth replied looking down at Emily.

"Why do you do this?" She asked.

Seth searched his mind for a good answer, or a good lie will do too. He kissed Emily on her head. "Just because." Seth smiled.

Emily let go of him. She smiled.

Seth stood up. He held his hand out and helped Emily up. The two of them walked off to find the others. They soon found them all on a beach, Jared lounging under an umbrella, Brendan sitting down with his Mightyena, and Macey sitting next to Jared.

Seth walked up to them. "May I ask why you are all lying about?" His arms were crossed and he was tapping his foot.

"We are just relaxing, don't have a cow." Jared replied looking up at Seth from his place on the ground.

Seth raised his eyebrow. He rolled his eyes. "Whatever." He walked over and layed down on a lounge chair. He put his arms behind his head, closed his eyes, and relaxed.

Emily walked over and sat on the edge of the chair. "You know, this is the perfect time to 'talk'."

Seth sat up. "How'd you know about that?"

She shrugged. "A little birdie told me, and by birdie, I mean Brendan."

Seth turned to Brendan. He shot him a stern look. Brendan shrugged and laughed.

Emily stood. Seth got up and the two of them walked along the edge of the water.

"So now will you tell me what is going on with you?" Emily asked.

Seth sighed. He smoothed his black hair with his hand. "Fine. I guess...I'm kinda annoyed at you spending so much time with Jared, or Brendan, or Drew."

"So jealous?" Emily corrected.

"Sure, lets go with that." Seth replied. He looked on the other side of the beach and saw little blue Shellos laying around and playing in the water.

Emily stopped and turned to Seth. "So that's the whole reason why?"

Seth nodded. "Also, I'm sort of sick of looking at Drew's smug little face."

Emily wrapped her arms around Seth's neck. She pressed her lips to his.

Seth wrapped his arms around her and closed his eyes.

Emily pulled away and Seth opened his eyes. "Thank-you." Emily whispered.

"For what?" Seth asked.

"For being, you, and for you being here, with me." Emily replied.

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"What do you think they're doing?" Brendan asked, looking over the horizon.​

"I don't know Brendan. Maybe they are fighting or something." Jared replied.​

Brendan got down next to Mightyena. He whispered something in its ear. Mightyena nodded and walked off towards Jared. Mightyena stuck out its tongue and licked Jared's face.​

Jared screamed and sat up. He took his hand and tried to wipe it off. He turned to Brendan who was on his back, laughing.​

"I'm gonna kill you Brendan!" Jared screamed. He stood up and ran after Brendan.

Macey moaned. She stood and ran after the two boys with Brendan's Mightyena following her. When she caught up with the boys, they were stalled looking at something. Seth and Emily were there too.

They were all looking at the hotel.

"Wow." All the boys said. They all just stood there waiting for something to happen.
 
Okay okay, jeeze. Lol I have been drawing pictures of Emily and Seth moments., like shipping moments. Lol I think we should make up a shipping for EmilyxSeth
 
Chapter 24

Chapter 24

Seth blinked. He looked over at Brendan and Jared. "Well, lets go guys."

Jared and Brendan nodded. They walked along the rest of the beach and approached the hotel. They all walked into the building. There was a small desk and a bookcase, that was about it.

"This is a five star hotel?" Jared whispered to Brendan.

Brendan stepped on Jared's foot. "Reservations for Brendan?"

The girl at the desk nodded. She motion towards the door. She also handed out room keys. But he only got two.

I wonder who is rooming with whom... Seth wondered.

"Okay, Macey and Emily." Brendan said, throwing the key to Emily. "And the rest of us."

The sun was setting. They all walked to their rooms. Macey unlocked the door and they walked in. Macey walked over and sat on the bed. "So what's the deal with you and Seth?"

Emily shrugged as she sat down on her bed. "I don't know. He says he is jealous of Brendan and Jared."

"Hmph. Wait until he meets Shayne." Macey said, getting under the blanket.

"Who's Shayne?" Emily asked looking out the window.

"Really hot guy I used to know. He's here in the hotel." Macey replied closing her eyes.

Really hot guy, eh? Seth should find this very amusing. Emily thought. She got under the blanket and looked out the window. She sighed. I just hope Seth doesn't flip out about all this...

The next morning they all got up and went to the restaurant. They all sat down at a table. No one spoke for a while.

Macey looked over at a boy sitting at the table across from them. She elbowed Emily. Emily turned to her.

"What is it Macey?" She whispered.

"See that guy?" Macey asked, pointing to a brown haired boy. "That's Shayne."

Brendan looked at Macey, then at Shayne. "Oh hey look, it's Shayne."

Macey looked at him. "Are you really that slow Brendan?"

"He may be strong, but he thinks slow." Jared said under his breath.

"Oh shut up Jared, it's not like your any smarter." Brendan replied, sipping the glass of water.

Emily looked up from the menu to see Shayne walking over to where they were.

Seth looked at Emily, then at Shayne. Who is that walking over this way? Oh joy...

"Oh, everyone, this is Shayne. Him, Brendan, and I were friends when we were younger." Macey said.

Shayne nodded. "Hello all."

"Shayne, this is Seth, Jared, and Emily." Macey introduced.

Shayne nodded. He looked at Emily and smiled.

Seth is going to be really pissed off about this...Emily said to herself.

"So, where are you all headed?" Shayne asked, sitting down between Emily and Macey.

"Well, we really don't know. I guess we were all going to go to Snowpoint City." Jared spoke.

"Yeah." Seth mumbled.

Emily sighed. "Seth, try to act like a good person, please?" She reached across the table and took his hand. "Please?"

Seth nodded and smiled. "Alright."

Shayne leaned back in the chair and crossed his arms.

"Shayne, what's wrong?" Emily asked, releasing Seth's hand.

Shayne shook his head. "Oh nothing."

Emily now noticed that Shayne's voice was like honey and velvet.

Seth exhaled. "Okay, I am really bored. Who's up for a battle?"

Shayne shrugged. "I could use a good battle.

Emily nodded. "Alright, I guess I could use a battle.

"Cool. It'll be me and Em—" Seth began to say.

"How bout me and Emily." Shayne said, cutting Seth off.

Seth narrowed his eyes. I want this guy to go die in a hole!

"Seth, it'll be fine." Emily assured.

Seth stood up from the table and began to walk towards the door. "You always say it'll be fine."

Shayne looked at Emily. "What's his problem?"

Emily shook her head a little. "He is a bit protective."

"Really protective..." Shayne mumbled.

Emily shot Shayne a look.

"Why is Seth acting like such a---" Jared began.

"I swear to god, if you say bastard, you will never see light again." Emily said.

Jared slumped in his chair.

Emily looked towards the door. "I should go talk to him." She began to get out of her chair.

Shayne, also began to stand.

Emily put her hand on his shoulder and pushed him back down into the chair. She turned and walked out the door. She began walking towards the Lake. She found Seth sitting at the edge of the lake, with his Gallade next to him. Emily took a deep breath and walked over and sat next to him.

Seth didn't bother to look up. He just threw a stone across the lake and watched it skip across the water.

"Seth, why are you acting like this?" Emily asked looking at Seth.

Seth shook his head. "Oh nothing it's just that Shayne is being a real--"

"Seth, this isn't my fault okay? It isn't my fault that Shayne mysteriously showed up. It isn't my fault that all this is happen." Emily cried.

Seth frowned. "I understand that but it just magically happens."

Seth's Gallade looked at him, then turned away in disappointment.

Emily took Seth's hand and looked at him. "You are always like this. Shayne will not come to Snowpoint City with us. Or anywhere else, I promise."

"I highly doubt you will keep that promise." Seth mumbled.

Emily let go of his hand and stood. "Fine then. Have fun trying to find someone else who cares about you." Emily walked back off to the hotel.

The rest of the group was standing out in front of the hotel.

"So what happened with Seth?" Jared asked.

"Go ask him yourself." Emily cried, wiping her eyes.

They all exhanged glances.

"Shayne, you go talk to her." Brendan said pushing Shayne towards Emily.

"Wait! Why me?!" Shayne shouted.

"Me and Jared already talked to her last time and Seth got pissed, so your turn!" Brendan replied. He pushed Shayne over next to Emily.

Shayne sat next to her on the grass. "Are you okay?"

Emily wiped her eyes. She gently set her head on Shayne's chest and closed her eyes.

Shayne wrapped his arms around her and held her hand. "Does Seth care about you?" Shayne asked.

"He does. Well at least I think he does." Emily cried.

"Well, I do." Shayne said.

Emily looked up at him. He was smiling a small, but sweetly. "Thank-you Shayne." She sat up and kissed him on the cheek. Emily stood up, holding Shayne's hand. She smiled. She released Shayne's hand and walked back to where the others were.

"So, did you guys talk?" Brendan asked.

Emily nodded. "Yes. I just need to talk to Seth about all this."

Shayne nodded.

"Is he still by the lake?" Emily asked.

Brendan nodded. "Yes. Mind if I come? Maybe I can help."

Emily nodded. "Of course."

The two of them walked to the lake.

Emily held Brendan's hand as they walked up to Seth.

"Seth, do you know what you did for Shayne?" Brendan asked.

Seth didn't respond.

"You gave him an opening to take her." Brendan relied.

Seth turned to them. He didn't speak. He walked up to Emily. "You can't let him do that."

Emily let go of Brendan and looked at Seth.

"Look, I am not going to let this happen again." Seth said. His Gallade stood behind him, listening to everything.

"Me either but, it probably will." Emily said. "He actually cares."

"I do too. Trust me." Seth said, holding her hands. "I swear." He wrapped his arms around her and kissed her head.

Emily nodded. Her mouth curved into a small smile.

"Aww." Brendan said.

Gallade looked at them all and smiled a bit.

They all left the lake, arm in arm, smiling.

"Looks like those two made up." Macey said smiling.

Crap! Shayne shouted in his head. This is screwing everything up!

"Well, lets head to Snowpoint City everyone." Jared said.

Everyone nodded. They all started walking when Shayne stopped them all.

"I never got that battle, Seth." Shayne said.

Seth nodded. He looked at Gallade and grinned. "Alright, one on one."

Shayne smiled and took out a Pokeball. The ball opened up and when the red beam hit the ground, it let out a Luxuray.

"I choose my Gallade." Seth said. Gallade nodded and stepped forward and stood in a fighting pose.

"Ready?" Shayne said.

Seth nodded with a grin.
 
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Interesting...

SethxEmily....ProteciveShipping? Raltsshipping? (Seth has a Gallade and Emily has a Gadevoir)
 
Lol. IDK. The first one made me laugh. Maybe one of those. I hate my PC! I had the whole Chapter 25 all typed up, then it shut down! And I lost it all!
 
Well, that sucks..but anyway; Shanye seems to be a bastard *Emily comes out ofnowhere and kicks me in the nuts* Ouch...

Why is Shayne out to get Seth? O_O
 
IDK. Something like that happened at school a few weeks ago. Shayne and my current, now ex, bf Jarred, hated eachother. And Shayne was out to get him, then I broke up with Jarred and now Shayne is getting all close to me, it's really creeping me out
 
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