Question: Did you mean to spell emErald wrong?
I'll edit this post with my oppinion after I play it...
EDIT: Here's my review.
I'm gonna be honest with you. I'm not gonna sugarcoat it either. This demo needs some work. As others have said, rather poor maps have made for a rather unenjoyable game, as has the HORRIBLE (No other word for it) dialogue. You can use several text boxes if you have to, or simply to stagger the conversation. Capital letters and Periods (.) are your friends. Use them.
Was there even a Pokemon in this? I didn't see one...
Perhaps with time this game will improve... I wish you the best of luck, and I do hope perhaps you will take some of my advice.
I'm not making fun of you or dissing your game or anything... I'm just being honest, and trying to help.
Cheers,
*rebellee1187*