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Sorry i posted on the Text thread. i'm not used to this format. please forgive me.
Character Name: Alex Patterson
Character age: 16 (almost 17)
Character gender: Male
Character appearance: Short, lanky, and not very broad, but strong for his size, about 5'5". Has long, well-kept brown hair that reaches his shoulders, and sharp, pale green eyes that match a small thin face. He has multiple scars on his biceps and back from hard labor.
Character personality: Alex, despite his upbringing, is a overly polite person who often goes out of his way to be courteous to strangers. Despite being a pessimist and existentialist, he is driven and works hard to get what he wants or needs. Still, Alex is very disconnected from most people, aside his siblings whom he knows he can trust wholeheartedly, and takes an unpleasant attitude to people who betray his trust. He is an introvert but can be quite conversive when communicating to a single person. The library in canalave city tends to be his sanctuary, where he can study and digest material for his Advanced Placement classes in school.
Character story: Alex was born in Jublife city, where his mother and father worked in the Entertainment industry as producers for many TV shows, but due to both the death of his father and the failure of an extremely expensive production, He, his mother, and 3 younger siblings all had to move into the industrial Canalave city where she worked her way up in the Local Gym's Managerial staff. This job brought in little money for the family, so being the oldest Alex had to get many jobs in the shipyards doing odd jobs such as unloading the heavy crates and cleaning the sea life off the bottoms of ships. Despite this, Alex was able to attend one of the most prestigious schools in Sinnoh, and studied heavily to hopefully one day become a Pokémon researcher. He would often go to the library to study and absorb the ancient knowledge left in the books forgotten by many. Unfortunately, a creature of habit and often alone, Alex was kidnaped in an alleyway on his way home from the library late at night.
Pokémon: Gallade; Alex's long hours at the shipyards made him strong, but his time learning and studying kept him smart. His personality also matches Gallades due to his courteous nature.
Test environment: another white and clean room, but built much like the coliseum, where obstacles, enemy Pokémon, and physical restraints could be put on from a distance I would prefer this also be the room I stay/live in.
Preference in tester {Optional}: 5'7" brown hair and a neat, thick beard, lab coat & blue shirt with navy tie, Jeans, and a pair of Rectangular sunglasses obscuring his face. Make sure that the tester is a "lawful evil" type of character.
NPC's {Optional}: I would like it if there were NPCs adjacent from me, preferably another psychic, so that I could have communication between them. (If not allowed, please ignore.)
Tolerance to other test subjects: fine with 1 or 2 other people, but will begin to withdraw from social interaction if more.
Miscellaneous: do you mind if character is homosexual? I want to add a bit of drama to story.
No, the text format is fine, and it's quite up to snuff, at that. I don't mind any homosexuality in the roleplay, but keep the romance T rated at maximum. My only real problem with the entry is the choice of pokemon. I've always seen gallade as one of the "cool Pokemon" (lucario, mewtwo, zoroark) and while they are admittedly cool, they're overused. A lot. I do understand that your character being a gallade is rather central to him, but I'm just pestered by your choice of Pokemon. To be frank, I think Dewott would fit him better. It seems more dockworker-ish, being aquatic and such, and being based on a samurai, a class of warrior who strive for self betterment in both mental and physical areas, seems an overall better fit for Alex. That's just my 2 cents on the situation, and if you'd like to keep gallade or some other Pokemon, that's fine. I simply ask that you follow up with a reply to this post and/or a private message.