Thanks Jackson! Appreciate it greatly!
Ok, i redid Lance Layer, what do you all think?
old ->
(new edit by me)
Notice the hair has another tone, as well as the jacket. There is more variation among the sleeves, and the shoulders have more depth. As for the neckline, notice how the shirt's curved now.
Also, reshaded the guitar, it looks worlds better now!
(original)->
(new edit by me)
First, the coloration: I matched the tones up, essentially creating a new color pallette for all the blues. You can tell since there's no sharp contrast between the medium shade and the dark shade.
I recolored the crest, and redid some of the outline, as well as the inner outline where the middle crest meets the far left.
I also added more color into the outline of the body. As well, i attempted to make the body more "rounded", but adjusting the outline and the shading as well. I removed that point just above the right wing, and rounded the top portion of the body, just before the striped tail...
What do you guys think? You like them? Why or why not?