Teara
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hey lookie! (poetry)
I admitt it, I'm kinda(really) ditzy somethimes(all the time) but I still know how to write! Everyone else was posting there poetry so I thought I would too^_^ I'd love to hear your opinions or suggestions. By the way I'm afraid I only have two poems but they were made with alot of hard work. Poems don't come to me very often but when they do things like this are the result:
P.S I'd also love to hear other peoples poetry, so show it if u want^___^
*gulp*
I feel it
The night, the cold, the black.
My heart greives in the darkness, it secretly hopes and waits for the warm day.
The dark blanket covers the land like a blanket of fear prevailing over courage,
But lo! I see the light.
A beam of hope breaks through the abyss.
I feel it
The light warm sun decides to end its punishment,
It breaks through the dark winning a war it will never lose.
No obsticle shall ever defete the great sun for it holds the majestic weapon of light.
I feel it
Plants bend tward its mighty glow
Oceans glimmer and shine to greet it
Flowers bloom to color its walkway
All life awakens to bask in its glory,
And yet,
Light is never thanked.
I feel it
The sun is noble and proud,
And yet,
loyel as well. The sun with all its light,
With all its might shall never abandon us, when the dark cloud attacks and seems to overcome the sun it is but a plan,
For the sun and its partner the light are exquisite strategists,
When the dark cloud is off gaurd the sun weilds its meighty light and breaks through the shadows once again.
I feel it
The deeds of the day have been done ,
The sun looks down and remembers all that has occured,
As the sun and acomplice are proud they are also stern,
The suns begins its punishment once again and we are abandond,
Left to the cruel night and darkness while the great glowing protecter keeps its ever watchfull eye on all.
Evensongs are played and the sun and light prepare for the next walkaway over the darkness.
I feel it
I admitt it, I'm kinda(really) ditzy somethimes(all the time) but I still know how to write! Everyone else was posting there poetry so I thought I would too^_^ I'd love to hear your opinions or suggestions. By the way I'm afraid I only have two poems but they were made with alot of hard work. Poems don't come to me very often but when they do things like this are the result:
P.S I'd also love to hear other peoples poetry, so show it if u want^___^
*gulp*
I feel it
The night, the cold, the black.
My heart greives in the darkness, it secretly hopes and waits for the warm day.
The dark blanket covers the land like a blanket of fear prevailing over courage,
But lo! I see the light.
A beam of hope breaks through the abyss.
I feel it
The light warm sun decides to end its punishment,
It breaks through the dark winning a war it will never lose.
No obsticle shall ever defete the great sun for it holds the majestic weapon of light.
I feel it
Plants bend tward its mighty glow
Oceans glimmer and shine to greet it
Flowers bloom to color its walkway
All life awakens to bask in its glory,
And yet,
Light is never thanked.
I feel it
The sun is noble and proud,
And yet,
loyel as well. The sun with all its light,
With all its might shall never abandon us, when the dark cloud attacks and seems to overcome the sun it is but a plan,
For the sun and its partner the light are exquisite strategists,
When the dark cloud is off gaurd the sun weilds its meighty light and breaks through the shadows once again.
I feel it
The deeds of the day have been done ,
The sun looks down and remembers all that has occured,
As the sun and acomplice are proud they are also stern,
The suns begins its punishment once again and we are abandond,
Left to the cruel night and darkness while the great glowing protecter keeps its ever watchfull eye on all.
Evensongs are played and the sun and light prepare for the next walkaway over the darkness.
I feel it
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